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清单02 应用文写作之祝贺信
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用词汇句型
考点四 模板
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
在西方,得知朋友升学、结婚、生孩子、升职都要写信祝贺。祝贺信如同一般的简短书信,可长可短,格式上无特别的要求,但书写时应做到:真诚、自然、亲切动人。内容上可尽情发挥。
■基本格式
1.首段:开门见山,第一句就表达由衷祝贺,点明祝贺事由;
2.主体段落:简述对方长久的努力、坚持、克服的困难,体现你的真心认可;赞美对方勤奋、自信、有毅力、天赋等优点;写出你为他开心,或自己受到鼓舞、以他为榜样
3.结尾段:表达衷心的祝贺之情。
■常用词汇句型
1. 开篇短语句型
offer sincere/warm congratulations 致以热烈祝贺
congratulate sb. from the bottom of my heart 由衷地祝贺
be delighted to hear that… 得知…… 十分开心
feel extremely proud of you 为你感到无比骄傲
Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!
礼贺你,我们都为你取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。
I am so pleased and happy to hear that … 听到……我真的非常高兴。
I write to congratulate you upon… 我写信来祝贺你……
I offer you my warmest congratulations on your… 对于你的.....我表示热烈的祝贺。
We are just as proud as we can be of you and send our congratulations. 我们为你感到由衷的自豪!祝贺你!
I’m delighted to learn that you have been admitted to the key high school, so I send you my sincere congratulations.
得知你成功考取重点高中,我由衷地向你表示祝贺。
I’ve just heard that you were elected president of the Students’ Union, and I’m really happy for you.
刚刚听说你当选学生会主席,我为你感到十分高兴。
You won the first place in the school poetry recitation contest, and I can’t wait to write to congratulate you.
你的诗词朗诵拿下全校第一名,我迫不及待写信祝贺你。
Hearing that you won first prize in the English Speech Competition, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations.
听闻你在英语演讲比赛夺得一等奖,我特地写信向你致以热烈祝贺。
2. 主体段短语句型
one’s efforts pay off 付出终有回报
keep practicing day after day 日复一日坚持练习
overcome lots of difficulties 克服重重困难
win first prize /get the first place 夺得一等奖
be elected chairman of Students’ Union 成功当选学生会主席
pass the exam successfully 顺利通过考试
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hold on to one’s goal 坚持不懈
confident and generous 自信大方
hard-working and diligent 勤奋刻苦
set a good example to others 树立好榜样
You kept practicing pronunciation and polishing your speech every day for months, and your efforts finally paid off.
过去几个月你每天坚持练习发音、反复修改演讲稿,这份坚持终有回报。
Your perseverance and confidence set a great example for all of us. 你的毅力与自信值得我们每一位同学学习。
Your achievement inspires me greatly, and I will keep working hard just like you.
你的成功深深鼓舞了我,今后我也要像你一样坚持付出。
You always made use of spare time to recite drafts, and your persistence led to your success today.
平日里你总是抓紧碎片时间背诵稿件,这份坚持造就了今天的成功。
You never gave up even under heavy training, and everyone admires your strong will.
面对高强度训练你从未放弃,这份毅力让所有人都十分佩服。
Your careful and hard-working attitude sets a perfect example for all of us.
你踏实认真的态度,是我们所有人学习的榜样。
I’m truly glad from the bottom of my heart to see your hard work recognized.
看到你的努力得到认可,我发自内心为你感到开心。
Your experience inspires me and makes me realize that efforts will bring rewards.
你的经历激励了我,让我明白坚持就会有收获。
3. 结尾段短语句型
achieve greater success 再创佳绩
have a bright future 前程似锦
make continuous progress 不断取得进步
celebrate together 一起庆祝
hold a small celebration 举办小型聚会
Wish you greater progress and more achievements in the future. Let’s have a meal to celebrate this weekend if you are free. 祝你今后不断突破自我,收获更多荣誉,周末有空我们一起聚餐庆祝吧。
Congratulations again on your wonderful performance. Looking forward to your reply.
再次祝贺你的出色成绩,期待你的回信。
Wish you every success and great progress in your new position.
祝愿你在新岗位上大展拳脚,一切顺利。
I’d like to invite you to dinner this weekend to share your joy. Are you available?
这周末我想请你吃饭,一同分享这份喜悦,不知你是否有空?
Congratulations once more on your brilliant achievement. I’m looking forward to your reply.
再次祝贺你的优异成绩,期待听到你的回复。
■模板
Dear________
①I have learned with delight that you ________________(祝贺事由). ②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ________________. ③You must be ________________. ④And I feel very happy for you.
⑤________________(所取得的成) is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ________________(被祝贺人过去的努力). ⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ________________(被祝贺人的优点)
⑧Kindly let me know when you ________________(咨询对方何时有空). ⑨I hope ________________(表达自己的愿望). ⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
■高考例题分析
例1: 假如你是李华,你的美国网友 Peter 参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1.祝贺他获奖;2.肯定他付出的努力;3.询问他何时方便,切磋棋艺。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国象棋网络挑战赛 the Chinese Chess Network Challenge
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success. "Everything comes to him who waits. "For these years, you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition! I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together.
Please tell me when you have time. Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友 Peter写封信,就他在中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖表示祝贺。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
展示/提供:offer → show
坚持/持续:kept on → stick to
比赛:contest → competition
高兴的:happy → delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
拓展句:I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. (运用了Not only…but also连接的并列句并使用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
例2: 自“国球进校园”活动开展以来,你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛,你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示诚挚的祝贺;
2.回顾他的努力;
3.向他学习。
注意:
1.词数80左右,邮件开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear James,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.
As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor. You really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their minds to take up playing table tennis.
Best wishes! Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 James写一封邮件,告诉他在学校举办的第一届乒乓球比赛中取得了第三名的好成绩。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
诚挚的:sincere →genuine
比赛:match →competition
压力:stress →pressure
激励:inspire →encourage
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress.
拓展句:As you know, not only can the table tennis build up our body but also it can help relieve our stress.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.(运用了“so…that…”句型,其中that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor.(运用了现在分词短语作状语,where引导的定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
例3: 假定你是李华,你校留学生Ethan组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功,你观看时也深受感动,请给他写封邮件,要点如下:
1.表述祝贺;
2.你的感受:
3.其他。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ethan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ethan,
Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches. Not only did the event make a positive difference , but also brought our school community together. Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.
Congratulations on your achievement again. May you continue to touch lives with your kindness and generosity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。要求考生给留学生Ethan写封邮件,祝贺其组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:extend → express
积极的:positive → optimistic
无疑地:undoubtedly → without doubt
激励:inspire → encourage
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
拓展句:After witnessing your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches.(运用了as引导的状语从句、what引导的主语从句和how引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.(运用了强调句型)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2026·贵州安顺·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你班的澳大利亚交换生Betty荣获你校“美德之星(Star of Virtue)”称号,请你给她写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 她的事迹;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 2
(2026·陕西西安·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Chris在半年前被确诊患有癌症。经过漫长而痛苦的治疗,他最近终于康复出院了。请你给他写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
得知他康复的欣喜;
赞扬他在治疗期间的坚强与勇气;
祝愿他未来的生活。
注意:
写作词数应为80个左右;
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(25-26高三上·重庆渝中·期中)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友David在你校举办的中文诗歌创作大赛中获留学生组一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件,对他表示祝贺。内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞赏诗歌内容;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.可以适当补充细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 4
(25-26高三上·贵州·阶段检测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Alex在2025年国际青少年机器人大赛(International Junior Robotics Competition)中获得金奖。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达祝贺;
(2)回顾他备赛期间的刻苦与努力;
(3)邀请他明年来中国参加该项赛事。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假如你是John Clarke,一名毕业于我校的外籍留学生,听说母校将举办建校100周年庆典,请你写一封祝贺信,祝贺母校百年华诞。
内容包括:
(1)表示祝贺;
(2)母校印象、记忆和感恩;
(3)表达祝福和希望。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
可能用到的词汇:周年庆anniversary;母校Alma mater
Dear Shiyan High School,
I’m John Clarke, a 2025 graduate from Shiyan High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
John Clarke
Passage 6
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jack收到了他心仪的剑桥大学的录取通知书,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;2. 肯定他的努力;3. 希望他的大学生活一切顺利。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 7
假定你是李华,你曾帮助英国朋友Frank学习中文,得知他在国际中文歌曲视频大赛中获奖,请给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.祝贺获奖;
2.表扬进步;
3.表示祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Passage 8
假设你是李华, 你的留学生朋友Tom在学生生活技能大赛中(Students’ Life Skills Competition) 获奖。请用英语写一封e-mail。内容包括:
1.表示祝贺并肯定其努力;
2.分享你的一项生活技能。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 9
假设你是李华,得知美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名,请写信祝贺他,同时告知你将代表班级参加校科学展览,并向他征求建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Passage 10
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Kary作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员,清理海岸垃圾,并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺,内容包括:
(1)祝贺他获奖;(2)肯定对方的付出努力;(3)表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 11
假定你是李华,得知你的好友Jack成功入选校足球队。请写封邮件向他表示祝贺,内容包括:
1. 肯定他的付出;
2. 提议庆祝活动。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 12
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员,清理海岸垃圾,并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺,内容包括:
(1)祝贺他获奖;
(2)表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
Passage 13
假如你是李华,你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩,被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信,向他表示祝贺。内容包括:1.祝贺高考成绩优异;2.肯定他的努力;3.期待交流。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.适当添加细节。
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Passage 14
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试,取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 请教学习方法;
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 15
假定你是李华,交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖,请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1.向他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 16
假定你是李华,你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 祝贺;
2. 回顾;
3. 期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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清单02 应用文写作之祝贺信
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用词汇句型
考点四 模板
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
在西方,得知朋友升学、结婚、生孩子、升职都要写信祝贺。祝贺信如同一般的简短书信,可长可短,格式上无特别的要求,但书写时应做到:真诚、自然、亲切动人。内容上可尽情发挥。
■基本格式
1.首段:开门见山,第一句就表达由衷祝贺,点明祝贺事由;
2.主体段落:简述对方长久的努力、坚持、克服的困难,体现你的真心认可;赞美对方勤奋、自信、有毅力、天赋等优点;写出你为他开心,或自己受到鼓舞、以他为榜样
3.结尾段:表达衷心的祝贺之情。
■常用词汇句型
1. 开篇短语句型
offer sincere/warm congratulations 致以热烈祝贺
congratulate sb. from the bottom of my heart 由衷地祝贺
be delighted to hear that… 得知…… 十分开心
feel extremely proud of you 为你感到无比骄傲
Congratulations, all of us feel proud of your remarkable achievements!
礼贺你,我们都为你取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。
I am so pleased and happy to hear that … 听到……我真的非常高兴。
I write to congratulate you upon… 我写信来祝贺你……
I offer you my warmest congratulations on your… 对于你的.....我表示热烈的祝贺。
We are just as proud as we can be of you and send our congratulations. 我们为你感到由衷的自豪!祝贺你!
I’m delighted to learn that you have been admitted to the key high school, so I send you my sincere congratulations.
得知你成功考取重点高中,我由衷地向你表示祝贺。
I’ve just heard that you were elected president of the Students’ Union, and I’m really happy for you.
刚刚听说你当选学生会主席,我为你感到十分高兴。
You won the first place in the school poetry recitation contest, and I can’t wait to write to congratulate you.
你的诗词朗诵拿下全校第一名,我迫不及待写信祝贺你。
Hearing that you won first prize in the English Speech Competition, I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations.
听闻你在英语演讲比赛夺得一等奖,我特地写信向你致以热烈祝贺。
2. 主体段短语句型
one’s efforts pay off 付出终有回报
keep practicing day after day 日复一日坚持练习
overcome lots of difficulties 克服重重困难
win first prize /get the first place 夺得一等奖
be elected chairman of Students’ Union 成功当选学生会主席
pass the exam successfully 顺利通过考试
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hold on to one’s goal 坚持不懈
confident and generous 自信大方
hard-working and diligent 勤奋刻苦
set a good example to others 树立好榜样
You kept practicing pronunciation and polishing your speech every day for months, and your efforts finally paid off.
过去几个月你每天坚持练习发音、反复修改演讲稿,这份坚持终有回报。
Your perseverance and confidence set a great example for all of us. 你的毅力与自信值得我们每一位同学学习。
Your achievement inspires me greatly, and I will keep working hard just like you.
你的成功深深鼓舞了我,今后我也要像你一样坚持付出。
You always made use of spare time to recite drafts, and your persistence led to your success today.
平日里你总是抓紧碎片时间背诵稿件,这份坚持造就了今天的成功。
You never gave up even under heavy training, and everyone admires your strong will.
面对高强度训练你从未放弃,这份毅力让所有人都十分佩服。
Your careful and hard-working attitude sets a perfect example for all of us.
你踏实认真的态度,是我们所有人学习的榜样。
I’m truly glad from the bottom of my heart to see your hard work recognized.
看到你的努力得到认可,我发自内心为你感到开心。
Your experience inspires me and makes me realize that efforts will bring rewards.
你的经历激励了我,让我明白坚持就会有收获。
3. 结尾段短语句型
achieve greater success 再创佳绩
have a bright future 前程似锦
make continuous progress 不断取得进步
celebrate together 一起庆祝
hold a small celebration 举办小型聚会
Wish you greater progress and more achievements in the future. Let’s have a meal to celebrate this weekend if you are free. 祝你今后不断突破自我,收获更多荣誉,周末有空我们一起聚餐庆祝吧。
Congratulations again on your wonderful performance. Looking forward to your reply.
再次祝贺你的出色成绩,期待你的回信。
Wish you every success and great progress in your new position.
祝愿你在新岗位上大展拳脚,一切顺利。
I’d like to invite you to dinner this weekend to share your joy. Are you available?
这周末我想请你吃饭,一同分享这份喜悦,不知你是否有空?
Congratulations once more on your brilliant achievement. I’m looking forward to your reply.
再次祝贺你的优异成绩,期待听到你的回复。
■模板
Dear________
①I have learned with delight that you ________________(祝贺事由). ②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ________________. ③You must be ________________. ④And I feel very happy for you.
⑤________________(所取得的成) is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ________________(被祝贺人过去的努力). ⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ________________(被祝贺人的优点)
⑧Kindly let me know when you ________________(咨询对方何时有空). ⑨I hope ________________(表达自己的愿望). ⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
■高考例题分析
例1: 假如你是李华,你的美国网友 Peter 参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1.祝贺他获奖;2.肯定他付出的努力;3.询问他何时方便,切磋棋艺。
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国象棋网络挑战赛 the Chinese Chess Network Challenge
Dear Peter,
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Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success. "Everything comes to him who waits. "For these years, you've shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition! I'm so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together.
Please tell me when you have time. Congratulations again.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友 Peter写封信,就他在中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖表示祝贺。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
展示/提供:offer → show
坚持/持续:kept on → stick to
比赛:contest → competition
高兴的:happy → delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
拓展句:I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. (运用了Not only…but also连接的并列句并使用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
例2: 自“国球进校园”活动开展以来,你校举办了第一届乒乓球比赛,你校的交换生 James取得了第三名的好成绩。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示诚挚的祝贺;
2.回顾他的努力;
3.向他学习。
注意:
1.词数80左右,邮件开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear James,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.
As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor. You really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their minds to take up playing table tennis.
Best wishes! Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 James写一封邮件,告诉他在学校举办的第一届乒乓球比赛中取得了第三名的好成绩。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
诚挚的:sincere →genuine
比赛:match →competition
压力:stress →pressure
激励:inspire →encourage
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress.
拓展句:As you know, not only can the table tennis build up our body but also it can help relieve our stress.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.(运用了“so…that…”句型,其中that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor.(运用了现在分词短语作状语,where引导的定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
例3: 假定你是李华,你校留学生Ethan组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功,你观看时也深受感动,请给他写封邮件,要点如下:
1.表述祝贺;
2.你的感受:
3.其他。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Ethan,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ethan,
Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches. Not only did the event make a positive difference , but also brought our school community together. Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.
Congratulations on your achievement again. May you continue to touch lives with your kindness and generosity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的祝贺信。要求考生给留学生Ethan写封邮件,祝贺其组织同学们为心脏病人筹款的义演获得了巨大成功。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:extend → express
积极的:positive → optimistic
无疑地:undoubtedly → without doubt
激励:inspire → encourage
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Having witnessed your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
拓展句:After witnessing your devotion to raising funds, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your success of organizing the charity event.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As I watched the performances, what impressed me most was how you attracted the audience through well-prepared shows and speeches.(运用了as引导的状语从句、what引导的主语从句和how引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Undoubtedly, it was your efforts that inspired donors to jointly serve the greater good.(运用了强调句型)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2026·贵州安顺·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你班的澳大利亚交换生Betty荣获你校“美德之星(Star of Virtue)”称号,请你给她写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 她的事迹;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Dear Betty,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations on your winning the title of “Star of Virtue” in our school.
You truly deserve this honour. I still remember how you patiently helped our classmates with English every day after class. Also, you volunteered to clean the classroom and take care of the plants when others were busy. Your kindness and warm smile have brightened our class a lot.
I wish you even greater success in the future. May you always be happy and keep spreading your kindness around.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份,给班级澳大利亚交换生Betty写一封祝贺信,祝贺她荣获学校“美德之星”称号,介绍她的感人事迹并送上美好祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere → heartfelt
表达:express → convey
照顾:take care of → attend to
忙碌:busy → occupied
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your kindness and warm smile have brightened our class a lot.
拓展句:It is your kindness and warm smile that have brightened our class a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I still remember how you patiently helped our classmates with English every day after class.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Also, you volunteered to clean the classroom and take care of the plants when others were busy.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
Passage 2
(2026·陕西西安·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Chris在半年前被确诊患有癌症。经过漫长而痛苦的治疗,他最近终于康复出院了。请你给他写一封祝贺信,内容包括:
得知他康复的欣喜;
赞扬他在治疗期间的坚强与勇气;
祝愿他未来的生活。
注意:
写作词数应为80个左右;
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I was absolutely thrilled to hear the wonderful news that you have recovered from cancer and been discharged from the hospital! Knowing that you have finally overcome this terrible disease after months of painful treatment brings me great relief and joy.
I want to express my deepest admiration for your incredible courage and perseverance during this challenging time. Your strength in the face of such adversity is truly inspiring.
May your future life be filled with health, happiness, and sunshine. I am looking forward to seeing you back on your feet soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生给美国笔友Chris写一封祝贺信,祝贺他康复出院,赞扬他的坚强与勇气,并祝愿他未来生活。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → excited
恢复:recover → restore
克服:overcome → conquer
坚持:perseverance → persistence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I want to express my deepest admiration for your incredible courage and perseverance during this challenging time.
拓展句:I want to express my deepest admiration for the incredible courage and perseverance that you showed during this challenging time.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I was absolutely thrilled to hear the wonderful news that you have recovered from cancer and been discharged from the hospital!(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Knowing that you have finally overcome this terrible disease after months of painful treatment brings me great relief and joy.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 3
(25-26高三上·重庆渝中·期中)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友David在你校举办的中文诗歌创作大赛中获留学生组一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件,对他表示祝贺。内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞赏诗歌内容;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.可以适当补充细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m writing to inform you that your poem in Chinese has won the first place in the International Students, Chinese Poem Competition held by our school. Congratulations!
I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking. Therefore, the first time I read your poem, I was deeply impressed by the inspirational lines and I read it three times in a row. Additionally, I hear that all the award-winning poems will be included in our school’s Excellent Poetry Collection.
You are indeed a great poem writer, and I sincerely hope you can create more poems for us to read.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友David写封邮件,信中表示对获奖的祝贺、赞赏诗歌内容、表达祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
比赛:competition → contest
连续:in a row → continuously
独特的:unique → distinctive
真诚地:sincerely → heartfeltly
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:Therefore, the first time I read your poem, I was deeply impressed by the inspirational lines and I read it three times in a row.
拓展句:As soon as I read your poem for the first time, I was deeply impressed by its inspirational lines and read it three times in a row.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I have read your poem, which not only reflects your knowledge of Chinese language and your love for Chinese culture, but is also full of unique and creative thinking. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m writing to inform you that your poem in Chinese has won the first place in the International Students, Chinese Poem Competition held by our school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 4
(25-26高三上·贵州·阶段检测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Alex在2025年国际青少年机器人大赛(International Junior Robotics Competition)中获得金奖。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达祝贺;
(2)回顾他备赛期间的刻苦与努力;
(3)邀请他明年来中国参加该项赛事。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为 80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
Congratulations on winning the gold medal at the 2025 International Junior Robotics Competition! I’m so proud of you.
I still remember the nights you stayed up fixing codes and testing sensors. Your hard work and passion finally paid off.
Next year, my city will host the International Junior Robotics Competition. I really hope you can come, join the fun and share your ideas with Chinese students. Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国好友Alex写一封邮件,祝贺其在2025年国际青少年机器人大赛中获得金奖,回顾其备赛期间的刻苦努力,并邀请他明年来中国参加该项赛事。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
对……感到自豪:be proud of → take pride in
最终:finally → eventually
热情:passion → enthusiasm
期盼:look forward to → anticipate
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Next year, my city will host the International Junior Robotics Competition.
拓展句:It is my city that will host the International Junior Robotics Competition next year.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I still remember the nights you stayed up fixing codes and testing sensors. (运用省略关系词的定语从句修饰“the nights”以及现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I really hope you can come, join the fun and share your ideas with Chinese students. (运用了省略连接词的名词性从句作hope的宾语)
Passage 5
假如你是John Clarke,一名毕业于我校的外籍留学生,听说母校将举办建校100周年庆典,请你写一封祝贺信,祝贺母校百年华诞。
内容包括:
(1)表示祝贺;
(2)母校印象、记忆和感恩;
(3)表达祝福和希望。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
可能用到的词汇:周年庆anniversary;母校Alma mater
Dear Shiyan High School,
I’m John Clarke, a 2025 graduate from Shiyan High School.
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Yours sincerely,
John Clarke
【参考范文】
Dear Shiyan High School,
I’m John Clarke, a 2025 graduate from Shiyan High School. Knowing with delight that a big celebration for the 100th Anniversary is around the corner, I would like to extend my utmost congratulations!
My three years here has witnessed the considerable achievements of our school. The wide range of curriculum and the fascinating after-class activities were eye-opening to me, giving me a deep insight into the core of Chinese education. Yet what impressed most, also the most touching memory, was no doubt the care and love I received when I was ill in hospital.
Finally, happy birthday to my Alma mater and I sincerely hope you will fulfill further success.
Yours sincerely,
John Clarke
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以外籍留学生John Clarke的身份,给即将举办建校100周年庆典的母校写一封祝贺信,应首先祝贺母校百年华诞,再分享自己对母校的印象、记忆和感恩,最后表达祝福和希望。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
最大的:utmost → uttermost, greatest
成就:achievement → accomplishment, attainment
毫无疑问:no doubt → unquestionably, undeniably
实现:fulfill → accomplish, realize
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The wide range of curriculum and the fascinating after-class activities were eye-opening to me, giving me a deep insight into the core of Chinese education.
拓展句:As the wide range of curriculum and the fascinating after-class activities were eye-opening to me, I gained a deep insight into the core of Chinese education.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Knowing with delight that a big celebration for the 100th Anniversary is around the corner, I would like to extend my utmost congratulations! (运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Yet what impressed most, also the most touching memory, was no doubt the care and love I received when I was ill in hospital. (运用了what引导主语从句、that或which引导限制性定语从句并被省略、when引导时间状语从句)
Passage 6
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jack收到了他心仪的剑桥大学的录取通知书,请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;2. 肯定他的努力;3. 希望他的大学生活一切顺利。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your receiving of an offer from the University of Cambridge, which has always been your dream.
I know you have worked very hard to make it come true. You devoted much of your time to learning in the library. You took an active part in various extracurricular activities, showing good leadership skills. I am truly happy to see all your efforts pay off and I am sure your parents are proud of you. As your friend, it’s also my privilege to witness your success.
As one of the top universities in the world, the University of Cambridge is also many Chinese students’ dream university. I wish you greater success at the university and hope you lead a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,你的英国好友Jack收到了他心仪的剑桥大学的录取通知书,请给他写一封邮件,表示祝贺,肯定他的努力并希望他大学生活一切顺利。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere → genuine
贡献:devote … to doing → commit…to doing
表示:show → demonstrate
高兴的:happy → delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I know you have worked very hard to make it come true.
拓展句:I know you have worked very hard so that you could make it come true.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your receiving of an offer from the University of Cambridge, which has always been your dream. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]I am truly happy to see all your efforts pay off and I am sure your parents are proud of you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
假定你是李华,你曾帮助英国朋友Frank学习中文,得知他在国际中文歌曲视频大赛中获奖,请给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.祝贺获奖;
2.表扬进步;
3.表示祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Frank,
I am thrilled to hear that you won an award in the International Chinese Song Video Competition! Congratulations!
Your video was absolutely captivating, and your passion for music really shone through. I still remember the time when we practiced those songs together. Your hard work truly paid off, and I couldn’t be happier for you.
Wishing you even more success in your future projects. Keep shining and sharing your wonderful talent with the world! I can’t wait to see what you achieve next.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Frank写封邮件,祝贺他在国际中文歌曲视频大赛中获奖,表扬进步并表示祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled → excited
迷人的:captivating → fascinating
热情:passion → enthusiasm
才能:talent → capability
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Wishing you even more success in your future projects.
拓展句:I wish you will achieve more success in your future projects.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I am thrilled to hear that you won an award in the International Chinese Song Video Competition! (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I still remember the time when we practiced those songs together. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 8
假设你是李华, 你的留学生朋友Tom在学生生活技能大赛中(Students’ Life Skills Competition) 获奖。请用英语写一封e-mail。内容包括:
1.表示祝贺并肯定其努力;
2.分享你的一项生活技能。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m extremely thrilled to know that you have won an award in the Students’ Life Skills Competition, so I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.
Your success comes no surprise to me. It’s your great efforts that contribute to your remarkable progress. I am so proud of you!
As for me, I’m somewhat skilled in cooking various dishes, among which, fish is my favorite. I often make the most of my free time to cook tasty fish for my family on weekends.
Congratulations again! Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华身份向获奖朋友Tom表达祝贺,肯定其努力,并分享个人生活技能。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
非常:extremely → quite
兴奋的:thrilled → excited
进步:progress → advancement
各种:various → diverse
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m extremely thrilled to know that you have won an award in the Students’ Life Skills Competition, so I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.
拓展句:Knowing that you have won an award in the Students’ Life Skills Competition, I’m extremely thrilled, so I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m extremely thrilled to know that you have won an award in the Students’ Life Skills Competition, so I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s your great efforts that contribute to your remarkable progress.(运用了It is...that...强调句型)
Passage 9
假设你是李华,得知美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名,请写信祝贺他,同时告知你将代表班级参加校科学展览,并向他征求建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I just heard the fantastic news about your first place in the robotics challenge! Congratulations on this incredible achievement! Your hard work and creativity have truly paid off, and I’m so proud of you.
As you know, I’m about to participate in our school’s science fair representing my class. I’m both excited and a bit nervous. Working on a project related to renewable energy, I’m not sure how to make it stand out. Could you share some tips on how to effectively showcase my project, capture the audience’s attention, and answer potential questions? Your experience and insights on these aspects would be invaluable.
I’d really appreciate any advice you can offer. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。美国笔友Tom在学校机器人比赛中获第一名,要求考生写信祝贺他,同时告知自己将代表班级参加校科学展览,并向他征求建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
参加: participate in → take part in
激动的:excited → thrilled
建议:tip → suggestion
展示:showcase → display
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I just heard the fantastic news about your first place in the robotics challenge!
拓展句:I just heard the fantastic news that you got the first place in the robotics challenge!
【点睛】
[高分句型1]As you know, I’m about to participate in our school’s science fair representing my class.(as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Working on a project related to renewable energy, I’m not sure how to make it stand out.(现在分词作原因状语)
Passage 10
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Kary作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员,清理海岸垃圾,并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺,内容包括:
(1)祝贺他获奖;(2)肯定对方的付出努力;(3)表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor! Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring. Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation. Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference. Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.
Keep up the amazing work! I wish you continued success in all your future projects.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封祝贺信,要求考生以李华的名义,向获得国家青年英雄奖的美国朋友Kary表示祝贺,并肯定他的付出和努力,同时表达受到对方启发并希望向他学习的愿望。
【详解】
词汇积累
高兴的:be glad → be delighted
献身:dedication → commitment
激励:encouraged → inspired
参加:participate in → involve oneself in
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring.
拓展句:Your unwavering commitment to the coastal cleanup endeavor is genuinely motivating.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation.(运用了部分倒装)
【高分句型2】Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.(使用了过去分词作状语)
Passage 11
假定你是李华,得知你的好友Jack成功入选校足球队。请写封邮件向他表示祝贺,内容包括:
1. 肯定他的付出;
2. 提议庆祝活动。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team! Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off. I’ve witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination, which have now led to this well-deserved achievement.
To celebrate this wonderful occasion, I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend. If the weather permits, we can even have a barbecue in the backyard. We’ll invite some mutual friends, and I’m sure it’ll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.
Once again, congratulations! I’m really proud of you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给成功入选校足球队的好友Jack写封邮件,向他表示祝贺,需首先肯定他的付出,再提议为他举办庆祝活动。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
全身心投入:dedication → devotion
无数的:countless → numberless/numerous
带来:lead to → bring about
成就:achievement → accomplishment
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!
拓展句:Since I’ve heard that you’ve been successfully selected into the school football team, I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations!
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I’ve witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination, which have now led to this well-deserved achievement. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]To celebrate this wonderful occasion, I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend. (运用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句)
Passage 12
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友 Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员,清理海岸垃圾,并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺,内容包括:
(1)祝贺他获奖;
(2)表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.
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Love,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on this incredible honor!
Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring. Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation. Your efforts have proven that even small actions taken by teenagers can spark meaningful difference. Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.
Keep up the amazing work! I wish you continued success in all your future projects.
Love,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的美国朋友 Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员,清理海岸垃圾,并获得了国家青年英雄奖。要求考生给他写一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真挚的:heartfelt → sincere
荣誉:honor → glory
意识:awareness → consciousness
鼓励:encourage → inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring.
拓展句:Your dedication to cleaning up the coast is truly inspiring, which has a great influence on me.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Not only have you removed harmful plastic waste that endangers wildlife, but you have also raised awareness within your community about the importance of environmental conservation. (运用了部分倒装结构)
【高分句型2】Greatly encouraged by your example, I now feel a stronger sense of responsibility to reduce my daily waste and actively participate in local environmental initiatives.(运用了过去分词作状语的结构)
Passage 13
假如你是李华,你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩,被自己的理想大学录取。请你用英语写一封信,向他表示祝贺。内容包括:1.祝贺高考成绩优异;2.肯定他的努力;3.期待交流。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.适当添加细节。
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【参考范文】
Dear Li Lei,
Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise that you stood out in the big exam. Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. Additionally, your selfless help wins you recognition and trust from both your teachers and classmates. You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school.
Congratulations again! Wait for you to share your experience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友李雷在2024年的高考中获得了优异的成绩,被自己的理想大学录取。要求考生用英语写一封信,向他表示祝贺。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
出色的:excellent → outstanding
表达:convey → extend
因为:due to → because of
此外:additionally → besides
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:You set me a good example. I am wondering if you could offer me some advice on time management in school.
拓展句:Since you set me a good example, could you offer me some advice on time management in school?
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Learning that you have been admitted to your dream university due to your excellent academic performance in Gao Kao, I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Not only have you devoted most of your time to your studies, but you have dived into various activities to build up all kinds of skills. (运用了倒装句)
Passage 14
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试,取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示祝贺;
2. 请教学习方法;
3. 期待在中国见面。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success.
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough to share your learning experience with me? Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I am?
Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试,取得了到中国某大学留学的资格。请给他写封邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
快乐的:glad → pleased
获得:obtain → gain
鼓励:encourage → motivate
表达:express → extend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
拓展句:Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 15
假定你是李华,交换生Terry在你校成语闯关比赛(Idiom Challenge Competition)中荣获二等奖,请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括:
1.向他表示祝贺;
2.肯定他的付出。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition! Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment!
Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again, congratulations!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给Terry写一封信,祝贺她在校成语闯关比赛中获奖。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → excited
非凡的:remarkable → extraordinary
全身心投入:dedication → commitment
证明:testament → proof
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
拓展句:This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a moment that makes our school proud.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future.(使用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 16
假定你是李华,你的留学生好友 Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 祝贺;
2. 回顾;
3. 期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖这件事写一封信,表达祝愿,回顾过程并表示期待。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
传达:extend → convey
对……感兴趣:be interested in → have an interest in
充裕的:abundant → sufficient
致力于:devote oneself to → commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句:Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. (运用了not only…but also句型、部分倒装句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
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