内容正文:
清单01 应用文写作之回信中 “说明+个人观点”的写法
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用句型
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
首先得按照回信的基本格式要求,需要有一定的符合回信文体的开头和结束用语,要规范但又不能太格式化和死板。说明蔡侯纸的基本情况时必须符合历史事实以及现今的真实状况;分析原因时,必须按照所给提示,准确、严谨地用英语表述清楚,但不能直译;在陈述个人观点(创新才是出路)时,也必须按照提示来表述,可以适当增加内容以使文章更加衔接、统一。
■基本格式
文章一般常分三段,第一段为回信的基本开头语,不宜废话,而应简明扼要地表达出回信的目的,并使用起承转合的语句引出下文的说明,虽然只是短短的一两句话也应表现出自己的文化素养和语言素养;第二段为说明部分,按照要求简明但清楚、准确地表述蔡侯纸的相关信息,要注意灵活使用动词时态;第三段为结束语,可将个人观点或解决问题的办法置于该部分,也可以以纯结尾的方式结束回信。全文开头、结尾部分使用第一人称,第二段说明部分使用第三人称。
■常用句型
1. I have received your letter and I'm glad to tell you/inform you of.
2. I am (more than) glad/ delighted/ happy to know/ learn that…
3. Receiving your letter/ email. I am fascinated/ greatly impressed by/ with your strong interest/ passion enthusiasm in/ for…
4. Your letter/email reached/arrived at me a few days ago/the other day, in which you mentioned/talked about/asked/inquired about.
5. I'm glad/delighted/overjoyed to receive your letter and I'm honoured/it's an honour/a privilege for me to tell you about/answer your question/explain/make an explanation about..
6. The following below is what I know about…/ What I will tell you about is as below/ follows.
7. As to/for…you mentioned/talked about, the following/below is what I know/can tell you.
8. My opinion/suggestion/idea/advice/recommendation is as bellows.
9. As far as I know/I am concerned/I can see.
10. It's well known that…/s is known…/Well known is that…
11. It's universally acknowledged that…/Universally acknowledged is that…
12. In my opinion/view/point of view.../In my perspective/From my angle/For my part…
13. Generally speaking/To make a long story short/All in all/In a word/In sum/In short/In conclusion/On the whole/To sum up/To conclude/To make a conclusion/In a nutshell…
14. I wish you could also experience/ have a taste of appreciate…
15. I hope what I introduce/ describe will help you have a better understanding of it/ better understand it.
15. It’s certain that it can bring both convenience and much benefit to…
■高考例题分析
例1:(2026·浙江1月卷)假如你是李华,你发现校图书馆的书籍存在被勾画涂写的现象。请你向英文报投稿,内容包括:
(1)具体说明情况;
(2)呼吁爱护书籍。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
Recently, I’ve noticed a disturbing phenomenon in our school library. Many books have been scribbled and defaced. Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed out. Even worse, some books have been torn.
These books are our shared assets, not personal notebooks. They deserve our respect and care. Every mark on them not only ruins the reading experience for others but also shortens their lifespan.
Let’s treasure our library books, keeping them in good condition. After all, a well-kept library is a reflection of our school’s culture and our own good character.
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。回信是高考英语书面表达中的一种重要文体,现今高考英语主要以弘扬中华优秀传统文化、讲好中国故事作为书面表达的主要主题语境,这种格局注定书面表达的形式多是回答国外友人信中的提问,向他们介绍中国的文化和独具中国特色的相关内容,因此回信成了现在高考英语书面表达备考的内容。本文要求在回信中说明校图书馆的藏书存在被勾画涂改的现象。请你向校园电台投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
财产:asset → possession/property
乱涂乱画:scribble → scrawl
满是:be filled with → be stuffed with
寿命:lifespan → life expectancy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Many books have been scribbled and defaced.
拓展句:There are many books that have been scribbled and defaced.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Let’s treasure our library books, keeping them in good condition.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型 2】Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed out.(运用了while连接并列句,表对比)
例2: 假设你是李华,你的外国网友Macbeth在社交平台上看到了“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a hero.”这个说法,对此产生了浓厚兴趣,写邮件向你了解。请你给Macbeth回一封邮件。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍一下长城;
(2)该句的含义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Macbeth,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Macbeth,
I’m more than delighted to share with you some details about the Great Wall and the profound meaning behind the famous saying.
Dating back to the Spring and Autumn Period, the Great Wall was initially built for military defense to resist foreign invasions. As a world-famous cultural heritage, it is not only a symbol of China’s long history and splendid culture but also a precious treasure cherished by Chinese people.
The saying embodies the noble Chinese spirit of perseverance, courage and determination. It inspires people to bravely face challenges, stick to their dreams and never give up halfway, which still inspires us to move forward today.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给Macbeth回一封邮件,简要介绍一下长城以及“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a hero.”这句话的含义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
珍贵的:precious→treasured
勇敢地:bravely→courageously
最初:initially→originally
坚持:stick to→persist in
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I’m more than delighted to share with you some details about the Great Wall and the profound meaning behind the famous saying.
拓展句:I’m more than delighted to share with you some details about the Great Wall which carries the profound meaning behind the famous saying.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Dating back to the Spring and Autumn Period, the Great Wall was initially built for military defense to resist foreign invasions.(运用了现在分词短语作状语,动词不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】It inspires people to bravely face challenges, stick to their dreams and never give up halfway, which still inspires us to move forward today.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
例3: 假定你是李华,你校即将举办 20 周年校庆(20th anniversary)。你班外教 Peter提议同学们以“机器人+中华传统武术(martial arts)”为主题给校庆设计一个节目。现请你阐述你的设计,内容包括:
1.让机器人表演中华武术;
2.你对科技与传统文化融合的认识。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【参考范文】
Dear Peter and classmates,
Thank you for this creative idea! I’m excited to share my design for our school’s 20th anniversary show.
I propose we program several robots to perform a simplified Tai Chi routine. Their precise, synchronized movements can beautifully demonstrate the flow and strength of Chinese martial arts in a futuristic way.
This fusion of technology and tradition, I believe, is incredibly meaningful. It not only makes our cultural heritage more accessible and appealing to younger generations but also showcases the spirit of innovation, breathing new life into ancient practices. It will surely be a memorable highlight!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生说明自己的设计,包括让机器人表演中华武术以及你对科技与传统文化融合的认识。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
激动:excited → thrilled
提议:propose → put forward
吸引人的:appealing → attractive
有意义的:meaningful → significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Their precise, synchronized movements can beautifully demonstrate the flow and strength of Chinese martial arts in a futuristic way.
拓展句:Their precise, synchronized movements, which are performed in a futuristic way, can beautifully demonstrate the flow and strength of Chinese martial arts.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I propose we program several robots to perform a simplified Tai Chi routine.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It not only makes our cultural heritage more accessible and appealing to younger generations but also showcases the spirit of innovation, breathing new life into ancient practices.(运用了现在分词作状语)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2026-2027学年福建闽侯县第一中学第一学期高三第二次月考)假定你是李华,你所在的城市上周末举办了陶瓷展(ceramics exhibition)。请你给对中国文化感兴趣的英国朋友Tim写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动目的、内容;2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 2
(2026-2027学年江苏省常州高级中学第一学期高三年级七月检测英语试题)假定你是李华,在上周学校举行的“定格校园春光”(Capture Spring on Campus)摄影大赛中获得一等奖。请向你的英国笔友David写信介绍此事,内容包括:
1. 照片描述;
2. 参赛感受。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已写好,不计入词数。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 3
(2027届湖南长沙浏阳景雅高级中学有限公司考前模拟)假定你是李华,你的外国好友Peter打算暑期来中国旅游,他发来邮件询问颐和园的一些基本情况。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)颐和园的位置;
(2)园区景点;
(3)交通方式。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Passage 4
(2026届浙江宁波市镇海中学高三模拟预测14英语试题)假定你是李华,你校即将为本届高三学生举办十八岁成人礼活动。请你给外国朋友Lucy写一封邮件告知此事,内容包括:
1.活动举办时间、地点;2.活动主要流程;3.你的感受与期待。
参考词汇:成人礼 coming-of-age ceremony
注意:1.词数80个左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I hope this email finds you well.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友David得知你校上周举办了课本剧表演比赛 (Textbook Drama Competition),对此很感兴趣。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)比赛情况;
(2)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
假定你是芜湖一中高三学生李华,你校最近举办了“校园丰收节”活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,分享你参与该活动的经历,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 收获与感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 7
假定你是李华,英国笔友Chris听说你校近期举办了“Arts Meets Tech”为主题的科技艺术节,对其中AI绘画的体验活动很感兴趣(体验形式:手绘简图,AI即时成作)。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的体验;2. 你的感想。
注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,内容充实。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 8
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对你校上月开展的“以劳践厨,以味润心(Practice Cooking with Labor, Nourish the Heart with Flavors)”为主题的学生厨艺大赛很感兴趣。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1. 活动介绍;2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 9
假定你是李华,暑假期间参加了以“感受家乡变化,体会生活幸福”为主题的社会实践活动。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件,分享你的经历和感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
How’s everything going?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
Passage 10
假设你是李华,上周末你参观了市美术馆“家乡巨变”主题画展,深受触动。请给澳大利亚网友Joe写一封英文邮件,内容包括:
1. 描述一幅令你印象深刻的画作;
2. 谈谈你的感悟。
要求:
1. 词数80—100,语言流畅,逻辑清晰;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Passage 11
假设你是学生会主席李华,你校将与国际友好学校共同举办“旧物新生”(Old Items, New Life)主题活动,对方学校希望了解你们的活动设计方案,请你用英语写一封邮件介绍,内容包括:
1.具体活动方案;
2.活动预期与意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am LiHua, president of the Student Union of our school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 12
假定你是李华,英国笔友Chris对你校近期举办的科技节很感兴趣,发来邮件询问相关情况。请你给他回复,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动内容;
(2)个人感想。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 13
假定你是李华,下个月即将到来的交换生Sean对你校的特色课程很感兴趣。请给Sean写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)课程介绍;
(2)体验感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sean,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 14
假定你是李华。你刚从“健康大讲堂”活动中了解到一个较新的健康理念:体重管理的核心并非单一维度的调整,而是要坚持饮食、睡眠、运动三者的动态平衡。请你给正在减肥的外国好友Peter写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.分享你对该理念的理解;
2.建议他试试。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 15
假定你是李华。最近,中国日报社面向国际游客推出的英文智慧文旅服务平台“游在中国(China Bound)”正式上线。请给你的英国好友 Henry 写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 简要介绍并推荐此平台;
2. 欢迎他来中国旅游。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
Hope this email finds you well!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 16
假定你是李华,上周末参加了你市图书馆举办的“4·23世界读书日”阅读推广志愿者活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jim写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的体验和感受。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
I hope you are doing well.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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清单01 应用文写作之回信中 “说明+个人观点”的写法
目录导航
01知识脑图·核心脉络搭建——梳理专题框架,搭建知识体系
02 考点深研·知能分层突破——深挖高频考点,分层突破重难点
考点一 写作要求
考点二 基本格式
考点三 常用句型
03优题精练·专题实战通关——精选优质试题,强化实战应用
知识脑图·核心脉络搭建
考点深研●知能分层突破
■写作要求
首先得按照回信的基本格式要求,需要有一定的符合回信文体的开头和结束用语,要规范但又不能太格式化和死板。说明蔡侯纸的基本情况时必须符合历史事实以及现今的真实状况;分析原因时,必须按照所给提示,准确、严谨地用英语表述清楚,但不能直译;在陈述个人观点(创新才是出路)时,也必须按照提示来表述,可以适当增加内容以使文章更加衔接、统一。
■基本格式
文章一般常分三段,第一段为回信的基本开头语,不宜废话,而应简明扼要地表达出回信的目的,并使用起承转合的语句引出下文的说明,虽然只是短短的一两句话也应表现出自己的文化素养和语言素养;第二段为说明部分,按照要求简明但清楚、准确地表述蔡侯纸的相关信息,要注意灵活使用动词时态;第三段为结束语,可将个人观点或解决问题的办法置于该部分,也可以以纯结尾的方式结束回信。全文开头、结尾部分使用第一人称,第二段说明部分使用第三人称。
■常用句型
1. I have received your letter and I'm glad to tell you/inform you of.
2. I am (more than) glad/ delighted/ happy to know/ learn that…
3. Receiving your letter/ email. I am fascinated/ greatly impressed by/ with your strong interest/ passion enthusiasm in/ for…
4. Your letter/email reached/arrived at me a few days ago/the other day, in which you mentioned/talked about/asked/inquired about.
5. I'm glad/delighted/overjoyed to receive your letter and I'm honoured/it's an honour/a privilege for me to tell you about/answer your question/explain/make an explanation about..
6. The following below is what I know about…/ What I will tell you about is as below/ follows.
7. As to/for…you mentioned/talked about, the following/below is what I know/can tell you.
8. My opinion/suggestion/idea/advice/recommendation is as bellows.
9. As far as I know/I am concerned/I can see.
10. It's well known that…/s is known…/Well known is that…
11. It's universally acknowledged that…/Universally acknowledged is that…
12. In my opinion/view/point of view.../In my perspective/From my angle/For my part…
13. Generally speaking/To make a long story short/All in all/In a word/In sum/In short/In conclusion/On the whole/To sum up/To conclude/To make a conclusion/In a nutshell…
14. I wish you could also experience/ have a taste of appreciate…
15. I hope what I introduce/ describe will help you have a better understanding of it/ better understand it.
15. It’s certain that it can bring both convenience and much benefit to…
■高考例题分析
例1:(2026·浙江1月卷)假如你是李华,你发现校图书馆的书籍存在被勾画涂写的现象。请你向英文报投稿,内容包括:
(1)具体说明情况;
(2)呼吁爱护书籍。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
Recently, I’ve noticed a disturbing phenomenon in our school library. Many books have been scribbled and defaced. Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed out. Even worse, some books have been torn.
These books are our shared assets, not personal notebooks. They deserve our respect and care. Every mark on them not only ruins the reading experience for others but also shortens their lifespan.
Let’s treasure our library books, keeping them in good condition. After all, a well-kept library is a reflection of our school’s culture and our own good character.
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。回信是高考英语书面表达中的一种重要文体,现今高考英语主要以弘扬中华优秀传统文化、讲好中国故事作为书面表达的主要主题语境,这种格局注定书面表达的形式多是回答国外友人信中的提问,向他们介绍中国的文化和独具中国特色的相关内容,因此回信成了现在高考英语书面表达备考的内容。本文要求在回信中说明校图书馆的藏书存在被勾画涂改的现象。请你向校园电台投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
财产:asset → possession/property
乱涂乱画:scribble → scrawl
满是:be filled with → be stuffed with
寿命:lifespan → life expectancy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Many books have been scribbled and defaced.
拓展句:There are many books that have been scribbled and defaced.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Let’s treasure our library books, keeping them in good condition.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型 2】Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed out.(运用了while连接并列句,表对比)
例2: 假设你是李华,你的外国网友Macbeth在社交平台上看到了“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a hero.”这个说法,对此产生了浓厚兴趣,写邮件向你了解。请你给Macbeth回一封邮件。内容包括:
(1)简要介绍一下长城;
(2)该句的含义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Macbeth,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Macbeth,
I’m more than delighted to share with you some details about the Great Wall and the profound meaning behind the famous saying.
Dating back to the Spring and Autumn Period, the Great Wall was initially built for military defense to resist foreign invasions. As a world-famous cultural heritage, it is not only a symbol of China’s long history and splendid culture but also a precious treasure cherished by Chinese people.
The saying embodies the noble Chinese spirit of perseverance, courage and determination. It inspires people to bravely face challenges, stick to their dreams and never give up halfway, which still inspires us to move forward today.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给Macbeth回一封邮件,简要介绍一下长城以及“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a hero.”这句话的含义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
珍贵的:precious→treasured
勇敢地:bravely→courageously
最初:initially→originally
坚持:stick to→persist in
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I’m more than delighted to share with you some details about the Great Wall and the profound meaning behind the famous saying.
拓展句:I’m more than delighted to share with you some details about the Great Wall which carries the profound meaning behind the famous saying.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Dating back to the Spring and Autumn Period, the Great Wall was initially built for military defense to resist foreign invasions.(运用了现在分词短语作状语,动词不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】It inspires people to bravely face challenges, stick to their dreams and never give up halfway, which still inspires us to move forward today.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
例3: 假定你是李华,你校即将举办 20 周年校庆(20th anniversary)。你班外教 Peter提议同学们以“机器人+中华传统武术(martial arts)”为主题给校庆设计一个节目。现请你阐述你的设计,内容包括:
1.让机器人表演中华武术;
2.你对科技与传统文化融合的认识。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【参考范文】
Dear Peter and classmates,
Thank you for this creative idea! I’m excited to share my design for our school’s 20th anniversary show.
I propose we program several robots to perform a simplified Tai Chi routine. Their precise, synchronized movements can beautifully demonstrate the flow and strength of Chinese martial arts in a futuristic way.
This fusion of technology and tradition, I believe, is incredibly meaningful. It not only makes our cultural heritage more accessible and appealing to younger generations but also showcases the spirit of innovation, breathing new life into ancient practices. It will surely be a memorable highlight!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生说明自己的设计,包括让机器人表演中华武术以及你对科技与传统文化融合的认识。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
激动:excited → thrilled
提议:propose → put forward
吸引人的:appealing → attractive
有意义的:meaningful → significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Their precise, synchronized movements can beautifully demonstrate the flow and strength of Chinese martial arts in a futuristic way.
拓展句:Their precise, synchronized movements, which are performed in a futuristic way, can beautifully demonstrate the flow and strength of Chinese martial arts.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I propose we program several robots to perform a simplified Tai Chi routine.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It not only makes our cultural heritage more accessible and appealing to younger generations but also showcases the spirit of innovation, breathing new life into ancient practices.(运用了现在分词作状语)
优题精练●专题实战通关
Passage 1
(2026-2027学年福建闽侯县第一中学第一学期高三第二次月考)假定你是李华,你所在的城市上周末举办了陶瓷展(ceramics exhibition)。请你给对中国文化感兴趣的英国朋友Tim写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动目的、内容;2. 你的感想。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
I’m thrilled to share our city hosted a ceramics exhibition last weekend. The event aimed to showcase the rich heritage and artistic beauty of Chinese ceramics, featuring various traditional and modern pieces.
During the exhibition, I was amazed by the intricate designs and vibrant colors of the ceramics. Each piece told a story, reflecting Chinese culture and history. It was a precious experience deepening my love for Chinese art.
Overall, the ceramics exhibition was a great success. I wish you could have been here! Do you have similar cultural events in your country?
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】要求考生以李华的身份向英国朋友介绍陶瓷展,涵盖活动目的、内容及个人感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
遗产:heritage → legacy
多样的:various → diverse
吃惊的:amazed → astonished
精细的:intricate → exquisite
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the exhibition, I was amazed by the intricate designs and vibrant colors of the ceramics.
拓展句:I was amazed by the ceramics that have intricate designs and vibrant colors during the exhibition.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to share our city hosted a ceramics exhibition last weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,that被省略)
【高分句型2】The event aimed to showcase the rich heritage and artistic beauty of Chinese ceramics, featuring various traditional and modern pieces.(运用了现在分词featuring作状语)
Passage 2
(2026-2027学年江苏省常州高级中学第一学期高三年级七月检测英语试题)假定你是李华,在上周学校举行的“定格校园春光”(Capture Spring on Campus)摄影大赛中获得一等奖。请向你的英国笔友David写信介绍此事,内容包括:
1. 照片描述;
2. 参赛感受。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已写好,不计入词数。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m delighted to share that I won first prize in our school’s “Capture Spring on Campus” photography contest last week. My photo was taken in front of the library, where a cherry blossom tree was in full bloom. Petals drifted down like pink snow, while a few students sat on the grass reading and chatting, creating a peaceful and lively scene.
Participating in the contest was truly rewarding. Not only did it push me to observe my surroundings more carefully, but it also helped me appreciate the subtle beauty of everyday campus life. Winning the prize has greatly boosted my confidence and deepened my passion for photography.
What about the spring on your campus? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友David写一封书信,分享在校摄影比赛中获奖的喜讯并描述参赛感悟。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
比赛:contest → competition
飘动:drift → float
宁静的:peaceful → serene
热情:passion → enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Winning the prize has greatly boosted my confidence and deepened my passion for photography.
拓展句:The prize which I won in last week’s school photography contest has greatly boosted my confidence and deepened my passion for photography.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】My photo was taken in front of the library, where a cherry blossom tree was in full bloom.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only did it push me to observe my surroundings more carefully, but it also helped me appreciate the subtle beauty of everyday campus life.(运用了部分倒装句)
Passage 3
(2027届湖南长沙浏阳景雅高级中学有限公司考前模拟)假定你是李华,你的外国好友Peter打算暑期来中国旅游,他发来邮件询问颐和园的一些基本情况。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)颐和园的位置;
(2)园区景点;
(3)交通方式。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am writing to give you a brief introduction to the Summer Palace.
Located in the northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is the largest and best-preserved imperial park in China. The Summer Palace consists mainly of the Longevity Hill and the Kunming Lake. Dotted with several small islands, the Kunming Lake takes up nearly three quarters of the park. Palaces, towers, waterside pavilions and bridges are the main things to see in the Summer Palace.
You can get to the Summer Palace by bus, subway, or taxi. I hope you’ll enjoy your trip there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求学生以李华的身份,给打算暑期来中国旅游的外国好友Peter回复一封邮件,需从位置、景点和交通方式三方面为他介绍颐和园的基本情况。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
简明的:brief → concise
由……组成:consist of → be made up of, be composed of
主要地:mainly → mostly, for the most part, largely
位于:locate → situate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Palaces, towers, waterside pavilions and bridges are the main things to see in the Summer Palace.
拓展句:What you can see in the Summer Palace includes palaces, towers, waterside pavilions and bridges.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Located in the northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is the largest and best-preserved imperial park in China. (运用了过去分词短语Located…作状语)
[高分句型2]Dotted with several small islands, the Kunming Lake takes up nearly three quarters of the park. (运用了过去分词短语Dotted…作状语)
Passage 4
(2026届浙江宁波市镇海中学高三模拟预测14英语试题)假定你是李华,你校即将为本届高三学生举办十八岁成人礼活动。请你给外国朋友Lucy写一封邮件告知此事,内容包括:
1.活动举办时间、地点;2.活动主要流程;3.你的感受与期待。
参考词汇:成人礼 coming-of-age ceremony
注意:1.词数80个左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I hope this email finds you well.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
I hope this email finds you well.
I’m glad to inform you that our school will hold a coming-of-age ceremony for senior three students in the school hall next Friday morning.
During the ceremony, teachers will deliver inspiring speeches to bless us. Then every student will get an adult certificate and make a vow that we will take on social responsibilities bravely. We will also express sincere gratitude to our parents.
I’m excited by the meaningful activity. Turning 18 means growing up. I’m looking forward to becoming more mature and responsible in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于你校即将为本届高三学生举办十八岁成人礼活动这一情况,给外国朋友Lucy写一封邮件告知此事。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
鼓舞人心的:inspiring → heartening
感激:gratitude → appreciation
激动的:excited → thrilled
承担:take on → undertake
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the ceremony, teachers will deliver inspiring speeches to bless us.
拓展句:During the ceremony, teachers will deliver inspiring speeches so that they can bless us sincerely.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to inform you that our school will hold a coming-of-age ceremony for senior three students in the school hall next Friday morning.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Then every student will get an adult certificate and make a vow that we will take on social responsibilities bravely.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
Passage 5
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友David得知你校上周举办了课本剧表演比赛 (Textbook Drama Competition),对此很感兴趣。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)比赛情况;
(2)你的感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m delighted to share with you details about our school’s Textbook Drama Competition.
The competition took place in our school auditorium and attracted active participation from twelve classes. Each class presented a short drama adapted from textbooks, with themes ranging from literary masterpieces to historical stories. My class performed “Hamlet” and I played the role of Horatio. In addition to weeks of practice, we crafted modern costumes, which added to a strong visual impact of our show. We ended up winning first place.
This experience not only deepened my understanding of classic literature, but also helped me improve my public speaking skills. I felt a strong sense of achievement when our efforts paid off.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求学生给外国朋友David写一篇邮件,向他介绍学校上周举办的课本剧表演比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累:
高兴的:delighted → overjoyed
吸引:attract → appeal to/draw/fascinate/captivate
参与:participation → engagemen
理解:understanding of → insight into
2.句式拓展:
句型转换
原句:The competition took place in our school auditorium and attracted active participation from twelve classes.
拓展句:Last week, our school auditorium witnessed the competition, attracting active participation from twelve classes.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Each class presented a short drama adapted from textbooks, with themes ranging from literary masterpieces to historical stories.(运用了过去分词作后置定语和with的复合结构。)
【高分句型2】In addition to weeks of practice, we crafted modern costumes, which added to a strong visual impact of our show.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。)
Passage 6
假定你是芜湖一中高三学生李华,你校最近举办了“校园丰收节”活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件,分享你参与该活动的经历,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 收获与感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going? I’m writing to share my experience of our school’s Harvest Festival held recently.
During the festival, we picked crops grown on the school farm and took part in DIY food-making with our harvest. We also attended a lecture about traditional farming culture.
I gained a lot from the activity. Not only did I realize the hardship behind food production, but I also cherished the joy of harvest and hard work.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以芜湖一中学生李华的身份给英国朋友Chris写邮件,分享学校“校园丰收节”的参与经历,介绍活动内容并阐述个人收获与感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参与:take part in → participate in
传统的:traditional → conventional
获得:gain → achieve
珍惜:cherish → treasure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I gained a lot from the activity.
拓展句:Though the activity was tiring, I gained a lot from it.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】During the festival, we picked crops grown on the school farm and took part in DIY food-making with our harvest.(运用了过去分词grown作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Not only did I realize the hardship behind food production, but I also cherished the joy of harvest and hard work.(运用了“not only...but also...”结构中not only置于句首引出的部分倒装句式)
Passage 7
假定你是李华,英国笔友Chris听说你校近期举办了“Arts Meets Tech”为主题的科技艺术节,对其中AI绘画的体验活动很感兴趣(体验形式:手绘简图,AI即时成作)。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的体验;2. 你的感想。
注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,内容充实。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How’s everything going? You mentioned you’re interested in the AI painting activity at our festival — I’d love to share my experience with you.
The activity allowed us to create digital artworks simply by sketching on a drawing pad. The AI software then recognized our lines and instantly generated a fully-colored painting. For my work, I sketched a koi fish, symbolizing good luck and success. The magical AI transformed my draft into an oil painting with delicate brushstrokes.
It was truly an unforgettable experience, which made me realize how technology can unlock new forms of artistic creativity. Hope you can try something similar soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友写一封邮件,介绍学校科技艺术节的AI绘画体验活动。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
立刻:instantly → immediately
转变:transform → convert
精致的:delicate → exquisite
难忘的:unforgettable → memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The activity allowed us to create digital artworks simply by sketching on a drawing pad.
拓展句:What the activity allowed us to do was to create digital artworks simply by sketching on a drawing pad.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】You mentioned you’re interested in the AI painting activity at our festival — I’d love to share my experience with you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,that被省略)
【高分句型2】It was truly an unforgettable experience, which made me realize how technology can unlock new forms of artistic creativity.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 8
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对你校上月开展的“以劳践厨,以味润心(Practice Cooking with Labor, Nourish the Heart with Flavors)”为主题的学生厨艺大赛很感兴趣。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1. 活动介绍;2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Knowing you’re fascinated by the Student Cooking Contest held in our school last month, I’m glad to give you a brief introduction.
Themed Practice Cooking with Labor, Nourish the Heart with Flavors, the competition was well organized and arranged. All contestants prepared fresh ingredients, following the principle of low carbon and food conservation. Then, each participant showed their skills within the required time. After that, judges evaluated their performances from taste, visual presentation and the concept of saving food.
I not only learned to cherish every bite of food, but I also truly realized that labor is the source of all happiness and life warmth.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Chris回信,介绍学校上月举办的主题厨艺大赛相关情况并分享个人参赛感悟。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
原则:principle → guideline
意识到:realize→ be aware of
珍惜:cherish → treasure
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I not only learned to cherish every bite of food, but I also truly realized that labor is the source of all happiness and life warmth.
拓展句:Not only did I learn to cherish every bite of food, but I also truly realized that labor is the source of all happiness and life warmth.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing you’re fascinated by the Student Cooking Contest held in our school last month, I’m glad to give you a brief introduction.(运用了现在分词作原因状语以及省略that的宾语从句以及过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】I not only learned to cherish every bite of food, but I also truly realized that labor is the source of all happiness and life warmth.(运用“not only...but also...”连接并列结构以及that引导宾语从句)
Passage 9
假定你是李华,暑假期间参加了以“感受家乡变化,体会生活幸福”为主题的社会实践活动。请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件,分享你的经历和感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
How’s everything going?
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Yours
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Alex,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to share with you a social practice activity I participated in this summer vacation, whose theme was “Experiencing Hometown Changes, Feeling the Happiness of Life”.
During the activity, I paid a visit to my grandparents’ village. To my surprise, the previous muddy roads have been replaced by wide concrete ones. Besides, the environment has become much cleaner and greener. Witnessing these tremendous changes, I have a deep sense of happiness and take great pride in my hometown’s rapid development.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于暑假期间参加了以“感受家乡变化,体会生活幸福”为主题的社会实践活动这一情况,给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件,分享你的经历和感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
惊讶:surprise → astonishment
巨大的:tremendous → enormous
活动:activity → event
参加:participate in → get involved in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To my surprise, the previous muddy roads have been replaced by wide concrete ones.
拓展句:It surprises me that the previous muddy roads have been replaced by wide concrete ones.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m writing to share with you a social practice activity I participated in this summer vacation, whose theme was “Experiencing Hometown Changes, Feeling the Happiness of Life”.(运用了省略了that的限制性定语从句,whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Witnessing these tremendous changes, I have a deep sense of happiness and take great pride in my hometown’s rapid development.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 10
假设你是李华,上周末你参观了市美术馆“家乡巨变”主题画展,深受触动。请给澳大利亚网友Joe写一封英文邮件,内容包括:
1. 描述一幅令你印象深刻的画作;
2. 谈谈你的感悟。
要求:
1. 词数80—100,语言流畅,逻辑清晰;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Joe,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Joe,
How are you doing? Last weekend, I visited an art exhibition at the City Art Museum with the theme “Great Changes in My Hometown”.
One painting that impressed me most was titled “Quiet Village in Spring”. It presents my hometown’s scenery: tall modern buildings stand by clean rivers, and green parks are everywhere. Under the soft sunlight, everything looks peaceful and full of life. The picture perfectly shows how my hometown has become more beautiful and convenient.
Looking at it, I feel proud and delighted. It makes me realize the rapid development around us and I truly love my hometown more deeply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份向外国网友介绍参观“家乡巨变”画展的感受。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
风景:scenery → landscape
现代的:modern → contemporary
展示:show → display
高兴的:delighted → pleased
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last weekend, I visited an art exhibition at the City Art Museum with the theme “Great Changes in My Hometown”.
拓展句:Last weekend, I visited an art exhibition that was held at the City Art Museum with the theme “Great Changes in My Hometown”.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】One painting that impressed me most was titled “Quiet Village in Spring”. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The picture perfectly shows how my hometown has become more beautiful and convenient.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
Passage 11
假设你是学生会主席李华,你校将与国际友好学校共同举办“旧物新生”(Old Items, New Life)主题活动,对方学校希望了解你们的活动设计方案,请你用英语写一封邮件介绍,内容包括:
1.具体活动方案;
2.活动预期与意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am LiHua, president of the Student Union of our school.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. I am writing to present our proposal for the upcoming “Old Items, New Life” event, which aims to foster creativity and sustainability.
Our plan consists of three stages. First, a collection drive will be organized where students donate used items. Subsequently, a DIY workshop will be held to transform these goods into art pieces. Finally, a charity sale will be held to donate the proceeds to environmental groups.
We believe this initiative will raise environmental awareness and build a lasting bridge between our schools.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以学生会主席身份向国际友好学校介绍“旧物新生”活动的方案与意义。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
即将到来的:upcoming → approaching
举办:hold → carry out
创造力:creativity → innovation
由……组成:consist of → be made up of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Subsequently, a DIY workshop will be held to transform these goods into art pieces.
拓展句:Subsequently, a DIY workshop which can turn these goods into art pieces will be held.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I am writing to present our proposal for the upcoming “Old Items, New Life” event, which aims to foster creativity and sustainability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】First, a collection drive will be organized where students donate used items.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 12
假定你是李华,英国笔友Chris对你校近期举办的科技节很感兴趣,发来邮件询问相关情况。请你给他回复,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动内容;
(2)个人感想。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
Learning that you are interested in our school’s Science and Technology Festival, I am thrilled to share some details with you.
The festival featured a variety of activities, ranging from science lectures to innovation competitions. The most distinctive part was the drone racing competition. Participants operated small sports drones through obstacle courses at high speed, showing the charm of this technological innovation.
This wonderful activity left me in amazement. It made me realize the role technology plays in changing and enriching our lives and sparked my love for exploring science.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给英国笔友Chris回一封邮件,向他介绍学校近期举办的科技节的相关情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in → be keen on/be curious about/be intrigued by
精彩的:wonderful → breathtaking/thrilling
引人注目的:distinctive →eye-catching/striking/impressive/notable
热爱:love → passion/enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The most distinctive part was the drone racing competition.
拓展句:The most distinctive part was the drone racing competition, which attracted the most viewers with its high-speed excitement.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The festival featured a variety of activities, ranging from science lectures to innovation competitions. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】It made me realize the role technology plays in changing and enriching our lives and sparked my love for exploring science. (运用了省略关系词的定语从句)
Passage 13
假定你是李华,下个月即将到来的交换生Sean对你校的特色课程很感兴趣。请给Sean写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)课程介绍;
(2)体验感受。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sean,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sean,
I’m delighted to hear that you’re keen on our school’s distinctive courses. Let me share one that might truly surprise you — our “Philosophy through Film” course, held every Friday afternoon.
In this class, we watch thought-provoking film clips and then engage in guided discussions about ethical dilemmas, identity, and the nature of reality. Rather than simply offering answers, the teacher encourages us to question and justify our perspectives. What impresses me most is how it sharpens critical thinking while remaining incredibly engaging. It never feels like a traditional lecture; instead, it’s an intellectual adventure. I believe you’d find it both challenging and rewarding.
Can’t wait to explore it with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份向交换生介绍学校特色课程并分享个人体验。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted → pleased
独特的:distinctive → unique
使吃惊:surprise → shock
鼓励某人做某事:encourage sb. to do sth. → inspire sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In this class, we watch thought-provoking film clips and then engage in guided discussions about ethical dilemmas, identity, and the nature of reality.
拓展句:In this class, we watch thought-provoking film clips before we engage in guided discussions about ethical dilemmas, identity, and the nature of reality.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Let me share one that might truly surprise you — our “Philosophy through Film” course, held every Friday afternoon.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What impresses me most is how it sharpens critical thinking while remaining incredibly engaging.(运用了what引导的主语从句,how引导的表语从句以及while引导的状语从句的省略)
Passage 14
假定你是李华。你刚从“健康大讲堂”活动中了解到一个较新的健康理念:体重管理的核心并非单一维度的调整,而是要坚持饮食、睡眠、运动三者的动态平衡。请你给正在减肥的外国好友Peter写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.分享你对该理念的理解;
2.建议他试试。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have recently attended a lecture and learned an interesting concept about weight management which emphasizes that the key isn’t focusing on just one aspect, like diet, but maintaining a dynamic balance among diet, sleep, and exercise.
For example, even if you eat healthily, lack of sleep or insufficient exercise can disrupt progress. It’s about letting these three elements support each other.
I thought this might be helpful for you since you’re working on your fitness goals. Why not give it a try? Let me know if you’d like to discuss it further!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】要求考生给正在减肥的外国好友Peter写一封邮件,介绍自己了解到的一个较新的健康理念并建议他试试。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
强调:emphasize → highlight
集中于:focus on → concentrate on
维持:maintain → sustain
缺乏:lack of → be short of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It’s about letting these three elements support each other.
拓展句:It is letting these three elements support each other that matters.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]For example, even if you eat healthily, lack of sleep or insufficient exercise can disrupt progress.(运用了even if引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2]I thought this might be helpful for you since you’re working on your fitness goals.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句以及since引导原因状语从句)
Passage 15
假定你是李华。最近,中国日报社面向国际游客推出的英文智慧文旅服务平台“游在中国(China Bound)”正式上线。请给你的英国好友 Henry 写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 简要介绍并推荐此平台;
2. 欢迎他来中国旅游。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
Hope this email finds you well!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Henry,
Hope this email finds you well! I’m excited to share some great news with you.
China Daily recently launched an English-language smart-tourism service platform which is called “China Bound” and is specifically designed for international visitors. This one-stop service covers everything from travel inspiration and itinerary planning to smart Q&A, convenient booking and experience sharing. It’s a fantastic tool to help you easily explore and fall in love with China!
I highly recommend checking it out if you’re travelling to China. It will make your trip much smoother and more enjoyable. I’d be absolutely thrilled to welcome you here one day and show you around.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生对于最近,中国日报社面向国际游客推出的英文智慧文旅服务平台“游在中国(China Bound)”正式上线这一情况,给你的英国好友 Henry 写一封邮件,简要介绍并推荐此平台。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
发起:launch → initiate
极好的:fantastic → tremendous
强烈地:highly → strongly
帮助:help → assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s a fantastic tool to help you easily explore and fall in love with China!
拓展句:It’s a fantastic tool which can help you easily explore and fall in love with China.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】China Daily recently launched an English-language smart-tourism service platform which is called “China Bound” and is specifically designed for international visitors.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I highly recommend checking it out if you’re travelling to China.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 16
假定你是李华,上周末参加了你市图书馆举办的“4·23世界读书日”阅读推广志愿者活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jim写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动内容;
2. 你的体验和感受。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
I hope you are doing well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I hope you are doing well. I’m writing to tell you about my volunteer experience at the city library’s “4·23 World Book Day” event last weekend! The activity included a book fair with diverse genres and storytelling sessions for kids. During the activity, I helped arrange book stalls, gave out reading recommendation cards, and assisted visitors in finding their favorite books.
It was truly rewarding. Seeing kids get excited about books reminded me how powerful reading can be and how it bridges generations and cultures. The whole experience made me appreciate libraries even more as community spaces.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求学生以李华的身份,给留学生朋友Jim写封邮件,分享自己参与的阅读推广志愿者活动,应先介绍活动内容,再描述个人体验和感受。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
多种多样的:diverse → various/manifold/multiple
分发:give out → hand out/distribute
有意义的:rewarding → meaningful
兴奋的:excited → thrilled/exhilarated
2. 句式拓展
用倒装句升级句子
原句:The activity included a book fair with diverse genres and storytelling sessions for kids.
拓展句:Not only did the activity include a book fair with diverse genres, but it also featured storytelling sessions for kids.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]During the activity, I helped arrange book stalls, gave out reading recommendation cards, and assisted visitors in finding their favorite reads. (运用了动名词短语finding…作宾语)
[高分句型2]Seeing kids get excited about books reminded me how powerful reading can be and how it bridges generations and cultures. (运用了动名词短语Seeing…作主语、两个how分别引导宾语从句)
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