2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---蓝莓创业故事 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节构造、情感线把握等模块，通过细节问答、情节线填空等问题导向设计，引导学生自主构建续写逻辑框架，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与方法指导结合，如文本分析环节设置“细节问答”自测题，学生通过回答关键问题诊断文本理解漏洞，结合“段落续写框架”分步引导情节构建，培养思维品质和语言能力。每个模块配有范文分析和反思提示，帮助学生自主提升，教师可依据学情精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I graduated from business school, I received several nice job offers. But my thoughts kept wandering back to my hometown in Peru, where blueberry bushes carpeted the hills, a sea of blue drawing tourists to take pictures. Memories came to my mind: Little me, barefoot, ran among bushes, watching neighbors gather berries in harvest seasons. One sleepless night, I picked up an old poetry book and found Frost’s lines: “I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.” Those words cut straight to my heart. Early the next morning, I refused all offers and headed home. My parents wrapped me in warm hugs at the door. We chatted happily over dinner as I told them my plan to run a blueberry business. Dad frowned (皱眉), “Blueberries are nothing rare. It might be hard to make money,” he sighed. Mom had the same concern, but seeing my determined look, she nudged Dad. They agreed to let me try. I spent days busy in Mom’s kitchen. With her old recipe, I kept adjusting the flavors until I finally made jam and blueberry snacks that carried the familiar taste of my childhood. Full of hope, I set up a tiny stall (摊位) at the local market the following weekend. Yet reality hit hard. In the burning sun, people walked by without a look. By sunset, I’d only sold three jars, tired and discouraged. Just then my elderly neighbor Evo came over and said, “Young man, use what you’ve learned in college.” His words woke me up. I should sell the joy, not just fruit. Maybe our family’s blueberry field was the very place to try my idea. 注意： （1）续写词数应为120个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I graduated from business school and got job offers--- _________________ --- I refused offers and returned hometown--- _________________ --- I made blueberry snacks and set up a market stall--- _________________ --- Neighbor Evo inspired me to adjust my business idea 4. 细节问答 What choice did the author make after graduation? ：___________________________________ What was parents’ attitude towards his blueberry business at first?：_________________________________ What did the author make with his mom’s old recipe?：________________________________________________ What was the result of his stall business?：__________________________________________ What inspiration did neighbor Evo give him?：_____________________________________________ What new business idea did he come up with?：_________________________________________________ What quality does the author have?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 商学院毕业，我收到多家优质工作offer→_________________ →受诗句启发，放弃工作毅然返乡创业→_________________ →我自制蓝莓零食摆摊售卖，生意惨淡→_________________ →邻居点拨，我顿悟转型思路→（续写）说服父母打造蓝莓采摘园→（续写）果园火爆，创业成功，实现价值 6．情感线 I：ambitious and determined→___________→discouraged and frustrated→___________→refreshed and confident→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan. 衔接句1——What was the plan? How did parents react? What did I do?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm. 衔接句2——What did tourists do? What was the final result? What did I gain?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我急忙回家告诉父母自己的宏伟计划。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：游客们蜂拥而至，来到我的蓝莓采摘园。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（空白作答区） I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（敢于追梦、勇于尝试、善于反思、积极创新的返乡创业青年）；parents（朴实谨慎、最终支持孩子的父母）；Evo（善良热心、善于点拨他人的暖心邻居） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I graduated from business school and got job offers--- I was inspired by poetry and wanted to return to hometown --- I refused offers and returned hometown--- Parents worried about my blueberry business but agreed to support me --- I made blueberry snacks and set up a market stall--- My stall business ended up with poor sales --- Neighbor Evo inspired me to adjust my business idea 4. 细节问答 What choice did the author make after graduation?：He refused all good job offers and returned to his hometown to start a blueberry business. What was parents’ attitude towards his blueberry business at first?：They were worried and doubtful about the profit but finally agreed to let him try. What did the author make with his mom’s old recipe?：He made tasty blueberry jam and snacks with childhood familiar flavor. What was the result of his stall business?：The business was bad, and he only sold three jars all day, feeling tired and discouraged. What inspiration did neighbor Evo give him?：He reminded the author to make full use of his college knowledge and sell joy instead of merely fruit. What new business idea did he come up with?：He planned to build a blueberry You-Pick farm to attract tourists. What quality does the author have?：He is determined, creative, reflective and brave to take challenges. What does the story tell us?：Sticking to dreams, adjusting methods bravely and combining knowledge with practice will lead to success. 5．情节线 商学院毕业，我收到多家优质工作offer→心系家乡蓝莓田野，受诗歌启发萌生返乡想法 →受诗句启发，放弃工作毅然返乡创业→父母担忧前景，但最终选择支持我的创业尝试 →我自制蓝莓零食摆摊售卖，生意惨淡→陷入低谷时得到邻居点拨，意识到经营思路的问题 →邻居点拨，我顿悟转型思路→（续写）说服父母打造蓝莓采摘园→（续写）果园火爆，创业成功，实现自我价值与家乡发展共赢 6．情感线 I：ambitious and determined→hopeful→discouraged and frustrated→enlightened→refreshed and confident→proud and fulfilled（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：一名商学院毕业生放弃优质城市工作，返乡尝试蓝莓创业，初次摆摊创业受挫后及时转变思路，创新经营模式，最终收获成功。 英文：A business school graduate turned down good urban job offers and returned to his hometown to start a blueberry business. After failing in stall sales, he adjusted his business model creatively and finally achieved success. 8. 句式 状语从句：When I graduated from business school, I received several nice job offers. 非谓语动词：I spent days busy in Mom’s kitchen, adjusting flavors repeatedly. 宾语从句：I told them my plan to run a blueberry business. 定语从句：My hometown in Peru, where blueberry bushes carpeted the hills, attracted many tourists. 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：勇于跳出舒适区、坚守初心、灵活变通、学以致用，方能打破困境，收获成长与成功。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan. 衔接句1——What was the plan? How did parents react? What did I do? I planned to open a blueberry You-Pick farm to offer picking experience for tourists. My parents were supportive and helped me prepare for the new business. Paragraph 2: Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm. 衔接句2——What did tourists do? What was the final result? What did I gain? Tourists enjoyed picking berries and tasting my homemade snacks. My creative business finally succeeded and I realized the meaning of sticking to my choice. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我急忙回家告诉父母自己的宏伟计划。 →①我向父母阐述蓝莓采摘园的创新经营思路→②父母理解并全力支持我的新方案→③我快速筹备，精心布置果园、宣传推广； 第二段：游客们蜂拥而至，来到我的蓝莓采摘园。 →①游客沉浸式体验采摘，品尝特色蓝莓零食→②果园生意火爆，创业彻底扭转困境→③我深感欣慰，明白变通与坚持成就梦想。 四.段落续写（标准范文） I hurried back to tell my parents the big plan. I explained that I would transform our ordinary blueberry field into a recreational You-Pick farm, combining picking experience with snack sales. Fortunately, my parents fully supported my creative idea. We worked together to tidy up the field, set up resting areas and decorate the farm. I also posted beautiful pictures of blueberry hills online to attract visitors, hoping to bring tourists unique countryside joy. Tourists were flooding into my blueberry You-Pick farm. They wandered in the blue berry bushes, picking fresh fruits and taking beautiful photos. Many tourists were attracted by my homemade blueberry snacks and bought them as gifts. My business finally got on the right track. I truly understood that success never comes from sticking to old ways. It is bravery to choose the less traveled road and flexible innovation that bring me huge rewards and a sense of achievement. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $