上海市实验学校2024-2025学年度第二学期高三2月月考英语试题作文讲义

上海市实验学校2024-2025学年度第二学期高三2月月考英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 V. Guided Writing. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校准备制作一本毕业纪念册，现向所有高三学生征集一张有关自己高中生活的照片，并附上一篇短文，内容包括： 1.对照片内容的描述； 2.选择该照片的理由； 3.对未来的展望。 二、写作思路 开头段 表明身份李华，响应学校毕业纪念册征集照片与文字的活动，简单点明自己提交的照片画面。 主体段 细致描绘照片场景，阐述挑选这张照片的深层原因：见证自己拼搏的高三时光、师生陪伴、自我蜕变，承载三年珍贵回忆。 结尾段 依托这张照片寄托期许，告别高中岁月，展望大学生活，带着高中积攒的坚持与热爱奔赴新征程。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · launch a graduation album collection activity 发起毕业纪念册征集活动 · submit a photo together with an essay 提交照片并附上短文 · respond to the school’s appeal 响应学校的征集号召 · precious high-school memories 珍贵的高中回忆 · take part in the collection campaign 参与本次征集活动 高级句子 1.I am Li Hua, a senior three student from Mingqi High School, writing to take part in your graduation album collection campaign.我是明启中学高三学生李华，写下此文参与本次毕业纪念册征集活动。 2.The school is launching an activity to collect photos recording students’ unforgettable high-school life.学校正在开展征集记录同学们难忘高中生活照片的活动。 3.I decide to submit a meaningful photo accompanied by a short passage as required. 我决定按照要求提交一张富有意义的照片并附上一篇短文。 主体段 高级短语 · bury oneself in review work 埋头投入复习备考 · bathe in warm sunlight 沐浴在和煦的阳光里 · witness one’s persistent efforts 见证自身坚持不懈的付出 · cherish precious companionship 珍惜珍贵的相伴时光 · overcome countless difficulties 克服重重困难 · leave precious marks on youth 在青春留下珍贵印记 · gain spiritual encouragement 收获精神上的鼓舞 · treasure every hard-working moment 珍惜每一段拼搏的时光 高级句子 1.The photo captures me sitting quietly at my desk, burying myself in review work under soft sunlight in our classroom.这张照片拍下我坐在教室课桌前，沐浴柔和日光埋头刷题备考的模样。 2.I choose this photo because it perfectly witnesses my persistent efforts throughout the tough senior three year.我选择这张照片，因为它完整见证了我整个艰辛高三学年坚持不懈的努力。 3.Those ordinary hard-working moments are the most precious treasures of my youthful days. 这些平凡的拼搏瞬间是我青春里最珍贵的宝藏。 4.This picture reminds me of teachers’ guidance and classmates’ mutual encouragement. 这张照片总能让我想起老师的指引与同学们彼此的打气陪伴。 5.It records how I stuck to my goal and gradually overcame academic pressure day by day. 它记录着我坚守目标，一天天逐步化解学业压力的过程。 6.Such warm memories offer me endless strength whenever I feel tired and confused. 每当疲惫迷茫时，这些温暖回忆总能给予我源源不断的力量。 结尾段 高级短语 · embark on a brand-new journey 开启全新的人生旅程 · carry forward the spirit of perseverance 秉持坚持不懈的精神 · strive for higher goals 朝着更高的目标奋力前行 · embrace the upcoming college life 迎接即将到来的大学生活 · keep forging ahead bravely 始终勇敢砥砺前行 高级句子 1.Looking ahead, I will embark on a brand-new chapter of college life with the perseverance gained in high school.展望未来，我将带着高中磨炼出的毅力开启全新的大学生活篇章。 2.I intend to carry forward my fighting spirit and keep striving for my life goals steadily in the future.未来我会保持这份拼搏精神，稳步朝着人生目标不断奋进。 3.This photo will always remind me of my original aspiration as I keep forging ahead bravely in the days to come.往后前路奋勇前行之时，这张照片会时刻提醒我坚守初心。 四、范文赏析 Dear organizers, I’m Li Hua from Senior Three. I’m glad to respond to your collection activity for the graduation album and submit a photo with a short article. The photo freezes a moment when I sat at my classroom desk, buried in my revision tasks in warm afternoon sunlight. I pick this photo mainly because it witnesses my persistent struggle in Senior Three. It not only records my hard work against academic pressure but also reminds me of teachers’ careful guidance and classmates’ mutual encouragement, which are the most precious treasures of my high school years. Looking forward, I will take the perseverance gained here to embrace my college life. I will stick to my original dream, keep forging ahead bravely and strive to create a brighter future step by step. 中文翻译： 尊敬的活动负责人： 我是高三学生李华，十分开心响应本次毕业纪念册征集活动，提交一张照片并附上短文。 这张照片定格了午后暖阳之下，我坐在教室课桌前埋头刷题复习的瞬间。我选择这张照片，主要是因为它见证了我高三一整年的奋力拼搏。它不仅记录了我对抗学业压力的日夜苦读，也时常让我记起老师悉心指导、同窗彼此鼓劲的温暖时光，这些是我高中岁月最珍贵的珍藏。 展望未来，我将带着高中收获的坚韧奔赴大学生活。坚守初心与梦想，勇敢脚踏实地不断奋进，一步步奔赴更加璀璨的前程。 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 三段严格对应三大答题要点：第一段交代参与活动 + 简单引出照片；第二段细致描述照片内容 + 阐明选取理由；第三段抒发对未来的期许。总词数 132 词，完美卡在 120-150 词区间，行文温柔贴合毕业抒情语境，逻辑流畅自然。 经典例句逐句赏析 例句1：The photo freezes a moment when I sat at my classroom desk, buried in my revision tasks in warm afternoon sunlight. 赏析：freeze a moment文学化高级表达 “定格瞬间”；过去分词buried in作伴随状语，句式摆脱基础简单句，画面感极强，精准完成照片内容描写，文笔细腻。 例句2：It not only records my hard work against academic pressure but also reminds me of teachers’ careful guidance and classmates’ mutual encouragement. 赏析：not only...but also...并列结构分层阐述照片的两层意义，兼顾个人奋斗与师生同窗情 谊，理由饱满真挚，紧扣答题第二要点。 例句3：I will stick to my original dream, keep forging ahead bravely and strive to create a brighter future step by step. 赏析：排比式短句收尾，forge ahead书面高分短语，语气坚定昂扬，完美落地第三点 “对未来的展望”，情感积极向上，收尾完整大气。 整体得分亮点 句式丰富多变，状语、定语从句、非谓语动词合理穿插；用词兼具书面正式感与抒情氛围感，适配毕业纪念册的文风；三大得分要点无一遗漏，情感真挚自然，没有生硬套话，贴合高三学生身份，符合高中英语考场高分写作标准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $