上海市同济中学2024-2025学年第二学期高三年级模拟质量调研英语试题作文讲义

该高中英语作文讲义聚焦高考议论文写作核心考点，围绕“传统节日与现代生活”主题，按“写作题目-思路指导-高级表达-范文赏析”逻辑架构组织内容，通过考点梳理（分点解析开头、主体、结尾写作要点）、方法指导（提供高级短语与句型）、真题训练（模拟题范文赏析）等环节，帮助学生构建议论文写作框架，突破观点表达与论据支撑难点。 资料特色在于融合文化意识与语言能力培养，创新采用“实例论证+句式提升”策略，如结合中秋云赏月、端午线上答题等实例引导学生辩证分析传统与现代的关系，通过范文中非谓语作状语、倒装句等高级句式赏析提升语言表达精度，同步培养思维品质。设置分层练习（高级表达积累、范文仿写），确保学生高效掌握议论文写作技巧，为教师把控复习节奏提供清晰教学路径。

上海市同济中学2024-2025学年第二学期高三年级模拟质量调研英语试题 作文讲义 一、写作题目 IV. Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 近年来，一些传统节日（如端午节、中秋节等）的庆祝方式正在发生变化。请以 “Should Traditional Festivals Adapt to Modern Lifestyles?” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1.简述传统节日在现代社会中面临的挑战； 2.结合具体例子说明你认为传统节日是否应该适应现代生活； 3.提出你的建议。 注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称 二、写作思路 开头段 点明话题，引出如今端午、中秋等传统节日遭遇的现实困境：年轻人生活节奏快，传统习俗慢慢淡化，外来节日吸引力变强，传统节日传承面临压力，抛出本文核心议题：传统节日是否需要适配现代生活。 主体段 第一层：摆明观点 —— 传统节日应当适度贴合现代生活； 第二层：举例论证：中秋线上云赏月、网购特色月饼；端午线上参与知识答题、户外轻量化赛龙舟活动，在保留文化内核的前提下创新形式，拉近年轻人与传统文化的距离；说明 只固守老旧形式只会慢慢被新生代淡忘。 结尾段 给出针对性建议：坚守节日文化内涵不变，丰富年轻化、轻量化庆祝形式；学校与社会多举办趣味文化活动，让传统节日融入日常，长久传承下去。 三、写作高级表达 开头段 高级短语 · be confronted with severe challenges 面临严峻挑战 · fade away gradually in daily life 在日常生活中渐渐淡化 · fierce competition from Western festivals 西方节日带来的激烈竞争 · fast-paced modern lifestyle 快节奏的现代生活方式 · lose their appeal among youngsters 在年轻人中失去吸引力 高级句子 1.Traditional Chinese festivals like the Dragon Boat Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival are confronted with various challenges in contemporary society.端午、中秋等中国传统节日在当今社会面临各式各样的挑战。 2.Burdened with tight schedules, most young people have no time to carry out complicated traditional customs.背负紧凑的日程，大部分年轻人没有时间践行繁琐的传统习俗。 3.It is worth discussing whether traditional festivals ought to make adjustments to fit modern lifestyles.传统节日是否应当做出调整适配现代生活，这一问题值得探讨。 主体段 高级短语 · preserve the core cultural essence 守住核心文化内涵 · innovate celebration forms moderately 适度创新庆祝形式 · cloud-watch the moon online 线上云赏月 · launch interactive online cultural activities 开展线上互动文化活动 · bridge the gap between tradition and youth 拉近传统与年轻人之间的距离 · stick rigidly to outdated rituals 固守过时的仪式 · awaken people’s sense of cultural identity 唤醒人们的文化认同感 · cater to young people’s living habits 契合年轻人的生活习惯 高级句子 1.As far as I am concerned, traditional festivals should adapt to modern lifestyles while preserving their core cultural essence.在我看来，传统节日应当在守住文化内核的前提下适配现代生活。 2.Many families choose cloud-watching the moon online during the Mid-Autumn Festival, which still carries the meaning of family reunion.不少家庭中秋选择线上云赏月，依旧承载着阖家团圆的美好寓意。 3.If we stick rigidly to complicated old rituals, young generations will gradually lose interest in these precious traditions.倘若一味固守繁琐旧仪式，年轻一代会渐渐对这些珍贵传统失去兴趣。 4.Online quiz activities about Dragon Boat culture successfully arouse teenagers’ enthusiasm for learning traditional culture.端午龙舟文化线上答题活动有效激发青少年学习传统文化的热情。 5.Proper innovation effectively bridges the gap between age-old traditions and modern young people.合理创新能有效弥合古老传统与当代年轻人之间的隔阂。 6.Changing celebrating ways does not mean abandoning the profound cultural connotations behind festivals.改变庆祝方式绝不意味着抛弃节日背后深厚的文化内涵。 结尾段 高级短语 · pass down fine traditional culture 传承优秀传统文化 · integrate traditional culture into modern life 让传统文化融入现代生活 · organize diverse offline cultural experiences 举办多样线下文化体验活动 · attach great importance to cultural inheritance 重视文化传承 · achieve sustainable development of traditional culture 实现传统文化的可持续发展 高级句子 1.We ought to keep the spiritual meaning of festivals unchanged while updating suitable celebrating forms.我们应当保留节日的精神内核，同时更新合适的庆祝形式。 2.Schools and communities are supposed to organize interesting activities to inspire students’ love for traditional culture.学校和社区应当举办趣味活动，激发学生对传统文化的热爱。 3.Only by striking such a balance can traditional culture get passed down vividly from generation to generation.唯有把握好这份平衡，传统文化才能鲜活地代代传承。 四、范文赏析 Should Traditional Festivals Adapt to Modern Lifestyles? Traditional festivals such as the Dragon Boat Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival are confronted with challenges nowadays. Occupied with fast-paced study and work, most youngsters have little time for complex old customs. Besides, Western festivals bring fierce competition, making traditional ones gradually lose appeal among teens. From my perspective, they should adapt to modern lifestyles while preserving core culture. For instance, many people enjoy cloud-watching the moon online for reunion on Mid-Autumn Day. Online quizzes about Qu Yuan’s stories also arouse teenagers’ interest in Dragon Boat culture. Simply sticking to outdated rituals will only drive young people away. We should keep festivals’ spiritual essence unaltered and innovate celebration ways properly. Schools can organize hands-on activities to enrich cultural experience. Only in this way can fine traditional culture be passed down steadily in modern times. 中文翻译 传统节日应当适配现代生活方式吗？ 如今端午、中秋等传统节日正面临诸多挑战。年轻人被快节奏的学习与工作占据，几乎没有时间完成繁琐的传统仪式。此外，西方节日带来激烈竞争，使得传统节日在青少年群体中慢慢失去吸引力。 我认为传统节日应当在保留核心文化的基础上适配现代生活。举例来说，很多人中秋选择线上云赏月，依旧寄托团圆之意；有关屈原故事的线上答题活动也调动起青少年对端午文化的兴趣。单纯固守陈旧仪式只会让年轻人疏远传统。 我们应当守住节日的精神内核，适度创新庆祝形式。学校可以开展手工体验类活动丰富文化体验。唯有如此，优秀传统文化才能在现代社会平稳传承。 范文赏析要点： 整体结构赏析 严格三段式完美对应题目三大写作要点：第一段写节日当下挑战；第二段亮观点 + 中秋、端午双实例论证；第三段给出落地建议并升华主旨，字数 139 词，符合 120-150 词区间，逻辑层层递进，结构工整规范。 经典例句逐句赏析 例句1：Occupied with fast-paced study and work, most youngsters have little time for complex old customs. 赏析：过去分词Occupied with置于句首作状语，替换简单句Young people are busy with…，句式高级紧凑；精准点出现代人忙碌的现实，自然引出传统节日遭遇的困境，开篇简洁切题。 例句2：For instance, many people enjoy cloud-watching the moon online for reunion on Mid-Autumn Day. 赏析：选用贴合当下真实生活的 “云赏月” 实例，论证极具说服力；for reunion点明中秋团圆内核，体现 “形式变、内涵不变” 的核心立意，举例贴合题意要求。 例句3：Simply sticking to outdated rituals will only drive young people away. 赏析：动名词短语作主语提升句式档次；stick to outdated rituals、drive sb away为高分地道搭配，反面论证固守旧形式的弊端，论证简洁有力。 例句4：Only in this way can fine traditional culture be passed down steadily in modern times. 赏析：倒装经典高分句型，强化结尾语气；收束全文，升华文化传承的主题，立意拔高，收尾干脆有力，契合议论文收尾规范。 整体得分亮点 全文语法零错误，状语前置、倒装句、非谓语灵活运用，长短句搭配错落；词汇摒弃基础简单词，选用书面化高分短语；论证有理有据，紧扣题目全部要求，立意辩证客观，既不排斥创新也不丢掉文化根本，贴合高中英语写作阅卷评分标准。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $