Unit 1 A Changing World 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语仁爱科普版九年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦“变化”主题写作，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三阶训练体系，融合对比手法与功能表达，系统提升语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|主题词汇3类、高频搭配17组、功能表达4类|分类整合变化相关词汇，提炼描述过去/现在/对比的功能句型|从基础词汇到情境表达，构建主题语言储备| |黄金句型库|开头/主体/结尾句型12句、句型升级5组|通过基础句与升级句对比，教授细节拓展与句式优化技巧|从简单句到复杂句，实现表达精准化与丰富化| |高分写作方法|典例1篇（含审题/范文/解析）|总结“过去-现在”对比结构、发言稿格式规范、感受自然融入法|以真实写作任务为载体，渗透审题构思与篇章组织逻辑| |阶梯训练|句子训练3级（汉译英5题、仿写6题、升级6题）、篇章训练1篇|分层次强化句型应用，从单句翻译到篇章创作，实现能力迁移|遵循“句子-段落-篇章”渐进逻辑，落实语言能力与思维品质培养|

Unit 1 A Changing World 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 变化相关名词 change 变化 development 发展 improvement 改善；改进 progress 进步 achievement 成就 growth 增长 reform 改革 modernization 现代化 transformation 转型；变革 生活方面 living conditions 生活条件 transportation 交通 communication 通信 education 教育 medical treatment 医疗 leisure activities 休闲活动 entertainment 娱乐 housing 住房 交通方式 on foot 步行 by bike 骑自行车 by bus 乘公共汽车 by car 乘小汽车 by train 乘火车 by high-speed rail 乘高铁 by underground 乘地铁 by plane 乘飞机 休闲活动 watch movies 看电影 play chess 下棋 play cards 打牌 listen to the radio 听广播 surf the Internet 上网 go to the cinema 去电影院 travel 旅游 take photos 拍照 read books 读书 play sports 做运动 hang out 闲逛 have a picnic 野餐 row boats 划船 描述变化的形容词 great 巨大的 rapid 迅速的 dramatic 显著的 remarkable 非凡的 convenient 方便的 modern 现代的 traditional 传统的 comfortable 舒适的 crowded 拥挤的 narrow 狭窄的 2. 高频搭配 take place 发生 make progress 取得进步 get used to 习惯于 in the past 在过去 at present 目前 in recent years 在最近几年 keep up with 跟上 play an important role 起重要作用 find out 查明；发现 in any case 无论如何 lead a ... life 过……的生活 far away from 远离 get in touch with 与……取得联系 social media 社交媒体 connect with 与……联系 high-speed railway 高铁 all over the country 全国各地 have a chance to 有机会做…… 3. 写作功能表达 描述过去的状态与习惯 In the past, people used to ... 在过去，人们过去常常…… There was / were no ... 过去没有…… People didn’t have ... 人们没有…… ... was / were ... in the past. 过去……是…… 描述现在的变化 Now, ... have / has changed a lot. 现在，……发生了很大变化。 Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大的变化。 People can ... now. 现在人们可以…… ... has / have improved a lot. ……改善了很多。 With the development of ..., ... 随着……的发展，…… 进行对比 In the past ... but now ... 过去……但现在…… ... while ... ……然而…… ... used to ... but now ... ……过去常常……但现在…… ... are nothing like ... ……与……完全不同。 表达感受与看法 I think ... is much better now. 我认为现在……好多了。 It’s amazing that ... ……太令人惊讶了。 I’m happy / proud to see that ... 我很高兴/自豪地看到…… I believe ... in the future. 我相信将来…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 20 years. 在过去的20年里，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 I’d like to talk about some changes in my life. 我想谈谈我生活中的一些变化。 Let me share with you how life has changed in my hometown. 让我和你分享我家乡的生活是如何变化的。 As society develops, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly. 随着社会的发展，人们的休闲活动发生了巨大的变化。 2. 主体句型 In the past, people used to ... but now they ... 过去，人们过去常常……但现在他们…… My leisure activities are nothing like my parents’. 我的休闲活动和我父母的完全不同。 Nowadays, people have more choices for leisure activities. 如今，人们在休闲活动方面有了更多选择。 High-speed trains are fast, clean and comfortable. 高铁快速、干净、舒适。 People can shop online and get things delivered to their homes. 人们可以在网上购物，东西可以直接送到家。 With the development of technology, people can get in touch with each other easily. 随着科技的发展，人们可以轻松地相互联系。 3. 结尾句型 I believe life will become better and better. 我相信生活会变得越来越好。 Although many things have changed, some old memories remain. 虽然很多事情都变了，但一些旧的记忆依然存在。 We should keep up with the changing world. 我们应该跟上变化的世界。 I’m proud of the great changes around me. 我为周围发生的巨大变化感到自豪。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Life has changed. 生活变了。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 20 years. 过去20年里，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 People travelled by bike. 人们骑自行车出行。 In the past, people used to travel by bike or on foot because there were few cars and the roads were narrow. 过去，人们常常骑自行车或步行出行，因为汽车很少，道路狭窄。 People didn’t have many ways to have fun. 人们没有很多娱乐方式。 In the past, people didn’t have many leisure activities, so they usually stayed at home and played chess or listened to the radio after work. 过去，人们没有很多休闲活动，所以下班后通常待在家里下棋或听收音机。 Now people can watch movies in cinemas. 现在人们可以在电影院看电影。 Now people can enjoy movies in modern cinemas with comfortable seats, or they can watch films on their smartphones at any time. 现在人们可以在有舒适座位的现代化电影院里看电影，也可以随时在智能手机上看电影。 People communicate more easily now. 现在人们交流更方便了。 With the development of technology, people can get in touch with each other easily through social media and video calls. 随着科技的发展，人们可以通过社交媒体和视频通话轻松联系。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 下周你班要举行班会，话题是“Changes in my hometown”，学校要求人人发言，请写一篇英语发言稿。 内容提示：1. 谈谈你的家乡近几年的变化。 2. 你对家乡变化的感受。 3. 作为家乡的一员，你能为家乡做的事。 注意：1. 词数80—100； 2. 短文须包括所给内容提示信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 在文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须涵盖的要点：家乡的变化（过去与现在的对比）、个人感受、作为家乡一员能做什么。时态上，描述过去用一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时或现在完成时。结构上分三段：开头发言稿问候并引出话题，主体段分层次描述变化、感受和行动，结尾礼貌收束。注意发言稿的格式特点——开头有称呼，结尾有致谢。 【范文欣赏】 Changes in my hometown Dear classmates, now I want to talk about changes in my hometown. Years ago, there were narrow roads and small old houses. Now wide roads and tall buildings are everywhere, and we have a new beautiful park for fun. I feel so happy and proud of these great changes. As a member of the hometown, I can be a volunteer to keep the park clean on weekends. I will also study hard to make it better in the future. Thanks for your listening. 【亮点解析】 开篇简洁，符合发言稿规范。 以“Dear classmates”开始，紧接着“Now I want to talk about changes in my hometown.”一句话直接点明发言主题。发言稿格式正确，不拖泥带水。 对比手法贯穿全篇，过去与现在层次分明。 用“Years ago”和“But now”将文章自然分成两个时间板块。过去：“roads were narrow”“small old houses”“dirty environment”；现在：“wide roads have been built”“tall buildings”“a modern shopping mall and a beautiful park”“air is much cleaner”。对比的具体内容覆盖了交通、建筑、环境、商业和休闲多个维度，信息丰富，让读者感受到实实在在的变化，而非笼统地说“hometown changed a lot”。 被动语态运用恰当。 “Wide roads have been built”用现在完成时的被动语态，强调“路被修好了”这个结果，符合“变化”主题的表达需要。“stand where the old houses used to be”中的“used to be”进一步强化了过去与现在的对比，时态运用准确。 感受自然融入叙事，不突兀。 没有另起一段单独写感受，而是在描述完变化后直接跟一句“I feel proud of these changes and I really enjoy living here.”感受紧跟事实，情绪有事实支撑，显得真实不空洞。 行动具体可行，与个人身份匹配。 “plant more trees”“study hard”都是作为学生“能做的事”——前者是身体力行的志愿服务，后者是立足本职的努力。两个行动一个面向当下（种树）、一个面向未来（学习），与提示中的“作为家乡的一员”身份高度契合。结尾“That's all. Thanks for your listening.”符合发言稿的收束方式，格式完整。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 在过去的20年里，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 过去，人们常常骑自行车或步行出行，因为汽车很少，道路狭窄。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 过去，人们没有很多休闲活动，所以下班后通常待在家里下棋或听收音机。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 现在人们可以在有舒适座位的现代化电影院里看电影，也可以随时在智能手机上看电影。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 随着科技的发展，人们可以通过社交媒体和视频通话轻松联系。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：Great changes have taken place ...（描述变化） 例句： Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 20 years. （1）在过去的几年里，我的生活发生了很大的变化。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）自从我上次来这里，这个城市发生了巨大的变化。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：In the past, people used to ...（描述过去的习惯） 例句： In the past, people used to travel by bike or on foot. （1）在过去，人们通常晚饭后待在家里看电视。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）在我爷爷小时候，他常常步行去上学。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：Now, people can ...（描述现在的可能性） 例句： Now, people can take high-speed trains to travel. （1）现在，人们可以用手机和朋友保持联系。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）现在，人们可以在网上购物和订购食物。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：In the past ... but now ...（对比结构） 例句： In the past, people watched movies outdoors, but now they can enjoy them in cinemas. （1）过去人们通过书信交流，但现在他们使用社交媒体。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）过去孩子们在户外玩耍，但现在他们花很多时间在手机上。 ___________________________________________________________ 句型 5：... have / has more choices for ...（描述更多选择） 例句： Nowadays, people have more choices for leisure activities. （1）现在，学生们在课外活动方面有更多选择。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）现在，人们在交通方式上有更多选择。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I’m proud of ...（表达自豪感） 例句： I’m proud of the great changes around me. （1）我为祖国的发展感到自豪。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我为家乡变得越来越好感到自豪。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级（共6题） 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Life has changed. 升级句：Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 20 years. 1. 基础句：People travelled by bike. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：People didn’t have many ways to have fun. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：People communicate more easily now. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：Now people can watch movies in cinemas. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：My hometown is better now. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：Life was hard in the past. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．写作要求： 请你以“Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你身边的变化。内容包括： 1. 你身边发生了哪些变化（如交通、通讯、购物方式、生活条件等）； 2. 这些变化给人们的生活带来了什么影响； 3. 你对这些变化的看法。 注意：不少于80词；可适当运用本单元所学词汇与表达。 Changes Around Me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past 20 years. 2. In the past, people used to travel by bike or on foot because there were few cars and the roads were narrow. 3. In the past, people didn’t have many leisure activities, so they usually stayed at home and played chess or listened to the radio after work. 4. Now people can enjoy movies in modern cinemas with comfortable seats, or they can watch films on their smartphones at any time. 5. With the development of technology, people can get in touch with each other easily through social media and video calls. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Great changes have taken place in my life over the past few years. （2）Great changes have taken place in this city since I was last here. 句型 2 （1）In the past, people used to stay at home and watch TV after dinner. （2）When my grandpa was young, he used to walk to school. 句型 3 （1）Now, people can keep in touch with friends by mobile phone. （2）Now, people can shop online and order food on the Internet. 句型 4 （1）In the past, people communicated by letters, but now they use social media. （2）In the past, children played outside, but now they spend a lot of time on their phones. 句型 5 （1）Nowadays, students have more choices for after-school activities. （2）Nowadays, people have more choices for transportation. 句型 6 （1）I’m proud of the development of my country. （2）I’m proud that my hometown is becoming better and better. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：In the past, people used to travel by bike or on foot because there were few cars and the roads were narrow. 2. 升级句：In the past, people didn’t have many leisure activities, so they usually stayed at home and played chess or listened to the radio after work. 3. 升级句：With the development of technology, people can get in touch with each other easily through social media and video calls. 4. 升级句：Now people can enjoy movies in modern cinemas with comfortable seats, or they can watch films on their smartphones at any time. 5. 升级句：Thanks to the development of science and technology, people’s living conditions in my hometown have improved a lot. 6. 升级句：Life was hard in the past because people had to work long hours and they didn’t have modern facilities to make life easier. 篇章训练（参考范文） 参考范文 Changes Around Me Great changes have taken place around me in recent years. In the past, people in my hometown used to ride bicycles or walk to get around. The roads were narrow and there were few cars. Now, the streets are wide and clean. Many families have their own cars. Communication has also changed a lot. People used to write letters to keep in touch. Now, we can send messages and make video calls with our smartphones. It is much faster and easier. I think these changes are wonderful. They have made our lives much more convenient and comfortable. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $