Unit 6 A Rising Self 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语仁爱版九年级上册

Unit 6 A Rising Self 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 伟大人物 hero 英雄 scientist 科学家 researcher 研究员 doctor 医生 nurse 护士 teacher 教师 soldier 士兵 volunteer 志愿者 farmer 农民 explorer 探险家 astronaut 宇航员 inventor 发明家 leader 领袖 pioneer 先驱 fighter 战士 人物品质 brave 勇敢的 selfless 无私的 devoted 全心全意的 determined 坚定的 hard-working 勤奋的 patient 有耐心的 responsible 负责任的 creative 有创造力的 humble 谦逊的 positive 积极乐观的 courageous 有勇气的 persistent 坚持不懈的 talented 有才能的 knowledgeable 知识渊博的 成就与贡献 achieve 实现；取得 achievement 成就 discover 发现 discovery 发现 invent 发明 invention 发明 contribute 贡献 contribution 贡献 save 拯救 protect 保护 serve 服务 influence 影响 inspire 鼓舞 表达敬佩 admire 钦佩；欣赏 respect 尊敬 look up to 仰慕 be proud of 以……为自豪 be inspired by 受……启发 2. 高频搭配 be honored as 被誉为……；被尊为…… devote oneself to 致力于；献身于 give up 放弃 set a good example 树立好榜样 be curious about 对……好奇 suffer from 患有……疾病 focus on 专注于 fight against 与……作斗争 at a young age 在年轻的时候 join the army 参军 pass away 去世 in one’s early twenties 在某人二十出头时 keep on doing sth. 坚持做某事 as is known to us all 众所周知 settle down 定居 take one’s life 结束某人的生命 even if 即使 day after day 日复一日 3. 写作功能表达 介绍人物基本信息 ... is a great scientist who ... ……是一位……的伟大科学家。 ... was born in ... in ... ……于……年出生于…… He / She was a person who ... 他/她是一个……的人。 描述人物品质与事迹 ... showed great ... from an early age. ……从小就展现出极大的…… He / She devoted his / her whole life to ... 他/她一生致力于…… Although ... was difficult, he / she never gave up. 虽然……很困难，但他/她从不放弃。 With great determination, he / she ... 凭借巨大的决心，他/她…… 表达敬佩与影响 I admire ... because ... 我敬佩……因为…… ... sets a good example for us all. ……为我们所有人树立了好榜样。 His / Her story teaches us that ... 他/她的故事教会我们…… I hope one day I can ... like him / her. 我希望有一天我能像他/她一样…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 The person I admire most is ... 我最敬佩的人是…… I would like to introduce a great scientist who has inspired millions of people. 我想介绍一位激励了数百万人的伟大科学家。 There are many great people in history, and my favourite is ... 历史上有许多伟人，我最喜欢的是…… ... is a true hero who changed the world with his / her work. ……是一位真正的英雄，用他/她的工作改变了世界。 2. 主体句型 ... was born in ... and from an early age, he / she showed great interest in ... ……出生于……，从小就对……表现出极大的兴趣。 He / She devoted his / her whole life to ... 他/她一生致力于…… It was very difficult for him / her to ... , but he / she never gave up. 对他/她来说……是非常困难的，但他/她从不放弃。 After years of hard work, he / she finally succeeded in ... 经过多年的努力，他/她终于成功…… He / She is a person who ... 他/她是一个……的人。 3. 结尾句型 I admire ... because he / she shows us that ... 我敬佩……因为他/她向我们展示了…… His / Her story teaches us that we should never give up. 他/她的故事教会我们永不放弃。 ... sets a good example for us all and inspires us to be better. ……为我们所有人树立了好榜样，激励我们变得更好。 I hope one day I can make a difference like him / her. 我希望有一天我能像他/她一样有所作为。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Tu Youyou is a great scientist. 屠呦呦是一位伟大的科学家。 Tu Youyou is a great scientist who discovered artemisinin and saved millions of lives. 屠呦呦是一位发现了青蒿素、拯救了数百万生命的伟大科学家。 She worked hard. 她工作努力。 She and her team did hundreds of experiments, and even volunteered to test the drug on themselves. 她和她的团队做了数百次实验，甚至自愿在自己身上测试药物。 She never gave up. 她从不放弃。 Although they failed many times, Tu never gave up and kept looking for new ways. 虽然他们失败了很多次，但屠呦呦从不放弃，不断寻找新方法。 She won the Nobel Prize. 她获得了诺贝尔奖。 Tu Youyou became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize for her great achievements in medicine. 屠呦呦因其在医学领域的巨大成就成为第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。 I admire her. 我敬佩她。 I admire her because she devoted her whole life to science and helped so many people. 我敬佩她，因为她一生致力于科学，帮助了这么多人。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 根据提示，写一篇短文介绍你身边的平凡英雄。 写作提示：我们身边有很多平凡的人，他们默默付出，帮助他人。请你写一篇短文，介绍你身边的一位平凡英雄。 要点： 1. 这个人是谁（如：家人、邻居、老师、社区志愿者等）； 2. 他/她做了什么让你感动的事情； 3. 他/她身上有哪些值得学习的品质； 4. 你从他/她身上学到了什么。 要求：1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰；2. 不少于80词；3. 可适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出四个必须涵盖的要点：人物身份、感人事迹、优秀品质、个人收获。时态上，描述人物日常行为用一般现在时，描述过去发生的事可用一般过去时。结构上分三段：第一段引出人物并介绍身份，第二段详述感人事迹并提炼品质，第三段总结自己的感悟和收获。 【例文欣赏】 A Hero Around Me  There is a hero in my community. Her name is Aunt Zhang.      She works as a community volunteer. She is always willing to give others a hand. She often helps the elderly do shopping and takes care of kids when their parents are busy. She spends lots of her free time serving people in our community. She is warm‑hearted and selfless. She asks for nothing in return.      She inspires me to be more caring and helpful. She is a true hero in my eyes. 【亮点解析】 开篇点明身份，直接引入。 “There is a hero in my community. Her name is Aunt Zhang.”两句交代了人物身份（社区里的志愿者）和姓名，开门见山，不绕弯子。用“hero”一词呼应标题“平凡英雄”的主题。 事迹具体，体现“平凡中的不凡”。 “helps the elderly do shopping”“takes care of kids when their parents are busy”——这两件事都是日常生活中常见的小事，但“helps the elderly”和“takes care of kids”正是“平凡英雄”之“平凡”的体现。“spends lots of her free time serving people”强调了时间投入——“lots of”和“free time”突出了她的无私奉献并非偶尔为之，而是持续的付出。事件虽小，但行为本身具有代表性和感染力。 品质提炼简洁精准。 “warm-hearted and selfless”两个形容词精准概括了她的核心品质。“asks for nothing in return”用具体行为进一步解释“selfless”——不求回报，让品质描述不空泛。 结尾回应“学到了什么”和“英雄定义”。 “She inspires me to be more caring and helpful.”直接回答“你学到了什么”——更关心他人、更乐于助人。“She is a true hero in my eyes.”呼应开头的“hero”一词，首尾闭环，从“她是谁”到“她在我眼中是什么”，情感上有升华。整篇文章虽短，但人物、事迹、品质、感悟四个要点无一遗漏，结构紧凑。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 屠呦呦是一位发现了青蒿素、拯救了数百万生命的伟大科学家。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 她和她的团队做了数百次实验，甚至自愿在自己身上测试药物。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 虽然他们失败了很多次，但屠呦呦从不放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 屠呦呦因其在医学领域的巨大成就成为第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我敬佩她，因为她一生致力于科学，帮助了这么多人。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：... is a ... who ...（介绍人物身份与成就） 例句： Tu Youyou is a great scientist who discovered artemisinin. （1）袁隆平是一位培育了杂交水稻的伟大科学家。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）南仁东是中国天眼的总设计师。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：He / She was born in ... and showed great ... from an early age.（描述早年） 例句： Tu Youyou was born in 1930 and showed great interest in medicine from an early age. （1）袁隆平出生于1930年，从小就对农业表现出极大的兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）南仁东出生于1945年，从小就对科学充满好奇。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：He / She devoted his / her whole life to ...（描述奉献） 例句： Tu Youyou devoted her whole life to medical research. （1）袁隆平一生致力于杂交水稻研究。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）南仁东一生致力于中国天眼的建设。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：Although ..., he / she never gave up.（描述坚持） 例句： Although they failed many times, Tu never gave up. （1）虽然遇到了很多困难，但他从不放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）虽然实验失败了数百次，她仍然坚持。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：He / She is a person who ...（描述品质） 例句： She is a person who always put others first. （1）他是一个从不放弃的人。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她是一个全心全意为人民服务的人。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I admire ... because ...（表达敬佩原因） 例句： I admire Tu Youyou because she devoted her whole life to science. （1）我敬佩袁隆平，因为他帮助解决了世界饥饿问题。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我敬佩南仁东，因为他让我们更好地了解了宇宙。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Tu Youyou is a great scientist. 升级句：Tu Youyou is a great scientist who discovered artemisinin and saved millions of lives. 1. 基础句：She worked hard. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：She never gave up. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：She won the Nobel Prize. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I admire her. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：He was a great scientist. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：His story is inspiring. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 根据提示，写一篇短文介绍一位你敬佩的人物 写作提示：每个人心中都有一位敬佩的英雄。请你写一篇短文，介绍一位你敬佩的人物(可以是名人，也可以是身边的普通人)。 要点： 1. 这个人是谁; 2. 他/她做了什么让你敬佩的事情; 3. 他/她身上有哪些优秀品质; 4. 你从他/她身上学到了什么。 要求：1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰；2. 不少于80词；3. 可适当发挥。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Tu Youyou is a great scientist who discovered artemisinin and saved millions of lives. 2. She and her team did hundreds of experiments, and even volunteered to test the drug on themselves. 3. Although they failed many times, Tu never gave up. 4. Tu Youyou became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize for her great achievements in medicine. 5. I admire her because she devoted her whole life to science and helped so many people. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Yuan Longping is a great scientist who developed hybrid rice. （2）Nan Rendong is the chief designer of China’s Sky Eye. 句型 2 （1）Yuan Longping was born in 1930 and showed great interest in agriculture from an early age. （2）Nan Rendong was born in 1945 and was very curious about science from an early age. 句型 3 （1）Yuan Longping devoted his whole life to hybrid rice research. （2）Nan Rendong devoted his whole life to the construction of China’s Sky Eye. 句型 4 （1）Although he met many difficulties, he never gave up. （2）Although the experiments failed hundreds of times, she still kept on. 句型 5 （1）He is a person who never gives up. （2）She is a person who serves the people wholeheartedly. 句型 6 （1）I admire Yuan Longping because he helped solve the world’s hunger problem. （2）I admire Nan Rendong because he helped us understand the universe better. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：She and her team did hundreds of experiments, and even volunteered to test the new drug on themselves to make sure it was safe. 2. 升级句：Although they failed many times, Tu never gave up and kept looking for new ways to develop the drug. 3. 升级句：Tu Youyou became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize for her great achievements in medicine and her discovery has saved millions of lives. 4. 升级句：I admire her because she devoted her whole life to science, put others before herself, and never gave up no matter how hard it was. 5. 升级句：He was a great scientist who spent his whole life researching rice and helped feed millions of people around the world. 6. 升级句：His story is deeply inspiring because it shows us that with hard work and determination, we can achieve great things and make a difference. 篇章训练（参考范文） The Person I Admire The person I admire most is my grandfather. He is not a famous person, but he is a hero in my eyes. He is a retired teacher and taught in a village school for over 40 years. Many of his students were from poor families. He spent his own money buying books for them and helped students with study problems after class. He never gave up on any student. What I admire most is his patience and kindness. He is always ready to help others. He told me education matters most and encouraged me to keep trying for my dreams. I hope I can be like him. He teaches me that true greatness lies in helping others. $