内容正文:
Unit 3 A Green Earth, a Better Home
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
污染类型
pollution 污染
air pollution 空气污染
water pollution 水污染
soil pollution 土壤污染
noise pollution 噪音污染
light pollution 光污染
环保行动
reduce 减少
reuse 再利用
recycle 回收利用
rethink 重新思考
rebuild 重建
sort the waste 垃圾分类
save energy 节约能源
save water 节约用水
plant trees 植树
ride a bike 骑自行车
take public transport 乘坐公共交通
turn off the lights 关灯
use fewer plastic bags 少用塑料袋
donate old clothes 捐赠旧衣服
环保相关名词
waste 废弃物
trash 垃圾
rubbish 垃圾
plastic 塑料
recycling 回收利用
greening 绿化
environment 环境
nature 自然
resource 资源
energy 能源
carbon 碳
low-carbon 低碳的
desert 沙漠
desertification 荒漠化
描述环境变化的形容词
green 绿色的;环保的
clean 干净的
polluted 被污染的
harmful 有害的
recyclable 可回收的
reusable 可重复使用的
environmental 环境的
serious 严重的
sustainable 可持续的
2. 高频搭配
protect the environment 保护环境
sort the waste 垃圾分类
waste sorting 垃圾分类
take action 采取行动
make use of 利用
throw away 扔掉
clean up 打扫;清理
pour into 倒入
be harmful to 对……有害
encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
take the chance 抓住机会
protect...from... 保护……免受……
as a result 结果
in a word 简言之
say no to 拒绝;向……说不
turn...into... 把……变成……
make a big difference 产生很大影响
most importantly 最重要的是
make efforts to do sth. 努力做某事
fight against 与……作斗争
in honor of 为了纪念
3. 写作功能表达
描述污染问题与成因
... pollution has become a serious problem in many places.
……污染在许多地方已经成为严重的问题。
... is caused by ... ……是由……引起的。
Many factories pour waste water into rivers.
许多工厂把废水排入河流。
... is harmful to people’s health and the environment.
……对人们的健康和环境有害。
描述环保行动
We can ... to protect the environment.
我们可以……来保护环境。
It is a good idea to ... ……是个好主意。
We should stop doing ... 我们应该停止做……
People have planted trees to ... 人们种树来……
I have been ... for ... years. 我已经……年了。
描述变化与成果
Great changes have taken place in the environment.
环境发生了巨大的变化。
The environment has improved a lot.
环境已经改善了很多。
Thanks to ..., the air is much cleaner now.
多亏了……,现在空气干净多了。
提出倡议与建议
Let’s ... together! 让我们一起……吧!
Everyone should do their part to protect the Earth.
每个人都应该为保护地球尽一份力。
We need to ... 我们需要……
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
The Earth is our only home, but it is crying for help.
地球是我们唯一的家园,但它正在呼救。
Environmental pollution has become a serious problem around the world.
环境污染已经成为全球性的严重问题。
I would like to share some ideas on how to protect the environment.
我想分享一些关于如何保护环境的想法。
2. 主体句型
We have learned a lot about air pollution and water pollution.
我们学到了很多关于空气污染和水污染的知识。
People have put lots of unclean things into rivers and lakes.
人们把许多不干净的东西放进河流和湖泊里。
To reduce trash, we can use fewer plastic bags.
为了减少垃圾,我们可以少用塑料袋。
Reusing means making use of something again or in another way.
再利用意味着再次或以另一种方式使用某物。
When we recycle, we turn used materials into new products.
当我们回收时,我们把用过的材料变成新产品。
3. 结尾句型
In a word, we need to protect our home planet.
总之,我们需要保护我们的家园。
Let’s develop a green lifestyle and make the world a better place.
让我们养成绿色生活方式,让世界变得更美好。
Small acts can make a big difference.
小小的举动可以产生很大的影响。
I believe that if everyone does their part, the Earth will become greener.
我相信如果每个人都尽自己的一份力,地球会变得更绿。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
Pollution is serious. 污染很严重。
Environmental pollution has become a serious problem around the world. 环境污染已经成为全球性的严重问题。
We should reduce waste. 我们应该减少浪费。
To reduce trash, we can use fewer plastic bags and avoid buying products with too much packaging. 为了减少垃圾,我们可以少用塑料袋,避免购买包装过多的产品。
We can reuse things. 我们可以再利用东西。
Reusing means making use of something again, such as using the water from showers to clean the toilet. 再利用意味着再次使用某物,比如用淋浴的水冲厕所。
We can recycle waste. 我们可以回收废物。
When we recycle, we turn used materials like paper, glass and plastic into new products. 当我们回收时,我们把用过的材料如纸张、玻璃和塑料变成新产品。
People have planted many trees. 人们种了很多树。
In the past few years, people have planted thousands of trees and the environment has improved a lot. 在过去的几年里,人们种了成千上万棵树,环境改善了很多。
We should protect the Earth. 我们应该保护地球。
Small acts can make a big difference. If everyone does their part, the Earth will become a greener and better home. 小小的举动可以产生很大的影响。如果每个人都尽自己的一份力,地球会变得更绿、更美好。
四、高分写作方法
典例精析
根据提示,写一篇短文介绍你为保护环境所做的努力
写作提示:假设你正在参加学校举办的“绿色生活”征文比赛。请你写一篇短文,介绍你在日常生活中为保护环境所做的努力。
要点:
1. 你做了什么(如:骑自行车上学、植树、节约用水、回收利用等);
2. 你是从什么时候开始做这些事的;
3. 你的努力带来了什么效果或影响;
4. 你对环保的看法或未来的计划。
要求:1. 语句通顺,逻辑清晰;2. 不少于80词;3. 可适当发挥。
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【审题构思】
先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。
内容上,题目给出四个必须涵盖的要点:具体行动、开始时间、效果影响、看法或计划。时态上,描述从过去持续到现在的行动用现在完成时(have/has done)或现在完成进行时(have/has been doing),描述看法用一般现在时,描述未来计划用一般将来时。结构上分三段:第一段总起并交代开始时间,第二段详述具体行动和效果,第三段表达看法和未来计划。
【例文欣赏】
My Efforts to Protect the Environment
I have been trying to live a green life for the past two years.
First of all, I have ridden my bike to school instead of taking the car for two years. This helps reduce air pollution. Second, I have been used to thinking twice before throwing things away. I recycle paper boxes, plastic bottles, and glass jars. I also avoid using plastic bags when shopping. My family produces less waste now.
Protecting the environment is everyone’s responsibility. I will join the school’s environmental club to do more to make the world better.
【亮点解析】
开篇交代时间,用现在完成进行时体现持续性。 “I have been trying to live a green life for the past two years.”用现在完成进行时强调“从两年前开始一直持续到现在”,暗示环保不是一时兴起,而是长期坚持的行为。同时点明了第二个要点“从什么时候开始”。
行动具体可操作,分类清晰。 出行方面:“ridden my bike to school instead of taking the car”——把“不开车”换成了“骑车”,行动明确;废弃物处理方面:“recycle paper boxes, plastic bottles, and glass jars”——三类可回收物逐一列出;“avoid using plastic bags when shopping”——购物场景的具体做法。三个行动覆盖了“行”“废”“购”三个生活场景,读者可以照着做。
效果与行动一一对应,逻辑紧密。 “This helps reduce air pollution.”紧跟在骑自行车之后,直接说明减排效果。“My family produces less waste now.”放在回收利用和少用塑料袋之后,说明家庭垃圾减量的结果。效果不单独成段,而是紧随行动之后,因果关系清晰。
看法简短有力,计划具体可行。 “Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility.”一句话表明观点,简洁不啰嗦。“I will join the school's environmental club”是具体计划,“to do more to make the world better”补充目的。计划从个人行为延伸到组织参与,体现了环保意识的升级。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 环境污染已经成为全球性的严重问题。
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2. 为了减少垃圾,我们可以少用塑料袋。
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3. 再利用意味着再次或以另一种方式使用某物。
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4. 当我们回收时,我们把用过的材料变成新产品。
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5. 在过去的几年里,人们种了成千上万棵树。
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:... has become a serious problem.(描述问题严重性)
例句: Environmental pollution has become a serious problem around the world.
(1)空气污染在许多城市已经成为严重的问题。
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(2)水污染在发展中国家已经成为严重的问题。
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句型 2:To reduce ..., we can ...(描述减少污染的方法)
例句: To reduce trash, we can use fewer plastic bags.
(1)为了减少水污染,我们可以停止向河流中排放废物。
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(2)为了减少空气污染,我们可以多乘坐公共交通。
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句型 3:Reusing means ...(解释再利用)
例句: Reusing means making use of something again or in another way.
(1)再利用意味着再次使用物品,比如用旧瓶子种花。
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(2)回收意味着把用过的材料变成新产品。
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句型 4:When we recycle, we turn ... into ...(描述回收过程)
例句: When we recycle, we turn used materials into new products.
(1)当我们回收时,我们把旧报纸变成新的纸制品。
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(2)当我们回收时,我们把塑料瓶变成新的塑料制品。
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句型 5:... have / has ... for ... years.(描述持续行动)
例句: People have planted trees for many years to protect the environment.
(1)我们学校进行垃圾分类已经两年了。
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(2)我已经骑自行车上学三年了。
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句型 6:Small acts can make a big difference.(表达信念)
例句: Small acts can make a big difference to our environment.
(1)每个人的小小努力都能带来巨大的变化。
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(2)如果我们齐心协力,就能实现这一目标。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:Pollution is serious.
升级句:Environmental pollution has become a serious problem around the world.
1. 基础句:We should reduce waste.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:We can reuse things.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:We can recycle waste.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:People have planted many trees.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:We should protect the Earth.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:The environment is better now.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
如今环境污染问题日益严峻,低碳生活人人有责。请以 “Go Green, Live Low-carbon” 为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点:
1. 目前身边存在的污染问题;
2. 我们日常生活中的低碳做法(节约水电、绿色出行、垃圾分类、多种树等);
3. 呼吁大家一起保护环境。
要求:80词左右,语句通顺,语法正确。
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参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. Environmental pollution has become a serious problem around the world.
2. To reduce trash, we can use fewer plastic bags.
3. Reusing means making use of something again or in another way.
4. When we recycle, we turn used materials into new products.
5. In the past few years, people have planted thousands of trees.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)Air pollution has become a serious problem in many cities.
(2)Water pollution has become a serious problem in developing countries.
句型 2
(1)To reduce water pollution, we can stop pouring waste into rivers.
(2)To reduce air pollution, we can take public transport more often.
句型 3
(1)Reusing means using things again, such as using old bottles to grow flowers.
(2)Recycling means turning used materials into new products.
句型 4
(1)When we recycle, we turn old newspapers into new paper products.
(2)When we recycle, we turn plastic bottles into new plastic products.
句型 5
(1)Our school has sorted the waste for two years.
(2)I have ridden my bike to school for three years.
句型 6
(1)Everyone’s small efforts can make a big difference.
(2)If we work together, we can make it happen.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:To reduce trash, we can use fewer plastic bags and avoid buying products with too much packaging.
2. 升级句:Reusing means making use of something again, such as using the water from showers to clean the toilet and donating old clothes to charity.
3. 升级句:When we recycle, we turn used materials like paper, glass and plastic into new products, saving resources and energy.
4. 升级句:In the past few years, people have planted thousands of trees and the environment in our city has improved a lot.
5. 升级句:Small acts can make a big difference. If everyone does their part, the Earth will become a greener and better home for all of us.
6. 升级句:Thanks to our efforts, the air is cleaner, the water is clearer, and the environment is much better than before.
篇章训练(参考范文)
Go Green, Live Low-carbon
Now pollution is around us everywhere, such as dirty air, polluted rivers and too much rubbish. It is necessary for us to live a low-carbon life.
We can do small things in daily life. We should save water and electricity by turning off lights and taps in time. We’d better walk or ride bikes. We can sort rubbish and plant more trees. Don’t use plastic bags too often.
Small efforts matter a lot. Let’s take action together to protect our earth and make it more beautiful.
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