Unit 3 Family traditions 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版九年级英语上册

Unit 3 Family Traditions 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 家庭传统活动 family tradition 家庭传统 Spring Festival gathering 春节聚会 family dinner 家庭晚餐 Sunday brunch 周日早午餐 game night 游戏之夜 family outing 家庭出游 family bike ride 家庭骑行 birthday celebration 生日庆祝 holiday decoration 节日装饰 family reunion 家庭团聚 family photo 全家福 家庭关系 family members 家庭成员 parents 父母 grandparents 祖父母 relatives 亲戚 bond 纽带 connection 联系 support 支持 love 爱 care 关怀 belonging 归属感 情感与感受 love 爱 warmth 温暖 happiness 幸福 joy 喜悦 grateful 感激的 cherished 珍爱的 unforgettable 难忘的 touching 感人的 proud 自豪的 活动动词 gather 聚集 celebrate 庆祝 share 分享 cook 烹饪 decorate 装饰 play 玩耍 talk 交谈 laugh 大笑 remember 记住 continue 继续 pass down 传承 2. 高频搭配 pass down 传承；流传 from generation to generation 一代代地 get together 团聚 have a family dinner 吃家庭晚餐 share stories 分享故事 spend time together 共度时光 take photos 拍照 make dumplings 包饺子 set off fireworks 放烟花 give lucky money 给压岁钱 decorate the house 装饰房子 look forward to 期待 remind somebody of 使某人想起 family bond 家庭纽带 grow up 长大 in one’s forties 在某人四十多岁时 3. 写作功能表达 介绍家庭传统 ... is a family tradition that we have had for many years. ……是我们家延续多年的家庭传统。 Every year, we ... 每年我们都…… We always ... on special days. 我们总是在特殊的日子里…… 描述活动场景 We usually get together and ... 我们通常聚在一起并…… My mother is cooking ... while my father is ... 我妈妈在煮……而我爸爸在…… Everyone seems happy and relaxed. 每个人看起来都很开心和放松。 表达感受 I feel warm and loved when ... 当……时我感到温暖和被爱。 It makes me proud of my family. 这让我为我的家庭感到自豪。 The tradition reminds me of ... 这个传统让我想起…… 阐述意义 This tradition brings our family closer together. 这个传统让我们的家庭更加紧密。 It teaches us the importance of ... 它教会我们……的重要性。 I hope this tradition will be passed down to the next generation. 我希望这个传统能传承给下一代。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 Every family has its own traditions, and my family is no exception. 每个家庭都有自己的传统，我的家庭也不例外。 One of my favourite family traditions is ... 我最喜欢的家庭传统之一是…… I would like to share a special family tradition with you. 我想和你分享一个特殊的家庭传统。 Family traditions are important because they bring us closer together. 家庭传统很重要，因为它们让我们更亲近。 2. 主体句型 We have a family dinner every Sunday evening. 我们每周日晚上都有家庭晚餐。 It has been a tradition in my family for many years. 这是我家的传统，已经延续多年。 During the Spring Festival, we always get together and have a big meal. 春节期间，我们总是聚在一起吃大餐。 My grandmother always makes dumplings on this day. 我奶奶总是在这一天包饺子。 Everyone looks happy and enjoys the time together. 每个人看起来都很开心，享受着在一起的时光。 3. 结尾句型 I hope this tradition will continue forever. 我希望这个传统能永远持续下去。 These family traditions make me feel grateful and loved. 这些家庭传统让我感到感恩和被爱。 Family traditions are not just about the activities; they are about the love we share. 家庭传统不仅仅是活动，更是我们分享的爱。 I believe that family traditions help us stay connected no matter how far apart we are. 我相信家庭传统帮助我们无论相隔多远都能保持联系。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 We have a family tradition. 我们有一个家庭传统。 Every Sunday evening, we have a family dinner that brings all of us together. 每周日晚上，我们都有一次家庭晚餐，把所有家人聚在一起。 My grandmother makes dumplings. 我奶奶包饺子。 My grandmother always makes dumplings with great care, and we all enjoy making them together. 我奶奶总是用心包饺子，我们都喜欢一起包。 Everyone looks happy. 每个人看起来都很开心。 Everyone looks relaxed and happy, and the house is filled with laughter and warmth. 每个人看起来都很放松和开心，屋子里充满了笑声和温暖。 I feel loved. 我感到被爱。 When we sit together around the dinner table, I feel the love and support of my family. 当我们一起围坐在餐桌旁时，我感受到了家人的爱和支持。 This tradition is important. 这个传统很重要。 This tradition is important because it reminds us of our family bond and the love we share. 这个传统很重要，因为它让我们想起家庭的纽带和我们分享的爱。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，让他理解家规的重要性。 写作要点: 1. Can you name one family rule you agree with or one you disagree with? 2. If you don’t like this rule, what suggestion would you make to your parents? 3. Why is it important to follow family rules? 写作要求: 1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。 4. 词数100左右。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【审题构思】 先明确三点：写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上，题目给出三个必须涵盖的要点：列举一条你同意或不同意的家规、如果不同意给出什么建议、为什么遵守家规很重要。时态上，描述家规内容用一般现在时，提出建议可用一般现在时或情态动词。结构上分三段：开头回应Peter的苦恼，表达理解；主体段列举家规、表明态度并给出建议，阐述遵守家规的重要性；结尾送上鼓励和祝福。 【范文欣赏】 Dear Peter, I understand how you feel. Too many rules can be really annoying. But I believe they are made out of love. One rule in my family is that I must finish my homework before watching TV. I agree with this rule because it helps me stay focused and manage my time well. If you don't like some rules, try to talk to your parents calmly. Tell them how you feel and suggest a compromise. For example, you could ask for more free time after finishing your tasks. Family rules are important because they teach us self-discipline and responsibility. They also keep us safe and help the family run smoothly. Once you understand the meaning behind them, you may find them less troubling. Hope my advice helps. Take it easy and keep communicating with your parents. Yours, Li Ping 【亮点解析】 共情先行，建立信任。 “I understand how you feel. Too many rules can be really annoying.”先肯定Peter的感受，站在他的立场说话。“But I believe they are made out of love.”用转折引出自己的观点，为后文的建议和说理做铺垫。短短三句话完成了“理解—共情—引导”的情绪过渡。 用具体家规举例，真实可感。 “I must finish my homework before watching TV.”没有空谈“我家也有规矩”，而是给出了一条具体规则。紧接着“I agree with this rule because it helps me stay focused and manage my time well.”既回应了写作要点中的“同意或不同意”，又给出了理由——帮助集中注意力和管理时间，理由具体充分，有说服力。 建议部分体现沟通智慧。 “try to talk to your parents calmly. Tell them how you feel and suggest a compromise.”没有简单地说“跟父母沟通”，而是分三步：冷静地谈、表达感受、提出折中方案。“For example, you could ask for more free time after finishing your tasks.”给出了具体的妥协方案示例，建议可操作性强，符合题目要求“If you don't like this rule, what suggestion would you make”。 说理有层次，从个人到家庭。 “Family rules are important because they teach us self-discipline and responsibility. They also keep us safe and help the family run smoothly.”从两个层面阐述家规的价值：个人层面——培养自律和责任感；家庭层面——保障安全和让家庭运转顺畅。从“小我”到“大家”，层层递进。“Once you understand the meaning behind them, you may find them less troubling.”将说理收束到Peter自身的感受变化，从“理性认知”回到“情感接纳”。 结尾真诚温暖。 “Hope my advice helps. Take it easy and keep communicating with your parents.”既表达了对建议有效性的期待，又用“Take it easy”安抚Peter的情绪，最后鼓励他与父母保持沟通，切中问题核心。语气亲切，符合书信体特点。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 每个家庭都有自己的传统，我的家庭也不例外。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 我们每周日晚上都有家庭晚餐，把所有家人聚在一起。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 我奶奶总是用心包饺子，我们都喜欢一起包。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 当我们一起围坐在餐桌旁时，我感受到了家人的爱和支持。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我希望这个传统能永远持续下去。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：Every family has its own ...（引出家庭传统） 例句： Every family has its own traditions, and my family is no exception. （1）每个家庭都有自己的故事，我的家庭也不例外。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）每个家庭都有自己的节日庆祝方式，我的家庭也不例外。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：... is a family tradition that ...（定义家庭传统） 例句： Sunday dinner is a family tradition that brings us all together. （1）春节聚会是一个让所有家人团聚的家庭传统。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）周日早午餐是一个让家人分享故事的家庭传统。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：We always ... on special days.（描述特定日期的活动） 例句： We always get together and have a big meal on New Year’s Eve. （1）我们在春节总是聚在一起包饺子。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我们总是在平安夜装饰房子。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：... looks / feels / sounds ...（感官描写） 例句： Everyone looks happy and relaxed during our family dinner. （1）在家庭活动中，每个人都看起来很开心。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）当全家人在一起时，我感到温暖和被爱。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：This tradition reminds me of ...（表达意义） 例句： This tradition reminds me of the happy moments I spent with my family. （1）这个传统让我想起和家人在一起的快乐时光。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这个传统让我想起我祖父母教我的东西。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I hope this tradition will ...（表达愿望） 例句： I hope this tradition will continue forever. （1）我希望这个传统会一代代传承下去。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我希望这个传统能让我们的家庭更加紧密。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：We have a family tradition. 升级句：Every Sunday evening, we have a family dinner that brings all of us together. 1. 基础句：My grandmother makes dumplings. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：Everyone looks happy. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I feel loved. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：We celebrate Spring Festival together. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：This tradition is important. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：My mother cooks the dinner. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．每个人的家庭都有独特的家庭传统，这些传统温暖生活、传承家风。请你以“My Family Traditions”为题，写一篇英语短文。 写作要点： 1. 介绍你家1-2个具体的家庭传统； 2. 讲述这些传统带给你的收获与感受； 3. 表达你对家庭传统的看法与传承意愿。 要求： 1. 词数80-100； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，逻辑清晰； 3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。 My Family Traditions ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Every family has its own traditions, and my family is no exception. 2. Every Sunday evening, we have a family dinner that brings all of us together. 3. My grandmother always makes dumplings with great care, and we all enjoy making them together. 4. When we sit together around the dinner table, I feel the love and support of my family. 5. I hope this tradition will continue forever. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Every family has its own stories, and my family is no exception. （2）Every family has its own way of celebrating festivals, and my family is no exception. 句型 2 （1）Spring Festival gathering is a family tradition that brings all of us together. （2）Sunday brunch is a family tradition that allows us to share stories. 句型 3 （1）We always get together and make dumplings during the Spring Festival. （2）We always decorate the house on Christmas Eve. 句型 4 （1）Everyone looks happy and relaxed during our family activities. （2）When the whole family is together, I feel warm and loved. 句型 5 （1）This tradition reminds me of the happy moments I spent with my family. （2）This tradition reminds me of what my grandparents taught me. 句型 6 （1）I hope this tradition will be passed down from generation to generation. （2）I hope this tradition will bring our family closer together. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：My grandmother always makes dumplings with great care, and we all enjoy making them together in the kitchen. 2. 升级句：Everyone looks relaxed and happy, and the house is filled with laughter and warmth during the dinner. 3. 升级句：When we sit together around the dinner table, I feel the love and support of my family all around me. 4. 升级句：During the Spring Festival, our whole family gets together to have a big meal, share stories and enjoy each other’s company. 5. 升级句：This tradition is important because it reminds us of our family bond and the love we share with each other. 6. 升级句：My mother is cooking a big dinner in the kitchen while my father is setting the table, and the whole house smells wonderful. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．范文： My Family Traditions Every family has its own traditions, and my family’s traditions bring me lots of warmth and growth. We have two main family traditions. First, my family always have a family dinner together every weekend. We share our happiness and troubles during the dinner. Second, we visit our grandparents every month and help them with housework. These traditions mean a lot to me. They make our family closer and teach me to respect the old and cherish family love. I think good family traditions are precious treasure. I will keep our traditions and pass them down all the time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $