Unit 1 Great people 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语沪教版九年级上册

该初中英语导学案围绕“伟人”主题写作展开，涵盖人物身份、品质、成就等核心内容。通过主题词汇分类、高频搭配及写作功能表达搭建学习支架，引导学生从基础词汇积累过渡到句型运用，再到篇章写作，形成连贯的知识脉络。 该资料特色在于系统的写作素材库与阶梯式训练设计，素材库分类清晰助力语言能力提升，句型升级示例增强表达丰富度，阶梯训练从句子到篇章逐步进阶。典例精析结合范文解析，培养学生分析评价伟人特质的思维品质，自主训练设计则提升学习能力，高效助力写作掌握。

Unit 1 Great People 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 人物身份与职业 scientist 科学家 astronomer 天文学家 mathematician 数学家 physicist 物理学家 chemist 化学家 biologist 生物学家 philosopher 哲学家 dramatist 剧作家 poet 诗人 writer 作家 composer 作曲家 inventor 发明家 explorer 探险家 physician 医生 scholar 学者 educator 教育家 journalist 新闻记者 描述人物品质 outstanding 杰出的 ordinary 普通的 talented 有才能的 gifted 有天赋的 brilliant 才华横溢的 intelligent 聪明的 creative 有创造力的 determined 坚定的 hard-working 勤奋的 patient 有耐心的 wise 智慧的 brave 勇敢的 selfless 无私的 modest 谦逊的 inspiring 鼓舞人心的 成就与贡献 discover 发现 discovery 发现 invent 发明 invention 发明 achieve 实现;取得 achievement 成就 contribute 贡献 contribution 贡献 breakthrough 突破 develop 发展 research 研究 experiment 实验 theory 理论 award 奖项 Nobel Prize 诺贝尔奖 表达敬佩 admire 钦佩;欣赏 respect 尊敬 look up to 仰慕 be inspired by 受……启发 set an example 树立榜样 be remembered for 因……而被铭记 be considered as 被认为是…… have a huge impact on 对……有巨大影响 2. 高频搭配 be born into a family that ... 出生于一个……的家庭 show great interest in ... 对……表现出极大兴趣 from an early age 从小 spend a lot of time doing ... 花很多时间做…… with this in mind 考虑到这一点 grow up in a family that ... 在……的家庭中长大 have a talent for ... 有……天赋 in addition to 除……之外 be fond of 喜爱 at a young age 在年轻的时候 through hard work 通过努力工作 manage to do 设法做成某事 make a significant contribution to ... 对……做出重大贡献 have a huge impact on ... 对……产生巨大影响 It is fitting that ... ……是恰当的 3. 写作功能表达 介绍人物基本信息 ... is one of the most outstanding ... in history. ……是历史上最杰出的……之一。 ... was born in ... in ... ……于……年出生于…… He / She came from a family that ... 他/她来自一个……的家庭。 描述生平与求学经历 From an early age, he / she showed great interest in ... 从小,他/她就对……表现出极大的兴趣。 He / She spent a lot of time studying ... 他/她花了很多时间学习…… He / She studied ... at ... 他/她在……学习…… 描述成就与贡献 He / She made great contributions to ... 他/她对……做出了巨大贡献。 He / She is remembered for ... 他/她因……而被铭记。 His / Her work had a huge impact on ... 他/她的工作对……产生了巨大影响。 He / She managed to ... through hard work. 他/她通过努力设法…… 表达个人观点与评价 I admire ... because ... 我敬佩……因为…… ... set a good example for us all. ……为我们所有人树立了好榜样。 I think ... is a great person because ... 我认为……是一个伟人,因为…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 ... is one of the most outstanding ... in history. ……是历史上最杰出的……之一。 I would like to introduce ... to you. 我想向你介绍…… There are many great people in history, and my favourite is ... 历史上有许多伟人,我最喜欢的是…… ... is considered to be one of the greatest ... ……被认为是最伟大的……之一。 2. 主体句型 ... was born in ... in ... ……于……年出生于…… He / She grew up in a family that valued education. 他/她在一个重视教育的家庭中长大。 From an early age, he / she showed great talent in ... 从小,他/她就展现出在……方面的巨大天赋。 He / She devoted his / her whole life to ... 他/她一生致力于…… Through hard work, he / she managed to ... 通过努力工作,他/她设法…… His / Her discovery changed the way people view ... 他/她的发现改变了人们对……的看法。 3. 结尾句型 I admire ... because he / she showed great determination. 我敬佩……因为他/她展现了巨大的决心。 His / Her story teaches us that we should never give up. 他/她的故事教会我们永不放弃。 ... set a good example for us all. ……为我们所有人树立了好榜样。 He / She is not only a great ... but also an inspiration to us all. 他/她不只是一位伟大的……,也是我们所有人的榜样。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Wang Zhenyi was a scientist. 王贞仪是一位科学家。 Wang Zhenyi was an outstanding mathematician and astronomer who lived in the Qing Dynasty. 王贞仪是一位杰出的数学家和天文学家,生活在清朝。 She was born in 1768. 她出生于1768年。 Wang Zhenyi was born in 1768 into a family that valued education. 王贞仪于1768年出生在一个重视教育的家庭。 She studied astronomy. 她研究天文学。 She spent a lot of time studying astronomy in her grandfather’s library. 她在祖父的图书馆里花了很多时间研究天文学。 She wrote books. 她写书。 At age 24, she created a simpler method of multiplication and division and wrote a book about it. 24岁时,她创造了一种更简单的乘除法计算方法,并写了一本书。 She was great. 她很伟大。 Wang Zhenyi achieved so much in her short life and she is remembered beyond the Earth—a crater on Venus was named after her. 王贞仪在短暂的一生中取得了如此多的成就,她在地球之外被铭记——金星上有一个陨石坑以她的名字命名。 四、高分写作方法 典例精析 伟人对世界产生了巨大的影响。是什么使他们成为了伟人?请根据以下提示,以“What makes a great person”为题写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。 提示: 1. Who is the greatest person in your mind? (e.g., Yuan Longping, Tu Youyou, Confucius...) 2. What do you know about him or her? (Achievements, spirit, etc.) 3. How has he or she influenced the world? 注意: (1)短文须包括以上内容,可适当发挥,语言流畅,逻辑清晰,书写规范; (2)词数:80-100词。 What makes a great person _ 【审题构思】 先明确三点:写什么、用什么时态、分几段来写。 内容上,题目给出三个必须涵盖的要点:心目中的伟人是谁、他/她的成就和精神、对世界的影响。时态上,介绍人物事迹用一般过去时,阐述影响可用现在完成时或一般现在时。结构上分三段:第一段引出心目中的伟人,第二段介绍他/她的成就和精神品质,第三段总结对世界的影响并升华"什么造就了伟人"的主题。 【范文欣赏】 What makes a great person In my mind, Yuan Longping is the greatest person. He was a scientist who devoted his whole life to rice research. He is known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". Yuan Longping spent decades developing hybrid rice that could grow well even in poor soil. He was hard-working and never gave up, even when he faced many failures. His greatest dream was to feed all the people in the world, and he worked tirelessly to achieve it. Thanks to his great work, the world now produces much more rice. His hybrid rice has helped solve food shortages in many countries. Yuan Longping taught us that a great person is not measured by wealth, but by how many lives he has touched. That is what makes a true great person. 【亮点解析】 开篇明确观点,简洁有力。 "In my mind, Yuan Longping is the greatest person."一句话直接回答"What makes a great person"中隐含的"who"的问题。紧接着"He was a scientist who devoted his whole life to rice research"用定语从句交代身份和毕生事业,"He is known as the 'Father of Hybrid Rice'"用被动语态补充世人评价,三句话完成人物的基本信息铺垫。 成就与精神并重,体现伟人内涵。 "spent decades developing hybrid rice that could grow well even in poor soil"交代了具体成就——杂交水稻及其特性;"hard-working""never gave up""faced many failures"用三个词/短语概括了精神品质——勤奋、不放弃、不畏失败;"feed all the people in the world""worked tirelessly"写出他的梦想与行动。成就(做了什么)、品质(怎样做的)、梦想(为什么做)三个层面清晰展现,让读者理解袁隆平为什么"伟大"。 影响描述具体,从事实到升华。 "the world now produces much more rice"写粮食产量的提升;"helped solve food shortages in many countries"写对世界饥饿问题的缓解。两个句子从"产量"到"国家层面的粮食安全",影响范围逐层扩大。结尾将"伟大"的定义升华:"not measured by wealth, but by how many lives he has touched"——从袁隆平的个人事迹提炼出"什么造就伟人"的普遍结论,既回应题目,又有思想深度。 五、阶梯训练 (一)句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 王贞仪是一位杰出的数学家和天文学家,生活在清朝。 _ 2. 她在一个重视教育的家庭中长大。 _ 3. 她在祖父的图书馆里花了很多时间研究天文学。 _ 4. 24岁时,她创造了一种更简单的乘除法计算方法,并写了一本书。 _ 5. 王贞仪在短暂的一生中取得了如此多的成就,金星上有一个陨石坑以她的名字命名。 _ Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子) 句型 1:... is one of the most outstanding ...(介绍人物地位) 例句: Wang Zhenyi is one of the most outstanding astronomers in Chinese history. (1)屠呦呦是中国历史上最杰出的科学家之一。 _ (2)孔子是中国历史上最伟大的思想家之一。 _ 句型 2:... was born in ... into a family that ...(介绍出生背景) 例句: Wang Zhenyi was born in 1768 into a family that valued education. (1)玛丽 居里于1867年出生在一个重视教育的家庭。 _ (2)查尔斯 达尔文于1809年出生在一个富裕的家庭。 _ 句型 3:He / She grew up in a family that ...(描述成长环境) 例句: She grew up in a family that valued education. (1)他在一个热爱科学、鼓励探索的家庭中长大。 _ (2)她在一个热爱文学的家庭中长大。 _ 句型 4:From an early age, ... showed great interest in ...(描述早年兴趣) 例句: From an early age, she showed great interest in astronomy. (1)从小,屠呦呦就对医学表现出极大的兴趣。 _ (2)从小,爱因斯坦就对物理学表现出极大的兴趣。 _ 句型 5:He / She spent a lot of time doing ...(描述勤奋) 例句: She spent a lot of time studying astronomy in her grandfather’s library. (1)她花了很多时间在实验室做实验。 _ (2)他花了很多时间阅读和研究科学书籍。 _ 句型 6:I admire ... because ...(表达敬佩原因) 例句: I admire Wang Zhenyi because she achieved so much at a young age. (1)我敬佩屠呦呦,因为她拯救了数百万人的生命。 _ (2)我敬佩孔子,因为他的思想影响了中国两千多年。 _ Level 3 句子升级 要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例: 基础句:Wang Zhenyi was a scientist. 升级句:Wang Zhenyi was an outstanding mathematician and astronomer who lived in the Qing Dynasty. 1. 基础句:She was born in 1768. 升级句:_ 2. 基础句:She studied astronomy. 升级句:_ 3. 基础句:She wrote books. 升级句:_ 4. 基础句:She was great. 升级句:_ 5. 基础句:She was a woman scientist. 升级句:_ 6. 基础句:She was a poet too. 升级句:_ (二)篇章训练 1.中华民族从来都是一个勇敢且不乏英雄的民族。中国历史上有英雄,文学作品中有英雄,体育竞技赛上有英雄,日常生活中也有英雄。请你从下面第一个表格中选择其中一位英雄,并根据后面两个表格中的提示写一篇短文进行介绍。 提示: Hero: Monkey King Yuan Longping my teacher my mom Everyday life or Story or Achievement(s) Reasons: spirit ability influence 注意: (1)文中不得出现真实的校名和地名。 (2)词数80个左右。 _ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Wang Zhenyi was an outstanding mathematician and astronomer who lived in the Qing Dynasty. 2. She grew up in a family that valued education. 3. She spent a lot of time studying astronomy in her grandfather’s library. 4. At age 24, she created a simpler method of multiplication and division and wrote a book about it. 5. Wang Zhenyi achieved so much in her short life and a crater on Venus was named after her. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 (1)Tu Youyou is one of the most outstanding scientists in Chinese history. (2)Confucius is one of the greatest thinkers in Chinese history. 句型 2 (1)Marie Curie was born in 1867 into a family that valued education. (2)Charles Darwin was born in 1809 into a wealthy family. 句型 3 (1)He grew up in a family that loved science and encouraged exploration. (2)She grew up in a family that loved literature. 句型 4 (1)From an early age, Tu Youyou showed great interest in medicine. (2)From an early age, Einstein showed great interest in physics. 句型 5 (1)She spent a lot of time doing experiments in the laboratory. (2)He spent a lot of time reading and studying science books. 句型 6 (1)I admire Tu Youyou because she saved millions of lives. (2)I admire Confucius because his ideas have influenced China for over 2,000 years. Level 3 句子升级 (以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受) 1. 升级句:Wang Zhenyi was born in 1768 into a family that valued education and encouraged her to learn. 2. 升级句:She spent a lot of time studying astronomy and mathematics in her grandfather’s library, even though the books were old-fashioned and difficult. 3. 升级句:At age 24, she created a simpler method of multiplication and division and wrote a book about it to help others understand. 4. 升级句:Wang Zhenyi achieved so much in her short life that a crater on Venus was named after her in 1994. 5. 升级句:She was a woman scientist in a time when women were often not taken seriously, but she proved that women are as intelligent as men. 6. 升级句:In addition to her scientific achievements, Wang Zhenyi was also an excellent poet who wrote about modern topics and encouraged women to be heroic. 篇章训练(参考范文) 1.例文 The hero in my heart is Yuan Longping, China’s most famous “farmer”. Before his research, many people didn’t have enough food. Through his hard work, he developed hybrid rice. The introduction of this product helped farmers produce much more rice. What makes him a hero is not just his success in science, but also his spirit. He was kind, hardworking, and ready to help others. Even in his old age, he kept working in the fields. His story encourages me to work hard and never give up. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $