Unit 1 课时4 Section 3 Writng（教学课件）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

该初中英语课件聚焦“介绍伟大人物的写作”核心知识点，课堂导入通过短语积累游戏和阅读课王祯仪案例回顾，搭建“词汇-要素分析”学习支架，衔接写作结构讲解（以屠呦呦为例，分开头、中间、结尾模块），形成“输入-分析-输出”的知识脉络。 其亮点在于融合语言能力（提供20个核心短语及通用句式库）、思维品质（思维导图规划写作逻辑）和文化意识（黄旭华等真实案例渗透家国情怀），采用“Plan-Write-Check”三步写作法，配套范文及自查清单，助力学生提升写作表达与逻辑分析能力，教师可直接使用结构化教学流程提升教学效率。

Unit 2 Section 3 Writing Great people 沪教版2024英语（九年级上） 1 学习目标 I can talk about some great people and their achievements. understand how great people contribute to the development of society. write a short story about a great person. analyse how people became great. 2 01 新 课 导 入 03 应 用 实 践 06 回 顾 总 结 07 随 堂 小 练 02 学 习 理 解 04 迁 移 创 新 05 考 点 速 递 学习内容 3 新课导入 1 4 grow up in a family that.. have a talent for in addition to It is fitting that... at the age of 24 build her knowledge be fond of The impact of his contributions 除…之外 热衷于 … 实至名归；理所应当 积累知识 在…环境的家庭中长大 在 24 岁时 他的做贡献带来的影响 在…方面有天赋 Play a game! (短语积累） 2. Her profession(s) 1.Who 3. Her education 6. How she is remembered 5. Her ideas 4.Her achievements A great person Wang Zhenyi (1768-1797), a female scholar in the Qing dynasty. Mathematician ，Astronomer She learned from her family and studied in her grandfather’s library. She made math easier to understand and explained eclipses simply. She believed women were as capable as men and science should be clear. A crater on Venus was named after her, and she is still honored today. From the Reading we know “how to describe a great person” How to write a great person？ 1.Who 2. Her profession(s) Tu Youyou born in Ningbo, Zhejiang in 1930 She is a famous Chinese female scientist 3. Her education 4.Her achievements She studied medicine at Beijing Medical College and finished school in 1955. She found artemisinin to treat malaria. It saved lots of people’s lives. She got the Nobel Prize in 2015. 5. How did she become a great person? 6. What personal qualities helped her become a great person? She read many old medical books and did thousands of experiments. She kept working hard for years and finally made the great discovery. She is hard-working, careful and never gives up when facing difficulties. 学习理解 02 10 Writing an article about a great person Teen Life Magazine A lot of people changed society with their skills, knowledge and ideas. Teen Life Magazine will have a special column about them. Write an article about a great person and send it to us! 1 Discuss in pairs about the great people you know about. Use the questions to help you. ·Who is he/she? ·What are his/her achievements? ·How did he /she become a great person? ·Why do people admire him/her? ·What personal qualities helped him /her become a great person? 话题分析 写一篇关于伟大人物的文章 本单元以“Great People”为核心话题，围绕“伟大人物的生平、成就、精神品质及影响”展开，核心聚焦“用英语介绍伟大人物、描述其关键经历、阐述其精神价值” 。写作要求结合真实事实依据，遵循清晰严谨的写作逻辑，熟练运用描写人物、写出结构完整、内容真实、主旨积极的记叙文，适用于屠呦呦、王祯仪等各类杰出伟人的写作场景。 介绍伟大人物的基本结构： 开头：简单介绍人物身份、出生、职业、研究领域，快速引出人物。 中间：中间第一段：列举人物最核心、最具影响力的成果、贡献或荣誉。 中间第二段：讲述人物的奋斗过程、付出的努力，成功来之不易 结尾：总结人物的社会价值、奉献意义，说明受人尊敬的核心原因。 提炼人物优秀品质，总结成功根源，完成全文升华。 应用实践 03 15 2 Write an article about a great person. Step1 Plan Do some research about a great person you are interested in and complete the mind map with the information you found. Early life and background Qualities People's opinions on him/her Achievements Step 2 Write Write about this great person. Use the mind map in step 1 and the expressions below to help you. From a young age, he/she showed a strong interest in. …. Inspired by...,he/she was fond of... A significant milestone in his /her life was when ... Through his /her hard work, he/she managed to ... The impact of his /her contributions can still be seen in.. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I wrote about the person's early life, contributions and what others think of him/her. I used appropriate adjectives, such as ___________to describe the person's qualities. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Step 3 Check and revise Tick(√)the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. Tu Youyou is a respected Chinese medical scientist born in 1930. She studied medicine at Beijing Medical College and devoted her whole life to the research of traditional Chinese medicine. Her greatest achievement is discovering artemisinin, a useful drug to treat malaria. This important medicine has saved millions of sick people all over the world. Thanks to her great work, she became the first Chinese mainland scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Medicine in 2015. During the research, she worked in poor conditions. She read lots of ancient medical books and did thousands of experiments. She failed many times but never lost heart. People admire her for her great contributions to human health. Her perseverance, carefulness and selfless spirit finally lead her to huge success. 回顾总结 06 20 一、复习和总结描述一位伟大人物的词汇和句型。 二、通过思维导图，我们学习关于“如何描述一个伟大的人物” 。 三、用所学的知识完成一篇写作任务。 课堂小练 07 22 在…… 家庭长大 在某方面有天赋 从小 对…… 产生浓厚兴趣 热衷于做某事 除…… 以外 花大量时间做 在艰苦条件下 面对许多挫折 从不灰心 grow up in a family that… have a talent for from an early age /from a young age show a strong interest in… be fond of doing sth in addition to spend a lot of time doing… in poor conditions face numerous difficulties never lose heart 一、短语翻译 11.重大的里程碑 12.以…… 命名 13.造福全世界 14.获得殊荣与世界认可 15.贡献带来的影响 16.无私奉献 17.顽强的意志 18.… 实至名归 19.成为榜样 20.为…… 做出巨大贡献 a significant milestone name…after benefit the whole world win great honor and worldwide recognition the impact of one’s contributions selfless devotion strong will It is fitting that… become a role model make great contributions to… 开头通用句式： 1.她是一位受人尊敬、伟大的中国科学家。 She is a respected and great Chinese scientist. 2. 他成长在一个重视知识与医学研究的家庭。 He grew up in a family that valued knowledge and medical research. 3. 年少时，她在科学研究方面很有天赋。 From an early age, she had a talent for scientific study. 4. 受伟大科学家的启发，她热衷于探索医学与科学的奥秘。 Inspired by great scientists, she was fond of exploring medical and scientific secrets. 中间: 聚焦人物最突出的社会贡献, 描写人物的付出与坚持 1.他最大的成就是取得了一项重要的科学发现。 His greatest achievement is making an important scientific discovery. 2.他的研究帮助了无数人，造福了全世界。 His work has helped countless people and benefited the whole world. 3.由于他的辛勤付出，他/她收获了崇高的荣誉和世界的认可。 Thanks to his hard work, he won great honor and worldwide recognition. 4. 她人生中一个重要的里程碑就是取得了重大的科学发现。 A significant milestone in her life was when she made great scientific discoveries. 5. 除了基础学习和日常工作外，她心系助人，花费大量时间做研究。 In addition to basic study and daily work, she spent a lot of time doing research with helping others in mind. 6. 她在艰苦的环境中工作，遭遇过无数失败，但从未灰心放弃。 She worked in tough conditions and faced numerous failures, but never lost heart. 结尾:总结人物的品质，社会价值与奉献精神。 1.人们由衷敬佩她，因为她为社会与人类健康做出了巨大贡献。 People deeply admire her for her great contributions to society and human health. 2.她无私的奉献让她成为所有青少年的榜样。 Her selfless devotion makes her a role model for all teenagers. 3.她收获巨大成就、赢得全世界广泛尊敬实至名归。 It is fitting that she gains great success and wide respect from the world. 4.坚持不懈、严谨细致与专注奉献造就了她不凡的成就。 Her perseverance, carefulness and dedication lead to her great achievements. 5.我们应当学习她顽强的意志与奉献精神。 We should learn from her strong will and dedication. 介绍一位你敬佩的伟人。包括其生平、主要成就、性格特点及你从他身上获得的启发，词数100-120左右，题目为“A Great person I Admire”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Great people I Admire The great mind I admire most is Albert Einstein, one of the greatest scientists in history. His contributions to physics and his unique personality have left a deep impression on me. Einstein was born in 1879 in Germany. He had a strong passion for science from an early age. Though he faced difficulties in his early studies, he never gave up his pursuit of knowledge. His most famous achievement is the theory of relativity, which changed the way we understand the universe. He also had a great sense of humour. What impresses me most is his attitude towards learning—he once said, “Imagination is more important than knowledge.” Einstein’s life teaches me that curiosity and perseverance are the keys to success. His ability to think differently and challenge traditional ideas inspires me to keep exploring in my studies. He is truly a great mind worth admiring forever. I admire Albert Einstein, one of the world’s greatest scientists. He grew up in a family that valued knowledge. From a young age, he showed a strong interest in physics. Inspired by natural wonders, he was fond of thinking over mysteries of space and time. A significant milestone in his life was when he created the world-famous Theory of Relativity. In addition to busy daily research, he spent a lot of time doing experiments with uncovering the secrets of the universe in mind. He met lots of difficulties and repeated failures, but he never lost heart. Through his hard work, he managed to make breakthroughs that shook the whole science field. His findings helped people understand nature in brand-new ways. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in modern physics and space research. It is fitting that he earns worldwide respect. His perseverance teaches me to stick to my dreams and keep exploring bravely. “中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士，是央视王牌节目“开讲啦”开播以来最年长的演 讲者。上周五下午，全校师生观看完该视频后，都眼含热泪。 为了学习英雄的先进事迹，请你根据提示内容，以 “Huang  Xuhua — the  Father  of China’s Nukes”为题，写一篇人物介绍。 写作要点： 1. 他出生于富裕家庭，但为了祖国强盛，放弃成为一名医生的机会，学习建造核潜艇； 2. 在当时条件艰苦的环境下，他专心于核潜艇的研究和建造； 3. 为了保护国家安全，他曾隐姓埋名工作，30 年不为人所知，现虽年过 90 仍奋斗不止； 4. 他的行为向我们诠释了什么是对国家和人民的热爱。 写作要求： 1. 文章不能出现真实的姓名和校名； 2. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，必要时可作适当发挥； 3. 词数 80 个以上，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 参考词汇： 核潜艇 nuke;  国家安全 national security; 隐姓埋名 conceal one’s identity Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s NukesHuang Xuhua is known as the Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines. Born into a wealthy family, he gave up the chance to work as a doctor and chose to develop nuclear submarines for a stronger motherland. In addition to regular work, he spent a lot of time on research with national safety in mind. He worked in poor conditions and kept exploring day after day. Through his hard work, he managed to finish China’s first nuclear submarine project. To keep state secrets, he lived without public fame for nearly 30 years. Even in his nineties, he still keeps working for his country. The impact of his contributions can still be seen in China’s navy development. It is fitting that he is respected by all Chinese. His devotion teaches us to love our country sincerely. Huang Xuhua — the Father of China’s Nukes Last Friday afternoon, all the teachers and students in the school watched the video about Huang Xuhua – the father of China’s nukes. He was born in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to make/build the nukes. Although the conditions were very hard at that time., he concentrated on studying the knowledge of making/ building the nukes. To protect the national security, he used to conceal/concealed his identity. For about 30 years, he was unknown for others. And now he still keeps working hard even if he is over 90 years old. His story explains to us what is the great love for the people and country. We were all inspired by his heroic deeds Thank you！ 36 $