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Unit 3 Getting along with others 友谊
单元写作精练
【主题】交友日记—友谊的真谛
本单元的写作任务是写交友日记。日记就是用文字记述生活中发生的有意义的或重要的事,以及自己对某事的感受或评议。第一段:诉说事由。第二段:剖析原因及个人打算。第三段:抒发对未来友谊的信心。格式:第一行左上角写日期和星期(星期可省略),右上角写天气,然后写内容。主体人称为第一人称。记述所发生的事情用一般过去时,但描写自己的感受多用一般现在时。语言风格上尽量使用非正式的英语。日记中常用第一人称“I”。
【写作词汇短语】
1. apologize to sb. 向某人道歉
2. let go of our friendship放弃我们的友谊
3. point out指出
4. in the wrong 有错,承担责任
5. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
6. forgive 原谅
7. helpful 愿意帮忙的
8. active adj. 积极的
9. selfless adj. 无私的
10. supportive adj. 支持的
11. be ready and willing to help 乐于助人
12. lively adj. 活跃热情的
13. warm-hearted adj. 热心肠的
14. be honest/open/patient with sb. 对某人坦诚/坦率/有耐心
【写作句型】
1. 开头(交代时间、心情、事由,简洁自然)
Today was a really unforgettable day that I will always keep in my mind.
As usual, I started my day with a cup of warm milk, but something special happened later.
When the first ray of sunshine came through the window, I knew it would be a wonderful day.
I felt extremely excited / happy / moved / disappointed today because of an unexpected experience.
2. 中间(描述事件、动作、感受,丰富细节)
In the morning, I went to... with my friends, and we did... together.
What impressed me most was that..., which made me realize the importance of...
I spent about... hours doing..., and although it was tiring, I felt a strong sense of achievement.
When I saw / heard / did..., a lot of thoughts came to my mind.
It was the first time that I had done..., and I gained a lot from this experience.
3. 结尾(总结感受、收获、展望,升华主题)
All in all, today was a meaningful day, and I learned a valuable lesson from it.
Even though the day came to an end, the memories and feelings will stay with me forever.
From today’s experience, I understand that as long as we try our best, everything will turn out well.
I hope tomorrow will be another great day, and I am looking forward to more wonderful experiences.
【写作模板1】-日常活动类(最基础,适配校园、家庭日常)
[Date], [Day] [Weather]
Today was a common but happy day. In the morning, I got up on time and had breakfast with my family. After that, I ___________[活动一did my homework / went to school / helped my parents with housework]. At noon, I___________ [活动二had lunch with friends / ate at home] and chatted with them about our daily life.
In the afternoon, I [took part in a school activity / played sports / read a book]. It made me feel [relaxed / happy / meaningful] because___________ [原因]. In the evening, I reviewed my lessons and prepared for the next day.
Although there was nothing special today, I felt peaceful and satisfied. I believe that ordinary days can also be full of happiness if we pay more attention to the little things around us.
【写作模板2】-难忘经历类(高频考点,适配活动、实践、意外事件)
[Date], [Day] [Weather]
Today was an unforgettable day that I will never forget. Early in the morning, I went to ___________[place] with ___________[someone] to ___________[活动]. At first, I was a little nervous because I had never done it before.
When we arrived, we started to ___________[描述过程]. What surprised me most was that [事件]. I tried my best to___________ [活动], and finally, I succeeded. Everyone around me praised me, which made me feel very proud. During the process, I learned that ___________[lesson / harvest].
As the day ended, I felt tired but happy. This experience not only brought me joy but also taught me a valuable lesson. It will encourage me to be brave and confident in the future.
【写作模板3】-节日/特殊日子类(适配节日、生日、纪念日)
[Date], [Day] [Weather]
Today was [festival / special day], and the whole family / school was full of joy. In order to celebrate it, we [prepared decorations / cooked delicious food / held a small party] together.
In the evening, all of us gathered together to___________ [活动]. We___________ [sang songs / played games / talked about our wishes]. I received [gift / blessing] from [someone], which made me feel very warm. Looking at the smiling faces around me, I felt a strong sense of happiness and belonging.
This special day gave me a lot of happiness and memories. I hope next ___________ will be as wonderful as today, and I wish all my loved ones healthy and happy.
【原题呈现】
昨天, 你与朋友因琐事发生争吵, 为此你感到很后悔。请根据下列内容提示, 以第一人称用英语写一篇日记, 表达你对朋友的歉意。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题谋篇】
【参考范文】
March 12th, Tuesday Sunny
I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday. I am ashamed of my rude words which/that really broke her heart. But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger. As far as I’m concerned, having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship. She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other. Again, I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(主题要点翻译)
1. 为某事向某人道歉 _______________________
2. 与某人争吵 ________________________
3. 为那些粗鲁的话感到惭愧 __________________
4. 的确伤了某人的心 ______________________
5. 要不是粗鲁无礼 _________________________
6. 勃然大怒 ________________________
7. 就我而言 ________________________
8. 放弃我们的友谊 ______________________
9. 互相依靠 __________________
10. 与某人和好 ___________________
二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:which/ that引导的定语从句
例句: I am ashamed of my rude words which/that really broke her heart.
(1)今天下午我们要去看你们参观过的照片展。
__________________________________________________
(2)他将在2026年参观这座著名的水坝,它建于1900年。
__________________________________________________
句型2: so… that…
例句:She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other.
(1)我生气到几乎要打他了。
____________________________________________________________
(2)这个句子如此长以至于很难理解。
____________________________________________________________
句型3: do+动词原形… 确定…
例句:I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
(1)我确实希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。
______________________________________________________
(2)明天一定要按时到达这儿,好吗?
______________________________________________________
【提升必做】
Passage 1
昨天你因朋友指出你经常迟到的坏习惯而与她争吵,为此你感到很后悔。请你写一篇日记,倾诉自己的苦恼,并说出你的打算。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Passage 2
假定你是李华,以日记形式记录高中入学第一周生活,内容包含:初识校园、课堂感悟、结识新朋友、对高中生活的期待。
词数:100 词左右,注意日记格式。
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Passage 3
假定你是李华,新学期进入新班级。请用英语写一段日记,描述你进入新班级、与同学初次见面、互相问候并结交新朋友的过程与心情,需包含以下核心词汇(可变形):
greet sb., say hello to, wave at, nod in greeting, make friends with
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Passage 4
学期伊始,开始了高中生活的你一定有很多感触。请用英语写一篇日记,记录自己的开学第一周。要点包括:
1. 新学校、新同学或新老师给你留下的印象;
2. 个人对学习的期望或计划。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
September 7th, 2025
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Passage 5
假设你是李华,你的好朋友王源前不久随父母去了美国,他写信告诉你他很不适应美国的校园生活, 感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封建议信。
1. 学好英语,从而增加和别人交流的机会;
2. 多交一些朋友,友情会使他忘记孤独;
3. 积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意:词数80左右,可适当增加细节。
Dear Wang Yuan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
你校英文报Harmonious campus (和谐校园) 栏目正在发起题为“Ways To Get Along With My Classmates”的讨论,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 与同学相处的重要性;
2. 与同学相处的方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100词左右,开头已给,不计入词数;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ways To Get Along With My Classmates
Classmates play an important role in our daily study and life.
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【拓展选做】
Passage 1
你校正组织英语演讲比赛,请以“The Power of Friendship”为主题写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 友谊的重要性;2. 如何获得友谊。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Power of Friendship
Good morning, everyone!
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Passage 2
假设你是李华,你所在的学校计划组织一场以“朋友”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Friends in My Heart”为题目,撰写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容应包含:
1. 朋友的重要意义;
2. 朋友必备的品质。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Friends in My Heart
Good morning, everyone!
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Thank you for your listening!
Passage 3
假定你是李华,美国交换生John刚来你校就读,他没有多少朋友,感觉非常孤独,希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说此事后,决定给他写一封信。内容要点:
1. 表达关心;
2. 就如何交朋友给出意见。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
Passage 4
假设你是李华,英语老师让你观察绿豆的生长过程并写一篇观察日记。请根据以下要点,写一篇80词左右的英语日记。
1. 第一天,把绿豆浸泡在水里;
2. 第二天,绿豆开始发芽;
3. 第三天,豆芽变长,颜色变绿;
4. 表达自己的感受。
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Unit 3 Getting along with others 友谊
单元写作精练
【主题】交友日记—友谊的真谛
本单元的写作任务是写交友日记。日记就是用文字记述生活中发生的有意义的或重要的事,以及自己对某事的感受或评议。第一段:诉说事由。第二段:剖析原因及个人打算。第三段:抒发对未来友谊的信心。格式:第一行左上角写日期和星期(星期可省略),右上角写天气,然后写内容。主体人称为第一人称。记述所发生的事情用一般过去时,但描写自己的感受多用一般现在时。语言风格上尽量使用非正式的英语。日记中常用第一人称“I”。
【写作词汇短语】
1. apologize to sb. 向某人道歉
2. let go of our friendship放弃我们的友谊
3. point out指出
4. in the wrong 有错,承担责任
5. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
6. forgive 原谅
7. helpful 愿意帮忙的
8. active adj. 积极的
9. selfless adj. 无私的
10. supportive adj. 支持的
11. be ready and willing to help 乐于助人
12. lively adj. 活跃热情的
13. warm-hearted adj. 热心肠的
14. be honest/open/patient with sb. 对某人坦诚/坦率/有耐心
【写作句型】
1. 开头(交代时间、心情、事由,简洁自然)
Today was a really unforgettable day that I will always keep in my mind.
As usual, I started my day with a cup of warm milk, but something special happened later.
When the first ray of sunshine came through the window, I knew it would be a wonderful day.
I felt extremely excited / happy / moved / disappointed today because of an unexpected experience.
2. 中间(描述事件、动作、感受,丰富细节)
In the morning, I went to... with my friends, and we did... together.
What impressed me most was that..., which made me realize the importance of...
I spent about... hours doing..., and although it was tiring, I felt a strong sense of achievement.
When I saw / heard / did..., a lot of thoughts came to my mind.
It was the first time that I had done..., and I gained a lot from this experience.
3. 结尾(总结感受、收获、展望,升华主题)
All in all, today was a meaningful day, and I learned a valuable lesson from it.
Even though the day came to an end, the memories and feelings will stay with me forever.
From today’s experience, I understand that as long as we try our best, everything will turn out well.
I hope tomorrow will be another great day, and I am looking forward to more wonderful experiences.
【写作模板1】-日常活动类(最基础,适配校园、家庭日常)
[Date], [Day] [Weather]
Today was a common but happy day. In the morning, I got up on time and had breakfast with my family. After that, I ___________[活动一did my homework / went to school / helped my parents with housework]. At noon, I___________ [活动二had lunch with friends / ate at home] and chatted with them about our daily life.
In the afternoon, I [took part in a school activity / played sports / read a book]. It made me feel [relaxed / happy / meaningful] because___________ [原因]. In the evening, I reviewed my lessons and prepared for the next day.
Although there was nothing special today, I felt peaceful and satisfied. I believe that ordinary days can also be full of happiness if we pay more attention to the little things around us.
【写作模板2】-难忘经历类(高频考点,适配活动、实践、意外事件)
[Date], [Day] [Weather]
Today was an unforgettable day that I will never forget. Early in the morning, I went to ___________[place] with ___________[someone] to ___________[活动]. At first, I was a little nervous because I had never done it before.
When we arrived, we started to ___________[描述过程]. What surprised me most was that [事件]. I tried my best to___________ [活动], and finally, I succeeded. Everyone around me praised me, which made me feel very proud. During the process, I learned that ___________[lesson / harvest].
As the day ended, I felt tired but happy. This experience not only brought me joy but also taught me a valuable lesson. It will encourage me to be brave and confident in the future.
【写作模板3】-节日/特殊日子类(适配节日、生日、纪念日)
[Date], [Day] [Weather]
Today was [festival / special day], and the whole family / school was full of joy. In order to celebrate it, we [prepared decorations / cooked delicious food / held a small party] together.
In the evening, all of us gathered together to___________ [活动]. We___________ [sang songs / played games / talked about our wishes]. I received [gift / blessing] from [someone], which made me feel very warm. Looking at the smiling faces around me, I felt a strong sense of happiness and belonging.
This special day gave me a lot of happiness and memories. I hope next ___________ will be as wonderful as today, and I wish all my loved ones healthy and happy.
【原题呈现】
昨天, 你与朋友因琐事发生争吵, 为此你感到很后悔。请根据下列内容提示, 以第一人称用英语写一篇日记, 表达你对朋友的歉意。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题谋篇】
【参考范文】
March 12th, Tuesday Sunny
I want to apologize to my friend for quarreling with her yesterday. I am ashamed of my rude words which/that really broke her heart. But for my rudeness, she would not have exploded with anger. As far as I’m concerned, having been close for eight years and almost inseparable, I don’t want to let go of our friendship. She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other. Again, I want to say sorry to her from the bottom of my heart. In any case, I’m in the wrong. I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(主题要点翻译)
1. 为某事向某人道歉 _______________________
2. 与某人争吵 ________________________
3. 为那些粗鲁的话感到惭愧 __________________
4. 的确伤了某人的心 ______________________
5. 要不是粗鲁无礼 _________________________
6. 勃然大怒 ________________________
7. 就我而言 ________________________
8. 放弃我们的友谊 ______________________
9. 互相依靠 __________________
10. 与某人和好 ___________________
【参考答案】
1. make an apology/ apologize to sb. for sth.
2. quarrel with sb.
3. be ashamed of the rude words
4. really break one’s heart
5. but for one’ srudeness
6. explode with anger
7. as far as I’m concerned
8. let go of our friendship
9. count on each other
10. make up with sb.
二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型1:which/ that引导的定语从句
例句: I am ashamed of my rude words which/that really broke her heart.
(1)今天下午我们要去看你们参观过的照片展。
__________________________________________________
(2)他将在2026年参观这座著名的水坝,它建于1900年。
__________________________________________________
【答案】
(1) This afternoon we’ll go to see the photo show(that/which) you have visited
(2) He will visit the famous dam in 2026 which was built in 1900/that was built in 1900.
句型2: so… that…
例句:She is always so generous to me that we can trust and count on each other.
(1)我生气到几乎要打他了。
____________________________________________________________
(2)这个句子如此长以至于很难理解。
____________________________________________________________
【答案】
(1)I was so angry that I came close to hitting him.
(2)The sentence is so long that it is difficult to understand.
句型3: do+动词原形… 确定…
例句:I do hope she can forgive me and make up with me.
(1)我确实希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。
______________________________________________________
(2)明天一定要按时到达这儿,好吗?
______________________________________________________
【答案】
(1)I do hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.
(2)Do arrive here on time tomorrow, will you?
【提升必做】
Passage 1
昨天你因朋友指出你经常迟到的坏习惯而与她争吵,为此你感到很后悔。请你写一篇日记,倾诉自己的苦恼,并说出你的打算。
注意:可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
20 January, Sunny
Dear Diary,
I want to apologize to my friend for quarrelling with her because I don’t want to let go of our friendship. In my opinion, my friend has many good qualities which are very important between friends.
My friend is honest. She pointed out what I had done wrong. The friendship makes me a better person. So, I was in the wrong. I shouldn’t quarrel with her. In addition, my friend is supportive, and she always encourages me to get over difficulties.
In a word, I do hope my friend will forgive me. I believe our friendship will grow stronger.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生写一篇日记,就昨天因朋友指出自己经常迟到的坏习惯而与其争吵一事,倾诉自己的苦恼并说明今后的打算。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
道歉:apologize → make an apology
争吵:quarrel → argue
放弃:let go of → give up
鼓励:encourage → inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, my friend is supportive, and she always encourages me to get over difficulties.
拓展句:In addition, my friend is supportive, who always encourages me to get over difficulties.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】She pointed out what I had done wrong.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In my opinion, my friend has many good qualities which are very important between friends.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李华,以日记形式记录高中入学第一周生活,内容包含:初识校园、课堂感悟、结识新朋友、对高中生活的期待。
词数:100 词左右,注意日记格式。
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【参考范文】
September 12th, Friday
Fine
Finally, the first week of senior high is coming to an end. I have quite a lot of new experiences these days.
At first, I felt butterflies in my stomach facing the busy schedule and new courses. Unlike junior high, teachers advise us to think more instead of only taking notes in class. On Wednesday after class, I bumped into a new classmate. We exchanged ideas and soon made friends. I plan to take part in volunteer work with him later.
Well begun, half done. I’m looking forward to my wonderful senior high life and will go all out to realize my dream.
【导语】要求考生以李华的名义,写一篇日记,记录高中入学第一周的生活。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
实现:realize → fulfill
面对:face → confront
偶遇:bump into → encounter
参加:take part in → get involved in
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Finally, the first week of senior high is coming to an end. I have quite a lot of new experiences these days.
拓展句:Finally, the first week of senior high is coming to an end, during which I have quite a lot of new experiences.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Unlike junior high, teachers advise us to think more instead of only taking notes in class.(运用了不定式短语作宾补)
【高分句型2】I’m looking forward to my wonderful senior high life and will go all out to realize my dream.(运用了不定式短语to realize作目的状语)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,新学期进入新班级。请用英语写一段日记,描述你进入新班级、与同学初次见面、互相问候并结交新朋友的过程与心情,需包含以下核心词汇(可变形):
greet sb., say hello to, wave at, nod in greeting, make friends with
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【参考范文】
September 1st, Monday Sunny
Today I entered my new class for the new term, feeling both nervous and excited. When I walked through the door, a tall boy sitting by the window waved at me warmly. I smiled and nodded in greeting to him in reply. Then I walked to my assigned seat, which was just next to him. He quickly stood up to greet me, and I said hello to him cheerfully. We chatted for a few minutes and found we shared the same hobby for basketball.
I’m really happy to make friends with such a friendly boy on my first day. I’m looking forward to the new term with my new classmates!
【导语】题目要求考生以李华的身份写日记,记述进新班级与同学问候并结交好友的经历与心情。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
紧张的:nervous → anxious
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
快速地:quickly → promptly
高兴的:happy → delighted
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:When I walked through the door, a tall boy sitting by the window waved at me warmly.
拓展句:When I walked through the door, a tall boy who was sitting by the window waved at me warmly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Then I walked to my assigned seat, which was just next to him. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We chatted for a few minutes and found we shared the same hobby for basketball. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 4
学期伊始,开始了高中生活的你一定有很多感触。请用英语写一篇日记,记录自己的开学第一周。要点包括:
1. 新学校、新同学或新老师给你留下的印象;
2. 个人对学习的期望或计划。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
September 7th, 2025
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【参考范文】
September 7th, 2025
This week of senior high school — a brand-new start. When I walked through the campus, I felt so excited. Meeting my classmates was a nice surprise. We talked and laughed together, and everyone was friendly. The teachers were also very professional and kind.
Now that the first week is almost over, I feel more excited and hopeful about the future. High school is indeed a journey filled with uncertainties, but I am ready to embrace every challenge with confidence and enthusiasm.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇日记,记录自己高中开学第一周的感触,包括新学校、新同学或新老师给自己留下的印象,以及个人对学习的期望或计划。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
全新的:brand-new → completely new
激动的:excited→ thrilled
友好的:friendly → amiable
准备好的:ready → prepared
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Meeting my classmates was a nice surprise.
拓展句:Meeting my classmates, who were all friendly and enthusiastic, was a nice surprise.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Now that the first week is almost over, I feel more excited and hopeful about the future.(运用了now that引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】High school is indeed a journey filled with uncertainties, but I am ready to embrace every challenge with confidence and enthusiasm.(运用了过去分词短语作定语)
Passage 5
假设你是李华,你的好朋友王源前不久随父母去了美国,他写信告诉你他很不适应美国的校园生活, 感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封建议信。
1. 学好英语,从而增加和别人交流的机会;
2. 多交一些朋友,友情会使他忘记孤独;
3. 积极参加各种活动,使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意:词数80左右,可适当增加细节。
Dear Wang Yuan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Yuan,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting yourself to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.
Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】题目要求考生以李华身份写信,给在美国倍感孤独的王源提供适应校园生活的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
使自己适应……:adapt oneself to → adjust oneself to
建议:advice → proposal
帮助:help → assist
参加:take part in → participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness.
拓展句:They can help you to know more about America, and the friendship they bring can help you forget your loneliness.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
Passage 6
你校英文报Harmonious campus (和谐校园) 栏目正在发起题为“Ways To Get Along With My Classmates”的讨论,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 与同学相处的重要性;
2. 与同学相处的方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100词左右,开头已给,不计入词数;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ways To Get Along With My Classmates
Classmates play an important role in our daily study and life.
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【参考范文】
Ways To Get Along With My Classmates
Classmates play an important role in our daily study and life. It’s our classmates that keep us company. We grow up together, so we should attach great significance to the relationship with other classmates. Here is how I try to have a good relationship with my classmates.
Firstly, I think it important to understand each other. Whenever something unhappy happens among us, I’ll put myself in others’ shoes. Besides, I always spare no effort to help my classmates if they need help. Moreover, I enjoy activities which can promote relations with other classmates.
Getting along well with classmates will build a harmonious environment for us to enjoy our daily study in.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以投稿形式,阐述同学相处的重要性,并介绍和睦相处的具体方法。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
重要的:important → vital
理解:understand → comprehend
帮助:help → assist
促进:promote → enhance
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:We grow up together, so we should attach great significance to the relationship with other classmates.
拓展句:Since we grow up together, we should attach great significance to the relationship with other classmates.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】Whenever something unhappy happens among us, I’ll put myself in others’ shoes.(运用whenever引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型 2】Moreover, I enjoy activities which can promote relations with other classmates. (运用which引导的定语从句)
【拓展选做】
Passage 1
你校正组织英语演讲比赛,请以“The Power of Friendship”为主题写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 友谊的重要性;2. 如何获得友谊。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Power of Friendship
Good morning, everyone!
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【参考范文】
The Power of Friendship
The topic of my speech is “The Power of Friendship”. It is universally acknowledged that friends are necessary to us. As far as I’m concerned, a good friend is my nearest relation.
What should we do to make good friends? First, admiring our friends is a good way to promote friendship, so we should pay more attention to our friends’ strengths. In addition, friends should treat each other with sincerity. As long as we sincerely treat every friend, then our friends will also be true to us!
I hold a strong belief that friends will make our life more colorful and wonderful.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以“The Power of Friendship”为主题写演讲稿,阐述友谊的重要性,并给出获得友谊的具体方法。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
必要的:necessary → essential
促进:promote → advance/boost
优点:strengths → strong points
信念:belief → faith
2. 句式拓展
变复合句
原句:First, admiring our friends is a good way to promote friendship, so we should pay more attention to our friends’ strengths.
拓展句:First, admiring our friends is a good way to promote friendship, and that’s why we should pay more attention to our friends’ strengths.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is universally acknowledged that friends are necessary to us.(运用了it作形式主语,that从句引导真正的主语从句)
【高分句型2】As long as we sincerely treat every friend, then our friends will also be true to us!(运用了as long as引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是李华,你所在的学校计划组织一场以“朋友”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Friends in My Heart”为题目,撰写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容应包含:
1. 朋友的重要意义;
2. 朋友必备的品质。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Friends in My Heart
Good morning, everyone!
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Thank you for your listening!
【参考范文】
Friends in My Heart
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to talk about friends in my heart.
Friends are extremely important in our lives. They stand by us when we are in trouble and share our joys when we succeed. A life without friends is like a journey without sunshine, making us feel lonely and helpless. In my opinion, a good friend should have two key qualities. First, honesty — true friends always tell each other the truth. Second, kindness — they care about others and are willing to offer help whenever needed.
Let’s cherish our true friends. They make our world warmer and brighter.
Thank you for your listening!
【导语】题目要求考生以“Friends in My Heart”为题目,撰写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
重要的:important → vital
喜悦:joy → delight
非常:extremely → exceedingly
珍惜:cherish → value
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Friends are extremely important in our lives. They stand by us when we are in trouble and share our joys when we succeed.
拓展句:Friends are extremely important in our lives because they stand by us when we are in trouble and share our joys when we succeed.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】They stand by us when we are in trouble and share our joys when we succeed.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】A life without friends is like a journey without sunshine, making us feel lonely and helpless.(运用了现在分词作状语)
Passage 3
假定你是李华,美国交换生John刚来你校就读,他没有多少朋友,感觉非常孤独,希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说此事后,决定给他写一封信。内容要点:
1. 表达关心;
2. 就如何交朋友给出意见。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear John,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely. Don’t worry — many students find it hard to make friends at first. Here are some tips that might help.
First, try joining a school club, like the basketball or English club. It’s a great way to meet people who share your interests. Also, don’t be shy to say hello and smile. Most students are friendly and want to get to know you. You can also ask questions about their hobbies or life in China.
Remember, friendship takes time. I believe you’ll soon make good friends. If you need help, I’m here for you!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给美国交换生John写信,表达对其孤独处境的关心并就如何交朋友给出建议 。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
孤独的:lonely → isolated
困难的:hard → tough
需要:need → require
相信:believe → be convinced
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely.
拓展句:Since I’ve learned that you’re feeling lonely, I’m sorry about it.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling lonely. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s a great way to meet people who share your interests.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
Passage 4
假设你是李华,英语老师让你观察绿豆的生长过程并写一篇观察日记。请根据以下要点,写一篇80词左右的英语日记。
1. 第一天,把绿豆浸泡在水里;
2. 第二天,绿豆开始发芽;
3. 第三天,豆芽变长,颜色变绿;
4. 表达自己的感受。
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【参考范文】
Sunday, June 3rd, Sunny
Today I finished my three-day observation of mung beans, which is a homework task required by my English teacher. On the first day, I placed fresh mung beans in a bowl of clean water to soak, waiting for them to sprout. The next day, the plump beans swelled up and grew small tender white buds. Today, on the third day, the sprouts turned longer and fresh green. It is really amazing to watch life grow slowly. This wonderful experience makes me feel the magic of nature.
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生按照英语老师要求观察绿豆的生长过程并写一篇观察日记。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
完成:finish → accomplish
浸泡:soak → immerse
令人惊讶的:amazing → astonishing
绝妙的:wonderful → marvellous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: It is really amazing to watch life grow slowly.
拓展句:When I watch life grow slowly, I feel it is really amazing.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Today I finished my three-day observation of mung beans, which is a homework task required by my English teacher. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】On the first day, I placed fresh mung beans in a bowl of clean water to soak, waiting for them to sprout.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)
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