Unit 2 Let's talk teens 父母与子女的关系（单元写作精练）英语译林版必修第一册

Unit 2 Let’s talk teens 父母与子女的关系 单元写作精练 【主题】建议信—化解亲子矛盾 本单元的写作任务主要就青少年生活、心理健康等问题提出建议，即建议信。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出的建议或忠告的一种文体。第一段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。第二段：首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结，展望建议被采纳后的良好结果并表达希望。 【写作词汇短语】 1. 受……困扰 be troubled by/be upset by 2. 因为某事和某人争吵 argue with sb. over sth. 3. 发脾气lose temper 4. 经历 go through 5. 身心变化 physical and mental change 6. 和某人交流 have a communication with sb. 7. 解决某人的担忧 address one’s concern 8. 让某人自己平静下来 calm oneself down 9. advice/tip/suggestion n. 建议 10. advise/suggest vt. 建议 11. be beneficial to/ be of benefit to 对……有益 12. benefit n. 益处 v. 受益于;使受益 13. practical adj. 实用的 14. as far as sb. be concerned 依某人看 15. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议 16. turn to/ ask sb. for help 向某人求助 17. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth. 在某方面给某人提建议 18. have trouble/difficulty/ problems with/ in (doing) sth. 在某方面有困难 19. in one's view/opinion某人认为 20. make some suggestions/advice提出一些建议 21. accept/take/follow one's advice接受某人的建议 【写作句型】 开头(写作意图，陈述事由) ①I am sorry to know that you are worried about the coming exam. 了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。 ②I’m glad that you are getting along well with your study. 我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。 ③You asked me in your letter how to get along with your deskmate. 你在信中问我如何与你的同桌相处。 主体段(提出具体建议) ①You don’t have to worry about it. 你不必为此事担心。 ②First of all, try to invite some of your good friends to take part in after-class activities. 首先, 尽量邀请你的一些好朋友参加课外活动。 ③What’s more, help others when they’re in trouble. 另外, 当别人有困难时帮助他们。 ④In my opinion, you should try to calm down and find a chance to talk with her. 依我看来, 你应该试着冷静下来, 找机会与她谈谈。 结尾(提出希望) ①I hope these suggestions will help you. 我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。 ②I’m sure everything will turn out all right. 我确信一切都会好的。 ③I hope everything goes well with you. 我希望你万事如意。 就某事给对方建议的句式： I would like to offer you some suggestions on... I’m writing to express my views concerning... It is my great pleasure to propose several practical suggestions to you on... 提出具体建议的句式： I strongly advise you to... It might make a difference to... What matters most is that... 希望采纳建议的句式： I sincerely hope this is the most sort of advice you wanted. I would be happy if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I hope that my suggestions prove to be useful in solving your problems. 【写作模板】 Dear ______, I am sorry to hear that you 事由 . In your letter, you said that 问题 . My suggestions are as follows. Initially, 建议1 because 原因1 . Besides, you should 建议2 because 原因2 . Thirdly, it’s a good idea to 建议3 , which might help you 原因3 . Only in this way cay you 解决问题 . I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 【原题呈现】 很多学生在遇到问题时不知道如何与父母交流。请根据思维导图中的提示，以“Ways to talk with parents”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有要点，可适当进行拓展；(First: Second; Third; Finally) 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。(建议：we should do; we’d better do：面对面：face to face：立即：at once：礼貌地：politely；大声地 loudly；认真地：carefully：遵循这些：follow these) Ways to talk with parents Many students may meet problems in everyday life. And they may ask their parents for help. What are the good ways to talk with parents? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】 【参考范文】 Ways to talk with parents Many students may meet problems in everyday life. And they may ask their parents for help. What are the good ways to talk with parents? First, we should choose a good time to talk. When our parents are free, we can sit down and have a talk with them face to face. Second, we’d better talk about the problems directly so that our parents may think about them at once. Third, we should ask them for help politely. Don’t speak loudly or quickly. When our parents tell us their ideas or plans, we must listen to them carefully. Finally, we should thank them for their help. Boys and girls, follow these and you can get much help from your parents. 【导语】要求考生根据思维导图，以“Ways to talk with parents”写一篇短文，陈述如何与父母进行交流。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 选择：choose → opt for 帮助：help → assistance 面对面：face to face → in person 立刻：at once → in no time 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, we should choose a good time to talk. 拓展句：First, we should choose a good time to talk, which may make our conversation effective. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】When our parents are free, we can sit down and have a talk with them face to face. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Second, we’d better talk about the problems directly so that our parents may think about them at once.(运用了so that引导目的状语从句) 【基础必做】 一、汉译英(主题要点翻译) 1. 向父母礼貌寻求帮助__________________ 2. 和父母谈论的最佳方式__________________________ 3. 选择最佳时机谈论_________________ 4. 和他们面对面谈论_________________ 5. 直接谈论问题___________________ 6. 立刻思考____________________ 7. 大声迅速说出来___________________ 8. 仔细倾听__________________ 9. 遵循这些建议__________________ 10. 从你的父母那里得到帮助________________ 二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子) 句型1：the way to do sth. 例句：What are the good ways to talk with parents? (1)我认为保护环境的最佳方法是多种树。 __________________________________________________ (2)提升课堂专注力的一个方法是注意休息。 __________________________________________________ 句型2: so that 引导目的状语 例句：We’d better talk about the problems directly so that our parents may think about them at once. (1)好好睡上一晚，这样你会感到并看起来精神焕发。 ______________________________________________________ (2)老师讲得很慢以便能让学生听懂自己。 ______________________________________________________ 句型3：祈使句+and +句子 例句：Boys and girls, follow these and you can get much help from your parents. (1)努力工作，你一定会有一个美好的未来。 ____________________________________________________________ (2) 努力学习，你一定会成功的。 ____________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 Passage 1 假定你是光华学校学生会主席李华, 负责接洽沟通本校国外交换生。你收到来自英国的高一新生Lucy的邮件, 在邮件中她诉说自己远程和父母沟通学习上的问题时, 经常容易发生争吵。请给她回一封邮件, 内容包括： 1. 表示理解；2. 给出建议； 3. 安慰对方。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jake来信说，过去半年里，父母忙于工作，自己专注学业，一家人相处的温馨时光越来越少，他想策划几件暖心小事，为平淡的生活增浓暖意，拉近和父母的距离，却苦于没有好点子，请你给他写一封建议信，帮他出谋划策。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jake, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 假设你是中学生李华，你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括： (1)写信目的； (2)提出建议并说明理由； (3)表达美好希望。 注意： (1)词数80左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Rebecca, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 4 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike来信说，父母反对他周末独自旅行，双方发生争执。请你给Mike回一封信，内容包括： 1. 理解朋友并说明父母担心的原因； 2. 建议与父母沟通； 3. 提出折中方案。 注意： 1. 词数100个左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 5 假定你是中学生李华，你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你咨询如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的 2. 分析与父母关系紧张的常见原因并提出建议 3. 表达美好愿望 Dear Rebecca, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 假如你是李华，你的朋友Robert因为琐事与父亲发生了争吵，好几天没有说话。为此他感到非常苦恼，不知如何是好。请你表达安慰并提供建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Robert, I’m sorry to hear that_____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展选做】 假设你是某青少年杂志的编辑李华。市民赵女士给你发来电子邮件寻求建议和帮助，她的儿子最近苦恼于自己的粉刺问题，还经常因此大发脾气，导致亲子关系紧张。请你给赵女士写一封建议信，内容包括： 1.对她的理解 2.合理的建议(至少两点) 3.希望采纳建议和鼓励 注意 1.写作词数在80词左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.开头语和结束语以为你写好 Dear Mrs. Zhao, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Editor Li Hua ( 8 / 8 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Let’s talk teens 父母与子女的关系 单元写作精练 【主题】建议信—化解亲子矛盾 本单元的写作任务主要就青少年生活、心理健康等问题提出建议，即建议信。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出的建议或忠告的一种文体。第一段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。第二段：首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结，展望建议被采纳后的良好结果并表达希望。 【写作词汇短语】 1. 受……困扰 be troubled by/be upset by 2. 因为某事和某人争吵 argue with sb. over sth. 3. 发脾气lose temper 4. 经历 go through 5. 身心变化 physical and mental change 6. 和某人交流 have a communication with sb. 7. 解决某人的担忧 address one’s concern 8. 让某人自己平静下来 calm oneself down 9. advice/tip/suggestion n. 建议 10. advise/suggest vt. 建议 11. be beneficial to/ be of benefit to 对……有益 12. benefit n. 益处 v. 受益于;使受益 13. practical adj. 实用的 14. as far as sb. be concerned 依某人看 15. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议 16. turn to/ ask sb. for help 向某人求助 17. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth. 在某方面给某人提建议 18. have trouble/difficulty/ problems with/ in (doing) sth. 在某方面有困难 19. in one's view/opinion某人认为 20. make some suggestions/advice提出一些建议 21. accept/take/follow one's advice接受某人的建议 【写作句型】 开头(写作意图，陈述事由) ①I am sorry to know that you are worried about the coming exam. 了解到你对即将到来的考试很担心我很难过。 ②I’m glad that you are getting along well with your study. 我很高兴你的学业进展顺利。 ③You asked me in your letter how to get along with your deskmate. 你在信中问我如何与你的同桌相处。 主体段(提出具体建议) ①You don’t have to worry about it. 你不必为此事担心。 ②First of all, try to invite some of your good friends to take part in after-class activities. 首先, 尽量邀请你的一些好朋友参加课外活动。 ③What’s more, help others when they’re in trouble. 另外, 当别人有困难时帮助他们。 ④In my opinion, you should try to calm down and find a chance to talk with her. 依我看来, 你应该试着冷静下来, 找机会与她谈谈。 结尾(提出希望) ①I hope these suggestions will help you. 我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。 ②I’m sure everything will turn out all right. 我确信一切都会好的。 ③I hope everything goes well with you. 我希望你万事如意。 就某事给对方建议的句式： I would like to offer you some suggestions on... I’m writing to express my views concerning... It is my great pleasure to propose several practical suggestions to you on... 提出具体建议的句式： I strongly advise you to... It might make a difference to... What matters most is that... 希望采纳建议的句式： I sincerely hope this is the most sort of advice you wanted. I would be happy if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I hope that my suggestions prove to be useful in solving your problems. 【写作模板】 Dear ______, I am sorry to hear that you 事由 . In your letter, you said that 问题 . My suggestions are as follows. Initially, 建议1 because 原因1 . Besides, you should 建议2 because 原因2 . Thirdly, it’s a good idea to 建议3 , which might help you 原因3 . Only in this way cay you 解决问题 . I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 【原题呈现】 很多学生在遇到问题时不知道如何与父母交流。请根据思维导图中的提示，以“Ways to talk with parents”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 要求： 1. 短文应包括提示中所有要点，可适当进行拓展；(First: Second; Third; Finally) 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。(建议：we should do; we’d better do：面对面：face to face：立即：at once：礼貌地：politely；大声地 loudly；认真地：carefully：遵循这些：follow these) Ways to talk with parents Many students may meet problems in everyday life. And they may ask their parents for help. What are the good ways to talk with parents? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】 【参考范文】 Ways to talk with parents Many students may meet problems in everyday life. And they may ask their parents for help. What are the good ways to talk with parents? First, we should choose a good time to talk. When our parents are free, we can sit down and have a talk with them face to face. Second, we’d better talk about the problems directly so that our parents may think about them at once. Third, we should ask them for help politely. Don’t speak loudly or quickly. When our parents tell us their ideas or plans, we must listen to them carefully. Finally, we should thank them for their help. Boys and girls, follow these and you can get much help from your parents. 【导语】要求考生根据思维导图，以“Ways to talk with parents”写一篇短文，陈述如何与父母进行交流。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 选择：choose → opt for 帮助：help → assistance 面对面：face to face → in person 立刻：at once → in no time 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, we should choose a good time to talk. 拓展句：First, we should choose a good time to talk, which may make our conversation effective. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】When our parents are free, we can sit down and have a talk with them face to face. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Second, we’d better talk about the problems directly so that our parents may think about them at once.(运用了so that引导目的状语从句) 【基础必做】 一、汉译英(主题要点翻译) 1. 向父母礼貌寻求帮助__________________ 2. 和父母谈论的最佳方式__________________________ 3. 选择最佳时机谈论_________________ 4. 和他们面对面谈论_________________ 5. 直接谈论问题___________________ 6. 立刻思考____________________ 7. 大声迅速说出来___________________ 8. 仔细倾听__________________ 9. 遵循这些建议__________________ 10. 从你的父母那里得到帮助________________ 【答案】 1. ask their parents for help politely 2. the good ways to talk with parents 3. choose a good time to talk 4. have a talk with them face to face 5. talk about the problems directly 6. think about them at once 7. speak loudly or quickly 8. listen to them carefully 9. follow these suggestions 10. get much help from your parents 二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子) 句型1：the way to do sth. 例句：What are the good ways to talk with parents? (1)我认为保护环境的最佳方法是多种树。 __________________________________________________ (2)提升课堂专注力的一个方法是注意休息。 __________________________________________________ 【答案】 (1)I think the best way to protect the environment is to plant more trees. (2)One way to improve concentration in class is to pay attention to rest. 句型2: so that 引导目的状语 例句：We’d better talk about the problems directly so that our parents may think about them at once. (1)好好睡上一晚，这样你会感到并看起来精神焕发。 ______________________________________________________ (2)老师讲得很慢以便能让学生听懂自己。 ______________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Get a good night’s rest so that you look and feel refreshed. 2. The teacher spoke very slowly so that he could make himself understood. 句型3：祈使句+and +句子 例句：Boys and girls, follow these and you can get much help from your parents. (1)努力工作，你一定会有一个美好的未来。 ____________________________________________________________ (2) 努力学习，你一定会成功的。 ____________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Work hard and you are bound to have a bright future. 2. Study hard and you are sure to succeed. 【提升必做】 Passage 1 假定你是光华学校学生会主席李华, 负责接洽沟通本校国外交换生。你收到来自英国的高一新生Lucy的邮件, 在邮件中她诉说自己远程和父母沟通学习上的问题时, 经常容易发生争吵。请给她回一封邮件, 内容包括： 1. 表示理解；2. 给出建议； 3. 安慰对方。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Lucy, I quite understand that you are troubled by arguing with your parents over your studies. Actually, it is quite normal for you to lose temper since you may go through some physical and mental changes. Why not try these pieces of advice and see if they help? First, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to address their concerns. Secondly, try to calm yourself down and understand the situation from their point of view. I believe this stormy period will not last. Everything will turn out all right in the end. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生给英国的高一新生Lucy写一封回信，就其远程和父母沟通学习上的问题时, 经常容易发生争吵的问题给出建议并进行安慰。 【详解】 词汇积累 事实上：actually → as a matter of fact 经历：go through → experience/undergo 弄清：figure out → ascertain 使某人自己镇定：calm oneself down→ compose oneself 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：First, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to address their concerns. 拓展句：First, it is suggested that you should have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts so that you can address their concerns. 【点睛】 【高分句型 1】I quite understand that you are troubled by arguing with your parents over your studies. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，作understand的宾语) 【高分句型 2】Actually, it is quite normal for you to lose temper since you may go through some physical and mental changes. (运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是to lose temper；以及since引导的原因状语从句) Passage 2 假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jake来信说，过去半年里，父母忙于工作，自己专注学业，一家人相处的温馨时光越来越少，他想策划几件暖心小事，为平淡的生活增浓暖意，拉近和父母的距离，却苦于没有好点子，请你给他写一封建议信，帮他出谋划策。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Jake, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Jake, I think your idea of preparing warm little things to get closer to your parents is really wonderful and sweet. Here are some practical suggestions for you. You can start with small but meaningful acts, like cooking their favorite dishes or writing a letter to share your true feelings. It’s also a great choice to plan a no-screen family evening when you can play board games together. Besides, never hesitate to give them a warm hug and say “I love you” sincerely. Hope these ideas will help you enjoy sweet family moments. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国好友Jake写一封建议信，帮他策划暖心小事来增进与父母的感情。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 暖心的，感人的：warm → heartwarming/ affectionate 实用的，可行的：practical → feasible/ pragmatic 有意义的：meaningful → significant/ purposeful 计划，安排：plan → arrange/ schedule 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：You can start with small but meaningful acts, like cooking their favorite dishes or writing a letter to share your true feelings. 拓展句：You can begin with tiny yet meaningful gestures, such as preparing their favorite meals or writing a letter to express your sincere emotions. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I think your idea of preparing warm little things to get closer to your parents is really wonderful and sweet. (运用了动名词短语preparing...作宾语) 【高分句型2】It’s also a great choice to plan a no-screen family evening when you can play board games together. (运用了形式主语it和when引导定语从句) Passage 3 假设你是中学生李华，你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括： (1)写信目的； (2)提出建议并说明理由； (3)表达美好希望。 注意： (1)词数80左右； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Rebecca, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Rebecca, I’m worried when receiving your letter saying that you’re suffering from a tense relationship with your parents. Here is my personal advice on how to improve it. Firstly, you’d better talk to your parents regularly, explaining your actions and feelings calmly, listening carefully and addressing their concerns. Besides, when you can’t see eye to eye with them, remember to put yourself in your parents’ shoes, which will help you understand the situation from their point of view. I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will turn out all right in the end. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华身份，给Rebecca写邮件，提出改善亲子关系的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 担忧的：worried → anxious 遭受：suffer from → endure 紧张的：tense → strained 建议：advice → proposal 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Here is my personal advice on how to improve it. 拓展句：Here is my personal advice on how you can improve it. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m worried when receiving your letter saying that you’re suffering from a tense relationship with your parents.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略形式、that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Besides, when you can’t see eye to eye with them, remember to put yourself in your parents’ shoes, which will help you understand the situation from their point of view.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 4 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike来信说，父母反对他周末独自旅行，双方发生争执。请你给Mike回一封信，内容包括： 1. 理解朋友并说明父母担心的原因； 2. 建议与父母沟通； 3. 提出折中方案。 注意： 1. 词数100个左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you’re having an argument with your parents about traveling alone on weekends. I completely understand how upset you are, but I’d like to offer some advice that might help. First, you should understand that they are just worried about your safety. Second, you’d better talk to them calmly rather than argue with them. Tell them your travel plan clearly, like where you’ll go and who you’ll meet. Third, you can go with a friend instead of going alone, so they’ll feel more at ease. I think your parents will agree if you communicate well. Hope everything works out and you can enjoy your trip! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Mike写一封回信，就其父母反对他周末独自旅行并发生争执一事给出理解、建议及折中方案。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 完全：completely → totally 不安的：upset → disturbed 担心：worried → concerned 清楚地：clearly → distinctly 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Tell them your travel plan clearly, like where you’ll go and who you’ll meet. 拓展句：Tell them your travel plan clearly, which includes where you’ll go and who you’ll meet. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Tell them your travel plan clearly, like where you’ll go and who you’ll meet.(运用了where引导的宾语从句、who引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】I think your parents will agree if you communicate well.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句及省略that的宾语从句) Passage 5 假定你是中学生李华，你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张，发邮件向你咨询如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 写信目的 2. 分析与父母关系紧张的常见原因并提出建议 3. 表达美好愿望 Dear Rebecca, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Rebecca, I’m writing to offer you some advice on improving your relationship with your parents. The reasons for the tension may be that you and your parents have distinct views on things, which often leads to disagreements. Besides, a lack of communication is also a factor. I suggest you actively talk with them, sharing what’s on your mind. What matters is that you should let them know you respect and love them, which can help build a closer bond. I sincerely hope you can resolve the issues and enjoy a harmonious relationship with your parents. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以中学生李华的身份，给朋友Rebecca回邮件，针对她与父母关系紧张的问题，说明写信目的、分析原因并提建议，最后表达美好愿望。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 改善：improve → enhance 因素：factor → element 缺乏：lack → shortage 尊重：respect → esteem 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to offer you some advice on improving your relationship with your parents. 拓展句：I’m writing to offer you some advice, which is about improving your relationship with your parents. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】The reasons for the tension may be that you and your parents have distinct views on things, which often leads to disagreements.(运用了that引导的表语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】What matters is that you should let them know you respect and love them, which can help build a closer bond.(运用了what引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 6 假如你是李华，你的朋友Robert因为琐事与父亲发生了争吵，好几天没有说话。为此他感到非常苦恼，不知如何是好。请你表达安慰并提供建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Robert, I’m sorry to hear that_____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Robert, I’m sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and that you two haven’t spoken for days. It’s tough to be caught in such silence, especially with someone so close. Arguments over trivial things happen to every family. I’m sure your father is feeling upset too — perhaps even waiting for a chance to reconnect. Why not take that first step? You could offer a sincere apology when the moment feels right. A small gesture, like making him a cup of tea, could also gently open the door to talking again. I’m certain he’ll meet your kindness with forgiveness. With patience and courage, you two will soon bridge the distance and grow even closer.                                                                                                                                                             Yours,                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向因与父亲争吵而苦恼的朋友表达安慰并提供解决问题的建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 争吵，分歧：quarrel → argument/ disagreement/ dispute 苦恼的，心烦的：upset → distressed 重建联系，消除隔阂：reconnect → bridge the distance/ gap 真诚的，由衷的：sincere → genuine/ heartfelt 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Why not take that first step? 拓展句：Why don’t you consider taking that first step when you think the time is appropriate? 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and that you two haven’t spoken for days. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】It’s tough to be caught in such silence, especially with someone so close. (运用了it作形式主语) 【拓展选做】 假设你是某青少年杂志的编辑李华。市民赵女士给你发来电子邮件寻求建议和帮助，她的儿子最近苦恼于自己的粉刺问题，还经常因此大发脾气，导致亲子关系紧张。请你给赵女士写一封建议信，内容包括： 1.对她的理解 2.合理的建议(至少两点) 3.希望采纳建议和鼓励 注意 1.写作词数在80词左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.开头语和结束语以为你写好 Dear Mrs. Zhao, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Editor Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mrs. Zhao, I’m more than sorry to hear that your son has recently been struggling with his acne problem, and has often lost his temper over it, leading to a strained parent-child relationship. Here I’m writing to give you some advice. First, you should be patient to talk with him about it from the development of adolescence, during which it is natural for teenagers to have acne problem. Moreover, it is better to take him to the doctor to get professional ways to wash his face and neck, even his whole body. What’s the most important is that your son himself should know how to ease himself about his change in this period. Best wishes, Editor Li Hua 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给赵女士写一封建议信，关于她的儿子最近苦恼于自己的粉刺问题，还经常因此大发脾气，导致亲子关系紧张。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 非常：more than → very 生气：lost his temper → get angry 导致：lead to → contribute to 而且：Moreover → what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Moreover, it is better to take him to the doctor to get professional ways to wash his face and neck, even his whole body. 拓展句：Moreover, it is better that you take him to the doctor to get professional ways to wash his face and neck, even his whole body. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I’m more than sorry to hear that your son has recently been struggling with his acne problem, and has often lost his temper over it, leading to a strained parent-child relationship.(由that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】First, you should be patient to talk with him about it from the development of adolescence, during which it is natural for teenagers to have acne problem.(由介词+ which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型3】What’s the most important is that your son himself should know how to ease himself about his change in this period.(由What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句) ( 3 / 14 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $