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沪教八上Unit 8作文讲义及范文
Unit 8 Pets and Us (话题:宠物与我们)
题目一:建议信(给朋友关于是否养宠物的建议)
题目: (参照2024辽宁中考建议信模式)
你的朋友王琳在邮件中说他很想养一只宠物狗,但父母担心会影响学习。请你给他写一封回信,提出你的建议,内容包括:
1. 表示理解他和他父母的担心;
2. 分析养宠物的利与弊(至少各一点);
3. 给出你的建议和理由。
注意:
· 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
· 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
· 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
思路精讲:
本题是“利弊分析+建议”的综合题,需要先分析再给建议。辽宁中考常考此类“选择观点并说明理由”的题型。结合本单元“养宠物”话题,可从责任、陪伴、时间管理等方面分析利弊。建议要中肯可行,如“和父母约定负责照顾宠物”等。
写作要点分析:
· 要点一(理解双方):理解他想养宠物的心情,也理解父母的担心
· 要点二(分析利弊):至少各一点,利(陪伴、学会责任),弊(需要时间照顾、可能影响学习)
· 要点三(给出建议):给出具体可行的建议,如制定计划、证明自己能兼顾学习等
· 结构:理解→利弊分析→建议
必备句型和词组:
· I understand your feelings.
· I also understand your parents’ worries.
· There are both advantages and disadvantages.
· On the one hand,... On the other hand,...
· keep you company
· learn responsibility from...
· take up a lot of time
· I would suggest that you...
· make a plan for...
· prove that you can manage both
· I hope you can find a good solution.
高分范文:
Dear Wang Lin,
I understand your feelings. You really want a pet dog. But I also understand your parents’ worries about your study. Let me share my thoughts with you.
There are both advantages and disadvantages of keeping a dog. On the one hand, a dog can keep you company and bring you a lot of happiness. You can also learn responsibility from taking care of it. On the other hand, a dog needs a lot of time and attention. You have to feed it, walk it and play with it every day. This may affect your study if you don’t manage your time well.
I would suggest that you make a clear plan first. Promise your parents that you will finish your homework before playing with the dog. Also, you can ask your parents to help you when you are busy. In this way, you can enjoy the happiness of having a pet without affecting your study.
Yours,
Li Hui
题目二:演讲稿(参加“宠物与我们”主题演讲比赛)
题目: (参照2024辽宁中考演讲稿模式)
你校英语俱乐部举办“Pets and Us”主题演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 开场问候并引入主题;
2. 分享你与宠物(或你朋友与宠物)之间的一个故事;
3. 谈谈宠物对人类的意义。
注意:
· 词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
· 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
· 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
思路精讲:
演讲稿在辽宁中考中被列为高频应用文类型。本题结合本单元“宠物”话题,属于“写人叙事”类演讲稿。第二段要讲一个具体的故事(有起因、经过、结果),第三段升华到“宠物对人类的意义”——陪伴、安慰、责任等。
写作要点分析:
· 要点一(开场引入):问候听众,引出“宠物”话题
· 要点二(分享故事):讲述一个具体的故事,有细节有感受
· 要点三(谈谈意义):从故事中提炼宠物对人类的价值
· 结构:开场→故事分享→意义升华
必备句型和词组:
· Good morning, everyone!
· I’m glad to stand here and share...
· Today I’d like to talk about...
· I still remember the day when...
· cheer me up
· keep me company
· play an important role in our life
· teach us responsibility
· make our life more meaningful
· That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
高分范文:
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to stand here and share my story about pets. Today I’d like to talk about my pet cat, Mimi.
I still remember the day when my parents brought Mimi home. She was very shy at first. But soon she became my best friend. Whenever I felt sad, she would come to me and rub against my legs, as if she was trying to cheer me up. I also learned a lot from taking care of her — I became more patient and responsible. Last year, Mimi gave birth to three lovely kittens. Watching them grow up was one of the happiest experiences in my life.
From this experience, I have learned that pets are not just animals. They are our family members. They make our life more meaningful and teach us how to love and care for others. That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
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