Unit 4 Places around us 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年北师大版（三起）英语四年级上册

**基本信息** 以“六步写作流程”为核心，构建从词汇句型到篇章表达的系统性训练，培养语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|6步流程|“地点介绍-存在描述-方位说明-特点评价-活动阐述-愿望表达”六步结构|从单一句子到篇章的递进，形成完整写作逻辑链| |核心词汇与句型|4类词汇/6类句型|There be句型、方位词（beside等）精准运用|词汇按功能分类，句型与写作步骤一一对应| |分层写作练习|3层（基础/提高/挑战）|从单一场所到社区再到景点的主题迁移|难度梯度上升，逐步提升语言综合运用能力|

北师大版四年级上册英语 Unit 4 Places around us 写作突破专项训练 | 我们身边的场所 【本单元写作主题】 介绍家附近的场所、社区规划或一处著名景点，写出地点、方位和自己的感受。 ✦ 【写作目标】 能够围绕“我身边的场所”写一篇短文，按照“地点名称—有什么—在哪里—有什么特点—我想做什么”的顺序表达。 建议写作顺序：先介绍地点，再用 There is/are 说明场所，接着用方位词描述位置，最后写喜欢或参观计划。 ➤ 【写作方法指引｜原文指路】 1. 介绍地点 This is my place. 先点明你要介绍的社区、家乡或景点。 2. 写有什么 There is a children’s park. There are some shops. 用 There is/are 列举场所。 3. 写方位 The supermarket is beside the hospital. 用 beside、behind、in front of、between 描述位置。 4. 写特点 The park is big and nice. 用 big、old、tall、lovely 等形容词评价。 5. 写活动 I can walk to school. We can read books there. 写在这个地方可以做什么。 6. 表达愿望 I want to visit this place. 结尾写喜欢或想参观的想法。 ● 一、核心词汇 身边场所：school 学校；library 图书馆；cinema 电影院；supermarket 超市；hospital 医院；bus stop 公交站；park 公园；zoo 动物园；bookstore 书店 方位词：beside 在旁边；behind 在后面；in front of 在前面；between 在两者之间；near 在附近 著名地点：Tian’anmen 天安门；the Palace Museum 故宫；Zhongshan Park 中山公园；Qianmen Street 前门大街；Big Ben 大本钟 特点与活动：big 大的；tall 高的；old 古老的；lovely 美丽的；walk 走路；visit 参观；take a photo 拍照 ▣ 二、参考句型 介绍地点：This is my place. / This is a tulou in Fujian. 存在句：There is a children’s park. / There are some shops. 方位句：The supermarket is beside the hospital. 问答句：Is there a library? Yes, there is. / No, there isn’t. 特点句：Tian’anmen Square is very big. 活动句：I can walk to school. / Let’s take a photo. ⚠ 三、易错点提示 1. There is 后接单数：There is a library. 2. There are 后接复数：There are some shops. 3. beside 表示“在旁边”，后面直接接地点。 4. between 后面通常接两个地点。 5. 地点名称首字母大写，如 Tian’anmen Square、Big Ben。 ① 四、连词成句 1. is / This / my / place / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 2. a / There’s / park / children’s / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. beside / is / The supermarket / hospital / the / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 4. there / Is / a / library / ? ________________________________________________________________________________ 5. very / is / big / Tian’anmen Square / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 6. to / I / walk / school / can / . ________________________________________________________________________________ ✎ 五、写作句型仿写 仿写1｜替换地点 例：There is a library. → There is a ________.（cinema） 请仿写：There is a ____________. 仿写2｜替换方位 例：The supermarket is beside the hospital. → The park is ________ the school.（behind） 请仿写：The park is ____________ the school. 仿写3｜根据提示词写句子 提示词：library / between / school / cinema ______________________________________________________________ 仿写4｜补全句子 There ________ some shops.（are） ______________________________________________________________ 仿写5｜用 and 连接 There is a park. There is a zoo. 请合并为一句：________________________________________________ 仿写6｜主题迁移 介绍你家附近的一个地方，写有什么、在哪里、你喜欢它吗。 请写 3 句话： ✍ 六、三层写作练习 写作一｜基础 ★ 介绍家附近的一个场所，至少写 4 句话。 参考词：near, school, park, library, big, like。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 写作二｜提高 ★★ 介绍你的社区，写出 3 个场所和至少 2 个方位关系。 不少于 45 词。参考词：There is/are, beside, behind, between, happy。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 写作三｜挑战 ★★★ 介绍一处著名景点，写它在哪里、有什么特点、你可以做什么以及你的感受。 不少于 60 词。参考词：This is..., very big/tall/old, visit, take a photo, lovely。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ★ 七、参考范文与范文讲解 写作一参考范文 A place near my home There is a park near my home. It is big and nice. I can play there with my friends. I like this park very much. 范文讲解：先写地点，再写特点、活动和喜爱。 写作二参考范文 My neighbourhood This is my neighbourhood. There is a school, a library and a supermarket. The library is beside the school. The supermarket is behind the library. There is also a small park near my home. I like my neighbourhood because it is nice and convenient. 范文讲解：用 There is/are 列举场所，再用 beside、behind 描述位置，最后写整体评价。 写作三参考范文 A famous place Tian’anmen Square is a famous place in Beijing. It is very big and beautiful. The Palace Museum is behind Tian’anmen. Zhongshan Park is beside it. I want to visit these places with my family. We can take photos and see many beautiful things there. I think they are lovely. 范文讲解：文章包含地点、方位、特点和活动，适合迁移到家乡景点介绍。 ✓ 八、练习参考答案 连词成句答案 1. This is my place. 2. There’s a children’s park. 3. The supermarket is beside the hospital. 4. Is there a library? 5. Tian’anmen Square is very big. 6. I can walk to school. 句型仿写答案 1. There is a cinema. 2. The park is behind the school. 3. The library is between the school and the cinema. 4. There are some shops. 5. There is a park and a zoo. 6. 示例：There is a library near my home. It is beside a park. I like it very much. 写作任务审题提示 基础：写一个地点和基本特点；提高：增加多个地点和方位词；挑战：写清景点特点、活动和感受。 ✦ 九、写作小结 本单元主要训练“地点介绍”类写作。通用结构是：This is... → There is/are... → ... is beside/behind... → It is... → I can/want to... 写作检查：①There is/are 与名词单复数匹配；②方位词使用准确；③地点专有名词首字母大写；④写出地点、特点、活动和感受。 北师大版四年级上册英语 Unit 4 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $