Unit 5 My holiday 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年北师大版（三起）英语四年级上册

**基本信息** 以“假期计划与旅行规范”为主题，构建“步骤指引-词汇句型-分层练习-范文解析”四维训练体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|6步写作框架|按“目的地-原因-物品-购物-规则-感受”顺序表达，用want to+动词原形等核心结构|从单一句式到篇章逻辑，形成“要素完整-逻辑连贯”表达链| |核心词汇与句型|4类词汇/5类句型|地点天气、衣物物品等主题词汇分类，目的地、价格等功能句型提炼|词汇为句型基础，句型服务于写作步骤，构建“词-句-篇”递进逻辑| |分层练习|6题连词成句/6题仿写/3层写作|基础连词成句巩固句型，仿写训练替换能力，三层写作实现从4句到60词的能力跃升|由机械操练到意义表达，逐步提升语言运用与思维组织能力| |范文与讲解|3篇梯度范文|基础版重要素完整，提高版增逻辑连接，挑战版强化规则表达，配套讲解点明结构要点|范文示范与方法指引呼应，验证“步骤-词汇-句型”体系的实践价值|

北师大版四年级上册英语 Unit 5 My holiday 写作突破专项训练 | 我的假期 【本单元写作主题】 介绍假期出行计划、目的地、要带的衣物或礼物，也可以写文明参观的注意事项。 ✦ 【写作目标】 能够围绕“我的假期”写一篇短文，按照“想去哪里—为什么去—要带什么—可以买什么—怎样文明参观”的顺序表达。 建议写作顺序：先写目的地和愿望，再根据天气准备衣物，接着写礼物或价格，最后补充参观规则。 ➤ 【写作方法指引｜原文指路】 1. 写目的地 Where do you want to go? I want to go to Hainan. 先说想去哪里。 2. 写出行原因 I want to see ice and snow. 用 want to + 动词原形写旅行目的。 3. 写携带物品 Take your coat. Don’t forget your cap. 根据目的地和天气写要带的衣物。 4. 写购物内容 How much is this bag? It’s fifty yuan. 写买礼物和询问价格。 5. 写文明规则 No photos. Keep quiet. 用标识短语写参观注意事项。 6. 写感受 This is the best gift. I am happy. 用简短句子表达旅行感受。 ● 一、核心词汇 地点与天气：Harbin 哈尔滨；Hainan 海南；Fujian 福建；sea 大海；ice and snow 冰雪；hot 炎热的；cool 凉爽的 衣物与物品：coat 外套；heavy coat 厚外套；dress 连衣裙；shorts 短裤；sweater 毛衣；cap 帽子；socks 袜子；gift 礼物 购物表达：bag 包；shell 贝壳；beautiful 美丽的；expensive 昂贵的；fifty yuan 五十元；eighty yuan 八十元 文明参观：No touching. 禁止触摸；No photos. 禁止拍照；No pets. 禁止携带宠物；Keep quiet. 保持安静；No running. 禁止奔跑 ▣ 二、参考句型 目的地：Where do you want to go? I want to go to Harbin. 携带物品：Take your coat. / Don’t forget to take your sweater. 价格问答：How much is this bag? It’s fifty yuan. 规则表达：No touching. / No photos. / Keep quiet. 计划表达：I want to visit my grandparents. 感受句：This is the best gift. / I am happy. ⚠ 三、易错点提示 1. want to 后接动词原形：I want to go to Hainan. 2. How much is 后接单数物品：How much is this bag? 3. 价格表达用 It’s + 数字 + yuan：It’s fifty yuan. 4. Don’t forget to 后接动词原形：Don’t forget to take your coat. 5. No photos/No touching/Keep quiet 是完整的规则表达。 ① 四、连词成句 1. want / Where / go / do / you / to / ? ________________________________________________________________________________ 2. to / I / Hainan / want / go / to / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. take / your / coat / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 4. much / is / How / this / bag / ? ________________________________________________________________________________ 5. fifty / It’s / yuan / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 6. quiet / Keep / . ________________________________________________________________________________ ✎ 五、写作句型仿写 仿写1｜替换目的地 例：I want to go to Hainan. → I want to go to ________.（Harbin） 请仿写：I want to go to ____________. 仿写2｜替换衣物 例：Take your coat. → Take your ________.（dress） 请仿写：Take your ____________. 仿写3｜根据提示词写句子 提示词：bag / fifty yuan ______________________________________________________________ 仿写4｜补全句子 Don’t forget to ________ your cap.（take） ______________________________________________________________ 仿写5｜用 and 连接 I take my coat. I take my cap. 请合并为一句：________________________________________________ 仿写6｜主题迁移 介绍一次假期计划，写目的地、衣物和一项活动。 请写 3 句话： ✍ 六、三层写作练习 写作一｜基础 ★ 写 4 句话介绍假期计划：想去哪里、带什么、想做什么。 参考词：holiday, go, coat, visit, see, happy。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 写作二｜提高 ★★ 介绍一次出行准备，写目的地、天气、衣物和礼物。 不少于 45 词。参考词：want to, take, don’t forget, gift, grandparents, beautiful。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 写作三｜挑战 ★★★ 写一篇完整短文介绍假期旅行，并写出至少 2 条文明参观规则。 不少于 60 词。参考词：museum, no photos, no touching, keep quiet, happy。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ★ 七、参考范文与范文讲解 写作一参考范文 My holiday plan I want to go to Hainan in my holiday. I want to see the sea. I take my dress and shorts. I am happy. 范文讲解：按照目的地、活动、衣物和感受的顺序写，句子简短清楚。 写作二参考范文 Get ready for a holiday The winter holiday is coming. I want to go to Harbin to see ice and snow. It is cold there, so I take my heavy coat and cap. I also take a gift for my grandma. I am ready for the holiday. 范文讲解：用 so 连接天气和衣物，用 also 补充礼物，内容更完整。 写作三参考范文 A good visitor I want to visit a museum with my family. There are many beautiful things in the museum. We must be good visitors. No photos and no touching. We should keep quiet and not run. We can look carefully and learn a lot. I am happy to visit the museum. 范文讲解：先写旅行地点和所见，再集中写参观规则，最后写感受。 ✓ 八、练习参考答案 连词成句答案 1. Where do you want to go? 2. I want to go to Hainan. 3. Take your coat. 4. How much is this bag? 5. It’s fifty yuan. 6. Keep quiet. 句型仿写答案 1. I want to go to Harbin. 2. Take your dress. 3. The bag is fifty yuan. / It’s fifty yuan. 4. Don’t forget to take your cap. 5. I take my coat and my cap. 6. 示例：I want to go to Hainan. I take my dress and shorts. I want to see the sea. 写作任务审题提示 基础：写目的地、衣物和活动；提高：补充天气与礼物；挑战：写清旅行内容并正确使用文明参观规则。 ✦ 九、写作小结 本单元主要训练“假期计划与旅行规范”类写作。通用结构是：I want to go to... → I want to... → Take/Don’t forget... → How much...? → No.../Keep... 写作检查：①want to 后用动词原形；②衣物与目的地相匹配；③价格句型正确；④规则表达首字母大写、标点正确；⑤写出计划和感受。 北师大版四年级上册英语 Unit 5 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $