Unit 1 Back to school 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年北师大版（三起）英语四年级上册

**基本信息** 小学英语四年级上册Unit 1写作突破专项训练，以“六步写作法”为核心，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级训练体系，系统培养校园主题写作能力，提升语言表达与学习策略。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|6步写作步骤|六步写作法（介绍学校→新变化→课程→喜好→方法→感受）|从单句构建到篇章组织，形成完整写作逻辑链| |核心词汇与句型|4类词汇+5类句型|分类词汇与功能句型匹配|按“场所-课程-方法-感受”维度整合语言要素| |易错点提示|5项语法易错点|针对性错误纠正|聚焦There be句型、介词使用等核心语法点| |分层练习|6连词成句+6句型仿写+3篇章写作|基础巩固→能力提升→综合应用|由词到句再到篇，逐步提升语言输出能力| |范文与讲解|3篇梯度范文|结构模板与内容替换指导|通过范例展示写作框架，培养迁移应用能力|

北师大版四年级上册英语 Unit 1 Back to school 写作突破专项训练 | 重返校园 【本单元写作主题】 介绍我的学校、新学年里的新变化，以及我喜欢的课程或学习方法。 ✦ 【写作目标】 能够围绕“我的学校”写一篇短文，按照“学校有什么新变化—我每天有什么课程—我喜欢什么—我会怎样学习”的顺序表达。 建议写作顺序：先介绍学校和新设施，再写课程安排，接着表达喜好，最后补充学习方法或新学年的计划。 ➤ 【写作方法指引｜原文指路】 1. 先介绍学校 This is my school. There is a big playground. 先说“这是我的学校”，再介绍学校里的场所。 2. 写学校的新变化 There is a new library. There are some new ping-pong tables. 用 There is/are 介绍新增的设施。 3. 写课程安排 We have science on Monday and Wednesday. 用 on + 星期表达哪天上什么课。 4. 写喜欢的课程 Science is my favourite subject. 用 favourite subject 表达最喜欢的科目。 5. 写学习方法 I can make a word map and make a plan. 用 can 介绍自己会使用的学习方法。 6. 写感受和计划 I am happy to be back. I will work hard this year. 用感受句收尾，并写新学年的打算。 ● 一、核心词汇 学校场所：school 学校；classroom 教室；library 图书馆；playground 操场；art room 美术教室；music room 音乐教室；computer room 计算机教室；science room 科学教室 课程与人物：Chinese 语文；English 英语；maths 数学；science 科学；teacher 老师；new teacher 新老师；subject 科目 学习方法：put...in the right place 把……放在合适的位置；make a word map 制作单词思维导图；make a plan 制定计划；listen carefully 认真听；ask for help 寻求帮助 感受与评价：new 新的；big 大的；nice 漂亮的；cool 酷的；fun 有趣的；happy 开心的；favourite 最喜欢的 ▣ 二、参考句型 基础句：This is my school. / I like my school. 介绍场所：There is a library. / There are some new ping-pong tables. 介绍课程：We have English on Monday. / What classes do we have on Monday? 表达喜好：Science is my favourite subject. / I like reading stories. 学习方法：I can make a plan. / Let me help. / I can listen carefully in class. 表达感受：I am happy to be back. / Learning is fun. ⚠ 三、易错点提示 1. There is 后接单数：There is a new library. 不要写 There are a new library. 2. There are 后接复数：There are some tables. 不要写 There is some tables. 3. 星期前用 on：We have science on Monday. 不要写 in Monday. 4. “最喜欢的科目”要说 favourite subject：Science is my favourite subject. 5. 表示“我会……”用 can + 动词原形：I can make a plan. 不要写 I can making a plan. ① 四、连词成句 1. new / a / library / There’s / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 2. have / science / on / We / Monday / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. subject / is / Science / favourite / my / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 4. make / can / a / I / plan / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 5. school / This / my / is / . ________________________________________________________________________________ 6. there / some / Are / new / tables / ? / ping-pong ________________________________________________________________________________ ✎ 五、写作句型仿写 仿写1｜替换关键词 例：There is a new library. → There is a new ________.（computer room） 请仿写：There is a new ____________. 仿写2｜替换课程和星期 例：We have science on Monday. → We have English on ________.（Tuesday） 请仿写：We have __________ on ____________. 仿写3｜根据提示词写句子 提示词：my / favourite / subject / English ______________________________________________________________ 仿写4｜补全句子 I can ________ a word map. （make） ______________________________________________________________ 仿写5｜用 and 连接 There is a library. There is a playground. 请合并为一句：________________________________________________ 仿写6｜主题迁移 请用 3 句话介绍你的教室：有什么、在哪里、你喜欢什么。 ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ✍ 六、三层写作练习 写作一｜基础 ★ My school 要求：介绍你的学校，至少写 4 句话。可以写学校里有什么、你最喜欢什么地方以及你的感受。 参考词：school, library, playground, classroom, big, nice, like ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 写作二｜提高 ★★ A new school year 要求：介绍新学年里的新变化，写出至少一个新设施、两门课程和一项学习方法。不少于 45 词。 参考词：new, library, science, Monday, favourite, make a plan, listen carefully, happy ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 写作三｜挑战 ★★★ My school life 要求：写一篇完整短文介绍你的校园生活。按照“学校—课程—喜欢的科目—学习方法—感受”的顺序，不少于 60 词。 参考词：This is my school. There is/are... We have... My favourite... I can... I am... ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ★ 七、参考范文与范文讲解 写作一参考范文 My school This is my school. It is big and nice. There is a library and a big playground. I like the library. I can read stories there. I am happy at school. 范文讲解：先总述学校，再用 There is/are 介绍设施；随后用 We have... 写课程，用 favourite subject 表达喜好，最后用 can 介绍学习方法并写出感受。写作时可以根据自己的学校替换地点、课程和学习方法。 写作二参考范文 A new school year Welcome to the new school year! There is a new computer room in my school. There are some new ping-pong tables, too. We have science on Monday and Wednesday. Science is my favourite subject. I can make a plan and listen carefully in class. I am happy to be back. 范文讲解：先总述学校，再用 There is/are 介绍设施；随后用 We have... 写课程，用 favourite subject 表达喜好，最后用 can 介绍学习方法并写出感受。写作时可以根据自己的学校替换地点、课程和学习方法。 写作三参考范文 My school life This is my school. It is big and nice. There is a library, a playground and a new computer room. We have English, maths and science every week. Science is my favourite subject because it is fun. When I have many things to do, I can make a plan. I can also make a word map to learn new words. I am happy to be back at school. Learning is fun! 范文讲解：先总述学校，再用 There is/are 介绍设施；随后用 We have... 写课程，用 favourite subject 表达喜好，最后用 can 介绍学习方法并写出感受。写作时可以根据自己的学校替换地点、课程和学习方法。 ✓ 八、练习参考答案 连词成句答案 1. There’s a new library. 2. We have science on Monday. 3. Science is my favourite subject. 4. I can make a plan. 5. This is my school. 6. Are there some new ping-pong tables? 句型仿写答案 1. 示例：There is a new computer room. 2. 示例：We have English on Tuesday. 3. English is my favourite subject. 4. I can make a word map. 5. There is a library and a playground. 6. 示例：This is my classroom. There are some desks and chairs. I like my classroom. 写作任务审题提示 基础：先写学校，再写一个场所和感受；提高：补充新设施、课程与学习方法；挑战：内容要完整，至少使用 2 个连接词或原因表达。 ✦ 九、写作小结 本单元主要训练“校园生活介绍”类写作。通用结构是：This is my school. → There is/are... → We have... → My favourite subject is... → I can... → I am happy... 写作检查：①句首大写，句末有标点；②There is/are 后面的名词单复数正确；③星期前使用 on；④can 后使用动词原形；⑤至少写出学校、课程、喜好和感受。 北师大版四年级上册英语 Unit 1 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $