Unit 5 Health matters 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语六年级上册

**基本信息** 以“健康问题与建议”为主题，构建“症状描述—原因分析—建议提出—健康愿望”的写作逻辑链，通过分层训练提升语言表达的逻辑性与准确性。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |课文仿写思路|5步仿写框架|按“症状描述—问题表现—治疗建议—健康习惯—避免事项”顺序写作|从单句表达过渡到连贯语篇，培养有序表达的思维品质| |核心词汇与句型|4类词汇+5组句型|用should/shouldn’t提建议、祈使句列习惯，掌握have+症状表达|词汇按“问题—行动—建议”分类，句型覆盖询问、表达、建议全场景| |易错点提示|5项语法提醒|规避have用法、should后接动词原形等错误|针对高频语法错误，强化语言运用的准确性| |分层写作练习|3层（基础/提高/挑战）|从个人经历到计划再到书信，逐步提升语篇复杂度|符合语言能力发展规律，实现从基础表达到综合运用的迁移|

外研版六年级上英语 Unit 5 Health matters 写作突破专项训练 | 教材同步版 主题：健康问题与健康生活 【目标】一、写作目标 能围绕“健康问题与健康建议”写短文，按照“描述症状—说明原因或习惯—提出建议—表达健康愿望”的顺序完成表达。 【思路】二、课文仿写思路 1. 描述身体不适 英文例句：I have a fever and a bad headache. 写法提示：先说清楚自己哪里不舒服。 2. 说明问题表现 英文例句：I have a runny nose and a sore throat. 写法提示：可以连续列举两三种症状。 3. 提出治疗建议 英文例句：You should take some medicine and drink a lot of water. 写法提示：用 should 提出应该做的事情。 4. 说明健康习惯 英文例句：Eat healthy food and do sport. 写法提示：用祈使句列举健康习惯。 5. 提醒避免事项 英文例句：Don’t read in the dark. 写法提示：用 Don’t + 动词原形提醒不该做的事。 【词汇】三、核心词汇 健康问题：fever, headache, runny nose, sore throat, cough, toothache, flu 身体与习惯：body, eyes, medicine, sleep, read, watch TV, eye exercises 健康行动：eat healthy food, drink water, do sport, get lots of sleep, look far away 建议与感受：should, shouldn’t, take care of, healthy, strong, happy, better 【句型】四、参考句型 询问病情：What’s the matter? / How do you feel? 表达症状：I have a fever. / I have a cough and a sore throat. 提出建议：You should take some medicine. / You should drink a lot of water. 健康习惯：We should eat healthy food and do sport. 提醒避免：You shouldn’t read in bed. / Don’t watch TV for long. 【提醒】五、易错点提示 • have 后面接疾病或症状名词：I have a headache. 不要写 I am a headache。 • should / shouldn’t 后面用动词原形：You should drink water。 • a fever、a cough、a headache 前面通常要用 a；healthy food 不加 a。 • Don’t 后面用动词原形：Don’t read in the dark。 • 说“做运动”用 do sport 或 do exercise，不要写 make sport。 【组句】六、连词成句 1. matter / what’s / the / ? ____________________________________________________________ 2. have / I / a fever / . ____________________________________________________________ 3. should / you / medicine / take / some / . ____________________________________________________________ 4. drink / a lot of / water / . ____________________________________________________________ 5. eat / healthy food / should / we / . ____________________________________________________________ 6. read / in the dark / don’t / . ____________________________________________________________ 【仿写】七、写作句型仿写 1. 把 I have a headache. 中的 headache 换成 cough。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 把 You should drink a lot of water. 改为“你应该多睡觉”。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 根据提示词写句：do sport / healthy ____________________________________________________________ 4. 补全：You ____ read in bed at night.（不应该） ____________________________________________________________ 5. 用 because 扩写：I should eat healthy food. ____________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移：写一句保护眼睛的建议。 ____________________________________________________________ 【写作】八、三层写作练习 写作1｜我的健康问题（基础） 要求：介绍一次身体不舒服的经历，写出症状和两条建议。不少于40词。 参考词：matter, have, fever, headache, should, water ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作2｜我的健康计划（提高） 要求：写一份健康生活计划，包含饮食、运动、睡眠和护眼建议。不少于50词。 参考词：healthy food, sport, sleep, eye exercises, shouldn’t ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 写作3｜给朋友的健康建议（挑战） 要求：给一位有健康问题的朋友写一封短邮件，描述问题、提出建议并表达关心。不少于60词。 参考词：Dear, feel, should, medicine, rest, take care ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 【范文】九、参考范文与讲解 写作1参考范文｜我的健康问题 Yesterday I had a fever and a headache. I felt tired and stayed at home. My mum gave me some medicine. I drank a lot of water and got lots of sleep. I felt better the next day. 范文讲解：按时间顺序写症状、处理方法和结果，内容简单完整。 写作2参考范文｜我的健康计划 I want to be healthy and strong. I should eat healthy food and drink enough water. I should do sport every day and get lots of sleep. I also need to do eye exercises. I shouldn’t read in bed or watch TV for a long time. 范文讲解：从饮食、运动、睡眠和护眼四方面制定计划，并用 should/shouldn’t 表达。 写作3参考范文｜给朋友的健康建议 Dear Lingling, I’m sorry that you don’t feel well. What’s the matter? You may have the flu. You should take the medicine on time, drink a lot of water and get lots of sleep. You shouldn’t go out in cold weather. Eat healthy food and do some sport when you feel better. Take care of yourself! Your friend, Amy 范文讲解：书信格式完整，先表达关心，再写症状判断和具体建议，结尾用 Take care of yourself 表达关怀。 【小结】十、写作小结 “健康问题”类作文可以按照“哪里不舒服—有什么症状—应该做什么—不应该做什么—表达关心”的顺序来写。描述症状用 have，提出建议用 should/shouldn’t，注意后面接动词原形。 【答案】十一、参考答案 A. 连词成句答案 1. What’s the matter? 2. I have a fever. 3. You should take some medicine. 4. Drink a lot of water. 5. We should eat healthy food. 6. Don’t read in the dark. B. 句型仿写答案 1. I have a cough. 2. You should get lots of sleep. 3. We should do sport to be healthy. 4. shouldn’t 5. I should eat healthy food because it can make me strong. 6. We should do eye exercises and look far away. C. 写作练习参考答案（示例） 写作1：Yesterday I had a fever and a headache. I felt tired. I took some medicine and drank a lot of water. I also got lots of sleep. I felt better later. 写作2：I want to be healthy. I should eat healthy food, do sport and get enough sleep. I should do eye exercises, too. I shouldn’t read in bed or watch too much TV. 写作3：Dear Tom, I’m sorry you don’t feel well. You should take some medicine, drink a lot of water and get lots of sleep. You shouldn’t go out in cold weather. Eat healthy food and do sport when you feel better. Take care of yourself! Your friend, Amy. 外研版六年级上册 Unit 5 Health matters 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $