Unit 5 Health matters 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年外研版（三起）英语六年级上册

外研版六年级上英语    Unit 5 Health matters

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主题：健康问题与健康生活

【目标】一、写作目标

能围绕“健康问题与健康建议”写短文，按照“描述症状—说明原因或习惯—提出建议—表达健康愿望”的顺序完成表达。

【思路】二、课文仿写思路

1. 描述身体不适

英文例句：I have a fever and a bad headache.

写法提示：先说清楚自己哪里不舒服。

2. 说明问题表现

英文例句：I have a runny nose and a sore throat.

写法提示：可以连续列举两三种症状。

3. 提出治疗建议

英文例句：You should take some medicine and drink a lot of water.

写法提示：用 should 提出应该做的事情。

4. 说明健康习惯

英文例句：Eat healthy food and do sport.

写法提示：用祈使句列举健康习惯。

5. 提醒避免事项

英文例句：Don’t read in the dark.

写法提示：用 Don’t + 动词原形提醒不该做的事。

【词汇】三、核心词汇

健康问题：fever, headache, runny nose, sore throat, cough, toothache, flu

身体与习惯：body, eyes, medicine, sleep, read, watch TV, eye exercises

健康行动：eat healthy food, drink water, do sport, get lots of sleep, look far away

建议与感受：should, shouldn’t, take care of, healthy, strong, happy, better

【句型】四、参考句型

询问病情：What’s the matter? / How do you feel?

表达症状：I have a fever. / I have a cough and a sore throat.

提出建议：You should take some medicine. / You should drink a lot of water.

健康习惯：We should eat healthy food and do sport.

提醒避免：You shouldn’t read in bed. / Don’t watch TV for long.

【提醒】五、易错点提示

• have 后面接疾病或症状名词：I have a headache. 不要写 I am a headache。

• should / shouldn’t 后面用动词原形：You should drink water。

• a fever、a cough、a headache 前面通常要用 a；healthy food 不加 a。

• Don’t 后面用动词原形：Don’t read in the dark。

• 说“做运动”用 do sport 或 do exercise，不要写 make sport。

【组句】六、连词成句

1. matter / what’s / the / ?

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2. have / I / a fever / .

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3. should / you / medicine / take / some / .

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4. drink / a lot of / water / .

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5. eat / healthy food / should / we / .

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6. read / in the dark / don’t / .

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【仿写】七、写作句型仿写

1. 把 I have a headache. 中的 headache 换成 cough。

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2. 把 You should drink a lot of water. 改为“你应该多睡觉”。