Unit 3 Food（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制六年级上册

本讲义围绕“健康饮食与合理膳食”主题写作，搭建“词汇积累-句式运用-范例分析-实战演练”学习支架。先系统梳理食物分类（如膳食宝塔的谷物、蔬果等）、数量短语、烹饪动词及顺序连接词，再提供开头中间结尾句式与佳句仿写，最后通过典例解析结构，引导学生有序表达饮食相关内容。 资料亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，分类词汇帮助准确描述食材，顺序连接词训练逻辑表达；范例赏析结合高分句型（如宾语从句、动名词作主语）提升语言运用。多样实战任务（菜单、饮食重要性等）覆盖不同写作类型，课中辅助教师分层教学，课后助力学生查漏补缺，养成健康饮食表达习惯。

Unit 3 Food单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自我”范畴，涉及“健康饮食与合理膳食”。 该单元旨在引导学生认识食物对生活的重要作用，掌握均衡饮食的标准，分清各类健康食材，养成良好饮食习惯。通过学习膳食宝塔知识、超市食材选购、阅读美食烹饪小故事、书写菜肴食谱，我们可以清晰区分健康与不健康食物，完整记录一道菜的食材与完整制作流程。围绕食材分类、食材数量、分步烹饪展开写作，能帮助我们学会有序表达操作步骤，懂得荤素、蔬果合理搭配的意义，树立少吃油盐、多吃新鲜食材的健康观念，养成自律、均衡的日常饮食习惯。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.食物四大分类（膳食宝塔） Grains 谷物：rice 米饭；egg noodles 鸡蛋面；corn 玉米；bread 面包 Vegetables & fruits 蔬果：carrot 胡萝卜；onion 洋葱；pepper 彩椒；cabbage 卷心菜；watermelon 西瓜；strawberry 草莓 Meat, fish & eggs 肉蛋：beef 牛肉；mutton 羊肉；egg 鸡蛋 Milk & bean products 奶豆制品：tofu 豆腐；yogurt 酸奶；cheese 奶酪 Oil and salt 油盐：oil 食用油；soy sauce 酱油；salt 盐 2.食材数量短语 a bag of 一袋；a little 一点（不可数）；a few 几个（可数）；two pieces 两片；plenty of 大量 3.烹饪动作动词 cut 切；beat 搅拌；fry 翻炒；boil 水煮；add 添加；mix 混合；cook 烹制 4.顺序连接词 First 首先；Then 然后；Next 接下来；After that 在那之后；Finally 最后 5.评价类词汇 tasty 美味的；healthy 健康的；balanced 均衡的；fresh 新鲜的 句式积累 开头句： 1.Today I will tell you how to cook tomato and egg soup.今天我来教大家做番茄鸡蛋汤。 2.Rainbow Beef is a tasty and healthy dish for everyone.彩虹牛肉是一道美味又适合所有人的健康菜。 3.I’d like to share my recipe for a simple healthy dish.我想分享一道简单健康菜肴的食谱。 中间句： ① 介绍食材 1.To make this dish, you need two tomatoes, two eggs and a little salt. 做这道菜，你需要两个番茄、两个鸡蛋和少许盐。 2.We need a bag of egg noodles, some beef and fresh vegetables. 我们需要一袋鸡蛋面、一些牛肉和新鲜蔬菜。 ② 分步烹饪 1.First, beat the eggs with chopsticks in a bowl. 首先，用筷子在碗里打散鸡蛋。 2.Then, cut all the vegetables into small pieces. 然后，把所有蔬菜切成小块。 3.Next, fry the beef and vegetables together in the pan. 接下来，把牛肉和蔬菜一起下锅翻炒。 4.Finally, add a little soy sauce to make it tasty. 最后，加一点酱油提味。 结尾句： 1.It looks colourful and tastes wonderful. 这道菜色泽丰富，味道很棒。 2.It has plenty of vegetables, so it is good for our body. 它含有大量蔬菜，对我们的身体有益。 3.This easy dish brings me lots of cooking fun. 这道简单的菜带给我很多做饭的乐趣。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：I wanted to cook a tasty and healthy dish for her as a birthday surprise. 仿写：我想做一道简单健康的汤作为全家晚餐。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：To make this dish, you need two eggs, two tomatoes, a little oil and salt. 仿写：做这道彩虹牛肉，你需要牛肉、彩椒、洋葱和胡萝卜。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：After that, add water to the tomatoes and boil. 仿写：在那之后，往锅里加入面条煮熟。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 假如你是李华，你们学校英语广播站正在举行以“健康饮食快乐生活”为主题的英语演讲活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛。 基本信息 姓名 李华 年龄 13 电话 0531-765836 饮食习惯 喜欢的食物及理由 …… 不喜欢的食物及理由 …… 爱好特长 打网球…… 其他方面 …… 注意： （1）用第一人称； （2）60词左右； （3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； （4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：表格所给内容需完整表达，未提示内容自行补充请勿遗漏。 谋篇布局 开头 介绍自己的基本信息 中间 写出自己的饮食喜好及原由 结尾 介绍自己的爱好特长等内容 佳作展示 Hello! My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. My phone number is 0531-765836. Good habits are necessary. I eat different kinds of fruit and vegetables. I think they are healthy. I don’t like eating meat because it’s not good for my health and it makes me gain weight. I am good at playing tennis. Doing sports makes me happy and strong. I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②be good for...对……有利 ③be good at擅长做某事 高分句型： ①I think they are healthy.（宾语从句） ②Doing sports makes me happy and strong.（动名词短语作主语） ③I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure.（原因状语从句） （一） Write at least 60 words titled “My Sunday menu” (以“我的周日菜单”为标题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What do you have for meals on Sunday? 2. What’s your favourite food? Is your diet healthy? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） Write at least 50 words about the topic “A good diet is important”.（请以“良好的饮食很重要”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）请参考以下问题： 1. What is a good diet? 2. Why is it important? (at least two reasons) 3. How to keep a good diet? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） Write a passage of at least 40 words on the topic “My delicious dinner tonight”（以“我今晚美味的晚饭”为题写一篇短文, 词数不少于40个） The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考） 1. What would you like for dinner tonight? 2. Would you like…or…? 3. What kind of soup would you like? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） Write at least 60 words about the topic "My favourite Food".（以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Suggested questions： 1.What would you like to eat every day?  2. Is it your favourite food? 3.Why do you love it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） Write at least 50 words on the topic "My Favourite Drink ". （以“最喜欢的饮料”为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文，要求语句正确通，内容连贯，标点符号不占格） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 假如你是 Mike，请你根据表格内容写一封电子邮件向你新认识的网友 Peter 介绍一下你的生活方式。 要求：词数80左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Diet Why Exercise Breakfast an egg, an apple, bread, milk 自由发挥 play volleyball for half an hour after school Lunch rice, meat, vegetables, bananas Supper noodles, fish, vegetables Dear Peter, I’m a student from China. My name is Mike. I’m glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think I have a healthy lifestyle. How about yours? Can you tell me? Yours, Mike （七） Bill和Jack是你的朋友，他们有着不同的饮食习惯。请你根据表格内容，写一篇60词左右的短文，不计入总词数。 Name Breakfast Lunch Dinner Bill milk, two eggs and an apple chicken, salad fish Jack bread, strawberries hamburgers rice (ice-cream after dinner) Bill and Jack are my friends. They have different eating habits. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 假如你是林刚，一个英文美食网站正在举行征文大赛，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英文写一篇参赛稿，介绍你和你的父母最喜欢的食物。 提示： 1. What’s your favorite food? 2. What food do your parents like best? 3. Do you like healthy food? Why? 要求： 1.句子通顺、语意连贯、语法正确； 2.包含提示中所有的内容，可适当发挥； 3.不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My name is Lin Gang. Today I want to talk about food. __________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 3 Food单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自我”范畴，涉及“健康饮食与合理膳食”。 该单元旨在引导学生认识食物对生活的重要作用，掌握均衡饮食的标准，分清各类健康食材，养成良好饮食习惯。通过学习膳食宝塔知识、超市食材选购、阅读美食烹饪小故事、书写菜肴食谱，我们可以清晰区分健康与不健康食物，完整记录一道菜的食材与完整制作流程。围绕食材分类、食材数量、分步烹饪展开写作，能帮助我们学会有序表达操作步骤，懂得荤素、蔬果合理搭配的意义，树立少吃油盐、多吃新鲜食材的健康观念，养成自律、均衡的日常饮食习惯。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.食物四大分类（膳食宝塔） Grains 谷物：rice 米饭；egg noodles 鸡蛋面；corn 玉米；bread 面包 Vegetables & fruits 蔬果：carrot 胡萝卜；onion 洋葱；pepper 彩椒；cabbage 卷心菜；watermelon 西瓜；strawberry 草莓 Meat, fish & eggs 肉蛋：beef 牛肉；mutton 羊肉；egg 鸡蛋 Milk & bean products 奶豆制品：tofu 豆腐；yogurt 酸奶；cheese 奶酪 Oil and salt 油盐：oil 食用油；soy sauce 酱油；salt 盐 2.食材数量短语 a bag of 一袋；a little 一点（不可数）；a few 几个（可数）；two pieces 两片；plenty of 大量 3.烹饪动作动词 cut 切；beat 搅拌；fry 翻炒；boil 水煮；add 添加；mix 混合；cook 烹制 4.顺序连接词 First 首先；Then 然后；Next 接下来；After that 在那之后；Finally 最后 5.评价类词汇 tasty 美味的；healthy 健康的；balanced 均衡的；fresh 新鲜的 句式积累 开头句： 1.Today I will tell you how to cook tomato and egg soup.今天我来教大家做番茄鸡蛋汤。 2.Rainbow Beef is a tasty and healthy dish for everyone.彩虹牛肉是一道美味又适合所有人的健康菜。 3.I’d like to share my recipe for a simple healthy dish.我想分享一道简单健康菜肴的食谱。 中间句： ① 介绍食材 1.To make this dish, you need two tomatoes, two eggs and a little salt. 做这道菜，你需要两个番茄、两个鸡蛋和少许盐。 2.We need a bag of egg noodles, some beef and fresh vegetables. 我们需要一袋鸡蛋面、一些牛肉和新鲜蔬菜。 ② 分步烹饪 1.First, beat the eggs with chopsticks in a bowl. 首先，用筷子在碗里打散鸡蛋。 2.Then, cut all the vegetables into small pieces. 然后，把所有蔬菜切成小块。 3.Next, fry the beef and vegetables together in the pan. 接下来，把牛肉和蔬菜一起下锅翻炒。 4.Finally, add a little soy sauce to make it tasty. 最后，加一点酱油提味。 结尾句： 1.It looks colourful and tastes wonderful. 这道菜色泽丰富，味道很棒。 2.It has plenty of vegetables, so it is good for our body. 它含有大量蔬菜，对我们的身体有益。 3.This easy dish brings me lots of cooking fun. 这道简单的菜带给我很多做饭的乐趣。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：I wanted to cook a tasty and healthy dish for her as a birthday surprise. 仿写：我想做一道简单健康的汤作为全家晚餐。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：To make this dish, you need two eggs, two tomatoes, a little oil and salt. 仿写：做这道彩虹牛肉，你需要牛肉、彩椒、洋葱和胡萝卜。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：After that, add water to the tomatoes and boil. 仿写：在那之后，往锅里加入面条煮熟。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. I wanted to cook a simple and healthy soup for our family dinner. 2. To make Rainbow Beef, you need beef, peppers, onions and carrots. 3. After that, add noodles to the pan and boil them. 典例 假如你是李华，你们学校英语广播站正在举行以“健康饮食快乐生活”为主题的英语演讲活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛。 基本信息 姓名 李华 年龄 13 电话 0531-765836 饮食习惯 喜欢的食物及理由 …… 不喜欢的食物及理由 …… 爱好特长 打网球…… 其他方面 …… 注意： （1）用第一人称； （2）60词左右； （3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； （4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：表格所给内容需完整表达，未提示内容自行补充请勿遗漏。 谋篇布局 开头 介绍自己的基本信息 中间 写出自己的饮食喜好及原由 结尾 介绍自己的爱好特长等内容 佳作展示 Hello! My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. My phone number is 0531-765836. Good habits are necessary. I eat different kinds of fruit and vegetables. I think they are healthy. I don’t like eating meat because it’s not good for my health and it makes me gain weight. I am good at playing tennis. Doing sports makes me happy and strong. I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②be good for...对……有利 ③be good at擅长做某事 高分句型： ①I think they are healthy.（宾语从句） ②Doing sports makes me happy and strong.（动名词短语作主语） ③I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure.（原因状语从句） （一） Write at least 60 words titled “My Sunday menu” (以“我的周日菜单”为标题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。) Suggested questions: 1. What do you have for meals on Sunday? 2. What’s your favourite food? Is your diet healthy? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Sunday menu I like to eat vegetables, eggs and fish on Sunday. I like eating all the delicious food. But my favourite food is fish, because I think it is healthy. I like fish soup. It is the most delicious soup in the world. I also love steamed fish. It always tasted nice. Besides, I like baked fish. My mother always says I can become cleverer if I eat more fish. The above is my menu on Sunday. I think my diet is healthy. 【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生以“My Sunday menu”为题，根据提示的内容要点，写一篇短文介绍自己的周日菜单，属于话题作文。 2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主，以第三人称为辅展开叙述。写作中要紧扣提示的要点，首先明确星期天一般吃些什么，然后重点介绍自己最喜欢的食物以及为什么喜欢吃，最后总结照应开头。行文时注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。 （二） Write at least 50 words about the topic “A good diet is important”.（请以“良好的饮食很重要”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）请参考以下问题： 1. What is a good diet? 2. Why is it important? (at least two reasons) 3. How to keep a good diet? （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A good diet is important Having a good diet is very important. This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. Because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish. Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke. Some things are bad for your health, like smoking and drinking alcohol. It is better to try and give up these things or at least do them less. We should have a good diet to keep healthy. 【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于话题作文。要求根据提示问题紧扣话题内容下一篇文章，谈谈良好饮食的重要性。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。 2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，通过回答提示中的三个问题来讲述了良好饮食的重要性。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。 3. 高分亮点： 单词和短语：mean；contain；than；like；lots of；different kinds of；build up；be bad for；give up；at least。 句型：because引导的原因状语从句；it作形式主语。 （三） Write a passage of at least 40 words on the topic “My delicious dinner tonight”（以“我今晚美味的晚饭”为题写一篇短文, 词数不少于40个） The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考） 1. What would you like for dinner tonight? 2. Would you like…or…? 3. What kind of soup would you like? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Our family always has a delicious dinner. Tonight I would like rice for dinner. I would like steamed prawns with garlic. I would also like some soup. I would like tomato and egg soup. After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit. I'd like to have some strawberries because eating some strawberries is good for my health. I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful! 【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求写美味的晚饭，属于记叙文写作。短文开篇先点明每天都有美味的晚餐Our family always has a delicious dinner；然后描述对今晚晚餐的设想；最后表达期待I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful。 2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构，用第一人称叙述，时态是一般将来时；内容充实，描述细致，想象合理，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。 3.高分亮点： 高分短语：a delicious dinner, would like, for dinner, steamed prawns, have dinner, would like to do, be good for, be sure. 高分句型： 1). After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit.（时间状语从句） 2). I'd like to have some strawberries because eating some strawberries is good for my health.（原因状语从句） 3). I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful!（宾语从句） 【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文中使用了After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit.时间状语从句等多种从句结构。 （四） Write at least 60 words about the topic "My favourite Food".（以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） Suggested questions： 1.What would you like to eat every day?  2. Is it your favourite food? 3.Why do you love it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite food I eat fruit every day. And fruit is my favourite food. It is delicious and it is good for our health. And it has many kinds, such as apples, pears, oranges, lemons and so on. I can eat what I'd like every day. When I eat fruit, I feel very happy. Just as a saying goes. "An apple a day keeps a doctor away. " Of all the fruit, I like apples best. Fruit is so pretty and cute. I like fruit best. 【详解】1.题干解读：题文要求以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，依据提示，应写出每天最想吃什么食物；它是你最喜欢的食物吗；你为什么喜欢它。 2.例文点评：动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。。 3.高分亮点： 短语：my favourite food；be good for；keeps … away；like…best。 句型：I can eat what I'd like every day.；When I eat fruit, I feel very happy.when引导的时间状语从句；I like fruit best. （五） Write at least 50 words on the topic "My Favourite Drink ". （以“最喜欢的饮料”为题，写一篇至少50个单词的短文，要求语句正确通，内容连贯，标点符号不占格） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】There are many kinds of drinks in the world, like juice, coke, milk, coffee tea and so on. And my favorite drink is tea. Tea is good for health. I drink tea every day. When I feel tired, I always drink a cup of tea, and I feel good immediately. When I drink tea, I would like to have some sweet or biscuits. That’s so nice. I like drinking tea. 【分析】本篇为话题作文，以“我最喜欢的饮料”为题，题材贴近生活，书写时要语句通顺，内容连贯。 【详解】题干解读：根据所给题目“My favorite drink”，确定文章用第一人称、时态一般现在时，书写时要注意人称时态统一，紧扣话题，适当增加合理的内容。 例文点评：.本例文结构严谨，布局合理。开篇用There be 句型介绍各种饮料，用and连接转入主题“My favorite drink is …”，上下文之间衔接流畅；正文部分讲述“什么时候喝茶、喝茶的好处” ；结尾用“I like drinking tea”点题，突出主题。 高分亮点：本例文衔接流畅，行文通顺，用很多地道的短语many kinds of…，and so on，feel tired，so nice，like doing sth和句式There be…，be good for…，when引导的从句，紧扣话题展开， 做到中心突出，内容完整。 （六） 假如你是 Mike，请你根据表格内容写一封电子邮件向你新认识的网友 Peter 介绍一下你的生活方式。 要求：词数80左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Diet Why Exercise Breakfast an egg, an apple, bread, milk 自由发挥 play volleyball for half an hour after school Lunch rice, meat, vegetables, bananas Supper noodles, fish, vegetables Dear Peter, I’m a student from China. My name is Mike. I’m glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think I have a healthy lifestyle. How about yours? Can you tell me? Yours, Mike 【答案】范文： Dear Peter, I’m a student from China. My name is Mike. I’m glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle. For breakfast, I usually have an egg, an apple, bread and a glass of  milk. I usually have some rice, meat, vegetables, bananas for lunch. It’s not good to eat too much for supper. So I have a bowl of noodles, fish, vegetables. We must pay atterntion to what we eat because it is closely related to our health. Besides, I often spend half an hour playing volleyball from Monday to Thursday after school. On Friday afternoon, I always go swimming. At the weekend, I often go to the park with my parents. We have a good time there. I think I have a healthy lifestyle. How about yours? Can you tell me? Yours, Mike 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于电子邮件； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出写电子邮件的目的； 第二步，阐述生活方式并说明理由； 第三步，询问对方的生活方式。 [亮点词汇] ①a bowl of一碗 ②from...to...从……到…… ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①It’s not good to eat too much for supper.（it作形式主语） ②We must pay atterntion to what we eat because it is closely related to our health.（原因状语从句） （七） Bill和Jack是你的朋友，他们有着不同的饮食习惯。请你根据表格内容，写一篇60词左右的短文，不计入总词数。 Name Breakfast Lunch Dinner Bill milk, two eggs and an apple chicken, salad fish Jack bread, strawberries hamburgers rice (ice-cream after dinner) Bill and Jack are my friends. They have different eating habits. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： Bill and Jack are my friends. They have different eating habits. Bill often has milk, two eggs and an apple for breakfast. But Jack likes eating bread and strawberries. At lunchtime, Bill has chicken and salad while Jack has hamburgers. During dinner, Bill only has fish as his main dish. However, Jack’s main dish is rice and he enjoys ice-cream after dinner. I think Bill has a healthier eating habit. Jack should eat more vegetables. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明主题； 第二步，分别列出两人的吃饭习惯； 第三步，总结。 [亮点词汇] ①while而 [高分句型] I think Bill has a healthier eating habit.（宾语从句，that省略） （八） 假如你是林刚，一个英文美食网站正在举行征文大赛，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英文写一篇参赛稿，介绍你和你的父母最喜欢的食物。 提示： 1. What’s your favorite food? 2. What food do your parents like best? 3. Do you like healthy food? Why? 要求： 1.句子通顺、语意连贯、语法正确； 2.包含提示中所有的内容，可适当发挥； 3.不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My name is Lin Gang. Today I want to talk about food. __________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My name is Lin Gang. Today I want to talk about food. My favourite food is ice-cream. It’s really nice. But my mother doesn’t want me to eat much. She doesn’t want me to get fat. My mother likes vegetables very much. She always has vegetable salad for dinner. My father’s favourite food is chicken. We all like healthy food, because it’s really good for us. And we want to eat well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明身份，直接表明主题； 第二步，分别介绍自己及父母喜欢的食物； 第三步，总结全文，表明自己及父母都喜欢健康的食物。 [亮点词汇] ①talk about谈论 ②want sb. to do sth.想要某人做某事 ③get fat变胖 ④be good for有益于 [高分句型] We all like healthy food, because it’s really good for us.（because引导原因状语从句） $