高频文体03 应用文写作（建议信）（知识清单）（北京专用）2027年高考英语一轮复习写作高分突破

该高中英语高考复习知识清单聚焦应用文写作（建议信）北京专用，系统涵盖文体概述（正式/非正式分类）、核心时态（一般现在时/将来时/情态动词）、写作要素（6大核心要素含例句示范）、必备词汇（4类功能词汇）、加分金句（分场景句式）、万能模板（正式/非正式）及必背满分范文（8篇真题同源示例）。 清单以表格呈现核心要素并标注写作要求与例句，分类整理校园问题、建议举措等词汇模块，设计分场景加分金句与适配模板，培养学生语言表达能力与逻辑思维品质。范文紧扣北京真题，如2023绿色校园活动建议，助力学生掌握提建议条理与实用表达，既方便学生自主构建写作框架，也为教师提供针对性复习指导工具，提升备考效率。

高频文体03 应用文写作（建议信）（北京专用） 建议信属于英文书信应用文，写信人向老师、校长、学生会、报社、朋友等提出改进建议，分为两类：一是正式建议：写给学校、校方、报社、负责人（校园改进、城市环保、图书馆优化等）；二是非正式建议：写给同学、好友（学习、出行、活动安排建议） 写作核心时态：一般现在时（现状问题）+ 一般将来时（建议带来的好处）+ 情态动词 should/could/might（提建议专用） 1.写作目的 客观指出现存问题，条理清晰提出可行改进建议，说明每条建议的好处，礼貌恳请对方采纳，结尾表达期待变化。 2. 核心要素 要素 写作要求 例句示范 ①自我介绍 + 写信缘由 表明身份，点明发现问题，说明来信目的是提建议 I am Li Hua, a student from Grade Two Class Three. I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions on our school library. 我是高二三班李华，写信为我校图书馆提几点实用建议。 ②点明现存问题（铺垫） 简单描述目前存在的不足，体现提建议的必要性 Now there are few new books and the reading room closes too early, which brings inconvenience to us students. 如今新书数量少，阅览室关门过早，给同学们带来不便。 ③分条给出具体建议（核心） 2–3 条清晰建议，每条建议具体、可落地，多用连接词 First/Besides/Last but not least First, the school should buy more latest magazines. Besides, we hope to extend the opening time to 8 p.m. 首先学校应采购更多最新杂志；此外希望开放时间延长至晚 8 点。 ④每条建议配套好处 解释采纳建议后能解决什么问题、带来哪些益处 If so, we can have more materials to study and make full use of spare time to read. 如此一来，我们能拥有更多学习资料，充分利用课余阅读。 ⑤补充配套可行方案（可选） 补充落地细节，增强建议说服力 We can also set up a book donation corner to enrich our collection without much cost. 我们还可设立图书捐赠角，低成本丰富藏书。 ⑥礼貌收尾 + 期待回复 语气委婉客气，表达期待改善，感谢对方阅读 I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your reply. 若您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激，期待您的回复。 （一）写信目的 & 提建议类 1. 提出建议 offer/put forward practical suggestions 2. 就…… 提建议 give advice on… 3. 考虑某人建议 take one’s advice into consideration 4. 采纳建议 adopt one’s suggestions 5. 依我看 in my opinion /from my point of view 6. 我认为…… 是个好主意 It would be a good idea to… 7. 我们应该…… We should/ought to… 8. 建议做某事 suggest doing sth. /advise sb. to do sth. （二）校园常见问题类 1. 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2. 校园食堂 school canteen 3. 校园图书馆 school library 4. 课外活动 after-school activities 5. 校园环境 campus environment 6. 体育设施 sports facilities 7. 作息时间表 school schedule 8. 垃圾分类 garbage classification 9. 作业负担 heavy homework burden （三）建议举措表达类 1. 2. 延长开放时间 extend opening hours 3. 增加活动种类 increase varieties of activities 4. 定期举办活动 hold activities regularly 5. 设立…… 角 set up a … corner 6. 组织志愿者 organize volunteers 7. 开展讲座 hold relevant lectures 8. 降低价格 lower the price 9. 增加绿植 plant more green plants （四）建议带来的好处类 1. 减轻负担 reduce study pressure 2. 开阔眼界 broaden our horizons 3. 丰富课余生活 enrich after-school life 4. 提高效率 improve study efficiency 5. 营造良好校园氛围 create a nice campus atmosphere 6. 增强环保意识 raise environmental awareness 7. 方便学生 bring convenience to students 【开头引入句】 1. I am Li Hua, a senior high student. I’m writing to offer several suggestions about our school’s after-school clubs. 我是高中生李华，写信就我校课后社团提几点建议。 2. Having noticed some problems in our canteen, I’m writing to share my advice with you. 注意到食堂存在一些问题，我写信向您提出我的建议。 3. To make our campus more beautiful, I’d like to put forward some practical ideas. 为让校园更美观，我想提出一些切实可行的想法。 4. I’m writing to give some advice on how to improve our reading environment. 我写信是为改善我们的阅读环境提供建议。 【中间论述句（问题 + 建议 + 好处）】 1. At present, there are not enough sports equipment for us. Therefore, we hope the school can buy more basketballs and badminton rackets. 目前体育器材不足，因此我们希望学校采购更多篮球、羽毛球拍。 2. First of all, it’s a good idea to hold a monthly reading sharing activity, which can encourage us to read more. 首先，每月举办读书分享会是个好主意，能鼓励我们多阅读。 3. Besides, we can set up a suggestion box at the school gate so students can voice opinions anytime. 此外，在校门口设立意见箱，方便同学们随时反馈想法。 4. If my suggestions are accepted, students will have more chances to relax and develop hobbies. 若我的建议被采纳，同学们会拥有更多放松、培养爱好的机会。 5. Last but not least, teachers can organize outdoor study tours to get us close to nature. 最后，老师可以组织户外研学，让我们亲近自然。 【结尾礼貌句】 1. I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account. 若您能考虑我的建议，我将万分感激。 2. Hope my advice will be helpful and bring some changes to our school. 希望我的建议能有所帮助，为校园带来改变。 3. I’m looking forward to seeing our school become better and better. 期待看到我们的校园越来越好。 4. Thank you for sparing your time to read my letter. 感谢您抽空阅读来信。 模板 1：非正式（写给好友 Jim，北京真题主流） Dear Jim, I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you ask me for advice on ______(主题). Here are my practical suggestions for you. At present, ______(简述现状 / 你的困扰). To make things better, I have two ideas. Firstly, you’d better ______(建议 1). In this way, you can ______(好处). Besides, it’s a good choice to ______(建议 2), which will help you ______(好处). Hopefully my advice will be of great use. If you have any other questions, feel free to tell me. Yours, Li Hua 模板 2：正式（写给校方 / 学生会 / 老师） Dear Sir/Madam/ Dear Teacher, I am Li Hua, a senior three student from Hongxing Middle School. I’m writing to put forward several constructive suggestions about ______(校园事项). Recently I’ve noticed that ______(现存问题), which brings inconvenience to us students. To solve the problem effectively, I have the following proposals. To begin with, the school ought to ______(建议 1). Only by doing so can we ______(好处). Furthermore, it would be wise to ______(建议 2). We can also ______(配套小安排). I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Thank you for your time and attention. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （1）给好友 Jim 策划绿色校园活动（2023 北京真题同源） 假定你是红星中学李华，好友 Jim 打算举办 “绿色北京” 社团活动，来信征求你的建议，请回信： 1. 推荐两种活动形式；2. 分别说明理由。 Dear Jim, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for advice on your Green Beijing activity. Here are my suggestions. Firstly, you can hold a waste handcraft competition. It teaches students to reuse rubbish and raises environmental awareness. Besides, a field trip to the city park to plant saplings is a great choice. It lets everyone get close to nature and put green ideas into practice. These activities are easy to carry out and full of fun. Feel free to tell me if you need further help. Yours, Li Hua （2）给好友推荐旅行路线（2017 北京高考真题） 假定你是李华，英国朋友 Jim 要来中国旅行，二选一：长江行 / 泰山游，回信： 1. 推荐线路；2. 理由；3. 祝愿 Dear Jim, What a joy to know you’re coming to China for a trip! Between the two routes, I’d recommend the tour to Mount Tai. Mount Tai carries profound traditional Chinese culture, with many ancient poems and legends left by historical figures. Climbing it allows you to feel the spirit of perseverance. In contrast, the Yangtze trip focuses more on natural scenery. Hope my advice works for you and wish you an unforgettable journey in China. Yours, Li Hua （3）给投稿好友建议写作内容（2024 北京真题） 假定你是李华，Jim 要给校报 Asia Today 投稿，介绍中国发展成就，向你征求建议： 1. 推荐写作内容；2. 说明理由 Dear Jim, I’m excited to hear you will write about China’s development for the school newspaper. Here are my suggestions. First, you can write about high-speed railways. As a symbol of China’s technology, they connect the whole country and greatly improve people’s travel efficiency. Besides, you may mention the space industry, which shows our constant progress in science. These topics are impressive and easy for foreign readers to understand. Looking forward to your excellent article. Yours, Li Hua （4）好友无法赴约，给出替代方案（2021 北京真题） 假定你是李华，和 Jim 本周末有约，你因故无法赴约，回信： 1. 致歉说明原因；2. 提出替代安排并说明理由 Dear Jim, I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go out with you this weekend. My grandma fell ill and my parents have to work, so I need to look after her at home. To make up for it, I suggest we meet next Sunday afternoon. We will have plenty of time to visit the city library and try traditional snacks there, without rushing. Once again, I apologize for the trouble. Please let me know whether the new time suits you. Yours, Li Hua （5）给学生会优化校园中国传统文化节 假定你是红星中学李华，学校即将举办中国传统文化节，给学生会写建议信： 1. 现有活动不足；2. 两条优化建议及好处 Dear Student Union, I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. I’m writing to offer suggestions to improve our Chinese Traditional Culture Festival. The current plan only includes stage performances with few interactive parts. Firstly, set up paper-cutting and tea art experience zones for students to take part in culture practice. Besides, invite foreign teachers to share their feelings about Chinese culture. We will prepare free craft materials for participants. I hope my practical ideas can be taken into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （6）给校领导优化低碳校园环保讲座 假定你是李华，学校将举办低碳校园讲座，给校领导提建议： 1. 现有安排缺陷；2. 增设互动环节与配套物料 Dear school leaders, I am Li Hua from Senior Three. I’m writing to put forward advice on the coming low-carbon campus lecture. The original lecture is just a speech without communication. I suggest adding a Q&A session for students to ask questions about green daily life. Meanwhile, print leaflets about low-carbon habits for all listeners. Volunteers can hand out leaflets before the lecture. I would appreciate it if you consider my proposals. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （7）给英语组完善英语演讲比赛 假定你是李华，学校英语演讲比赛主题 The Power of Reading，给英语组提建议： 1. 现有评分缺少详细点评；2. 增设赛后分享环节 Dear English Group, I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class Two. I’m writing to suggest improvements to our school English Speech Contest. At present, judges only mark scores without detailed guidance. I hope each speaker can get professional comments on pronunciation and logic after performing. Besides, arrange top contestants to share reading experience with classmates. These changes will help us make greater progress in oral English. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （8）给学生会升级中华诗词诵读大赛 假定你是李华，学校举办诗词诵读大赛，给学生会提优化建议： 1. 形式单一；2. 增设诗词小游戏、外教点评环节 Dear Student Union, I’m Li Hua, a poetry lover from Senior Three. I’m writing to enrich our Chinese Poetry Recitation Contest. Now the activity only has recitation performances, lacking fun interaction. I recommend adding poetry guessing games and inviting foreign teacher Mr. Smith to give comments for contestants. We will prepare tea for him during the contest. These adjustments will make the event more attractive and meaningful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua $高频文体03 应用文写作（建议信）（北京专用） 建议信属于英文书信应用文，写信人向老师、校长、学生会、报社、朋友等提出改进建议，分为两类：一是正式建议：写给学校、校方、报社、负责人（校园改进、城市环保、图书馆优化等）；二是非正式建议：写给同学、好友（学习、出行、活动安排建议） 写作核心时态：一般现在时（现状问题）+ 一般将来时（建议带来的好处）+ 情态动词 should/could/might（提建议专用） 1.写作目的 客观指出现存问题，条理清晰提出可行改进建议，说明每条建议的好处，礼貌恳请对方采纳，结尾表达期待变化。 2. 核心要素 要素 写作要求 例句示范 ①自我介绍 + 写信缘由 表明身份，点明发现问题，说明来信目的是提建议 I am Li Hua, a student from Grade Two Class Three. I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions on our school library. 我是高二三班李华，写信为我校图书馆提几点实用建议。 ②点明现存问题（铺垫） 简单描述目前存在的不足，体现提建议的必要性 Now there are few new books and the reading room closes too early, which brings inconvenience to us students. 如今新书数量少，阅览室关门过早，给同学们带来不便。 ③分条给出具体建议（核心） 2–3 条清晰建议，每条建议具体、可落地，多用连接词 First/Besides/Last but not least First, the school should buy more latest magazines. Besides, we hope to extend the opening time to 8 p.m. 首先学校应采购更多最新杂志；此外希望开放时间延长至晚 8 点。 ④每条建议配套好处 解释采纳建议后能解决什么问题、带来哪些益处 If so, we can have more materials to study and make full use of spare time to read. 如此一来，我们能拥有更多学习资料，充分利用课余阅读。 ⑤补充配套可行方案（可选） 补充落地细节，增强建议说服力 We can also set up a book donation corner to enrich our collection without much cost. 我们还可设立图书捐赠角，低成本丰富藏书。 ⑥礼貌收尾 + 期待回复 语气委婉客气，表达期待改善，感谢对方阅读 I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your reply. 若您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激，期待您的回复。 （一）写信目的 & 提建议类 1. 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2. 提出建议 ___________ 3. 就…… 提建议 ___________ 4. 考虑某人建议 ___________ 5. 采纳建议 ___________ 6. 依我看 ___________ 7. 我认为…… 是个好主意 ___________ 8. 我们应该…… ___________ 9. 建议做某事___________ （二）校园常见问题类 1. 2. 校园食堂 ___________ 3. 校园图书馆 ___________ 4. 课外活动 ___________ 5. 校园环境 ___________ 6. 体育设施 ___________ 7. 作息时间表 ___________ 8. 垃圾分类 ___________ 9. 作业负担 ___________ （三）建议举措表达类 1. 2. 延长开放时间 ___________ 3. 增加活动种类 ___________ 4. 定期举办活动 ___________ 5. 设立…… 角 ___________ 6. 组织志愿者 ___________ 7. 开展讲座 ___________ 8. 降低价格 ___________ 9. 增加绿植 ___________ （四）建议带来的好处类 1. 2. 减轻负担 ___________ 3. 开阔眼界 ___________ 4. 丰富课余生活 ___________ 5. 提高效率 ___________ 6. 营造良好校园氛围 ___________ 7. 增强环保意识 ___________ 8. 方便学生 ___________ 【开头引入句】 1. I am Li Hua, a senior high student. I’m writing to ______________________. 我是高中生李华，写信就我校课后社团提几点建议。 2. Having noticed some problems in our canteen, ______________________. 注意到食堂存在一些问题，我写信向您提出我的建议。 3. To make our campus more beautiful, ______________________. 为让校园更美观，我想提出一些切实可行的想法。 4. ______________________ how to improve our reading environment. 我写信是为改善我们的阅读环境提供建议。 【中间论述句（问题 + 建议 + 好处）】 1. At present, there are not enough sports equipment for us. Therefore, ______________________. 目前体育器材不足，因此我们希望学校采购更多篮球、羽毛球拍。 2. First of all, ______________________, which can encourage us to read more. 首先，每月举办读书分享会是个好主意，能鼓励我们多阅读。 3. Besides, ______________________ at the school gate so students can voice opinions anytime. 此外，在校门口设立意见箱，方便同学们随时反馈想法。 4. ______________________, students will have more chances to relax and develop hobbies. 若我的建议被采纳，同学们会拥有更多放松、培养爱好的机会。 5. Last but not least, ______________________ to get us close to nature. 最后，老师可以组织户外研学，让我们亲近自然。 【结尾礼貌句】 1. ______________________ if you could take my suggestions into account. 若您能考虑我的建议，我将万分感激。 2. Hope my advice will be helpful and ______________________. 希望我的建议能有所帮助，为校园带来改变。 3. I’m looking forward to seeing our school become better and better. 期待看到我们的校园越来越好。 4. Thank you for sparing your time to read my letter. 感谢您抽空阅读来信。 模板 1：非正式（写给好友 Jim，北京真题主流） Dear Jim, I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you ask me for advice on ______(主题). Here are my practical suggestions for you. At present, ______(简述现状 / 你的困扰). To make things better, I have two ideas. Firstly, you’d better ______(建议 1). In this way, you can ______(好处). Besides, it’s a good choice to ______(建议 2), which will help you ______(好处). Hopefully my advice will be of great use. If you have any other questions, feel free to tell me. Yours, Li Hua 模板 2：正式（写给校方 / 学生会 / 老师） Dear Sir/Madam/ Dear Teacher, I am Li Hua, a senior three student from Hongxing Middle School. I’m writing to put forward several constructive suggestions about ______(校园事项). Recently I’ve noticed that ______(现存问题), which brings inconvenience to us students. To solve the problem effectively, I have the following proposals. To begin with, the school ought to ______(建议 1). Only by doing so can we ______(好处). Furthermore, it would be wise to ______(建议 2). We can also ______(配套小安排). I would highly appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Thank you for your time and attention. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （1）给好友 Jim 策划绿色校园活动（2023 北京真题同源） 假定你是红星中学李华，好友 Jim 打算举办 “绿色北京” 社团活动，来信征求你的建议，请回信： 1. 推荐两种活动形式；2. 分别说明理由。 （2）给好友推荐旅行路线（2017 北京高考真题） 假定你是李华，英国朋友 Jim 要来中国旅行，二选一：长江行 / 泰山游，回信： 1. 推荐线路；2. 理由；3. 祝愿 （3）给投稿好友建议写作内容（2024 北京真题） 假定你是李华，Jim 要给校报 Asia Today 投稿，介绍中国发展成就，向你征求建议： 1. 推荐写作内容；2. 说明理由 （4）好友无法赴约，给出替代方案（2021 北京真题） 假定你是李华，和 Jim 本周末有约，你因故无法赴约，回信： 1. 致歉说明原因；2. 提出替代安排并说明理由 （5）给学生会优化校园中国传统文化节 假定你是红星中学李华，学校即将举办中国传统文化节，给学生会写建议信： 1. 现有活动不足；2. 两条优化建议及好处 （6）给校领导优化低碳校园环保讲座 假定你是李华，学校将举办低碳校园讲座，给校领导提建议： 1. 现有安排缺陷；2. 增设互动环节与配套物料 （7）给英语组完善英语演讲比赛 假定你是李华，学校英语演讲比赛主题 The Power of Reading，给英语组提建议： 1. 现有评分缺少详细点评；2. 增设赛后分享环节 （8）给学生会升级中华诗词诵读大赛 假定你是李华，学校举办诗词诵读大赛，给学生会提优化建议： 1. 形式单一；2. 增设诗词小游戏、外教点评环节 $