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(9月南京零模)假定你是李华，外教]anet想 融入其他学科的内容来丰富英语课堂教学，现 征求同学们的意见。请给她写一封邮件，内容 包括： (1)你的想法；(2)说明理由。 Dear Janet, I'm glad to hear you are trying to enrich your class by integrating other subjects.I totally support this initiative (and suggest combining history and art into your English lessons.(寒暄+直截了当的想法) For history,we can discuss ancient Chinese civilizations in English,learning words like "dynasty"while understanding cultural backgrounds.In art,describing famous paintings or talking about color theory helps us practice descriptive language naturally.These methods make English learning more vivid and meaningful,as we apply language to subjects we care about,rather than just memorizing in isolation ()It will definitely boost our learning enthusiasm! (理由：是什么？如何做？举例！有什么意义？) I sincerely hope you can take my above perspectives into favorable consideration.Keenly(热t切地)anticipate your brand-new multi-disciplinary(多 学科的)English class! Yours, Li Hua Dear Janet, Learning that you are planning to integrate other subjects into our English classes,I whole-heartedly embrace this idea. First,,this approach can make our English learning more engaging(有吸引力的) and enriching.For instance,when studying English through history materials,we can acquire the language from historical contexts,which is far more convincing than simply memorizing grammar rules or being fed vocabulary or phrases.Second, this practice enhances our comprehensive abilities.Specifically,we can polish up our linguistic ability while also deepening our understanding of other disciplines )For example,not only can science articles in English boost our reading skills but also expand our scientific knowledge. I sincerely hope you can take my above perspectives into favorable consideration.Keenly anticipate your brand-new multi-disciplinary English class! Best regards, Li Hua The summer I turned 16,my father gave me his 69 Chevy Malibu convertible( )Beautifully repainted cherry red with V-8 engine--it was a gift wasted on me at that age.What did I know about classic cars?The important thing was that Hannah and I could drive around Tucson with the top down. Hannah was my best friend,a year younger but much taller,almost five foot ten."Hannah's a beautiful girl,"my mother always said.And sure enough,that summer she signed with a modeling agency.She was already doing runway work. A month after my birthday,Hannah and.I went to the movies.On the way home,we stopped at the McDonald's.drive-through,putting the French fries on the sent between us to share."Let's ride around a while,"I said.It was a clear night,oven-warm,full moon casting low over the desert.Making a turn too fast,I hit a patch of dirt and the back of the car slid to the other side.I then drove through a neighbor's landscape wall and knocked into a full-grown palm )The front wheels came to rest half way up the tree trunk. There were French fries on the floor,and the dash(仪表盘).An impossible amount of blood was on Hannah's lace.Some passers-by took us in separate ambulances.In the ER,my parents spoke quietly:"Best plastic surgeon in the city--but it is more likely to be the end of her modeling career..." We'd been wearing lap belts,but the car didn't have shoulder bands.I'd broken my check bone on the steering wheel;Hannah's forehead had split wide open on the dash.What would I say to her? When her mother,Sharon,came into my hospital room,I started to cry, preparing myself for her anger.She sat beside me and took my hand."I rear- ended(追尾)my best friend when I was your age,.”she said.“I destroyed her car and mine.""I'm so sorry."I said,knowing Sharon was trying her best to comfort me and helping me out of my terrible sense of guilt and self-blame. "What matters most is that you're both alive.Hamah and I will forgive She said. Forgive (Sharon and Hannah Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharol's forgiveness Normal life (Hannah and I);forgiveness Version "What matters most is that you're both alive.Hannah and I will forgive you." she said.Upon hearing the comforting words,I hugged her tightly,tears blurring (模糊了)my eyes..A burst of warmth flooded over me,for I was moved by her kindness and forgiveness.I plucked up enough courage(鼓起勇气)to request her to take me to Hannah's ward ()Seeing me getting close to her bed on the wheelchair pushed by her mother,Hannah asked eagerly,Are you all right?" Tears of joy and relief poured down our cheeks.I held Hannah's hands,expressing my sincere apologies and appreciation. Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon's forgiveness.We stayed friends throughout high school and college.Hannah gave up her modeling job and found a better one and we got back to be in the same car together as before.As time went by,Hannah's scars were so faint (that almost no one else would notice them.However,I could still see it below her hairline in the sunlight.For me, not only was it a scar,but also a sign which holds the essence of grace. Version 2 "What matters most is that you're both alive.Hannah and I will forgive you."she said. Overwhelmed by the sense of self-accusation and regret,I choked with tremendous guilt,"If only I had been more cautious!I couldn't forgive myself for the harm caused to Hannah." Aware of my desperation,Sharon took me in her arms,patting me on the back.I gathered enough courage to request her to take me to Hannah's ward.Seeing me getting close to her bed on the wheelchair pushed by her mother,Hannah squeezed out (her voice with her eyes flooded with worry,"Are you all right?"Tears of joy and relief poured down our cheeks. Hannah and I returned to our normal life due to Sharon's forgiveness.Owing to the plastic surgeon,Hannah's wound healed well,leaving only a faint scar that was barely noticeable. With guilt and regret serving as the reminder of my actions,I swore to be more cautious and responsible in the future.We devoted countless hours to engaging in heartfelt conversations, sharing laughter,and offering mutual (support.Our friendship deepened in the fires of hardship and forgiveness.What remained vividly in my mind was her eyes with love,kindness and genuinely,her forgiveness! 1、他脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容，眼睛兴奋而闪闪发光。 2、她伤心地低下了头，努力忍住眼泪。 3、他站在那里，双臂紧紧交叉，目光中燃烧着难以言表的怒火。 4、满心焦虑的我，感觉如坐针毡。 5、这个消息让她完全惊呆了，一个字也说不出来。 6、泪水盈满她的双眼，她表达了衷心的感激之情。 7、她羞愧地低下了头，几乎要哭出来了。 8、躺在床上，他辗转反侧，内心备受良心的折磨，纠结着是否要归还收银 员多找的零钱。 句型一：A sense(wave/flush./ripple)of+情绪n flooded over(swept over/surged through/seized)sb 仿写1：一种复杂的内疚感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的判断是否过于 草率。 A complex sense of guilt flooded over Kevin,wondering if his judgment had been too hasty. 句型二：Done by sth,sb did sth 仿写2：被他们的热情和善良所感动，我走近他们，表达了我的钦佩和尊 重 o Touched by their passion and kindness,I approached them and expressed my admiration and respect. 句型三：So情绪adj.was sb that+从句 仿写3：凯文感到非常羞愧，他能感觉到鲜血涌上他的脸。 So ashamed was Kevin that he could feel the blood rush to his face. 句型四：情绪adj.and情绪adj,sb did sth 仿写4：感到沮丧和挫败，汤姆在考试失败后独自坐在教室里。 Frustrated and defeated,Tom sat alone in the classroom after failing the exam. 句型五：Sb said(replied/answered)ina+情绪形容词+voice(tone),“.” 仿写5：“别担心，”冈特用安抚的语气说，“我会想出办法的。” "Don't worry,"he said in a reassuring tone,"I'll figure something out." 句型六：It was+被强调部分+that… 仿写6：直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。 It was not until then that I really understood "don't judge a book by its cover". 句型七：No sooner..than…/Hardly...when(部分倒装) 仿写7：直到我们分手我才意识到冈特不仅是我的救命恩人，也是我的好朋友。 Hardly had we parted when I realized that Gunter had not only been a lifesaver but also a wonderful friend. 句型八：It occurred to./dawned on sb that.·(感悟内容) 仿写8：凯文突然意识到，生活不仅仅是激动人心的；它还涉及勇气、责任和理解。 It dawned on Kevin that life held more than just excitement;it also involved courage, responsibility and understanding 句型一：with+宾语+宾语补足语 练习：他冲出了房间，心怦怦直跳，满脸通红。 He rushed out of the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing 句型二：情绪名词1 gave way to情绪名词2 练习：埃勒斯最终成功地将这只动物哄骗到他身边。紧张和恐惧让位于喜悦。 Ehlers eventually succeeded in coaxing the animal to him.Nervousness and fear gave way to joy. 句型五：Adj.as主+谓，sb did sth 练习：虽然简很虚弱，但她加快了沿着溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。 Weak as Jane was,she picked up speed along the stream to find the way back. 句型六：Having done sth,sb did sth 练习：写完报告后，他关掉了电脑准备休息。 Having finished writing the report,he turned off the computer and prepared to rest. 句型九：With growing+情绪n,Sb did sth 练习：随着焦虑的增加，我大声喊道：“救命 1” With growing anxiety,I shouted at the top of my lungs,"Help!" 句型十：无灵主语句（表示时间、地点、天气等无生命词作主语) 练习：我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。 Her face lit up/brightened when I gave her the present. 句型十一：主语+did,(+…)and did,only to do(表示出乎意料的结果) 练习：我跳下车，疯了似地冲向机器，把我的卡插了进去，却看到了一条信息：“出错 了，对不起。” I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:"Out of order.Sorry.' 开心 He soon returned,and his whole face lit up Laughter lingered around the room.(笑声在房间里萦绕) At the sight of the basket of popcorn,his parents were also seized with joy(非常高兴) A ripple of excitement ran through them.(他们感到一阵阵激动。) Hearing this,everybody was wild with joy.(欣喜若狂) 伤心 I dragged my heavy legs with a sinking heart(心情沉重)and moved out of the lecture hall. On entering the classroom,disappointment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed down my cheeks I hung my head in sadness,great sorrow clouding my eyes(我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤 笼罩着我的双眼) 害怕 Extremely frightened/panicked,.I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating(惊恐不己，我 觉得两腿发抖，手心冒汗) He was rooted to the ground,frozen with fear(吓呆了) 紧张 When I was standing backstage,.nervousness/tension came flooding over me(紧张感席 卷全身) The hall crowded with audience made me even more uneasy(不安的)，my heart pounding hard and my palms sweating. When my name was called,I could feel butterflies in my stomach(我感到心里忐忑不安) /I was on pins and needles. 感动 Tears filling her eyes,she offered her heartfelt gratitude. All those present to listen to her sad story were moved to tears. With tears streaming down her face,she... 亲情类 1.The Mother hugged the twins tightly,whispering,"This is the best surprise in the world!" 2.Only then did I realize that how much my mom loved me. 3.It occurred to me that family love is the greatest gift in life. 4.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family 5.It was at this very moment that the frozen ice between two generations-melted down into a warm stream flowing into their hearts. 6.The early sunlight streaming in,laughter lingered around the room and happiness floated in the air/the whole family was bathed in happiness and love. 助人类 有时候，我们小小的行动可以给别人带来很大的不同。 Sometimes our small action can make a great difference to others 2.我突然想到，一个简单的举动可以让世界变得更美好。 It dawned on me that a simple act could make the world so much better. 3.虽然外面的风还在呼啸，但一股暖流涌上心头。 Although the wind still screamed outside,a warm current rose in my heart. 个人成长类逆境、，积极向上) 1.在你身发生了什公笄不量要，重要的是你如何应对。 It's not what happens to you,but how you react to it that matters. 2.直面困难，努力。你终将制造奇迹。 Be brave,rise to setbacks,and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles. 3恐惧缔造不了未来，但希望可以。 Fear never builds the future,but hope does. 4,成功之路并不平坦。它充满了挑战和困难。The journey to success is not smooth.It is full of challenges and difficulties.. 脱困逃生类 .茗么元重逃生啊！What a,narrow escape! 2每当我同想起那次惊心动魄的经历，我仍然会感到一种强烈的恐惧感。 I would still feel a strong sense of fear wheneyer I looked back on the thrilling experience. 3.事实证明，只要我时保持冷静，任何困境都是有出路的。 It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm. 4我从来没有陷入过这样危险的境地。这段经历深深地刻在了我的脑海里，提醒我要尊重自然。 Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation.The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect the nature.