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该高中英语讲义聚焦高考概要写作核心考点，依据“总—分—总”文章结构梳理框架，通过谋篇布局分析、关键信息提取、句式优化升级、连句成篇检查等环节，帮助学生掌握要点概括与逻辑串联方法，体现复习教学的系统性和针对性。 该讲义特色在于结合高考命题规律设计分层训练，通过提取关键词、同义替换、句式重组等活动培养学生语言能力和思维品质，如引导学生用“not only...but also...”优化表达提升概括准确性，确保有限时间内高效突破难点，为教师把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供有力支撑。

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Benefits of Green Spaces We all know the value of taking a walk in the fresh spring weather. It allows your mind to relax and forget about the problems in everyday life. Studies have commonly shown the benefits of being around green spaces, including gardens, urban parks and forests. But did you know that being in contact with these natural surroundings during childhood could positively impact your mental health as an adult? A study by the Institute for Global Health surveyed 3，600 people from all over Europe. The all-adult study gave participants a questionnaire (问卷) on how frequently they used natural spaces during childhood—for example, playing in a garden or riding a bike in the park. They were also asked about the importance they put on using such places. Volunteers were then given a psychological test, which included a variety of questionnaires and problem-solving activities, to analyze their nervousness and feelings of depression within a four-week period. The results consistently showed that the people who were more exposed to natural spaces had higher mental health scores compared to those with lower childhood exposure—as did those who attached higher importance to using green spaces. The study's assistant, Wilma Smith, wrote that the results “show the importance of childhood exposure to natural spaces for the development of a nature-appreciating attitude and a healthy psychological state in adulthood”. She also stressed the importance of “recognizing the implications of growing up in environments with limited opportunities for exposure to nature”. According to the study, 73 percent of Europe's population only has limited access to natural spaces.So we call on policymakers to improve the availability of natural spaces for children. While this study was based in Europe, a lack of green space can affect anyone, anywhere.So remember to make time to expose yourself to nature, as your mental health is just as important as the physical one. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 　谋篇布局，分析框架 本文体裁是说明文，围绕“绿色空间”的好处展开，文章结构为“总—分—总”式，共分五段，先引出话题，再通过一项研究强调童年时期接触大自然的重要性，最后呼吁政策制定者改善自然空间的可用性，并强调亲近自然。 第一段 引出话题——在自然环境中散步对心理健康的好处 第二段 介绍一项研究发现，童年时期接触自然环境对成年心理健康有积极影响 第三段 描述研究过程，包括问卷调查和心理测试 第四段 总结研究结果，强调童年时期接触自然的重要性，呼吁政策制定者增加儿童接触自然环境的机会 第五段 呼吁人们亲近自然，重视心理健康 　提取信息，要点摘录 【第一段】 allows your mind to relax；Studies have commonly shown the benefits of being around green spaces [关键词] relax__mind,__benefits,__green__spaces 【第二段】 being in contact with these natural surroundings during childhood could positively impact your mental health as an adult; A study by the Institute for Global Health surveyed 3，600 people from all over Europe [关键词] childhood__exposure__to__natural__spaces,__positive__impact__on__adult__mental__health,__European__study 【第三段】 people who were more exposed to natural spaces had higher mental health scores; development of a nature -appreciating attitude [关键词] higher__mental__health__scores,__nature-appreciating__attitude 【第四段】 call on policymakers to improve the availability of natural spaces for children [关键词] call__on__policymakers,__improve__natural__space__availability 【第五段】 make time to expose yourself to nature; mental health is just as important as the physical one [关键词] personal__exposure__to__nature,__mental__health 　遣词造句，句式升级 根据文章体裁、主旨大意及各段要点，高度概括关键信息，剔除细节，用简练语言重组内容，通过同义词替换、句式优化等方式升级表达。 1.绿色空间给人们带来益处，有助于他们放松心情。 Green spaces bring people benefits and help__them__relax__their__minds. 2.一项欧洲研究表明，童年时期接触自然有利于成年后的心理健康。 A European study shows that childhood__exposure__to__nature can benefit adult mental health. 3.该研究呼吁政策制定者增加儿童接触自然空间的机会。 The study calls on policymakers to increase children's__access__to__natural__spaces. 4.所有人都应该接触自然，并关注心理健康。 Everyone should expose__themselves__to__nature and pay attention to their mental health. 5.用“not only...but also...”句式提升表达的逻辑性，优化句1。 Green__spaces__not__only__bring__people__benefits__but__also__help__them__relax__their__minds. 6.用confirm替换 show，boost替换 benefit，增强表达的正式性，优化句 2 A__European__study__confirms__that__childhood__exposure__to__nature__can__boost__adult__mental__health. 7.用urge替换 call on，enhance替换increase，更贴合说明文的表达风格，优化句 3 The__study__urges__policymakers__to__enhance__children's__access__to__natural__spaces. 8.用people all over the world替换 everyone，扩大覆盖面，优化句 4 People__all__over__the__world__should__expose__themselves__to__nature__and__pay__attention__to__their__mental__health. 　连句成篇，检查要点 选用适配的连接词串联逻辑，确保要点无遗漏，最后检查字数是否在 60 词左右、有无语法错误、表达是否简洁准确。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： Green spaces not only bring people benefits but also help them relax their minds. (要点1)A European study confirms that childhood exposure to nature can boost adult mental health. (要点2)It also urges policymakers to enhance children's access to natural spaces. (要点3)Therefore, people all over the world should expose themselves to nature and pay attention to their mental health. (要点4) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $