内容正文:
选择性必修第一册 Unit 1 People of Achievement 人物介绍
话题总览
写作任务
①单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:人物推荐信细分场景:向国外研学机构推荐杰出科学家;向组委会推荐功勋人物参与评选
②高考写作大类归类归属:书信类应用文,归属「家国情怀、科技人物、榜样精神」
③高考命题切入点一句话点明常以人物评选、研学交流、国际文化交流为背景,介绍人物生平成就与精神品质,阐明推荐理由,语言正式得体。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁稳定,全国卷全国统考真题未单独考查人物推荐信
近三年(2024-2026)新高考全国 I、II 卷书面表达真题:没有考查人物推荐信;人物推荐信仅频繁出现在各地地市模拟联考试卷中。全国卷应用文主流考查建议信、告知信、咨询信。本单元话题全国卷高考书面表达较少直接命题,但读后续写、阅读理解大量选用杰出科研人物传记素材。
2. 命题形式固定:提纲式命题
全国卷高考应用文统一采用提纲式命题。题目固定给出 2-3 个明确写作要点,情景完整,包含四要素:作者身份(李华)、读者对象(赛事组委会、外国研学负责人)、写作目的、内容要点(人物事迹、精神品质、推荐理由)。
3. 三大贴合命题素材
- 科技科研类(最高频):钱学森、屠呦呦、袁隆平、南仁东等大国科学家;航天、农业、医学领域杰出工作者
- 文化传承类:文物保护工作者、非遗传承人、基础学科开拓者
- 青年成长类:新时代青年榜样、扎根基层的奋斗者
三大考查维度
(1)语言能力(阅卷核心得分点)
① 书信格式规范:称呼、开篇引入、结尾客套、落款标准写法;区分正式(写给组委会、外事机构)、非正式(外国友人交流)两类语气
② 逻辑表达分层
开头:引入活动背景,阐明写信推荐人物的目的
主体:分层介绍人物核心事迹、科研贡献、精神品质,逐条说明推荐理由,使用衔接词(To begin with, Besides, What’s more)搭建行文框架
结尾:表达期待,期待对方能够认可人选,可补充邀约交流相关表述
③ 句式梯度
基础:简单介绍句型(He made great achievements in… / He devoted himself to…)
高分升级:定语从句、非谓语动词、倒装结构、高级人物描写句式(It is his devotion to science that makes him stand out. / Devoted to the research, he never gave up despite difficulties.)
④ 词汇得体性
选用科研、奋斗、家国担当相关地道词汇,表述客观庄重,贴合人物评选、中外交流正式语境。
(2)思维素养(命题深层导向)
1. 概括梳理能力:精简梳理人物关键经历与重大贡献,杜绝流水式记叙,突出核心亮点
2. 文化价值意识:挖掘人物身上坚守理想、攻坚克难、心怀家国的精神内核,传递榜样力量
(3)文化意识(立德树人考查方向)
立足家国科创人物素材,弘扬科学家精神,树立投身科研、服务社会的理想信念,厚植文化自信。
高频出题设问形式
1. 你校开展 “时代杰出人物” 评选活动,请写信向组委会推荐一位科研工作者。
2. 外教计划开展中外科学家主题交流活动,请写信推荐一位中国科学家参与分享。
3. 研学项目面向中学生征集榜样人物素材,请写信推荐一位杰出人物并说明理由。
4. 海外文化交流社团征集中国榜样人物介绍文稿,请你写推荐信介绍一位大国工匠。
第一步:锁定单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:向赛事组委会 / 研学机构写信,推荐一位杰出科研人物,介绍人物事迹,阐述推荐理由
2. 文体:英文推荐信(应用文);特点:格式规范、语言庄重正式、事迹简洁凝练、推荐理由有理有据
3. 写作对象:赛事组委会、中外研学活动负责人,语气正式严谨,兼具家国情怀表达
4. 核心写作要点
① 人物核心科研经历与重大贡献;② 人物身上坚守理想、攻坚克难的精神品质;③ 推荐该人物参与评选 / 文化交流的理由
第二步:三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1 段)
礼貌问候,表明写信目的,介绍本次人物评选 / 研学交流活动背景,点明准备推荐的杰出人物。
2. 主体分层(3 段核心)
第一层:简要介绍人物关键人生经历与标志性科研成就,拒绝流水式记叙。
第二层:深度挖掘人物精神品质,结合科研历程分析其家国担当、坚持不懈的可贵品质。
第三层:阐明推荐理由,说明该人物能够契合活动主题,具备榜样示范价值。
3. 结尾收尾(1 段)
表达期盼,希望对方考虑推荐人选,预祝活动顺利开展,首尾呼应收束全文。
【基础版范文(适配英语薄弱学生,句式简单、要点齐全)】
【高分拓展范文(适配中优等生,复合句、非谓语、逻辑递进、立意升华)】
板块 1:开篇・说明写信目的(背景 + 点明来意)
1. I’m writing to recommend an outstanding scientist for your themed activity.
我写信为本次主题活动推荐一位杰出科学家。
2. Learning that you are looking for role models for students, I’m writing to put forward my recommendation.
得知你们正在为学生寻找榜样人物,我特此写信进行推荐。
3. Knowing you will hold a science sharing activity, I would like to recommend Yuan Longping to you.
了解到你们将要举办科研分享活动,我想向您推荐袁隆平。
板块 2:主体・介绍人物事迹与推荐理由(客观正式,突出人物价值)
1. Devoted to agricultural research for decades, he has achieved great progress in hybrid rice.
他数十年深耕农业研究,在杂交水稻领域取得重大成就。
2. What impresses me most is that he never gave up even when meeting countless difficulties.
最打动我的是,即便遭遇无数困难,他也从未放弃。
3. It is his devotion to food security that makes him a perfect role model for teenagers.
他对粮食安全的坚守,使其成为青少年绝佳的榜样。
4. I believe his life story can inspire students to stick to their dreams.
我相信他的人生经历能够激励学生坚守理想。
5. Not only can his scientific achievements broaden students’ horizons, but his spirit can also encourage teenagers.
他的科研成就既能拓宽学生视野,其精神也能够鼓舞青年学子。
板块 3:结尾・表达期盼,期待采纳推荐
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
如若您能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
2. I hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish your activity a great success.
希望我的推荐能有所帮助,预祝活动圆满举办。
3. I am looking forward to your reply.
期待您的回复。
【标准写作模板】
模板①(简洁标准版)
Dear ______,
Learning that you are looking for outstanding role models, I’m writing to recommend ________ for your activity.
In my opinion, ________ is an ideal choice for the following reasons:
I hope you will take my recommendation into consideration, and I would be glad to offer further information if needed.
Wish your activity a great success.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②(分层高分版)
Dear ______,
I’m glad to learn that you will hold a themed activity to invite outstanding figures to share stories. I’m writing to recommend ________ to you.
Here are my reasons. First, ______________. Then, __________________. Besides, _________________.
I believe his stories will inspire students greatly. I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1. 核心写作注意事项
定位:介绍人物、阐述推荐理由,语气庄重正式,客观评价人物事迹,避免主观情绪化表达
首段写作要点:交代活动背景,简短说明写信目的,不要长篇大论自我介绍
主体段写作要点
① 人物事迹搭配精神品质,事迹简洁凝练,不单独罗列零散信息
② 先介绍人物成就,再提炼精神品质,多角度支撑推荐理由
③ 紧扣活动主题,突出人物榜样价值,贴合中学生研学、评选活动场景
尾段写作要点:总结推荐优势,表达期盼,预祝活动顺利开展
2. 写作流程导图
说明写信目的(交代活动背景)
分层介绍人物事迹、精神品质,阐述推荐理由
总结推荐价值,期待对方考虑人选,表达美好祝愿
【典例1】
你校英语俱乐部计划举办一场以“A Scientist I Respect Most”为题的演讲比赛,请你写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 科学成就;
3. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Scientist I Respect Most
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【典例2】
假定你是中学生李华,你校正在举办以“我最喜爱的科学家”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面要点提示,描述你所喜爱的科学家,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的科学家;
2.喜欢的原因;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Scientist
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. 词性转换(推荐信高频词变形)
1. recommend → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. contribute → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
3. devote → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. 句子改写升级
原句:Yuan Longping devotes himself to rice research. He has greatly raised rice output.
① 定语从句合并复合句:________________________________________
② 非谓语动词改写:________________________________________
原句:I think he is a perfect role model for teenagers.
③ 委婉推荐句式改写:________________________________________
3. 汉译英(推荐信标准句式)
1. 我写信向组委会推荐袁隆平作为本次活动的杰出人物。
2. 他数十年扎根农田,为保障国家粮食安全做出巨大贡献。
3. 我希望您能够认真考虑我的推荐。
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选择性必修第一册 Unit 1 People of Achievement 人物介绍
话题总览
写作任务
①单元核心话题拆解本单元核心写作任务:人物推荐信细分场景:向国外研学机构推荐杰出科学家;向组委会推荐功勋人物参与评选
②高考写作大类归类归属:书信类应用文,归属「家国情怀、科技人物、榜样精神」
③高考命题切入点一句话点明常以人物评选、研学交流、国际文化交流为背景,介绍人物生平成就与精神品质,阐明推荐理由,语言正式得体。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁稳定,全国卷全国统考真题未单独考查人物推荐信
近三年(2024-2026)新高考全国 I、II 卷书面表达真题:没有考查人物推荐信;人物推荐信仅频繁出现在各地地市模拟联考试卷中。全国卷应用文主流考查建议信、告知信、咨询信。本单元话题全国卷高考书面表达较少直接命题,但读后续写、阅读理解大量选用杰出科研人物传记素材。
2. 命题形式固定:提纲式命题
全国卷高考应用文统一采用提纲式命题。题目固定给出 2-3 个明确写作要点,情景完整,包含四要素:作者身份(李华)、读者对象(赛事组委会、外国研学负责人)、写作目的、内容要点(人物事迹、精神品质、推荐理由)。
3. 三大贴合命题素材
- 科技科研类(最高频):钱学森、屠呦呦、袁隆平、南仁东等大国科学家;航天、农业、医学领域杰出工作者
- 文化传承类:文物保护工作者、非遗传承人、基础学科开拓者
- 青年成长类:新时代青年榜样、扎根基层的奋斗者
三大考查维度
(1)语言能力(阅卷核心得分点)
① 书信格式规范:称呼、开篇引入、结尾客套、落款标准写法;区分正式(写给组委会、外事机构)、非正式(外国友人交流)两类语气
② 逻辑表达分层
开头:引入活动背景,阐明写信推荐人物的目的
主体:分层介绍人物核心事迹、科研贡献、精神品质,逐条说明推荐理由,使用衔接词(To begin with, Besides, What’s more)搭建行文框架
结尾:表达期待,期待对方能够认可人选,可补充邀约交流相关表述
③ 句式梯度
基础:简单介绍句型(He made great achievements in… / He devoted himself to…)
高分升级:定语从句、非谓语动词、倒装结构、高级人物描写句式(It is his devotion to science that makes him stand out. / Devoted to the research, he never gave up despite difficulties.)
④ 词汇得体性
选用科研、奋斗、家国担当相关地道词汇,表述客观庄重,贴合人物评选、中外交流正式语境。
(2)思维素养(命题深层导向)
1. 概括梳理能力:精简梳理人物关键经历与重大贡献,杜绝流水式记叙,突出核心亮点
2. 文化价值意识:挖掘人物身上坚守理想、攻坚克难、心怀家国的精神内核,传递榜样力量
(3)文化意识(立德树人考查方向)
立足家国科创人物素材,弘扬科学家精神,树立投身科研、服务社会的理想信念,厚植文化自信。
高频出题设问形式
1. 你校开展 “时代杰出人物” 评选活动,请写信向组委会推荐一位科研工作者。
2. 外教计划开展中外科学家主题交流活动,请写信推荐一位中国科学家参与分享。
3. 研学项目面向中学生征集榜样人物素材,请写信推荐一位杰出人物并说明理由。
4. 海外文化交流社团征集中国榜样人物介绍文稿,请你写推荐信介绍一位大国工匠。
第一步:锁定单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:向赛事组委会 / 研学机构写信,推荐一位杰出科研人物,介绍人物事迹,阐述推荐理由
2. 文体:英文推荐信(应用文);特点:格式规范、语言庄重正式、事迹简洁凝练、推荐理由有理有据
3. 写作对象:赛事组委会、中外研学活动负责人,语气正式严谨,兼具家国情怀表达
4. 核心写作要点
① 人物核心科研经历与重大贡献;② 人物身上坚守理想、攻坚克难的精神品质;③ 推荐该人物参与评选 / 文化交流的理由
第二步:三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1 段)
礼貌问候,表明写信目的,介绍本次人物评选 / 研学交流活动背景,点明准备推荐的杰出人物。
2. 主体分层(3 段核心)
第一层:简要介绍人物关键人生经历与标志性科研成就,拒绝流水式记叙。
第二层:深度挖掘人物精神品质,结合科研历程分析其家国担当、坚持不懈的可贵品质。
第三层:阐明推荐理由,说明该人物能够契合活动主题,具备榜样示范价值。
3. 结尾收尾(1 段)
表达期盼,希望对方考虑推荐人选,预祝活动顺利开展,首尾呼应收束全文。
【基础版范文(适配英语薄弱学生,句式简单、要点齐全)】
Dear Organizing Committee,
I’m writing to recommend Yuan Longping as the model scientist for your activity. He is widely known as the Father of Hybrid Rice.
First, Yuan Longping made great achievements in rice research. He developed hybrid rice and greatly increased rice output. Second, he kept working in the fields for decades, never giving up even when meeting difficulties. Besides, he cared about food safety of the whole nation. He devoted his whole life to helping Chinese people have enough food to eat.
I believe he is a perfect choice. I hope you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高分拓展范文(适配中优等生,复合句、非谓语、逻辑递进、立意升华)】
Dear Organizing Committee,
Learning that you are holding a themed activity to invite outstanding scientists to share stories, I’m writing to recommend Yuan Longping, a devoted agricultural scientist.
Devoted to rice research all his life, Yuan Longping successfully developed hybrid rice, which has greatly raised rice production and solved food problems for millions of people. Despite countless failures in research, he never lost heart and stuck to his research work. What impresses me most is that he always put farmers and national food security at the top of his list.
Not only can Yuan Longping’s scientific achievements inspire students, but his spirit of perseverance and responsibility can also set a good example for teenagers. I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.days.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
板块 1:开篇・说明写信目的(背景 + 点明来意)
1. I’m writing to recommend an outstanding scientist for your themed activity.
我写信为本次主题活动推荐一位杰出科学家。
2. Learning that you are looking for role models for students, I’m writing to put forward my recommendation.
得知你们正在为学生寻找榜样人物,我特此写信进行推荐。
3. Knowing you will hold a science sharing activity, I would like to recommend Yuan Longping to you.
了解到你们将要举办科研分享活动,我想向您推荐袁隆平。
板块 2:主体・介绍人物事迹与推荐理由(客观正式,突出人物价值)
1. Devoted to agricultural research for decades, he has achieved great progress in hybrid rice.
他数十年深耕农业研究,在杂交水稻领域取得重大成就。
2. What impresses me most is that he never gave up even when meeting countless difficulties.
最打动我的是,即便遭遇无数困难,他也从未放弃。
3. It is his devotion to food security that makes him a perfect role model for teenagers.
他对粮食安全的坚守,使其成为青少年绝佳的榜样。
4. I believe his life story can inspire students to stick to their dreams.
我相信他的人生经历能够激励学生坚守理想。
5. Not only can his scientific achievements broaden students’ horizons, but his spirit can also encourage teenagers.
他的科研成就既能拓宽学生视野,其精神也能够鼓舞青年学子。
板块 3:结尾・表达期盼,期待采纳推荐
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.
如若您能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
2. I hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish your activity a great success.
希望我的推荐能有所帮助,预祝活动圆满举办。
3. I am looking forward to your reply.
期待您的回复。
【标准写作模板】
模板①(简洁标准版)
Dear ______,
Learning that you are looking for outstanding role models, I’m writing to recommend ________ for your activity.
In my opinion, ________ is an ideal choice for the following reasons:
I hope you will take my recommendation into consideration, and I would be glad to offer further information if needed.
Wish your activity a great success.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②(分层高分版)
Dear ______,
I’m glad to learn that you will hold a themed activity to invite outstanding figures to share stories. I’m writing to recommend ________ to you.
Here are my reasons. First, ______________. Then, __________________. Besides, _________________.
I believe his stories will inspire students greatly. I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1. 核心写作注意事项
定位:介绍人物、阐述推荐理由,语气庄重正式,客观评价人物事迹,避免主观情绪化表达
首段写作要点:交代活动背景,简短说明写信目的,不要长篇大论自我介绍
主体段写作要点
① 人物事迹搭配精神品质,事迹简洁凝练,不单独罗列零散信息
② 先介绍人物成就,再提炼精神品质,多角度支撑推荐理由
③ 紧扣活动主题,突出人物榜样价值,贴合中学生研学、评选活动场景
尾段写作要点:总结推荐优势,表达期盼,预祝活动顺利开展
2. 写作流程导图
说明写信目的(交代活动背景)
分层介绍人物事迹、精神品质,阐述推荐理由
总结推荐价值,期待对方考虑人选,表达美好祝愿
【典例1】
你校英语俱乐部计划举办一场以“A Scientist I Respect Most”为题的演讲比赛,请你写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 科学成就;
3. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Scientist I Respect Most
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【答案】高分范文
A Scientist I Respect Most
The scientist I respect most is Tu Youyou, a famous female chemist and scientist.
She has been working in China Academy of Traditional Chinese Medicine in Beijing after graduation. In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin, for which she won many awards. To our excitement and delight, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine on October 5th, 2015, which made her become the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize.
What impressed me most was that Tu Youyou and her team have been committed to drug research and development. From them, I learned not only the spirit of scientific research, but also that we should persist in doing what we love.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英文演讲稿,说明人物简介、科学成就以及个人感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→well-known
致力于:be committed to→devote oneself to
尊敬:respect→hornor
令某人高兴的是:to one’s delight→to one’s joy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:She has been working in China Academy of Traditional Chinese Medicine in Beijing after graduation.
拓展句:She has been working in China Academy of Traditional Chinese Medicine in Beijing after she graduated.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed me most was that Tu Youyou and her team have been committed to drug research and development.(运用了what引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】To our excitement and delight, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Medicine on October 5th, 2015, which made her become the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【典例2】
假定你是中学生李华,你校正在举办以“我最喜爱的科学家”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面要点提示,描述你所喜爱的科学家,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的科学家;
2.喜欢的原因;
3.你的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Favorite Scientist
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【答案】My Favourite Scientist
Of so many famous scientists all over the world, I admire Yuan Longping most, who is an agricultural scientist of China.
In 1973, he became the first agricultural pioneer in the world to grow rice that enabled farmers to expand their output greatly. Though he achieved his goal, he still devoted himself to research on rice so as to feed more people in the world. Yuan Longping made such great contributions to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world.
All in all, we must learn from Yuan Longping in order to serve our country better when we grow up.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文,描述自己所喜爱的科学家,参加学校正在举办的以“我最喜爱的科学家”为主题的征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的:famous→well-known
钦佩:admire→appreciate
致力于:devoted oneself to→committed oneself to
总之:all in all→in conclusion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Yuan Longping made such great contributions to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world.
拓展句:Such great contributions Yuan Longping made to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Of so many famous scientists all over the world, I admire Yuan Longping most, who is an agricultural scientist of China.(运用了who引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Though he achieved his goal, he still devoted himself to research on rice so as to feed more people in the world.(运用了让步状语从句,不定式作目的状语)
1. 词性转换(推荐信高频词变形)
1. recommend → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. contribute → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
3. devote → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
【答案】1. recommendation; recommendable
2. contribution; contributive
3. devotion; devoted
2. 句子改写升级
原句:Yuan Longping devotes himself to rice research. He has greatly raised rice output.
① 定语从句合并复合句:________________________________________
② 非谓语动词改写:________________________________________
原句:I think he is a perfect role model for teenagers.
③ 委婉推荐句式改写:________________________________________
【答案】
① Yuan Longping, who devotes himself to rice research, has greatly raised rice output.
② Devoted to rice research, Yuan Longping has greatly raised rice output.
③ I highly recommend that he be invited as a role model for teenagers.
3. 汉译英(推荐信标准句式)
1. 我写信向组委会推荐袁隆平作为本次活动的杰出人物。
2. 他数十年扎根农田,为保障国家粮食安全做出巨大贡献。
3. 我希望您能够认真考虑我的推荐。
【参考答案】
1. I’m writing to recommend Yuan Longping to the organizing committee as an outstanding figure for this activity.
2. Devoted to farmland for decades, he has made great contributions to national food security.
3. I hope you can take my recommendation into serious consideration.
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