Unit 1 People of Achievement 同步应用文写作 课件-2025-2026学年高中英语人教版选择性必修第一册

Unit 1 People of Achievement 人教版2019选择性必修第一册 Introduce someone you admire 应用文：人物传记/介绍 读话题写作文高二上 Module 1 Learning objectives At the end of class, you will be able to： 1.Know the structure and the language features of a biography. 2.Learn more writing skills about biographies or self-introductions. 3.write an introduction to someone you admire. 1 2 3 新课导入 语言输入 技法点拨 目 录 CONTENTS 4 实战演练 5 佳句仿写 3 新课导入： 引出话题 01 4 1. He was a great physicist. 2. He was Jewish. 3. He founded the theory of relativity. Alber Einstein Imagination is more important than knowledge. Lead in 语言输入: 跟着课文练布局 02 6 General information about his greatest contribution and personal qualities His life story and achievement His appearance and personality His death How does this part develop? Para 3: Work experience & achievement Para 4: turbulent(动荡的) Mid-life Para 5: Appearance & personality Para 6: Death Para1: Brief Introduction Para 2: Educational experience Beginning Body Ending Structure part1 part2 part3 Introduction (general information about the character: identity, great contributions and personal qualities) Body (the character’s important life experiences, achievements, apprearance, personalities...) Ending ( judgement and appreciation ) How to write a biography? chronological order (numbers+time expressions); add quotes/anecdotes; use rhetorical devices and descriptive words Summary 03 技法点拨： 跟着课文学技巧 10 1879 Born in Germany 1896 1900 1905 1922 1933 1955 1895 1902 Earned a doctorate in physics and published 4 extraordinary physics papers Took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office Graduated from university Entered university Failed the exam 1909 Quitted the job at the patent office and entered research full-time at a university Awarded Nobel Prize for Physics Fled Germany to America Passed away 1. Please complete the timeline. Tip 1: Read for the organization ① He gradually became famous throught the world as the new Issac Newton. (P3) ② Einstein, who was Jewish, found the doors of academic institutions closed to him. (P4) ③ He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. (P5) ④ On 18 April 1955, it was reported that Einstein had passed away, .....(P6) analogy 类比 metaphor 隐喻 simile 明喻 personification 拟人 euphemism 委婉 Rhetorical devices serve to make communication more persuasive, engaging, and effective. Tip 2:Study the language features Key words Supporting details Appearance Personality slightly odd-looking kind, funny & forgetful a thick moustache long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though just received an electric shock. sometimes forgot things helped a little girl with her homework encountered people and help explain things “Always I am mistaken for Professor Einstein!” Tip 2:Study the language features 04 佳句仿写: 跟着课文写佳句 14 人物生平简介 1.袁隆平作为当代中国最伟大的人物之一，被人们称为“杂交水稻之父”。 Yuan Longping, who is one of the greatest figures in modern China, is widely known as the “ father of hybrid rice”. 3.2015年， 屠呦呦（共同获奖者）因青蒿素的发现获得了诺贝尔生理学或医学奖，这是一种至关重要的治疗疟疾的新疗法。 In 2015， Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine for the discovery of artemisinin, a crucial new treatment for malaria. 2.袁隆平不仅仅是一位杰出的科学家，他还爱好广泛，例如喜欢听音乐和游泳。 Yuan was not only an outstanding scientist; he was also a person who had a wide range of hobbies, like listening to music and swimming. 原：In 1922, he was awarded The 192I Noble Prize for Physics for hiS explanation of the photoelectric effect. 原：Albert Einstein, who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics, is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived. 原：Einstein was not only a genius;he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people. 人物经历 原：When he was 16, he tried to enter university in Switzerland, but failed due to his low scores in the general part of the entrance exam, despite obtaining exceptional scores in maths and physics. 1.钱年轻的时候就意识到，中国需要自己强大的空军来保卫国家，所以他做出了一个非凡的决定，学习航空专业。 When Qian was young,he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the remarkable decision to major inaviation. 原：After studying for another year, he managed to pass the exam, entering university in 1896 and graduating in 1900. 2.从西南农业学院毕业后，他去了湖南，投身于农业教育和研究。 After graduating from southwest Agricultural College，he went to Hunan Province, devoting himself to agricultural education and research all along. 原：After two years of looking for work as a teacher, Einstein took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office. 3.在北京大学医学院学习了四年后，屠呦呦开始在北京的中国中医研究院工作。 After four years of studying at Peking University Medical School, Tu Youyou took a job/worked at the China Academy of Traditional Chinese Medicine in Beijing. 人物贡献、评价和影响写 原：He made numerous contributions to the world, the most well-known being the general theory of relativity and the famous formula E=mc². 1.他不仅为解决世界饥饿问题做出了无数的贡献，而且激励了更多的人加入他的行列。 Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger,but also inspired more people to join him 原：On 18 April 1955, it was reported that Einstein had passed away, and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist. 2.据报道，2021年5月22日袁老去世，全国人民都深感悲痛。 On 22 May 2021，it was reported that Yuan had passed away , and our whole country felt sorrowful deeply. 05 写作实践： 触类旁通 18 你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： 1.人物简介； 2.他/她值得钦佩的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 典例赏析 1、审题定调 本写作要求介绍一位自己最崇拜的科学家，属于记叙文。介绍崇拜的科学家关键之处在于突出其主要经历和成就，并点明为何使你钦佩。介绍其生平事迹时一般用第三人称，时态以一般过去时为主，但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。 2、谋篇布局 针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲： 第一部分：引出所崇拜的科学家； 第二部分：介绍主要经历及贡献； 第三部分：点明其令你钦佩的品质。 第一步：明确要求、布局谋篇 1. 做了一个非凡的决定 2. 主修航空专业 3. 大学毕业后 4.获得了渊博的知识 5. 奔赴美国 6.在某人的领导下 7. 献身国家 8. 让中国变得更强大 9. 保持继续前行 第二部：搜索话题词汇 make a remarkable decision major in aviation after graduating from university acquire a broad knowledge head to America under onc's leadership devote oneself to the country make China stronger keep moving forward （一）完成句子 1.在所有的科学家中，我最钦佩钱学森。 Of all the scientists,_____________________________. 2.钱学森毕业于上海交通大学。 Qian Xuesen ________________ Shanghai Jiao Tong University. 3.钱学森获得了渊博的知识。 Qian Xuesen __________________________. 4.他奔赴美国，攻读他的研究生学业。 He ___________ America to pursuc his graduate studies. 5.钱学森是我的一个榜样，他的精神会激励我继续前进。 Qian Xuesen is an example to me and his spirit will inspire me to ___________________. 第三步：巧用话题词汇句式 I admire Qian Xuesen most graduated from acquired a broad knowledge headed to keep moving forward （二）斟酌词句，靓化表达 6. 用“after doing..”合并句2和句3。 ______________________________________________________________________________. 7.用定语从句改写句5。 Qian Xuesen is an example to me,___________________ _______________________________________________. 第三步：巧用话题词汇句式 After graduating from Shanghai Jiao Tong University, he acquired a broad knowledge whose spirit will inspire me to keep moving forward The Scientist I Admire Most Of all the scientists, I admire Qian Xuesen, a committed and patient scientist, most. When Qian was young, he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the remarkable decision to major in aviation. After graduating from Shanghai Jiao Tong University, he acquired a broad knowledge. And then, he headed to America in 1935 to pursue his graduate studies and returned to China in 1955. Under Qian's leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, followed by the first generation of Long March rockets. Qian devoted himself to the country and helped make China stronger. He is an example to me, whose spirit will inspire me to keep moving forward. 佳作展现 1.介绍人物的爱好特长: be good at /do well in/ be expert in/ have a talent for/have a gift for /be qualified for the job / be fit for the job/ have a good knowledge ( command) of/ with a great passion for 2. 家庭背景 sb was born in/into a(n) rich/poor/ordinary family; ...live/lead/have a happy/hard life; with the help/assistance of his(her)parents; give him (her) support mentally and financially 3. 教育背景： be admitted to/into..., graduated from ..., gain/earn a bachelor’s/master’s/doctor’s degree, go abroad for further study 补充：Useful expressions 4. 经历和事迹： work on..., serve as..., devote oneself to, fight for, be honoured with... for...., do sth. with great determination and perseverance 5. 形容人的品质： determined/ warm-hearted/easy-going/ generous/ intelligent/ ambitious/ humorous/ diligent /attractive /patient/ considerate/outstanding/ optimistic/ enthusiastic/ dedicated 6.形容人的外貌： skinny, good-looking, plain, elegant, neatly dressed, near/far-sighted， graceful, curly/wavy hair 7. 对人物的评价: set a good example to us, a model teacher/worker, is respected by all, speak highly of ... , be honored as, be regarded as … 补充：Useful expressions At the end of the lesson, I am able to： 1 2 3 4 5 appreciate good qualities of ordinary people and know the significance of being a person of value. know the organization of a biography and the writing skills of introducing someone I admire. write an introduction to someone I admire. 自我评价 你校英语报拟开展“我最敬佩的先锋”征文活动，请从下面表格中任选一位，以“MyRole Model”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物的简介； 2.对你的影响。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Yuan Longping Lang Ping Tu Youyou father of hybrid rice coach of China women’s volleyball team Chemist discovering artemisinin to treat malaria 实战演练 Thank you for your listening EVCapture4.2.4软件录制 Lavf58.28.100 本视频由湖南一唯信息科技开发的EV录屏软件录制，www.ieway.cn $