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选择性必修第一册 Unit 3 Fascinating Parks 推荐信
话题总览
写作任务
1 单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:旅游推荐邮件(推荐信)细分场景:向外国游客推荐自然公园;向外教介绍国家地质公园;给研学团队推荐自然景区
2 高考写作大类归类归属:书信类应用文,归属「文旅交流、自然生态、文化对外传播」
③ 高考命题切入点一句话点明以中外研学、外国友人出行游玩为背景,介绍景区特色、自然风光,给出游玩建议,推荐游览目的地。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁稳定,全国卷文旅类推荐信、旅游邮件高频出现在模拟试卷
近三年全国卷书面表达真题暂未考查景区推荐类邮件,但文旅话题持续热门;全国卷读后续写大量出现野外自然风光探险情境。景区推荐邮件是全国卷应用文高频备考体裁。
2. 命题形式固定:提纲式命题
题目固定给出 2-3 个明确写作要点,情景完整,包含四要素:作者身份(李华)、读者对象(外国游客、研学团队)、写作目的、内容要点(景区特色、游玩路线、出行建议)。
3. 三大贴合命题素材
- 自然景观类(最高频):国家公园、地质公园、山岳湿地、自然保护区
- 生态保护类:人与自然和谐共生、丹霞地貌、野生动物栖息地
- 研学旅行类:生态研学、地质科考、户外徒步活动
三大考查维度
(1)语言能力(阅卷核心得分点)
① 书信格式规范:称呼、开篇引入、结尾客套、落款标准写法;景区推荐属于正式文旅交流语气。
② 逻辑表达分层
开头:得知对方计划出游,点明写信推荐景区的目的
主体:分层介绍景区自然风光、特色景点、游玩体验;补充出行游玩相关实用建议,连接词(Besides, Meanwhile, What’s more)
结尾:表达期待,祝愿旅途愉快,欢迎对方咨询更多信息
③ 句式梯度
基础:简单介绍句型(The park is famous for.../ You can enjoy beautiful views.)
高分升级:定语从句、非谓语、情景描写句式;地点游览类高级表达
④ 词汇得体性
使用自然风光、地质景观、生态保护相关词汇,描写生动,用词贴合旅行交流语境。
(2)思维素养(命题深层导向)
1. 信息整合能力:梳理景区核心特色,合理规划游玩介绍顺序,突出游览亮点
2. 文化传播意识:向外国游客介绍中国自然景观,展现我国生态保护成果
(3)文化意识(立德树人考查方向)
树立生态文明理念,感悟自然之美,增强生态保护意识,传播中国自然文旅资源。
高频出题设问形式
1. 外国友人计划来中国游玩,请你写信推荐一处国家公园,并介绍特色、游玩建议。
2. 学校研学活动征集目的地方案,请你写信向研学负责人推荐一处自然景区。
3. 外国交换生想要了解本地自然景观,请你写邮件推荐生态公园。
4. 国际中学生文旅交流活动,请你写信介绍一处自然保护区。
第一步:锁定单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:写给外国友人 / 研学团队,推荐一处自然国家公园,介绍景区特色并提供游玩建议
2. 文体:旅游推荐邮件(应用文);特点:格式规范、写景生动地道、游玩建议具备实用性,文旅交流语气自然友好
3. 写作对象:外国游客、海外研学师生,语言通俗易懂,兼顾自然风光介绍与文化传播
4. 核心写作要点
① 景区独特自然风光、标志性景观;② 游览特色体验与游玩路线;③ 出行时间、游览注意事项等实用建议
第二步:三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1 段)
得知对方计划外出游览,表明写信目的,向对方推荐一处自然公园。
2. 主体分层(3 段核心)
第一层:介绍公园地理位置、独特地貌与核心自然景观,突出生态特色。
第二层:介绍园内特色游玩项目,分享适合游客的游览路线。
第三层:提供出行穿搭、游览时段等实用出行建议。
3. 结尾收尾(1 段)
送上旅途祝福,欢迎对方随时咨询更多旅行信息,期待对方拥有愉快旅程。
【基础版范文(适配英语薄弱学生,句式简单、要点齐全)】
【高分拓展范文(适配中优等生,复合句、非谓语、逻辑递进、立意升华)】
板块 1:开篇・说明写作目的(得知出行计划,主动推荐景区)
1. I’m glad to learn that you plan to visit natural scenic spots in China, so I’m writing to recommend Zhangjiajie National Forest Park.
得知你计划游览中国自然景区,我写信向你推荐张家界国家森林公园。
2. Hearing that you are searching for a travelling destination, I would like to introduce a fantastic natural park to you.
听说你正在寻找旅行目的地,我想向你介绍一处绝佳的自然公园。
3. You have asked me for advice on travelling in China, and I will share my travelling suggestions here.
你向我咨询中国旅行相关建议,我在此分享游玩攻略。
板块 2:主体・介绍景观特色、游玩建议(文旅交流,表达生动)
1. The park is famous for its unique peak forests and clear mountain streams.
这座公园以独特峰林与清澈山溪闻名。
2. Walking in the mountains, you can enjoy amazing natural views and get close to nature.
行走山间,你可以欣赏绝美自然风光,亲近大自然。
3. It would be better if you pay a visit in spring when mountains are covered with green plants.
你最好春季前往,群山草木葱茏,景色宜人。
4. Why not prepare comfortable walking shoes for your hiking trip?
徒步游玩时,何不准备一双舒适的登山鞋?
5. I would highly recommend that you spare one day to experience local mountain customs.
我强烈建议你留出一天时间体验当地山野民俗。
板块 3:结尾・旅途祝福,欢迎持续咨询
1. I hope you will have an unforgettable travelling experience in the park.
希望你在这座公园拥有一段难忘的旅行经历。
2. If you have further questions about travelling, feel free to contact me.
如果你有更多出行问题,随时可以联系我。
3. Wish you a wonderful journey!
祝你旅途愉快!
【标准写作模板】
模板①(简洁标准版)
Dear ______,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to ________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to visit ________.
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be glad to discuss this matter with you for further details.
Good luck with your ________.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②(分层高分版)
Dear ______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to ______________________. Then, it also helps to ______________________. Besides, ______________________.
I hope you will have an unforgettable experience. If you have more questions, feel free to contact me.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1.旅游推荐邮件核心写作注意事项
定位:文旅交流推荐,语言自然友好,兼顾景观介绍与实用出行建议
首段写作要点:得知对方出行计划,开门见山说明写信推荐景区的目的
主体段写作要点
① 景点特色搭配游玩体验,描写生动有画面感
② 游玩建议贴合游客出行需求,具备实用性
③ 立足生态文旅视角,向外传播中国自然景观特色
尾段写作要点:送上旅途祝福,欢迎对方咨询更多旅行信息
2. 写作流程导图
说明写信目的(得知对方出行计划)
介绍景区特色、游玩体验,提供出行实用建议
送上旅途祝福,愿意持续解答出行疑问
【典例1】
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter暑假要来中国旅游,他希望你推荐一家中国的主题公园,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 主题公园的名字和位置;
2. 你推荐的理由;
3. 表示欢迎。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【典例2】
假定你是李华,你所在的城市最近建成了一座公园,你想邀请交换生George一起去那游玩。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍该公园(位置、特色等);
(2)约定见面时间和往返方式;
(3)其他注意事项。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1. 词性转换(建议信高频词变形)
1. attract → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. impress → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
3. explore → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. 句子改写升级
原句:Zhangjiajie is famous for unique mountains. It attracts plenty of visitors every year.
① 定语从句合并复合句:________________________________________
② 非谓语动词改写:________________________________________
原句:I think you can pay a visit to Zhangjiajie National Forest Park.
③ 旅游建议句式改写:________________________________________
3. 汉译英(旅游邮件标准句式)
1. 我写信向你推荐一处国家公园,并分享一些游玩建议。
2. 这座公园以奇特的峰林景观闻名海内外。
3. 如果你计划出行,我十分乐意提供更多旅行信息。
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选择性必修第一册 Unit 3 Fascinating Parks 推荐信
话题总览
写作任务
1 单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:旅游推荐邮件(推荐信)细分场景:向外国游客推荐自然公园;向外教介绍国家地质公园;给研学团队推荐自然景区
2 高考写作大类归类归属:书信类应用文,归属「文旅交流、自然生态、文化对外传播」
③ 高考命题切入点一句话点明以中外研学、外国友人出行游玩为背景,介绍景区特色、自然风光,给出游玩建议,推荐游览目的地。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁稳定,全国卷文旅类推荐信、旅游邮件高频出现在模拟试卷
近三年全国卷书面表达真题暂未考查景区推荐类邮件,但文旅话题持续热门;全国卷读后续写大量出现野外自然风光探险情境。景区推荐邮件是全国卷应用文高频备考体裁。
2. 命题形式固定:提纲式命题
题目固定给出 2-3 个明确写作要点,情景完整,包含四要素:作者身份(李华)、读者对象(外国游客、研学团队)、写作目的、内容要点(景区特色、游玩路线、出行建议)。
3. 三大贴合命题素材
- 自然景观类(最高频):国家公园、地质公园、山岳湿地、自然保护区
- 生态保护类:人与自然和谐共生、丹霞地貌、野生动物栖息地
- 研学旅行类:生态研学、地质科考、户外徒步活动
三大考查维度
(1)语言能力(阅卷核心得分点)
① 书信格式规范:称呼、开篇引入、结尾客套、落款标准写法;景区推荐属于正式文旅交流语气。
② 逻辑表达分层
开头:得知对方计划出游,点明写信推荐景区的目的
主体:分层介绍景区自然风光、特色景点、游玩体验;补充出行游玩相关实用建议,连接词(Besides, Meanwhile, What’s more)
结尾:表达期待,祝愿旅途愉快,欢迎对方咨询更多信息
③ 句式梯度
基础:简单介绍句型(The park is famous for.../ You can enjoy beautiful views.)
高分升级:定语从句、非谓语、情景描写句式;地点游览类高级表达
④ 词汇得体性
使用自然风光、地质景观、生态保护相关词汇,描写生动,用词贴合旅行交流语境。
(2)思维素养(命题深层导向)
1. 信息整合能力:梳理景区核心特色,合理规划游玩介绍顺序,突出游览亮点
2. 文化传播意识:向外国游客介绍中国自然景观,展现我国生态保护成果
(3)文化意识(立德树人考查方向)
树立生态文明理念,感悟自然之美,增强生态保护意识,传播中国自然文旅资源。
高频出题设问形式
1. 外国友人计划来中国游玩,请你写信推荐一处国家公园,并介绍特色、游玩建议。
2. 学校研学活动征集目的地方案,请你写信向研学负责人推荐一处自然景区。
3. 外国交换生想要了解本地自然景观,请你写邮件推荐生态公园。
4. 国际中学生文旅交流活动,请你写信介绍一处自然保护区。
第一步:锁定单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:写给外国友人 / 研学团队,推荐一处自然国家公园,介绍景区特色并提供游玩建议
2. 文体:旅游推荐邮件(应用文);特点:格式规范、写景生动地道、游玩建议具备实用性,文旅交流语气自然友好
3. 写作对象:外国游客、海外研学师生,语言通俗易懂,兼顾自然风光介绍与文化传播
4. 核心写作要点
① 景区独特自然风光、标志性景观;② 游览特色体验与游玩路线;③ 出行时间、游览注意事项等实用建议
第二步:三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1 段)
得知对方计划外出游览,表明写信目的,向对方推荐一处自然公园。
2. 主体分层(3 段核心)
第一层:介绍公园地理位置、独特地貌与核心自然景观,突出生态特色。
第二层:介绍园内特色游玩项目,分享适合游客的游览路线。
第三层:提供出行穿搭、游览时段等实用出行建议。
3. 结尾收尾(1 段)
送上旅途祝福,欢迎对方随时咨询更多旅行信息,期待对方拥有愉快旅程。
【基础版范文(适配英语薄弱学生,句式简单、要点齐全)】
Dear Mike,
I know you plan to travel in China. I’m writing to recommend Zhangjiajie National Forest Park to you.
The park is famous for strange mountains and clear rivers. You can enjoy wonderful natural views there. You can walk in the mountains and watch amazing stones. It is also a perfect place to take photos. Remember to visit it in spring, when the mountains are covered with green plants. It is better to wear comfortable sports shoes during your trip.
I hope you will have a wonderful trip there. If you have more questions, you can write to me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高分拓展范文(适配中优等生,复合句、非谓语、逻辑递进、立意升华)】
Dear Mike,
Hearing that you are planning a trip to China, I’m writing to strongly recommend Zhangjiajie National Forest Park to you.
Covering a large area, Zhangjiajie is well-known for its unique peak forests and clear streams. Walking along the paths, you can enjoy fantastic natural scenery formed by natural rocks and green forests. It offers visitors a perfect chance to get close to nature. To have a better travelling experience, you are advised to visit it in spring and wear comfortable walking shoes.
It is a perfect destination to enjoy natural beauty. I sincerely hope you will have an unforgettable travelling experience here. Feel free to turn to me for more travelling information.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
板块 1:开篇・说明写作目的(得知出行计划,主动推荐景区)
1. I’m glad to learn that you plan to visit natural scenic spots in China, so I’m writing to recommend Zhangjiajie National Forest Park.
得知你计划游览中国自然景区,我写信向你推荐张家界国家森林公园。
2. Hearing that you are searching for a travelling destination, I would like to introduce a fantastic natural park to you.
听说你正在寻找旅行目的地,我想向你介绍一处绝佳的自然公园。
3. You have asked me for advice on travelling in China, and I will share my travelling suggestions here.
你向我咨询中国旅行相关建议,我在此分享游玩攻略。
板块 2:主体・介绍景观特色、游玩建议(文旅交流,表达生动)
1. The park is famous for its unique peak forests and clear mountain streams.
这座公园以独特峰林与清澈山溪闻名。
2. Walking in the mountains, you can enjoy amazing natural views and get close to nature.
行走山间,你可以欣赏绝美自然风光,亲近大自然。
3. It would be better if you pay a visit in spring when mountains are covered with green plants.
你最好春季前往,群山草木葱茏,景色宜人。
4. Why not prepare comfortable walking shoes for your hiking trip?
徒步游玩时,何不准备一双舒适的登山鞋?
5. I would highly recommend that you spare one day to experience local mountain customs.
我强烈建议你留出一天时间体验当地山野民俗。
板块 3:结尾・旅途祝福,欢迎持续咨询
1. I hope you will have an unforgettable travelling experience in the park.
希望你在这座公园拥有一段难忘的旅行经历。
2. If you have further questions about travelling, feel free to contact me.
如果你有更多出行问题,随时可以联系我。
3. Wish you a wonderful journey!
祝你旅途愉快!
【标准写作模板】
模板①(简洁标准版)
Dear ______,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to ________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to visit ________.
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be glad to discuss this matter with you for further details.
Good luck with your ________.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②(分层高分版)
Dear ______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to ______________________. Then, it also helps to ______________________. Besides, ______________________.
I hope you will have an unforgettable experience. If you have more questions, feel free to contact me.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1.旅游推荐邮件核心写作注意事项
定位:文旅交流推荐,语言自然友好,兼顾景观介绍与实用出行建议
首段写作要点:得知对方出行计划,开门见山说明写信推荐景区的目的
主体段写作要点
① 景点特色搭配游玩体验,描写生动有画面感
② 游玩建议贴合游客出行需求,具备实用性
③ 立足生态文旅视角,向外传播中国自然景观特色
尾段写作要点:送上旅途祝福,欢迎对方咨询更多旅行信息
2. 写作流程导图
说明写信目的(得知对方出行计划)
介绍景区特色、游玩体验,提供出行实用建议
送上旅途祝福,愿意持续解答出行疑问
【典例1】
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter暑假要来中国旅游,他希望你推荐一家中国的主题公园,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 主题公园的名字和位置;
2. 你推荐的理由;
3. 表示欢迎。
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【答案】参考范文
Dear Peter,
Learning that you’re interested in Chinese tea culture, I’m writing to recommend you to go to Chinese Tea Culture Theme Park located in the suburban area of Beijing.
Walking in the park, you will be amused by different “tea” characters written by many famous scholars. The history of tea growing in China and the special ways of cooking different tea, such as Longjing tea, and Pu’er tea, are also displayed on the cultural wall within the park. It is said that tea growing in China has a history of up to 5, 000 years. Equally attractive are the unique teahouses in the park, where visitors can taste various tea.
I sincerely invite you to come to the Chinese Tea Culture Theme Park and I am convinced that its tea culture will surely appeal to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给即将来中国旅游的美国朋友Peter写一封邮件,推荐一家中国主题公园,需包含公园名称与位置、推荐理由,并表达欢迎。
【详解】1.词汇积累
位于:located in → situated in
吸引:appeal to → draw
展示:display → exhibit
品尝:taste → appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Walking in the park, you will be amused by different “tea” characters written by many famous scholars. The history of tea growing in China and the special ways of cooking different tea, such as Longjing tea, and Pu’er tea, are also displayed on the cultural wall within the park.
拓展句:Walking in the park, you will be amused by different “tea” characters that are written by many famous scholars, while the history of tea growing in China and the special ways of cooking different tea, which include Longjing tea and Pu’er tea, are also displayed on the cultural wall within the park.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Equally attractive are the unique teahouses in the park, where visitors can taste various tea.(运用了倒装句和非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I am convinced that its tea culture will surely appeal to you.(运用了宾语从句)
【典例2】
假定你是李华,你所在的城市最近建成了一座公园,你想邀请交换生George一起去那游玩。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
(1)介绍该公园(位置、特色等);
(2)约定见面时间和往返方式;
(3)其他注意事项。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【答案】Dear George,
I’m excited to tell you about a new park that has just been built in our city. It’s located near the central square, and it’s known for its beautiful gardens and a large artificial lake where you can rent boats.
I think we can visit it this weekend. How about meeting at 9 am on Saturday at the park’s main entrance? We can take the bus number 23, which stops right in front of the park. We can spend the morning exploring the park and have a picnic lunch there. Please remember to wear comfortable shoes as there will be a lot of walking. Also, bring some water in case you get thirsty.
I’m looking forward to our day out! Let me know if you can make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生George写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起去城市最近建成的公园游玩。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited → thrilled
出名的:known → renowned
记得:remember → keep in mind
舒适的:comfortable → cosy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We can spend the morning exploring the park and have a picnic lunch there.
拓展句:We can spend the morning exploring the park, where we can have a picnic lunch.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s located near the central square, and it’s known for its beautiful gardens and a large artificial lake where you can rent boats. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We can take the bus number 23, which stops right in front of the park. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
1. 词性转换(建议信高频词变形)
1. attract → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. impress → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
3. explore → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
【答案】1. attraction; attractive
2. impression; impressive
3. exploration; exploratory
2. 句子改写升级
原句:Zhangjiajie is famous for unique mountains. It attracts plenty of visitors every year.
① 定语从句合并复合句:________________________________________
② 非谓语动词改写:________________________________________
原句:I think you can pay a visit to Zhangjiajie National Forest Park.
③ 旅游建议句式改写:________________________________________
【答案】
① Zhangjiajie, which is famous for unique mountains, attracts plenty of visitors every year.
② Famous for unique mountains, Zhangjiajie attracts plenty of visitors every year.
③ I would highly recommend that you pay a visit to Zhangjiajie National Forest Park.
3. 汉译英(旅游邮件标准句式)
1. 我写信向你推荐一处国家公园,并分享一些游玩建议。
2. 这座公园以奇特的峰林景观闻名海内外。
3. 如果你计划出行,我十分乐意提供更多旅行信息。
【参考答案】
1. I’m writing to recommend a national park to you and share some travelling suggestions.
2. The park is famous for its unique peak forest landscapes at home and abroad.
3. If you plan to travel, I’m ready to offer more travelling information.
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