内容正文:
Unit 3
Fascinating Parks
人教版2019选择性必修第一册
应用文:地点介绍
读话题写作文高二上 Module 3
Learning objectives
At the end of class, you will be able to:
1. Read and explore the significance of theme parks—‘“fun and more than fun” .
2. Analyze and master the structure, language features and useful expressions of the passage to introduce a theme park.
3. Apply what we have learned in the passage to writing an introduction to a park in our hometown logically and coherently.
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新课导入
语言输入
目 录
CONTENTS
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实战演练
佳句仿写
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新课导入:
引出话题
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Can you name these facilities or entertainments?
pirate ship 海盗船
free drop 跳楼机
roller coaster 过山车
parade 游行
water rides水上游乐设施
Activity 1:Guessing
Where can you see these entertainment facilities or participate in these entertainment activities?
In the theme parks.
Activity 2:Thinking
1. What is a theme park?
A theme park is a large area that is designed around a specific theme or concept. It typically offers various attractions such as rides, shows, parades, and themed areas for entertainment and enjoyment.
2. Have you ever been to a theme park?
3. Which theme park have you ever been to?
Let’s go to explore some theme parks first.
Activity 3:Free talk
语言输入:
跟着课文练布局
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Title: Introduce the topic
Para 1: Give the general introduction of the theme parks
Para 2: Introduce one of the famous theme parks— Disneyland
Para 3: Introduce one of the famous
theme parks—Dollywood
Para 4: Introduce one of the famous
theme parks— Chimelong Ocean Kingdom
Travel brochure
Beginning
Body
Ending
Part.1
Part.2
Part.3
Introduction:
Basic information of the park
Body: attractions
Ending:summary
Title:
Name of the park in place
location, popularity, size, the theme of the park…
rides, entertainment, performances, food…
give recommendation…
Summary: Structure and organization
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技法点拨:
跟着课文学技巧
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The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world. Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your childhood dreams come true. Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship, or meeting an adorable fairy tale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland. As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street. Of course, Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from enormous swinging ships to scary free-fall drops. If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
Introdu-ction
Body
name
location
main feature
activities
attractions, rides, shows …
recommendation & welcome
Ending
Tip 1:Read for organization
Dollywood, in the beautiful Smoky Mountains in southeastern USA, is unique because it shows and celebrates America’s traditional southeastern culture. Famous country music groups put out performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors. People come from all over America to see skilled workers make wood, glass, and iron objects in the old-fashioned way. Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of candy that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience. Riding on the only steam still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat. And for those who like rides, Dollywood has a superb old wooden roller coaster. Thunderhead. It is world-famous for having the longest track in the smallest space. Come to Dollywood to have fun learning all about America’s historic southeastern culture!
Introdu-ction
Body
Ending
name
location
main feature
activities
attractions, food, rides, shows …
recommendation & welcome
Tip 1:Read for organization
Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world. Here you can walk under the Whale Shark Aquarium —the world’s largest—and see up to 20, 000 fish, in addition to a whale shark 68 metres in length. Watching the dolphin and sea lion shows is both educational and fun. Of course, you can also see all kinds of interesting animals, including polar bears. The park has more rides than you can imagine: join a water fight against pirates, get turned upside down by an exciting roller coaster, or get wet in one of the water rides! Then at night, see the splendid Journey of Lights Parade and fireworks display. Hungry? The park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite —you can even eat while watching the fish swim by. If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom!
Introdu-ction
Body
Ending
name
location
main feature
activities
attractions, food, rides, shows …
recommendation & welcome
Tip 1:Read for organization
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佳句仿写:
跟着课文写佳句
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总体介绍有章法
1.有些人参观长白山国家公园,探索其丰富的生物多样性,而另一些人则来徒步旅行,欣赏壮丽的景色。
Some people visit the Changbai Mountain National Park to explore its rich biodiversity, while others come to hike and enjoy the breathtaking views.
3.你最熟悉的主题公园可能是健康主题公园,在中国的大部分地区都有。
The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Health Theme Park, which can be found in most parts of China.
2.无论你选择哪个主题公园,总会有新的令人兴奋的东西可以探索。
Whichever theme park you choose, there will always be something new and exciting to explore.
原: The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland.which can be found in several parts of the world.
原:Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest rollercoasters, others for showing famous sights and sounds.
原: Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you.
总体介绍有章法
4.青岛海底世界是中国领先的水下主题公园之一。
Qingdao Undersea World is one od the leading aquatic-themed park in China.
5.这个花园比我在北京见的那个大十倍。
This garden is ten times bigger than the one I visited in Beijing.
原:Chimelong Ocean Kingdom in Zhuhai, China, is one of the leading ocean-themed parks in the world.
原: This vast new park is nearly four times larger than the old wild park protecting Siberian tigers in Northeast China.
用动词-ing形式来介绍活动更逼真
原:Travelling through space, visiting a pirate ship. or meeting an adorable fairytale or cartoon character are all possible at Disneyland.
6.游览中国的广阔景观,参观壮观的万里长城,或是遇见友好的当地居民,在充满活力的北京都是可能的。
Travelling through the vast Chinese landscapes, visiting the extraordinary Great Wall, or meeting friendly locals are all possible at the vibrant city of Beijing.
原:Visiting the candy shop and trying some of the same kind of ca that American southerners made 150 years ago is a rare experience.
7.参观一家以茶为主题的主题公园并尝试采摘茶叶是一次难得的经历。
Visiting a tea-themed amusement park and trying to pick tea leaves is a rare experience.
原:Riding on the only steam engine still working in the southeastern United States is a special treat..
8.乘坐热气球在山谷上空飞行是一种特殊的待遇。
Riding on a hot-air balloon over the valley is a special treat.
用动词-ing形式来介绍活动更逼真
原:Watching the dolphin and sea lion shows is both educational and fun.
9.在西溪,乘船游览既有教育意义又有乐趣,是人们最喜欢的活动之一。
At Xixi, taking a boat tour is both educational and fun, which is one of
people's favorite activities.
原:The park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite
—you can even eat while watching the fish swim by.
10.该景点以拥有许多著名的饭店闻名,饭店有适合每个人口味的美食,为您提供一个边吃边赏美景的机会。
The tourist attraction is famous for having many well-known restaurants with tasty food for every appetite, offering you an opportunity to eat while enjoying the breathtaking scenery.
精彩结尾公式
原:If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
11.如果你想冒险,那就来魔法王国主题公园吧!。
If you're feeling adventurous, come to the Magic Kingdom theme park!
原:If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to
Chimelong Ocean Kingdom.
12.如果你想玩的开学,又想了解恐龙的知识,就来恐龙公园吧!。
If you want to have fun and learn more about dinosaurs, come to Dinosaur Paradise!
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写作实践:
触类旁通
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最近你市建成了一个健康主题公园,请写一篇短文介绍该公园的情况,并发表在某英文网站上,内容包括:
1.基本情况:位置、环境等;
2.主要项目:娱乐、健身、健康知识教育
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Health Theme Park
Want to keep fit? Then visit Health Theme Park.
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典例赏析
1、审题定调
本写作要求要求考生根据提示写一篇关于“主题公园”的介绍,属于说明文。主体部分为“公园的基本情况”和“特色游乐设施”介绍。时态以一般现在时为主, 人称以第二人称和第三人称为主,但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。
2、谋篇布局
针对本篇写作任务,我们可以列出以下提纲:
第一部分:主题公园简介(名称、位置以及面积等等);
第二部分:介绍游乐设施等特色;
第三部分:鼓励/欢迎游客前来体验。
1.明确要求、布局谋篇
1.向公众开放
2.占地
3.将体育锻炼和娱乐相结合
4.以大量的顶级运动设施为特征
5.身心健康
6.张贴健康教育海报
2.话题词汇聚焦
be open to the public
cover an arca of
combine physical exercise with entertainment
feature plenty of top exercise facilities
physical and mental health
put up health education posters
(一)完成句子
1. 新建的健康主题公园已向公众开放。
The newly-built Health Theme Park _____________________.
2.健康主题公园的主题是“让你的生活更健康”。
The theme of the Health Theme Park is “___________________”.
3.工人们在各地张贴健康教育海报。
___________________________________________________ everywhere.
4.欢迎来到健康主题公园,享受运动和锻炼的乐趣。
__________________________________ and enjoy the pleasure of sports and cxcrcising.
3.巧用话题词汇句式
has been open to the public
making your life healthier
The workers are putting up health education posters
Welcome to the Health Theme Park
(二)斟酌词句,靓化表达
5.用whose引导的定语从句合并句1和2。
The newly-built Health Theme Park,_______________________________, has been open to the public.
6. 用被动语态升级句3,并用动词不定式(作目的状语)增加句子信息。
Health education posters ________________________________________ their physical and mental health.
7.用If.. come to..升级句4。
______________________________________________________________ and enjoy the pleasure of sports and exercising.
巧用话题词汇句式
whose theme is “making your life healthier”
are put up everywhere to remind people of
If you want to work out and keep healthy, come to the Health Theme Park
Health Theme Park
Want to keep fit? Then visit Health Theme Park. The newly-built Health Theme Park lying in Nanshan district, whose theme is “making your life healthier”, has been open to the public. Covering an area of 30, 000 square kilometers, the scenic park is one of the largest modern parks in our city, which combines physical exercise with entertainment.
The park features plenty of top exercise facilities which meet people's needs of doing exercise as well as receiving professional training regularly and conveniently. What's more, in the park, health education posters are put up everywhere to remind people of their physical and mental health.
If you want to work out and keep healthy, come to the health Theme Park and enjoy the pleasure of sports and exercising.
Sample
The theme park you are probably most familiar with is Disneyland, which can be found in several parts of the world.
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As one of the world-renowned theme parks, xxx park can top the list of your travelling destination.
Located / Situated in…, the park enjoys a picturesque and breathtaking natural beauty.
There are various kinds of theme parks, with different parks for almost everything:....
Some parks are famous for having ..., others for showing ....
补充:Useful expressions(Basic information of the park)
Famous country music groups put on performances there all year round, indoors and outdoors.
As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see....
To begin with, the most appealing thing is the fantastic and soul-stirring rides, such as …, … and so on.
Besides, the majestic …, the marvelous … and … will all take your breath away.
Moreover, the mouth-watering local snacks are also what you can not miss.
Disneyland also has many exciting rides to amuse you, from ... to ....
补充:Useful expressions(Attractions)
So if you are still not sure where to enjoy your holiday, … park can be a choice.
To sum up, … park can provide you with fascinating views, thrilling riding experience, grand parade, and exotic food.
Disneyland will bring you into a magic world and make your childhood dream come true.
It shows and celebrates America’s traditional southeastern culture.
Chimelong Ocean Kingdom is one of the leading ocean-themed parks.
补充:Useful expressions(Summary)
If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to ...!
Come to ... to have fun learning all about America’s historical southeastern culture!
If it is ... that you are lookig for, come to...!
...
补充:Useful expressions(Give the recommendation to the visitors)
Genetic marking ladders for topic genre-language, grammar, structure and connect
For you to consider Objectives-focus on language and grammar I Peer Teacher
Tense I have used tense properly.
Sentence structure Each sentence has a complete verb
I have checked the sentence structure(S+Vt+O;S+Vi)
I have used -ing forms properly.
Sentence variety I have used simple and complex sentences.
I have used clauses, especially if-clauses.
I have used imperatives.
Accuracy I have used the key words relevant to the topic.
I have used adjectives accurately.
Spelling I have checked the spellings of the uncertain words(by using a dictionary or asking partners/teachers)
Punctuation I have checked my punctuations carefully.
自我评价
Genetic marking ladders for topic genre-language, grammar, structure and connect
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure and connect I Peer Teacher
Opening My opening paragraph has started with an introduction to the topic.
Organizing your ideas I have told the name, location and main feature of the theme park in the starting part.
The main body has covered the attractions, rides, shows and food of the theme park.
I have given recommendation and welcome in the ending part..
My points are logically arranged.
Flow I have used connectives between paragraphs and sentences.
Overall My layout is neat and clear.
Suggestions for next time
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom今年寒假要来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件推荐一个主题公园,内容如下:
1.推荐该主题公园的理由;
2.美好祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
实战演练
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