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选择性必修第一册 Unit 2 Looking into the Future 议论文
话题总览
写作任务
1 单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:观点类议论文细分场景:探讨人工智能利弊;畅想未来科技对生活的影响;分析未来技术带来的机遇与挑战
2 高考写作大类归类归属:读后续写素材积累、概要写作;书面表达读后续写情境话题,全国卷书面表达应用文极少考查议论文
③ 高考命题切入点一句话点明围绕科技发展、未来生活展开观点论述,辩证分析科技带来的便利与潜在风险,表达个人看法。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁稳定,全国卷书面表达真题不单独考查议论文
近三年新高考全国卷书面表达以书信类应用文为主,从未考查独立议论文写作。本单元话题主要依托读后续写、七选五、阅读理解语篇考查;各地模拟卷常设置科技类观点短文写作任务。
2. 命题形式固定:提纲式观点任务
读后续写常设置未来科技相关情境;概要写作文本多围绕人工智能、未来生活主题,要求概括正反两方观点。
3. 三大贴合命题素材
- 人工智能类(最高频):智能家居、自动驾驶、AI 医疗、AI 教育
- 生活变革类:远程办公、无人产业、太空探索
- 社会问题类:就业冲击、信息安全、沉迷智能设备
三大考查维度
(1)语言能力(阅卷核心得分点)
① 篇章结构规范:引入话题 — 正反观点论述 — 个人观点总结
② 逻辑表达分层
开头:引出科技发展相关话题,点明核心讨论方向
主体:分层论述科技优势;再分析科技带来的隐患与挑战,使用衔接词(However, On the one hand, On the other hand)
结尾:总结观点,提出合理看待科技发展的态度
③ 句式梯度
基础:简单观点句型(Technology will change our daily life.)
高分升级:让步状语从句、倒装、非谓语、名词性从句;对比类高级表达(Although..., there exist some problems.)
④ 词汇得体性
选用科技、发展、机遇、挑战类地道词汇,观点表述客观理性,避免极端化表达。
(2)思维素养(命题深层导向)
1. 辩证思辨能力:能够全面看待科技利弊,不单一肯定或否定科技发展
2. 理性预判能力:立足现实科技发展趋势,合理畅想未来生活变化
(3)文化意识(立德树人考查方向)
树立科技向善理念,认识科技创新需要规范约束,坚持科技服务人类美好生活。
高频出题设问形式
1. 人工智能飞速发展,请你撰写短文谈谈人工智能带来的利弊,并表达你的看法。
2. 学校英语征文主题 “未来生活”,请你畅想科技如何改变普通人的日常生活。
3. 有人认为机器人将会取代大量人类工作,请你结合现实发表观点。
4. 高中生开展科技研讨,请写短文分析自动驾驶技术带来的机遇与风险。
第一步:锁定单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:围绕未来科技发展主题,撰写议论文,辩证分析人工智能等科技带来的机遇与挑战
2. 文体:观点类议论文;特点:逻辑层次清晰、观点客观理性、正反双向论述、立足现实畅想未来
3. 写作对象:高中生英语征文比赛读者,客观理性表达看法,杜绝极端化观点
4. 核心写作要点
① 科技发展给生活带来的便利与改变;② 人工智能、自动驾驶等技术潜藏的就业、安全隐患;③ 青年看待科技发展的合理态度
第二步:三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1 段)
引出科技飞速发展的时代背景,点明本文探讨科技发展利弊的写作主题。
2. 主体分层(3 段核心)
第一层:分析科技创新带来的生活便利,列举智能家居、远程医疗等现实案例。
第二层:探讨科技发展伴随的各类社会问题,如就业冲击、个人信息安全风险。
第三层:提出青年视角下的思考,阐明应当合理利用科技、规范科技发展。
3. 结尾收尾(1 段)
总结全文观点,展望科技服务人类美好生活的发展方向,升华主题。
【基础版范文(适配英语薄弱学生,句式简单、要点齐全)】
Nowadays, AI is changing our daily life. People have different opinions about artificial intelligence.
On one hand, AI brings us much convenience. It can help us with housework, medical care and study. People can enjoy easier life thanks to AI. On the other hand, AI also causes some problems. Many workers may lose their jobs. Besides, it may bring risks of personal information safety.
In my opinion, we should make good use of AI. We must develop strict rules to control its development. Only in this way can technology serve human beings better.
【高分拓展范文(适配中优等生,复合句、非谓语、逻辑递进、立意升华)】
With rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has stepped into every corner of our daily life. Opinions vary from person to person about its influence.
On the one hand, AI greatly improves our quality of life. It can provide reliable support in medical treatment, transportation and daily learning, bringing convenience to ordinary people. On the other hand, the wide use of AI has brought hidden worries. Many traditional jobs may disappear, and public information safety is facing new challenges.
From my perspective, technology itself is not good or bad. We should take advantage of AI properly while making proper rules to avoid its bad influences. It is our duty to make sure technology brings more benefits rather than trouble.
板块 1:开篇・引出话题,亮明讨论方向
1. With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has brought great changes to our life.
随着科技飞速发展,人工智能给我们的生活带来巨大改变。
2. Opinions vary from person to person about whether AI is a blessing or a challenge.
人工智能究竟是福音还是挑战,人们看法不一。
3. People are having a heated discussion about the influences of future technology on teenagers.
人们正在热烈探讨未来科技对青少年产生的影响。
板块 2:主体・辩证论述利弊(逻辑分层,观点客观)
1. On the one hand, AI brings convenience to our daily study and work.
一方面,人工智能为我们日常学习与工作带来便利。
2. If widely used, self-driving technology can greatly reduce traffic accidents.
如果广泛应用,自动驾驶技术能够大幅减少交通事故。
3. On the other hand, the popularity of AI may cause some workers to lose their jobs.
另一方面,人工智能普及可能导致部分劳动者失业。
4. It would be better if strict rules are made to avoid risks caused by high technology.
如果制定严格规范规避高新科技带来的风险,情况会更好。
5. We should make full use of technology while keeping an eye on its hidden dangers.
我们应当充分利用科技,同时警惕其潜藏风险。
板块 3:结尾・总结观点,升华青年思考
1. As teenagers, we should hold a reasonable attitude towards the development of new technology.
作为青少年,我们应当理性看待新技术的发展。
2. Only when we make good use of technology can it serve human beings better.
唯有合理利用科技,它才能更好地服务人类。
3. It is our duty to guide technology to bring more benefits to society.
引导科技为社会创造更多价值,是我们的责任。
【标准写作模板】
模板①(简洁标准版)
Nowadays, ________ is developing rapidly and changing our daily life greatly. People have different opinions about its influences.
In my view, we should treat ________ properly.
On one hand, ________________________________________________________.
On the other hand, ____________________________________________________.
As teenagers, we should make good use of ________ while paying attention to its hidden risks. Only in this way can it bring more benefits to human beings.
模板②(分层高分版)
With the rapid development of science and technology, ________ has stepped into our daily life. Opinions vary from person to person about whether it is a blessing or a challenge.
First of all, _________________________________. Besides, ____________________________________.
However, ________________________________________________.
From my perspective, we should take advantage of ________ reasonably. We should make strict rules to avoid its bad influences.
【升级策略】
1. 观点议论文核心写作注意事项
定位:辩证分析科技利弊,立足现实客观表达看法,不可极端片面
首段写作要点:引出科技发展话题,简短点明文章探讨方向,亮出讨论主题
主体段写作要点
① 每层观点搭配现实案例支撑,有理有据,杜绝空洞空想
② 先分析科技带来的便利,再探讨潜藏社会隐患,避免单一视角
③ 多使用对比衔接词,搭建清晰逻辑链条,体现思辨能力
尾段写作要点:总结观点,立足青年视角,提出合理看待科技发展的态度
2. 写作流程导图
引出话题,点明探讨核心
分层论述科技优势与潜在风险
总结观点,提出合理发展科技的思考
【典例1】
近几年,AI工具开始逐渐进入人们的日常生活和工作中,你校英语公众号上围绕使用AI工具的利弊产生了热烈的讨论。请你写一篇文章发表你的看法,内容包括:
(1)你对AI工具使用的看法;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
AI Tools: A Double-edged Sword
AI tools have sparked a heated debate. Personally, I believe they are beneficial but require cautious use.
On the positive side, AI boosts efficiency. It helps us quickly access information and correct writing errors, making working more convenient.
However, over-reliance on AI poses a real threat to our independent thinking. If we habitually seek instant answers, we may gradually lose the ability to analyze and solve problems on our own.
In conclusion, AI is a valuable assistant, not a replacement for our brains. We should embrace its advantages while nurturing our own critical thinking skills.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生针对“AI工具进入日常生活和工作的利弊”这一话题,在学校英语公众号上发表看法,需明确观点并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热烈的讨论:heated debate → fierce discussion
有益的:beneficial → rewarding
效率:efficiency → productivity
过度依赖:over-reliance → excessive dependence
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:If we habitually seek instant answers, we may gradually lose the ability to analyze and solve problems on our own.
拓展句:Habitually seeking instant answers, we may gradually lose the ability to analyze and solve problems on our own.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It helps us quickly access information and correct writing errors, making working more convenient.(运用了现在分词短语making working more convenient作结果状语)
【高分句型2】We should embrace its advantages while nurturing our own critical thinking skills.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
【典例2】
英语课上,同学们就“Do smart homes make life easier?”进行了分组讨论。请你作为小组代表发言,内容包括:
1.阐述观点;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文
Do smart homes make life easier?
I think smart homes can make our lives more convenient.
In the not-too-distant future, we will be living in smart homes. We will be using advanced technology every day for automatic control of just about everything in our home. In addition, your smart home will be monitoring your health for you every day. Your bed, for example, will record how well you sleep every night.
In a word, these smart homes will keep us energetic and provide a more comfortable environment to live in.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以Do smart homes make life easier?为题发表对智能家居的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高级的:advanced→high-level
例如:for example→for instance
总之:in a word→in short
此外:in addition→besides
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In a word, these smart homes will keep us energetic and provide a more comfortable environment to live in.
拓展句:In a word, these smart homes will provide a more comfortable environment, which can keep us energetic.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think smart homes can make our lives more convenient. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Your bed, for example, will record how well you sleep every night. (运用了how well引导宾语从句)
1. 词性转换(建议信高频词变形)
1. invent → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. explore → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
3. exist → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
【答案】1. invention; inventive
2. exploration; exploratory
3. existence; existent
2. 句子改写升级
原句:AI brings convenience to our life. It also causes some social problems.
① 定语从句合并复合句:________________________________________
② 非谓语动词改写:________________________________________
原句:I think we should take a reasonable attitude towards high technology.
③ 观点升级句式改写:________________________________________
【答案】
① AI, which brings convenience to our life, also causes some social problems.
② Bringing convenience to our life, AI also causes some social problems.
③ From my perspective, we should hold a reasonable attitude towards high technology.
3. 汉译英(议论文标准句式)
1. 人工智能已经深刻改变了人们的日常生活。
2. 我们应当合理利用科技,同时警惕它带来的潜在风险。
3. 青年应当树立正确意识,拥抱科技时代的发展机遇。
【参考答案】
1. Artificial intelligence has greatly changed people’s daily life.
2. We should make good use of technology while guarding against its potential risks.
3. Teenagers should build a correct awareness and embrace development opportunities brought by the technology age.
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选择性必修第一册 Unit 2 Looking into the Future 议论文
话题总览
写作任务
1 单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:观点类议论文细分场景:探讨人工智能利弊;畅想未来科技对生活的影响;分析未来技术带来的机遇与挑战
2 高考写作大类归类归属:读后续写素材积累、概要写作;书面表达读后续写情境话题,全国卷书面表达应用文极少考查议论文
③ 高考命题切入点一句话点明围绕科技发展、未来生活展开观点论述,辩证分析科技带来的便利与潜在风险,表达个人看法。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁稳定,全国卷书面表达真题不单独考查议论文
近三年新高考全国卷书面表达以书信类应用文为主,从未考查独立议论文写作。本单元话题主要依托读后续写、七选五、阅读理解语篇考查;各地模拟卷常设置科技类观点短文写作任务。
2. 命题形式固定:提纲式观点任务
读后续写常设置未来科技相关情境;概要写作文本多围绕人工智能、未来生活主题,要求概括正反两方观点。
3. 三大贴合命题素材
- 人工智能类(最高频):智能家居、自动驾驶、AI 医疗、AI 教育
- 生活变革类:远程办公、无人产业、太空探索
- 社会问题类:就业冲击、信息安全、沉迷智能设备
三大考查维度
(1)语言能力(阅卷核心得分点)
① 篇章结构规范:引入话题 — 正反观点论述 — 个人观点总结
② 逻辑表达分层
开头:引出科技发展相关话题,点明核心讨论方向
主体:分层论述科技优势;再分析科技带来的隐患与挑战,使用衔接词(However, On the one hand, On the other hand)
结尾:总结观点,提出合理看待科技发展的态度
③ 句式梯度
基础:简单观点句型(Technology will change our daily life.)
高分升级:让步状语从句、倒装、非谓语、名词性从句;对比类高级表达(Although..., there exist some problems.)
④ 词汇得体性
选用科技、发展、机遇、挑战类地道词汇,观点表述客观理性,避免极端化表达。
(2)思维素养(命题深层导向)
1. 辩证思辨能力:能够全面看待科技利弊,不单一肯定或否定科技发展
2. 理性预判能力:立足现实科技发展趋势,合理畅想未来生活变化
(3)文化意识(立德树人考查方向)
树立科技向善理念,认识科技创新需要规范约束,坚持科技服务人类美好生活。
高频出题设问形式
1. 人工智能飞速发展,请你撰写短文谈谈人工智能带来的利弊,并表达你的看法。
2. 学校英语征文主题 “未来生活”,请你畅想科技如何改变普通人的日常生活。
3. 有人认为机器人将会取代大量人类工作,请你结合现实发表观点。
4. 高中生开展科技研讨,请写短文分析自动驾驶技术带来的机遇与风险。
第一步:锁定单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:围绕未来科技发展主题,撰写议论文,辩证分析人工智能等科技带来的机遇与挑战
2. 文体:观点类议论文;特点:逻辑层次清晰、观点客观理性、正反双向论述、立足现实畅想未来
3. 写作对象:高中生英语征文比赛读者,客观理性表达看法,杜绝极端化观点
4. 核心写作要点
① 科技发展给生活带来的便利与改变;② 人工智能、自动驾驶等技术潜藏的就业、安全隐患;③ 青年看待科技发展的合理态度
第二步:三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1 段)
引出科技飞速发展的时代背景,点明本文探讨科技发展利弊的写作主题。
2. 主体分层(3 段核心)
第一层:分析科技创新带来的生活便利,列举智能家居、远程医疗等现实案例。
第二层:探讨科技发展伴随的各类社会问题,如就业冲击、个人信息安全风险。
第三层:提出青年视角下的思考,阐明应当合理利用科技、规范科技发展。
3. 结尾收尾(1 段)
总结全文观点,展望科技服务人类美好生活的发展方向,升华主题。
【基础版范文(适配英语薄弱学生,句式简单、要点齐全)】
【高分拓展范文(适配中优等生,复合句、非谓语、逻辑递进、立意升华)】
板块 1:开篇・引出话题,亮明讨论方向
1. With the rapid development of technology, artificial intelligence has brought great changes to our life.
随着科技飞速发展,人工智能给我们的生活带来巨大改变。
2. Opinions vary from person to person about whether AI is a blessing or a challenge.
人工智能究竟是福音还是挑战,人们看法不一。
3. People are having a heated discussion about the influences of future technology on teenagers.
人们正在热烈探讨未来科技对青少年产生的影响。
板块 2:主体・辩证论述利弊(逻辑分层,观点客观)
1. On the one hand, AI brings convenience to our daily study and work.
一方面,人工智能为我们日常学习与工作带来便利。
2. If widely used, self-driving technology can greatly reduce traffic accidents.
如果广泛应用,自动驾驶技术能够大幅减少交通事故。
3. On the other hand, the popularity of AI may cause some workers to lose their jobs.
另一方面,人工智能普及可能导致部分劳动者失业。
4. It would be better if strict rules are made to avoid risks caused by high technology.
如果制定严格规范规避高新科技带来的风险,情况会更好。
5. We should make full use of technology while keeping an eye on its hidden dangers.
我们应当充分利用科技,同时警惕其潜藏风险。
板块 3:结尾・总结观点,升华青年思考
1. As teenagers, we should hold a reasonable attitude towards the development of new technology.
作为青少年,我们应当理性看待新技术的发展。
2. Only when we make good use of technology can it serve human beings better.
唯有合理利用科技,它才能更好地服务人类。
3. It is our duty to guide technology to bring more benefits to society.
引导科技为社会创造更多价值,是我们的责任。
【标准写作模板】
模板①(简洁标准版)
Nowadays, ________ is developing rapidly and changing our daily life greatly. People have different opinions about its influences.
In my view, we should treat ________ properly.
On one hand, ________________________________________________________.
On the other hand, ____________________________________________________.
As teenagers, we should make good use of ________ while paying attention to its hidden risks. Only in this way can it bring more benefits to human beings.
模板②(分层高分版)
With the rapid development of science and technology, ________ has stepped into our daily life. Opinions vary from person to person about whether it is a blessing or a challenge.
First of all, _________________________________. Besides, ____________________________________.
However, ________________________________________________.
From my perspective, we should take advantage of ________ reasonably. We should make strict rules to avoid its bad influences.
【升级策略】
1. 观点议论文核心写作注意事项
定位:辩证分析科技利弊,立足现实客观表达看法,不可极端片面
首段写作要点:引出科技发展话题,简短点明文章探讨方向,亮出讨论主题
主体段写作要点
① 每层观点搭配现实案例支撑,有理有据,杜绝空洞空想
② 先分析科技带来的便利,再探讨潜藏社会隐患,避免单一视角
③ 多使用对比衔接词,搭建清晰逻辑链条,体现思辨能力
尾段写作要点:总结观点,立足青年视角,提出合理看待科技发展的态度
2. 写作流程导图
引出话题,点明探讨核心
分层论述科技优势与潜在风险
总结观点,提出合理发展科技的思考
【典例1】
近几年,AI工具开始逐渐进入人们的日常生活和工作中,你校英语公众号上围绕使用AI工具的利弊产生了热烈的讨论。请你写一篇文章发表你的看法,内容包括:
(1)你对AI工具使用的看法;
(2)你的理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【典例2】
英语课上,同学们就“Do smart homes make life easier?”进行了分组讨论。请你作为小组代表发言,内容包括:
1.阐述观点;
2.说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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1. 词性转换(建议信高频词变形)
1. invent → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. explore → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
3. exist → (n.) ________ → (adj.) ________
2. 句子改写升级
原句:AI brings convenience to our life. It also causes some social problems.
① 定语从句合并复合句:________________________________________
② 非谓语动词改写:________________________________________
原句:I think we should take a reasonable attitude towards high technology.
③ 观点升级句式改写:________________________________________
3. 汉译英(议论文标准句式)
1. 人工智能已经深刻改变了人们的日常生活。
2. 我们应当合理利用科技,同时警惕它带来的潜在风险。
3. 青年应当树立正确意识,拥抱科技时代的发展机遇。
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