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Unit 2 Looking into the Future科学技术
应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:科技话题议论文
写作框架:
第一段
引入评论的话题。
第二段
列举正方观点及理由;列举反方观点及理由。
第三段
表明自己的观点并发表自己的意见。
写作词汇短语:
表示赞成
positive adj.肯定的, 实际的, 积极的, , 确实的
favorable adj.赞成的, 有利的, 赞许的, 良好的
approval n. 赞成, 承认, 正式批准
表示否定
negative adj.否定的, 消极的, 负的, 阴性的
disapproval 不赞成
objection 异议
opposition 反对
critical 批评的
表示怀疑
suspicious adj.(~ of) 可疑的, 怀疑的
doubtful adj.可疑的, 不确的, 疑心的
表示客观 (即好的坏的都说,选的可能性极大)
objective adj.客观的
neutral adj.中立的
impartial adj.公平的, 不偏不倚的
disinterested adj.无私的
表示主观
subjective adj.主观的, 个人的
indifference n.不关心
表示积极
concerned 关注的
interested adj.感兴趣的, 有成见的, 有权益的
optimistic adj.乐观的
表示中立/折中
impartial adj.公平的, 不偏不倚的
neutral 中立的
impersonal adj.非个人的
写作句型:
常用表达
1. We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to. . .
2. We’ve had a survey on. . .
3. I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about. . .
过渡句:
1. Opinions are divided on this issue.
2. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
3. Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.
4. Different people,however,think quite differently on this matter.
介绍正方观点:
1. 45% of the students hold the view that. . . For one thing,. . . For another,. . .
2. 60% of the students are for the idea.
介绍反方观点:
On the contrary/However/As the old saying goes,each coin has two sides. Nearly half of the students think that. . . on one hand,. . . on the other hand,. . .
写作模板:
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over __________(引出话题或对象).
In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __________(讨论议题).Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, __________(优点一).And secondly, __________ (优点二).
Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”__________(讨论议题) is no exception, and in other words, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, __________(缺点一).In addition, __________(缺点二).
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of ________(讨论议题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of __________(总结).
真题示例:
(2022·全国·高考乙卷真题)学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.
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【佳作欣赏】
举一反三:
(23-24高二上·安徽宿州·阶段练习)假设你是李华,最近你班就“人类是否应该开展克隆研究”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信给某英文报社的记者,让其报道此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1.挽救濒危动物;
2.再造人体器官,用于移植。
1.引起基因不良变异;
2.克隆人导致伦理道德混乱。
……
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out.
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Yours,
Li Hua
1.(23-24高二上·江苏·期中)假如你是Ben,设想未来50岁的你得知现在的你为未来职业而焦虑,为此给现在的自己写一封信,内容包括:
1. 对未来工作的描述;
2. 先进科技对你未来职业的利和弊。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.(23-24高二上·全国·课后作业)假设你是李华,最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
联系他人便利;
获得更多的学习资源。
沉溺手机;
浏览不健康网站。
……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
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Your,
Li Hua
3.(24-25高二下·内蒙古呼和浩特·阶段练习)某英文杂志社将举办以“Schools of Tomorrow in 10 Years”为主题的征文活动。你被学校推荐参加该项活动,请你根据以下内容要求,写一篇征文。内容包括:
1. 想象未来学校;
2. 描述教学变化;
3. 讨论影响与看法。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Schools of Tomorrow in 10 Years
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4.(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳·期末)假如你是李华,上周末参观了一场机器人展,你的朋友Bob对此很感兴趣,写信向你询问机器人展上的一些细节。请你给他写一封回信,和他介绍一下你最感兴趣的机器人。
内容包括:1. 该机器人的特点;2. 你对该机器人的看法。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.(23-24高二上·湖北·期中)假如你是李华,上周末参观了一场机器人展,你的朋友Bob对此很感兴趣,写信向你询问相关情况。请你给他写一封回信,和他介绍一种你最感兴趣的机器人(如:家庭机器人、陪伴机器人、教育机器人……)。内容包括:
(1)该机器人的特点;
(2)你对该机器人的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(24-25高二上·福建龙岩·期末)你校英文报为学校科技节组织征文比赛,请你用英文写一篇短文,介绍你了解的一款智能设备。内容包括:
1. 简要介绍;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
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7.(24-25高二上·甘肃白银·阶段练习)你校将举行一场英语演讲比赛,话题是“畅想未来生活”。请你用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。演讲稿内容要点如下:
1.科技发展给人们的未来带来的影响;
2.如何迎接挑战,适应新生活。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
8.(24-25高二上·广东茂名·阶段练习)假定你是李华,想参加你校英语俱乐部组织的演讲比赛, 畅想未来的交通工具,请根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿,参加比赛。
1. 对未来的交通工具展开设想(只写一种);
2. 分析可能存在的利弊;
3. 表明你的观点。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
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Unit 2 Looking into the Future科学技术
应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:科技话题议论文
写作框架:
第一段
引入评论的话题。
第二段
列举正方观点及理由;列举反方观点及理由。
第三段
表明自己的观点并发表自己的意见。
写作词汇短语:
表示赞成
positive adj.肯定的, 实际的, 积极的, , 确实的
favorable adj.赞成的, 有利的, 赞许的, 良好的
approval n. 赞成, 承认, 正式批准
表示否定
negative adj.否定的, 消极的, 负的, 阴性的
disapproval 不赞成
objection 异议
opposition 反对
critical 批评的
表示怀疑
suspicious adj.(~ of) 可疑的, 怀疑的
doubtful adj.可疑的, 不确的, 疑心的
表示客观 (即好的坏的都说,选的可能性极大)
objective adj.客观的
neutral adj.中立的
impartial adj.公平的, 不偏不倚的
disinterested adj.无私的
表示主观
subjective adj.主观的, 个人的
indifference n.不关心
表示积极
concerned 关注的
interested adj.感兴趣的, 有成见的, 有权益的
optimistic adj.乐观的
表示中立/折中
impartial adj.公平的, 不偏不倚的
neutral 中立的
impersonal adj.非个人的
写作句型:
常用表达
1. We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to. . .
2. We’ve had a survey on. . .
3. I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about. . .
过渡句:
1. Opinions are divided on this issue.
2. Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
3. Different people,however,have different opinions on this matter.
4. Different people,however,think quite differently on this matter.
介绍正方观点:
1. 45% of the students hold the view that. . . For one thing,. . . For another,. . .
2. 60% of the students are for the idea.
介绍反方观点:
On the contrary/However/As the old saying goes,each coin has two sides. Nearly half of the students think that. . . on one hand,. . . on the other hand,. . .
写作模板:
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over __________(引出话题或对象).
In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __________(讨论议题).Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, __________(优点一).And secondly, __________ (优点二).
Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”__________(讨论议题) is no exception, and in other words, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, __________(缺点一).In addition, __________(缺点二).
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of ________(讨论议题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of __________(总结).
真题示例:
(2022·全国·高考乙卷真题)学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.
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【佳作欣赏】
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论,提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
缺乏:lack→shortage
加强:strengthen→enhance
各种各样的:various→all kinds of
就我而言:as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
拓展句:However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
举一反三:
(23-24高二上·安徽宿州·阶段练习)假设你是李华,最近你班就“人类是否应该开展克隆研究”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信给某英文报社的记者,让其报道此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1.挽救濒危动物;
2.再造人体器官,用于移植。
1.引起基因不良变异;
2.克隆人导致伦理道德混乱。
……
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Editor,
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the clone research should be carried out.
Some students are in favor of the clone research. In their opinion, cloning is helpful in detecting the cures for many diseases, which is also useful in saving the endangered animals. What’s more, cloning could offer some help to those patients in need of perfect organs.
Nevertheless, there are some students strongly opposed to it. Though cloning would improve the quality of life, it might bring about some social problems and have some bad physical effects.
Personally, cloning should be dealt with carefully and monitored closely by government, because we do not fully understand what effects cloning will have on the world in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据“人类是否应该开展克隆研究”的讨论结果,写一封信给某英文报社的记者,让其报道此事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此外:what’s more→besides
支持:be in favor of→approve
导致:bring about→lead to
应对:deal with→handle
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What’s more, cloning could offer some help to those patients in need of perfect organs.
拓展句:What’s more, cloning could offer some help to those who are in need of perfect organs.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In their opinion, cloning is helpful in detecting the cures for many diseases, which is also useful in saving the endangered animals. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Personally, cloning should be dealt with carefully and monitored closely by government, because we do not fully understand what effects cloning will have on the world in the future. (运用了because引导原因状语从句和what引导宾语从句)
1.(23-24高二上·江苏·期中)假如你是Ben,设想未来50岁的你得知现在的你为未来职业而焦虑,为此给现在的自己写一封信,内容包括:
1. 对未来工作的描述;
2. 先进科技对你未来职业的利和弊。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】Dear Past Ben,
Hi! I’m Ben, your future self! I know that you are really worried about your future career, so I wanted to write this letter to put your mind at rest.
On the one hand, in the future, computers will be incredibly smart, so they can help you — a chef working at a fancy restaurant a lot. You will mix and cook virtual ingredients on a virtual screen while a robot will do all the real work for you.
On the other hand, computers will still lack creativity. They cannot come up with recipes for new and exciting dishes, so you need to create new dishes by yourself, which will be your main work. In fact it imposes higher requirements on chefs. You will have to be very creative and keep trying.
All in all, I think you will be happy with your future job, because we both like to eat! So stop worrying. Your future will be great. Trust me!
Best regards,
Future Ben
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。设想未来50岁的你得知现在的你为未来职业而焦虑,要求考生给现在的自己写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心的:worried→concerned
高兴的:happy→delighted
提出:come up with→put forward
总之:all in all→in short
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:In fact it imposes higher requirements on chefs. You will have to be very creative and keep trying.
拓展句:You will have to be very creative and keep trying because it imposes higher requirements on chefs.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I know that you are really worried about your future career, so I wanted to write this letter to put your mind at rest. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] They cannot come up with recipes for new and exciting dishes, so you need to create new dishes by yourself, which will be your main work. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2.(23-24高二上·全国·课后作业)假设你是李华,最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论,请根据讨论结果,写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
联系他人便利;
获得更多的学习资源。
沉溺手机;
浏览不健康网站。
……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor,
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Your,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Editor,
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
Some students have a preference for cellphones. Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives. The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones, they can obtain relevant learning resources. Nevertheless, there are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much. So addicted to cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance. Besides, with many unhealthy websites on the Internet, they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
Personally, I advocate that all the students (should) combine using cellphones with face-to-face communication.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就你班“使用手机的利与弊”讨论结果给校报编辑写封信。其内容包括赞成的理由、反对的理由以及考生自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
能够:can →be able to
很多:many→plenty of
疏远:keep sb at a distance →draw oneself away from sb
而且:besides →moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Some students have a preference for cellphones. Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
拓展句:Some students have a preference for cellphones, believing that cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 Nevertheless, there are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
3.(24-25高二下·内蒙古呼和浩特·阶段练习)某英文杂志社将举办以“Schools of Tomorrow in 10 Years”为主题的征文活动。你被学校推荐参加该项活动,请你根据以下内容要求,写一篇征文。内容包括:
1. 想象未来学校;
2. 描述教学变化;
3. 讨论影响与看法。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Schools of Tomorrow in 10 Years
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【参考范文】
Schools of Tomorrow in 10 Years
In the next decade, schools will embrace smart technology. Classrooms will have interactive holograms replacing blackboards, while AI tutors provide personalized learning plans. Students may study through VR simulations, exploring ancient Rome or outer space instantly.
Teaching will shift from passive lectures to active exploration. Teachers will guide students in critical thinking and collaboration rather than delivering facts. Online platforms will allow global peer discussions, breaking geographical limits.
While technology brings efficiency, we must ensure it enhances human connection. Face-to-face communication and emotional intelligence remain irreplaceable. If balanced wisely, future schools can nurture both innovation and humanity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Schools of Tomorrow in 10 Years”为主题,写一篇征文,描述未来学校的情况和教学变化,讨论影响与看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:provide→supply
立刻:instantly→immediately
传递:deliver→convey
允许:allow→permit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Online platforms will allow global peer discussions, breaking geographical limits.
拓展句:Online platforms will allow global peer discussions, which breaks geographical limits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While technology brings efficiency, we must ensure it enhances human connection.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句和省略连接词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If balanced wisely, future schools can nurture both innovation and humanity.(运用了状语从句的省略)
4.(24-25高二上·湖南衡阳·期末)假如你是李华,上周末参观了一场机器人展,你的朋友Bob对此很感兴趣,写信向你询问机器人展上的一些细节。请你给他写一封回信,和他介绍一下你最感兴趣的机器人。
内容包括:1. 该机器人的特点;2. 你对该机器人的看法。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Bob,
Knowing from your letter that you are interested in robots, I am writing to share my wonderful experience with you.
What attracts me most is a companion robot that is exactly like a human being. It can walk and talk just like a person does. The companion robot is supposed to be a friend for people who live alone, and it could provide people with a lot of comfort and enrich their lives. In addition, the robot could help monitor the health condition of people. Personally, I do see the companion robot as a solution to people’s problems.
I wish I could visit the robot exhibition with you next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的朋友Bob写一封回信,介绍一下你最感兴趣的机器人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣:be interested in → be keen on
绝妙的:wonderful → marvelous
吸引:attract → draw
此外:in addition → moreover
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In addition, the robot could help monitor the health condition of people.
同义句:Moreover, it is the extraordinarily robot that could help monitor the health condition of people.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What attracts me most is a companion robot that is exactly like a human being.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The companion robot is supposed to be a friend for people who live alone, and it could provide people with a lot of comfort and enrich their lives.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
5.(23-24高二上·湖北·期中)假如你是李华,上周末参观了一场机器人展,你的朋友Bob对此很感兴趣,写信向你询问相关情况。请你给他写一封回信,和他介绍一种你最感兴趣的机器人(如:家庭机器人、陪伴机器人、教育机器人……)。内容包括:
(1)该机器人的特点;
(2)你对该机器人的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Bob,
Knowing from your letter that you are interested in robots, I am writing to share my wonderful experience with you.
What attracts me most is a companion robot that is exactly like a human being. It can walk and talk just like a person does. The companion robot is supposed to be a friend for people living alone, which also provides people with a lot of comfort and enrich their lives. In addition, the robot could help monitor the health condition of people real-time in case any emergency arises. Personally, I do see the companion robot as a solution to people’s problems.
I wish I could visit the robot exhibition with you next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给朋友Bob写回信,介绍上周末机器人展中自己最感兴趣的一种机器人。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
极好的:wonderful → fantastic
吸引:attract → draw/appeal to
舒适,安慰:comfort → consolation
此外:in addition → besides
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Personally, I do see the companion robot as a solution to people’s problems.
拓展句:Personally, I do see the companion robot as a solution to people’s problems, especially when they feel lonely or need support.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing from your letter that you are interested in robots, I am writing to share my wonderful experience with you. (运用了现在分词短语作原因状语和连词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What attracts me most is a companion robot that is exactly like a human being. (运用了连词what引导的主语从句和关系代词that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型3] The companion robot is supposed to be a friend for people living alone, which also provides people with a lot of comfort and enriches their lives. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句)
6.(24-25高二上·福建龙岩·期末)你校英文报为学校科技节组织征文比赛,请你用英文写一篇短文,介绍你了解的一款智能设备。内容包括:
1. 简要介绍;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Among various smart devices, smartwatches stand out with their multi-functional features.
They not only tell time but also track fitness, receive notifications, and make calls. This integration of technology into a watch has transformed the way that we manage our daily activities. Personally, I find smartwatches incredibly convenient as they keep me updated without constantly checking my phone. Moreover, their health monitoring features motivate me to stay active and maintain a healthier lifestyle.
Overall, smartwatches enhance our efficiency and encourage a balanced life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报为学校科技节组织征文比赛,要求考生按照要求用英文写一篇短文,介绍自己了解的一款智能设备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various → all kinds of
令人难以置信:incredibly → unbelievably
不断地,频繁地:constantly → frequently
保持:maintain → keep
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:They not only tell time but also track fitness, receive notifications, and make calls.
拓展句:Not only do they tell time but also they track fitness, receive notifications, and make calls.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This integration of technology into a watch has transformed the way that we manage our daily activities.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Personally, I find smartwatches incredibly convenient as they keep me updated without constantly checking my phone.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
7.(24-25高二上·甘肃白银·阶段练习)你校将举行一场英语演讲比赛,话题是“畅想未来生活”。请你用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。演讲稿内容要点如下:
1.科技发展给人们的未来带来的影响;
2.如何迎接挑战,适应新生活。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文】One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk about the future life and study here. Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing, we can also spend more time traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements. In addition, we will have less stress either from our study or from the work since we can work more efficiently.
However, our future life is not only full of joy, but full of challenges. Therefore, we should face them bravely, making more contributions to the development of the future society.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举行一场英语演讲比赛,要求考生根据写一篇话题是“畅想未来生活”的参赛演讲稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供:be provided with → be supplied with
此外:In addition → What’s more
压力:stress → pressure
娱乐:amusements → entertainments
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Therefore, we should work harder today, making preparations to make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world.
拓展句:Therefore, we should work harder today, making preparations so that we can make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing, we can also spend more time traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements. (运用了not only引导部分倒装句)
【高分句型2】In addition, we will have less stress either from our study or from the work since we can work more efficiently. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
8.(24-25高二上·广东茂名·阶段练习)假定你是李华,想参加你校英语俱乐部组织的演讲比赛, 畅想未来的交通工具,请根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿,参加比赛。
1. 对未来的交通工具展开设想(只写一种);
2. 分析可能存在的利弊;
3. 表明你的观点。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
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【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech is Transportation in the Future.
In the future, the flying car will appear and be widely used in our daily life. Not only is it user-friendly, but also it can help save time. However, every coin has two sides. The flying car is no difference. For example, some people may complain about the noise it will make. In my opinion, technology is just a tool. We should improve related laws and let it serve our life better. This is the end of my speech.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿,参加学校英语俱乐部组织的演讲比赛,对未来的交通工具展开设想,分析可能存在的利弊,并表明自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
在我看来:in my opinion→in my view
提高:improve→promote
演讲:speech→lecture
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In the future, the flying car will appear and be widely used in our daily life.
拓展句:In the future, the flying car will appear, which will be widely used in our daily life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only is it user-friendly, but also it can help save time. (运用了部分倒装句)
【高分句型2】For example, some people may complain about the noise it will make. (运用了省略that或which引导的定语从句)
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