摘要:
**基本信息**
以“素材-句型-方法-训练”四维体系构建校园生活写作能力,通过阶梯式训练培养语言组织与表达能力,提升英语写作核心素养。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|5类主题词汇+2类功能表达|按“学校场所-学科-活动-交通-频度”分类记忆,构建话题词汇网络|从具体词汇到功能句型,形成“词-短语-句”的语言要素链|
|黄金句型库|3类基础句型+6组升级示例|“基础句→细节拓展→逻辑连接”三步升级法,提升表达丰富度|从简单描述到复合句运用,体现语言能力进阶逻辑|
|高分写作方法|5步写作流程|审题定位→结构搭建→内容丰富→语言提升→检查修改,形成标准化写作路径|按“整体介绍-分点阐述-总结感受”的篇章逻辑组织内容|
|阶梯训练|3级句子训练+2篇篇章写作|“汉译英→句型仿写→句子升级→篇章应用”渐进式训练,强化方法迁移|从单句准确表达到篇章连贯输出,符合语言学习规律|
内容正文:
Unit 3 Our Colorful School Life
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
学校场所
school 学校
classroom 教室
teaching building 教学楼
playground 操场
library 图书馆
garden 花园
science building 科学楼
office 办公室
dining hall 食堂
gym 体育馆
学科科目
Chinese 语文
English 英语
maths 数学
science 科学
biology 生物学
history 历史
geography 地理
PE 体育
art 美术
music 音乐
学校活动
raise the national flag 升国旗
have classes 上课
do homework 做作业
take part in 参加
join the club 加入社团
play sports 做运动
draw pictures 画画
sing songs 唱歌
read books 读书
do exercises 做操
交通方式
on foot 步行
by bike 骑自行车
by bus 乘公共汽车
by underground 乘地铁
by car 乘小汽车
by train 乘火车
by ship 乘船
频度副词
always 总是
usually 通常
often 经常
sometimes 有时
seldom 很少
never 从不
2. 高频搭配
raise the national flag 升国旗
take part in 参加
make friends with 与……交朋友
on the playground 在操场上
in the music club 在音乐俱乐部
talk about 谈论
far from 远离
on foot 步行
by bike 骑自行车
by underground 乘地铁
how about / what about ……怎么样
get to school 到校
have fun 玩得开心
3. 写作功能表达
描述学校
My school is ... 我的学校……
There is / are ... 有……
It is beautiful / big / clean. 它美丽/大/干净。
描述课程与时间
We start the first class at ...
我们在……开始上第一节课。
I have ... classes every day.
我每天有……节课。
My favorite subject is ...
我最喜欢的科目是……
描述交通方式
I usually come to school ...
我通常……来学校。
I live far from / near school.
我住得离学校远/近。
It takes ... minutes to get to school.
到学校需要……分钟。
描述社团与活动
There are many clubs in our school.
我们学校有很多社团。
I enjoy ... in the ... club.
我喜欢在……社团……。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
My school life is fun and colorful.
我的学校生活有趣又多彩。
I study at a middle school in ...
我在……的一所中学学习。
Let me introduce my school life to you.
让我向你介绍我的校园生活。
I love my school very much.
我非常爱我的学校。
2. 主体句型
We start the first class at 8:00 a.m. every day.
我们每天早上八点开始上第一节课。
I have seven classes each day.
我每天有七节课。
My favorite subject is PE.
我最喜欢的科目是体育。
There are many student clubs in our school.
我们学校有很多学生社团。
I enjoy singing and playing the guitar in the music club.
我喜欢在音乐俱乐部唱歌和弹吉他。
3. 结尾句型
I really love going to school.
我真的很喜欢上学。
Our school life is fun and we can learn a lot here.
我们的校园生活很有趣,我们在这里能学到很多。
Welcome to our school!
欢迎来我们学校!
I am happy to study at this school.
我很高兴在这所学校学习。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
I have classes every day. 我每天都有课。
I have seven classes each day, four in the morning and three in the afternoon. 我每天有七节课,上午四节,下午三节。
I like PE class. 我喜欢体育课。
My favorite subject is PE because I enjoy playing sports on the playground with my friends. 我最喜欢的科目是体育,因为我喜欢和朋友在操场上做运动。
There are clubs in our school. 我们学校有社团。
There are many student clubs in our school, such as the music club, the art club and the sports club. 我们学校有很多学生社团,比如音乐社团、美术社团和体育社团。
I go to school by bus. 我坐公交车上学。
My home is not very far from school, so I usually come to school by bike, sometimes on foot. 我家离学校不远,所以我通常骑自行车上学,有时步行。
Our school life is fun. 我们的校园生活很有趣。
Our school life is fun and colorful. We can learn a lot and make many friends here. 我们的校园生活有趣又多彩。我们在这里能学到很多,交到很多朋友。
I love my school. 我爱我的学校。
I love my school because the teachers are kind and the campus is beautiful. I enjoy every day here. 我爱我的学校,因为老师们很友善,校园也很美。我享受在这里的每一天。
四、高分写作方法
Step 1 审题定位
明确写作任务为“为学校设计一个网页,介绍校园生活”。写作内容应包括学校基本情况、每天课程安排、校园设施、社团活动以及上学交通方式。
写作形式: 网页介绍文案(Web Page Introduction)
写作对象: 学校网站访客
时态要求: 一般现在时为主
Step 2 搭建结构
第一段:总体介绍学校
说明学校的名称、位置、环境和总体印象,点明校园生活丰富多彩。
第二段:介绍课程与作息
描述一天的时间安排、所学科目、最喜欢的科目等。
第三段:介绍社团与活动
介绍学校的社团、课外活动以及自己的参与情况,说明上学交通方式。
Step 3 丰富内容
不要只简单罗列信息,要加入个人感受和具体细节。例如不只写“I have PE class.”,还要写“My favorite class is PE. I enjoy playing basketball on the playground.”
Step 4 提升语言
使用There be句型(There is / are ...)、频度副词(usually, often, sometimes)、交通方式表达(on foot, by bus)和连接词(and, because, so),使文章内容清晰、结构完整。
Step 5 检查修改
检查内容是否完整(学校概况→课程作息→社团活动→交通方式)、结构是否清晰(三段式)、There be句型单复数是否正确、频度副词使用是否恰当、拼写和标点是否有误。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我的学校生活有趣又多彩。
____________________________________________________________
2. 我们每天早上八点开始上第一节课。
____________________________________________________________
3. 我最喜欢的科目是体育。
____________________________________________________________
4. 我们学校有很多学生社团。
____________________________________________________________
5. 我真的很喜欢上学。
____________________________________________________________
Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:My school life is ...(描述校园生活)
例句: My school life is fun and colorful.
(1)我的校园生活忙碌但有趣。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我的校园生活非常精彩。
____________________________________________________________
句型 2:There is / are ...(描述学校设施)
例句: There is a beautiful teaching building in our school.
(1)我们学校有一个大操场。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们学校有一个图书馆和一个小花园。
____________________________________________________________
句型 3:We start ... at ...(描述时间安排)
例句: We start the first class at 8:00 a.m.
(1)我们下午四点四十分放学。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们每天早上升国旗。
____________________________________________________________
句型 4:My favorite subject is ...(描述喜爱的科目)
例句: My favorite subject is PE.
(1)我最喜欢的科目是历史。
____________________________________________________________
(2)她最喜欢的科目是音乐。
____________________________________________________________
句型 5:I enjoy / love ... in the ... club.(描述社团活动)
例句: I enjoy singing in the music club.
(1)我喜欢在美术俱乐部画画。
____________________________________________________________
(2)他喜欢在体育俱乐部打篮球。
____________________________________________________________
句型 6:I usually come to school ...(描述交通方式)
例句: I usually come to school by bus.
(1)我通常步行来学校。
____________________________________________________________
(2)她有时乘地铁来学校。
____________________________________________________________
Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:My school is beautiful.
升级句:My school is very beautiful. There is a big playground and a small garden in it.
1. 基础句:I have classes every day.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:I like PE class.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:There are clubs in our school.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:I go to school by bus.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:Our school life is fun.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I love my school.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.亲爱的同学们,初中生活开启了我们人生的新篇章。请结合基本提示,以My School Life为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的学校生活。
提示:
1. What is your school like? What buildings are there in your school?
2. What subjects do you have? What’s your favorite subject and why?
3. When does your school begin and finish? What do you usually do after school?
4. What do you think of your school life?
My School Life
This is my first term in my new school. I live a happy life here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.假设你是李华,你校英语社团正在举办主题为“My daily routine”的征文活动。请你根据以下图片中的提示内容,写一篇英语短文投稿,简要介绍你的日常作息。
要求:1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
My name is Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my daily routine. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. My school life is fun and colorful.
2. We start the first class at 8:00 a.m. every day.
3. My favorite subject is PE.
4. There are many student clubs in our school.
5. I really love going to school.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)My school life is busy but fun.
(2)My school life is very wonderful.
句型 2
(1)There is a big playground in our school.
(2)There is a library and a small garden in our school.
句型 3
(1)We finish school at 4:40 p.m.
(2)We raise the national flag every morning.
句型 4
(1)My favorite subject is history.
(2)Her favorite subject is music.
句型 5
(1)I enjoy drawing in the art club.
(2)He enjoys playing basketball in the sports club.
句型 6
(1)I usually come to school on foot.
(2)She sometimes comes to school by underground.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:I have seven classes each day, four in the morning and three in the afternoon.
2. 升级句:My favorite subject is PE because I enjoy playing sports on the playground with my friends.
3. 升级句:There are many student clubs in our school, such as the music club, the art club and the sports club.
4. 升级句:My home is not very far from school, so I usually come to school by bike, sometimes on foot.
5. 升级句:Our school life is fun and colorful. We can learn a lot and make many friends here.
6. 升级句:I love my school because the teachers are kind and the campus is beautiful. I enjoy every day here.
篇章训练(参考范文)
1.参考例文:
My School Life
This is my first term in my new school. I live a happy life here.
My new school is big and beautiful. There are three teaching buildings, a new sports field and a dining hall. This term, I have many subjects like English, history, music and PE. My favorite subject is maths because I am good with numbers. And I want to be a scientist in the future.
I am busy on school days. My classes begin at 8 am and finish at 4 pm. We have 4 classes in the morning and 2 classes in the afternoon. After school, I go to the sports club. I like playing badminton.
I have a really good time in my new school and make good friends here. I love my new school.
2.例文
My name is Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my daily routine.
I usually get up at 6:00 in the morning. After washing my face and brushing my teeth, I have a healthy breakfast. Then I go to school and have four classes. In the afternoon, I have three classes. When school is over, I often play sports with my friends. I go home at 6:30 p.m. In the evening, I do my homework carefully. After finishing it, I sometimes read books to relax. Finally, I go to sleep at 10:00.
I think my daily routine is busy but meaningful.
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