摘要:
**基本信息**
以“家庭介绍”为主题,构建“素材积累-句型升级-结构搭建-阶梯训练”四维写作体系,系统培养语言组织与表达能力。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|4类主题词汇、13个高频搭配、4项功能表达|分类整合词汇,建立“主题词-搭配-功能句”关联|从基础词汇到功能表达,构建语言要素网络|
|黄金句型库|3类基础句型、6组升级对比|“基础句+细节拓展”升级策略,如添加职业场所/情感描述|通过句型变式训练,提升语言表达丰富度|
|高分写作方法|5步成文法(审题-结构-内容-语言-检查)|三段式结构搭建(引出家庭-介绍家人-活动感受)|遵循“任务分析-框架构建-内容填充-语言优化”逻辑链|
|阶梯训练|3级句子训练(汉译英/仿写/升级)、2篇篇章写作|从单句翻译到篇章创作,逐步提升写作复杂度|符合“词句-段落-篇章”的语言能力发展规律|
内容正文:
Unit 2 Meet My Family!
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
家庭成员
family 家庭;家人
grandfather / grandpa 爷爷;外公
grandmother / grandma 奶奶;外婆
father / dad 父亲;爸爸
mother / mum 母亲;妈妈
uncle 叔叔;伯父;舅舅
aunt 姑姑;阿姨;舅妈
brother 哥哥;弟弟
sister 姐姐;妹妹
cousin 堂(表)兄弟姐妹
son 儿子
daughter 女儿
parent 父亲(或母亲)
child 孩子;儿童
职业与工作场所
teacher 教师
doctor 医生
nurse 护士
worker 工人
driver 司机
policewoman 女警察
cook 厨师
farmer 农民
bus driver 公交车司机
factory worker 工厂工人
in a hospital 在医院
in a school 在学校
in a factory 在工厂
外貌与穿着
tall 高的
short 矮的
strong 强壮的
pretty 漂亮的
cute 可爱的
wear 穿;戴
in a white shirt 穿着白衬衫
in a blue dress 穿着蓝色连衣裙
tie 领带
qipao 旗袍
家庭活动
live with 与……一起住
visit 拜访;参观
watch TV 看电视
do chores 做家务
cook 做饭
clean up 打扫
set the table 摆放餐具
have dinner 吃晚餐
go shopping 去购物
walk the dog 遛狗
2. 高频搭配
live with sb 与某人一起住
on weekends 在周末
in the morning / afternoon 在上午/下午
do chores 做家务
clean up 打扫
set the table 摆放餐具
help sb (to) do sth 帮助某人做某事
watch TV 看电视
go shopping 去购物
play with sb 和某人玩耍
look after 照顾;照料
What does he / she do? 他/她是做什么工作的?
work in 在……工作
3. 写作功能表达
介绍家庭人数
There are ... people in my family.
我家有……口人。
I have a big / small family.
我有一个大/小家庭。
介绍家人
This is my father / mother / ...
这是我的父亲/母亲/……
He / She is a ...
他/她是一位……
He / She works in ...
他/她在……工作。
描述外貌与穿着
He / She is tall and strong.
他/她又高又壮。
She wears a qipao.
她穿着旗袍。
He is in a white shirt.
他穿着白衬衫。
描述家庭活动
We often ... together.
我们经常一起……
We visit my grandparents on weekends.
我们周末去看望我的祖父母。
I enjoy the time with my family.
我喜欢和家人在一起的时光。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
I have a happy family.
我有一个幸福的家庭。
There are ... people in my family.
我家有……口人。
Let me introduce my family to you.
让我向你介绍我的家人。
This is a photo of my family.
这是一张我的全家福。
2. 主体句型
This is my father. He is a doctor.
这是我的父亲。他是一名医生。
My mother is a teacher. She works in a school.
我的妈妈是一名教师。她在一所学校工作。
My uncle is a bus driver. He loves his job.
我的叔叔是一名公交车司机。他热爱他的工作。
My grandmother is kind and she likes cooking.
我的奶奶很和蔼,她喜欢做饭。
3. 结尾句型
I have a happy family and we enjoy our family time.
我有一个幸福的家庭,我们享受家庭时光。
We often visit my grandparents on weekends and have dinner together.
我们周末经常去看望祖父母并一起吃饭。
I love my family very much.
我非常爱我的家人。
My family is the most important thing to me.
家人对我来说是最重要的。
4. 句型升级
基础句
升级句
My father is a doctor. 我父亲是一名医生。
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital and he is very busy. 我父亲是一名医生。他在医院工作,工作很忙。
My mother is a teacher. 我妈妈是一名教师。
My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a high school and she loves her students. 我妈妈是一名教师。她在一所高中教英语,她爱她的学生。
My grandmother is kind. 我奶奶很和蔼。
My grandmother is very kind and she always takes care of us. She likes cooking delicious food for the family. 我奶奶非常和蔼,总是照顾我们。她喜欢为家人做美味的食物。
I have a family. 我有一个家庭。
I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and me. 我有一个幸福的家庭。我家有四口人:我的父母、我的妹妹和我。
We watch TV together. 我们一起看电视。
We often watch TV together in the evening after dinner. It is a happy time for us. 晚上晚饭后我们经常一起看电视。对我们来说那是一段快乐的时光。
I love my family. 我爱我的家人。
I love my family very much because they always support me and take good care of me. 我非常爱我的家人,因为他们总是支持我、照顾我。
四、高分写作方法
Step 1 审题定位
明确写作任务为“写一篇关于家人的短文”。写作内容应包括家庭有多少口人、每位家人的身份和职业、家人的外貌和性格、以及家人一起做的事情。
写作形式: 短文(Short Passage)
写作对象: 老师或班级同学
时态要求: 一般现在时为主
Step 2 搭建结构
第一段:引出家庭
说明自己有一个什么样的家庭(大家庭/小家庭),家里有多少人,总体家庭氛围如何。
第二段:介绍家人
逐一介绍家庭成员(爸爸、妈妈、兄弟姐妹、祖父母等),说明他们的职业、外貌、性格特点或喜好。
第三段:描述家庭活动与感受
说明家人经常一起做什么,表达对家庭的喜爱。
Step 3 丰富内容
不要只写“My father is a doctor.”,还要补充细节“He works in a hospital. He is very busy but he loves his job.”
Step 4 提升语言
使用物主代词(my, his, her, our)、实义动词一般现在时的第三人称单数形式(works, teaches, likes)、连接词(and, but, because)和描述性形容词,使文章内容充实。
Step 5 检查修改
检查内容是否完整(家庭概况→家人介绍→家庭活动与感受)、结构是否清晰(三段式)、动词第三人称单数形式是否正确、物主代词是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 我有一个幸福的家庭。我家有五口人。
____________________________________________________________
2. 这是我的父亲。他是一名医生。
____________________________________________________________
3. 我的妈妈是一位老师。她在一所学校工作。
____________________________________________________________
4. 我的奶奶很和蔼。她喜欢做饭。
____________________________________________________________
5. 周末我们经常去看望祖父母并一起吃晚饭。
____________________________________________________________
Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:There are ... people in my family.(描述家庭人口)
例句: There are three people in my family.
(1)我家有四口人。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我有一个大家庭。我家有七口人。
____________________________________________________________
句型 2:This is my ...(介绍家人)
例句: This is my father.
(1)这是我的妈妈。
____________________________________________________________
(2)这是我的妹妹。
____________________________________________________________
句型 3:He / She is a ...(描述职业)
例句: My father is a doctor.
(1)我的妈妈是一名护士。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我的叔叔是一名公交车司机。
____________________________________________________________
句型 4:He / She works in ...(描述工作场所)
例句: He works in a hospital.
(1)她在一家工厂工作。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我妈妈在一所学校工作。
____________________________________________________________
句型 5:He / She likes / enjoys ...(描述喜好)
例句: My grandmother likes cooking.
(1)我妹妹喜欢唱歌和跳舞。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我爸爸喜欢打篮球。
____________________________________________________________
句型 6:We often ... together.(描述家庭活动)
例句: We often have dinner together.
(1)周末我们经常一起看电视。
____________________________________________________________
(2)我们经常一起做家务。
____________________________________________________________
Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:My father is a doctor.
升级句:My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital and he is very busy.
1. 基础句:My mother is a teacher.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:My grandmother is kind.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:I have a family.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:My uncle is a bus driver.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:We watch TV together.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:I love my family.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.假如你是李航,下面是你的一张全家福,请根据照片和思维导图所给的提示词,以My Happy Family为题,写一篇短文介绍你的一家人。
要求:中心突出,书写规范,词数70左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.为了进一步了解同学们对家庭成员的深厚感情,你校英语社团计划举办一次以“I love my family”为主题的演说活动,让大家感受和谐温馨的家庭氛围。假如你是李华,请根据你家的全家福照片介绍和描写你的家庭。
内容包括:
1. 家庭基本情况介绍(家人成员数量、身份关系等)
2. 家人的外貌、性格、爱好等;
3. 家庭趣事。
注意:
1. 词数为60词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:grandparent祖父(母);beautiful(漂亮的);handsome(英俊的);favourite(最喜爱的);piano(钢琴);basketball(篮球)
I Love My Family
I am Li Hua. This is a photo of my family. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. I have a happy family. There are five people in my family.
2. This is my father. He is a doctor.
3. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school.
4. My grandmother is kind and she likes cooking.
5. We often visit my grandparents on weekends and have dinner together.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)There are four people in my family.
(2)I have a big family. There are seven people in my family.
句型 2
(1)This is my mother.
(2)This is my little sister.
句型 3
(1)My mother is a nurse.
(2)My uncle is a bus driver.
句型 4
(1)She works in a factory.
(2)My mother works in a school.
句型 5
(1)My little sister likes singing and dancing.
(2)My father likes playing basketball.
句型 6
(1)We often watch TV together on weekends.
(2)We often do chores together.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a high school and she loves her students.
2. 升级句:My grandmother is very kind and she always takes care of us. She likes cooking delicious food for the family.
3. 升级句:I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and me.
4. 升级句:My uncle is a bus driver. He drives the bus every day and he always works hard.
5. 升级句:We often watch TV together in the evening after dinner. It is a happy time for us.
6. 升级句:I love my family very much because they always support me and take good care of me.
篇章训练(参考范文)
1.
例文
My Happy Family
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hang, a 12-year-old student in Grade 8. Here is a photo of my family.
There are six people. My father is a doctor in a hospital. My mother is a teacher in a middle school. I have a six-year-old sister named Li Yao. She enjoys playing with her Kitty cat. My grandparents look after the family and they help us a lot.
What a happy family it is! I love my family!
2.例文:
I Love My Family
I am Li Hua. This is a photo of my family. Look at this photo. There are four people: my parents, my little sister, and me. My mum is beautiful and kind. She loves playing the piano. My dad looks handsome and tall. His favourite sport is basketball. My sister is cute. She enjoys drawing pictures. We often play fun games together at weekends.
My family is warm and full of love. I love my family very much!
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
$