Unit 5 Health matters（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“症状描述-建议给出-效果展示-主题升华”为写作方法主线，系统整合健康类词汇、功能句型与写作逻辑，助力语言能力与思维品质提升。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇原文示例|分步骤提炼“开篇引入-建议给出-效果展示-主题升华-贴士分享”写作结构|以实例为载体，构建“问题呈现-解决方案-效果验证-价值提炼”的逻辑链条| |核心词汇|4类（疾病/行为/情绪/药物）|按语义功能分类，强化场景化记忆|词汇为句型表达奠基，服务健康主题写作需求| |参考句型|4类（描述/建议/计划/康复）|提供功能句型模板，强调祈使句、情态动词等实用表达|句型与词汇结合，形成“词汇-句型-语篇”的递进应用逻辑| |写作任务|2个（病症康复/健康计划）|基础版与提高版范文对比，展示从简单到丰富的表达升级|覆盖健康主题核心考法，典例含易错点规避，体现思维层次提升|

Unit 5 Health matters 写作方法指引- 原文指路 Oh, Mum, you're here. I can't see clearly. Yesterday, Miss Emn wrote “8” on the blackboard. But I saw a “3”... 开篇引入：用具体事例描述身体不适的症状，让读者直观了解健康问题。 Do eye exercises every day. And don't read in the dark. Go outside often and look far away. 给出建议：用祈使句和否定句提供具体可操作的健康改善方法，清晰明确。 Mary Mum, I can see clearly again. 展示效果：描述坚持健康习惯后的积极变化，体现行为带来的改善。 Good! You should take care of your eyes. 升华主题：强调呵护身体的重要性，对全文进行总结提醒。 Spend time in nature. The fresh air and the sounds of nature can make you feel good. 分享贴士：结合原因说明健康快乐的方法，增强内容的说服力。 一、核心词汇 1. 疾病类 have a fever（发烧）have a sore throat（喉咙痛）have a cough（咳嗽）flu（流感） have a runny nose（流鼻涕）have a headache（头痛）have a toothache（牙痛） 2. 健康行为类 do eye exercises（做眼保健操）read in dark places（在暗处看书）drink a lot of water（多喝水） watch a lot of TV（看太多电视）eat less junk food（少吃垃圾食品）take medicine（吃药） spend time in nature（在大自然中度过时光）do regular exercise（做规律运动） go outside often（经常外出）look far away（远眺） 3. 情绪与感受类 happy（开心的）worried（担心的）feel bad（感觉不舒服）feel good（感觉舒适） feel great（感觉很棒） 4. 自然药物类 ginger（姜）rose（玫瑰）lemon（柠檬）mint（薄荷） 二、参考句型 1. 描述病症 I have a fever and I feel bad. When you get the flu, you'll have a runny nose and a sore throat. Sometimes there's a headache when you have the flu. Something is wrong with my eyes and I can't see clearly. 2. 健康建议 You should take some medicine and drink a lot of water when you are sick. Don't read in dark places or watch a lot of TV to protect your eyes. Do eye exercises every day and go outside often to look far away. To stay healthy, you should eat less junk food and do regular exercise. Spend time in nature and the fresh air will make you feel good. Try listening to music and singing along, and you'll forget your worries. Be kind to others and it will bring you happiness. Focus on the things you enjoy and you will feel happier. 3. 健康计划 My health plan has four points. First, I will eat less junk food. I will drink a lot of warm water every day to keep my body healthy. I will do exercise for 30 minutes every morning. I will sleep for at least 8 hours every night. I will go outside and look far away twice a day to take care of my eyes. 4. 康复与护理 After following the doctor's advice, I can see clearly again. You should take care of your eyes and don't do things that hurt them. Ginger can warm your stomach and help it work well. Lemon water is good for sore throats and coughs. 易错点提示 1. 固定搭配易错：表达病症时要使用“have + a + 病症”的结构，比如have a headache，不能漏写冠词a，也不要写成have headache。 2. 情态动词用法：should后面必须接动词原形，比如You should take medicine，不能写成You should takes medicine。 3. 词汇拼写易错：注意sore throat、flu（不要误写为flue）、eye exercises（复数形式，不能写成eye exercise）的正确拼写。 4. 介词搭配易错：“在暗处”是in dark places，介词用in而不是on；“听音乐”是listen to music，不能漏写介词to。 5. 主谓一致易错：描述自然药物的作用时，第三人称单数主语后动词要加s，比如Ginger can warm your stomach。 写作一 上周你得了流感，身体很不舒服，请描述你的病症，说说你是如何康复的，并给其他感冒的同学提出一些健康建议。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： flu, have a fever, sore throat, cough, take medicine, drink water, lemon, feel bad 写作二 新学期开始了，为了拥有健康的身体和良好的状态，你制定了一份个人健康计划，请写一写你的计划内容。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： eat less junk food, do regular exercise, sleep 8 hours, do eye exercises, spend time in nature, drink warm water 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Last week I got the flu. I had a fever, a sore throat and a bad cough. I felt really bad. （记述病症）My mom gave me some medicine and let me drink a lot of warm water. She also made lemon water for me. After three days, I felt good again. （修养康复） If you have the flu, you should take medicine and drink much water. Don't watch too much TV. （给出建议） 范文（提高版）： Last week I didn't feel good because I got the flu. I had a high fever, a sore throat and kept coughing. I even had a headache sometimes. （记述病症） My dad took me to see the doctor. The doctor told me to take medicine on time, drink plenty of warm water and rest more. My mom made lemon water every day to help my sore throat. After five days, I felt great again. （修养康复）If you get the flu, follow the doctor's advice. You can also spend a little time outside when you feel better. （给出建议） 写作二 范文（基础版）： My new term health plan has three points. （总起计划）First, I will eat less junk food and drink warm water every day. Second, I will do exercise for 30 minutes every morning. Third, I will do eye exercises twice a day and sleep for at least 8 hours every night. （罗列举措） I think this plan will help me stay healthy. （表达期许） 范文（提高版）： To stay healthy this term, I make a clear health plan. （总起计划） First, I will eat less junk food and eat more vegetables. I will drink warm water instead of cold drinks every day. Second, I will do regular exercise—30 minutes of running every morning and play basketball with friends on weekends. Third, I will take care of my eyes: do eye exercises twice a day and look far away when I study for a long time. Finally, I will sleep for 8 hours every night and spend one hour in nature every Sunday. （罗列举措） I believe this plan will make me feel great! （表达期许） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $