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B3U4 Space Exploration | Reading for Writing
Is Exploring Space
a Waste of Time and Money?
Stage 1
Free Vote & Interview
Data
Question
"Space exploration = A waste of time and money"
YES,
it is a waste of time and money.
left hand
NO,
it is not a waste of time and money.
right hand
Is space exploration a waste of time and money? Why or why not?
Interview
Stage 2
Reading —— Understand the Battlefield
& Find The Skeleton
Step 1 Understand the battlefield
Read the first paragraph and find out the two different views mentioned in the text and fill out the form in Part 3, Step 1 on your worksheet.
Who holds this view? What is their view?
View 1
(Opposing view) Yes, it is a waste of time and money. They believe: The money spent on space should be used to solve Earth's existing problems.
View 2
(Author's view) No, it is not a waste of time and money. He/She believes: The opposing view is shallow as it fails to see how space exploration is helping us.
Step 2 Find the author's thesis statement
Go through the first paragraph again and find out how the author puts his view.
Background
The opposing view
+
His/Her own view
+
Step 3 How does the author make his thesis convincing?
Read the rest of the text and fill in the mind map in Step 3 on your worksheet.
Argument 2:
___________________
___________________
Thesis statement: _________________________
Argument 1:
___________________
___________________
Argument 3:
___________________
___________________
Space exploration helps us.
Fight against
world hunger
Technological improvements
World's problems
to solutions
Evidence 1:
satellite→data→scientists→recommendations & advice→enough food
Evidence 2:
new materials, heart monitors, memory foam, smartphone cameras
Evidence 3:
Earth's limited resources → Mars as new home
Conclusion: ________________________________________________
Space exploration provides many different benefits.
Step 4 Reflection——Why is this structure effective?
Why does the author's thesis statement feel convincing?
What makes you trust his argument?
The author makes his thesis convincing by using _______________________ to support it. Each argument is then supported by _______________________.
This makes the essay well-organized and persuasive.
three arguments
evidence/supporting details
Stage 3
Language Gems —— Pick Up Tools
Read the essay again, find out the exact expression used for different steps/functions
and fill in the form of Part 4 on your worksheet.
Writing Steps Useful expressions from the text Other options
Step 1:引出对方观点 "Some people argue that..." • Opponents claim that...
• Critics insist that...
• It is often said that...
Step 2: 转折亮出己方观点 “However, others feel... fails to..." • Nevertheless, ...
• But is this really the case?
• This argument, however, ignores...
Writing Steps Useful expressions from the text Other options
Step 3:引出分论点 “Firstly...”, “Secondly...”, “Finally...” • To begin with, ... / In addition, ... / Last but not least, ...
• First and foremost, ... / Furthermore, ... / Lastly, ...
Step 4a: 用论据支撑-
方式一
(逻辑链条法) “...record data → ______ the data is transmitted → _______ careful analysis → __________,
scientists provide advice.” • Initially, ... Subsequently, ... Following this, ... Consequently, ...
Then
After
As a result
Writing Steps Useful expressions from the text Other options
Step 4b:用论据支撑-
方式二(举例法) “_____________, space technologies have helped... heart monitors... memory foam...” • For instance, ...
• Take ... for example.
• A classic case is ...
• This can be seen in ...
For example
Writing Steps Useful expressions from the text Other options
Step 4c:用论据支撑-
其他论据类型 Factual evidence — objective facts that can be verified • It is a fact that...
• As we all know...
• Historically, ...
Statistical evidence — data, statistics, or amounts • Statistics show that...
• According to a report,...
• ... as much as...
Cited evidence — quotes or ideas from experts or authoritative sources • According to..., ...
• As... once said, ...
• ... points out that...
Writing Steps Useful expressions from the text Other options
Step 5:重申观点首尾 “_____________, exploring space provides... Therefore, it should continue so as to provide new solutions” • In conclusion, ... Therefore, ... so as to ...
• All things considered, ... Thus, ... in order to ...
• On the whole, ... Hence, ... with the aim of ...
• The evidence clearly suggests that ...
In closing
Stage 4
Build Your Own Outline
Choose your position again and fill in the outline below:
Introduction:
Background: ___________________________________________________
The opposing view: _____________________________________________
My view: ______________________________________________________
Body:
Argument 1: ____________________________________________________
Evidence 1: ____________________________________________________
Argument 2: ____________________________________________________
Evidence 2: ____________________________________________________
Argument 3: ____________________________________________________
Evidence 3: ____________________________________________________
Conclusion:
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't forget to use the expressions in your toolbox!
If you need help with evidence, please raise your hand!
Stage 5
Peer Review & Homework
Does the introduction state the topic?
Does the introduction express different opinions about the topic?
Does the body give arguments with suitable supporting information?
Does the closing express the writer’s opinion and end properly?
Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors?
Admittedly, $132 billion—the world's total government space spending in 2024—is a large sum. However, this represents only about 0.12% of global GDP. Far from being waste, space exploration is a smart investment.
To start with, space exploration creates jobs. NASA's activities bring in over $70 billion every year and support more than 300,000 jobs across the United States.
Besides, satellites monitor our changing climate. They take pictures of polar ice caps and track melting rates, giving governments solid evidence to make climate policies.
Finally, space technology saves lives directly. The COSPAS-SARSAT satellite system picks up emergency signals from ships and planes.Then, it works out the exact location. After that, rescue teams are sent immediately.Consequently, over 50,000 people have been rescued since 1982.
All things considered, space spending pays for itself many times over—through jobs, climate data, and lives saved. We should continue to invest in it.
Homework: Write an argumentative essay of around 100 words
arguing space exploration is a waste of time.
Make sure to use the structure and expressions learned in this class.
Goodbye
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