摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 1“New school, new beginning!”写作训练,围绕新学校生活话题,通过话题词汇积累(如building、subject)、佳句仿写(教材原句转化)搭建基础,再以范文结构分析(总分总)和实战训练形成递进式学习支架。
其亮点在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养,如佳句仿写提升表达准确性,范文进阶通过增加原因状语从句、具体案例(如图书馆描述)优化内容,实战训练结合思维导图提示。采用分层教学法,学生能系统提升写作能力,教师可借助可编辑课件(WPS操作、超链接跳转)高效教学。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 JJ
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Unit 1 New school, new beginning!
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.建筑物 __________
2.借 ________
3.最喜欢的 ____________________
4.科目 _________
building
borrow
favorite/favourite
subject
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5.俱乐部 ______
6.有意义的 ____________
7.在……前面 _____________
8.帮助某人做某事 ________________________
club
meaningful
in front of
help sb.(to) do sth.
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二、佳句仿写
1.【教材原句】Let me show you around!(show sb. around)
→仿写:欢迎来我的学校,我将带你参观它。
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2.【教材原句】My favourite subject is PE.(My favourite subject is…)
→仿写:我最喜欢的科目是英语,因为它很有趣。
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Welcome to my school, and I will show you around it.
My favourite subject is English because it is very interesting.
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3.【教材原句】We call her Ms Liu.(call sb. sth.)
→仿写:我有一个新朋友汤姆。我们叫他汤米。
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4.【教材原句】Sometimes I join them.(join sb.)
→仿写:你愿意加入我们吗?
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I have a new friend, Tom.We call him Tommy.
Would you like to join us?
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026河北唐山期中]假如你是李华,刚刚收到搬到上海的好朋友刘明发来
的电子邮件。请根据下面他写的邮件的片段,写一封回复邮件。
I know you go to a new school. What’s it like? What’s your favourite place in
it? Do you like your new teachers and classmates? Hope that you are happy in
your new school.
提示:
1.短文中须回答刘明的所有问题;
2.文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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Hi Liu Ming,
Thanks for your email. Let me tell you something about my new school and
new life there.
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How about your new school?
Yours,
Li Hua
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第1步审题目
体 裁:应用文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:学校及学校生活
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第2步列提纲
本文适宜采用“总—分—总”结构。
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第3步写作进阶#5
Hi Liu Ming,
Thanks for your email.
Let me tell you something
about my new school and
new life there. Hi Liu Ming,
Thanks for your email. Let me tell you
something about my new school and new life
there.
My new school is very big. .and great
(增加and great,丰富语境,表现出作者对学校的
看法).
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My new school is very
big.①My favourite place is
the school library.② I often
read there after class.The
new teachers are kind and
patient.③ ① My favourite place is the school
library,. .because it’s quiet and there are all kinds
of interesting books(增加because引导的原因状语
从句,具体介绍图书馆).② I often read there
after class.The new teachers are. .not only. .kind. .but
also(用“not only... but also...”替换and,升级
词语)
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My classmates are
friendly, too.④ I really like
them and I feel happy here.
How about your new
school?
Yours,
Li Hua patient.③My classmates are friendly,too—they
often help me with my lessons(增加具体案例,
支撑论点).④ I really like them and I feel happy
here.
How about your new school?
Yours,
Li Hua
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026河北邢台期中】同学们,相信大
家的校园生活一定非常丰富多彩!假如你是
刘宇,请根据以下思维导图提示写一篇短文,
分享一下你的校园生活吧。
注意:
1.短文中须包含思维导图所有提示,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数50个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
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My School Life
Hi, I’m Liu Yu. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
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【参考范文】
My School Life
Hi, I’m Liu Yu.I’d like to tell you something about my school
life.
My school is not only big but also beautiful.We have many subjects
like Chinese, maths and English.English is my favourite because it’s
interesting.I have four classes in the morning and three in the
afternoon.I join the art club.
My school life is busy but happy.I love my school very much.
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