2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---麦琪的礼物---读后续写导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统覆盖读后续写题型核心考点，将角色分析、视角判断、时空线梳理、情节与情感发展等关键要素按文本理解逻辑构建知识网络，通过问题导向的细节问答和任务驱动的情节构造任务，引导学生自主推导文本内在联系，形成续写题型的整体认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断工具和分层指导设计，如开篇设置细节问答自测题帮助学生定位薄弱环节，续写框架模块通过“情节构造-段落框架-写作实践”三阶任务培养语言能力与思维品质。每个分析环节配有综合概括与经典句式摘抄任务，助力学生建立个性化复习体系，教师可依据学情精准指导，有效提升学生自主复习效率。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One dollar and eighty-seven cents. That was all. And sixty cents of it in the smallest pieces of money - pennies. Pennies saved one and two at a time by negotiating with the men at the market who sold vegetables and meat. Three times Della counted it. One dollar and eighty-seven cents. And the next day would be Christmas. There was clearly nothing to do but sit down and cry. Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard. Tomorrow would be Christmas Day, and she had only one dollar and eighty-seven cents to buy her husband Jim a gift. She had been saving every penny she could for months, with this result. There was a tall glass mirror between the windows of the room. Suddenly Della turned from the window and stood before the glass mirror and looked at herself. Her eyes were shining, but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds. Quickly she pulled down her hair and let it fall to its full length. Now, Mister and Missus James Dillingham Young had two possessions which they valued. One was Jim's gold time piece, the watch that had been his father's and his grandfather's. The other was Della's hair. So now Della's beautiful hair fell about her, shining like a brown waterfall. It reached below her knees and made itself almost like a covering for her. And then quickly she put it up again. She stood still while a few tears fell on the floor. She put on her coat and her old brown hat. With a quick motion and brightness still in her eyes, she danced out the door and down the street. Where she stopped the sign read: "Madame Sofronie. Hair Goods of All Kinds." Della ran up the steps to the shop, out of breath. "Will you buy my hair?" asked Della. "I buy hair," said Madame. "Take your hat off and let us have a look at it." Down came the beautiful brown waterfall of hair. "Twenty dollars," said Madame, lifting the hair with an experienced hand. "Give it to me quick," said Della. The next two hours went by as if they had wings. Della looked in all the stores to choose a gift for Jim. She found it at last. It surely had been made for Jim and no one else. It was a chain -- simple round rings of silver. It was perfect for Jim's gold watch. She gave the shopkeeper twenty-one dollars and she hurried home with the eighty-seven cents that was left. When Della arrived home she began to repair what was left of her hair. The hair had been ruined by her love and her desire to give a special gift. Repairing the damage was a very big job. At seven o'clock that night the coffee was made and the pan on the back of the stove was hot and ready to cook the meat. Jim was never late coming home from work. Della held the silver chain in her hand and sat near the door. Then she heard his step and she turned white for just a minute. She had a way of saying a little silent prayer about the simplest everyday things, and now she whispered: "Please God, make him think I am still pretty." 续写要求 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Para.1 : The door opened and Jim stepped in. ____________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2: Inside Jim’s package were the combs – something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window. __________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 Della（德拉）：________________________________________________________ Jim（吉姆）：________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Della saved only $1.87 for Christmas → __________________ → Della decided to sell her precious long hair → __________________ → Della bought a silver chain for Jim’s gold watch → Della waited nervously for Jim’s return 4. 细节问答 Why did Della feel sad at first?：___________________________________ What were the two most precious possessions for the couple?：_________________________________ What did Della do to buy Jim a Christmas gift?：________________________________________________ What gift did Della prepare for Jim?：__________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 圣诞将至，德拉辛苦攒钱却仅有1.87美元，无力为丈夫吉姆准备圣诞礼物，内心难过无奈→看着自己引以为傲的长发，她萌生卖掉秀发的想法→德拉忍痛卖掉珍贵长发，换取二十美元→走遍商店，精心挑选适配吉姆祖传金表的银表链→回家精心打理短发，紧张等待丈夫归来，期盼丈夫依旧觉得自己好看→（续写）丈夫归家，看到德拉短发满脸震惊、神色错愕→（续写）__________________________________________________ 6．情感线 sad and helpless→___________→determined and affectionate→___________→nervous and uneasy 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 经典句式摘抄 ____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 亲情爱情成长类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①__________________→②__________________→③_______________ 第二段：④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________ 四、写作作答区（150词左右） Para.1 : The door opened and Jim stepped in. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para. 2: Inside Jim’s package were the combs – something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Della（德拉）：温柔深情、深爱丈夫、纯粹无私。生活清贫却满心热忱，为给丈夫准备圣诞礼物，甘愿舍弃自己最珍视的长发，愿意为爱人付出珍贵之物，满心真诚与爱意。 Jim（吉姆）：质朴专一、温柔顾家、深爱妻子。家境贫寒，却将妻子的喜好放在心上，默默珍藏礼物，愿意牺牲自己最珍贵的物品，只为成全妻子的心愿，爱意深沉且内敛。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Della saved only $1.87 for Christmas → Della was upset for lacking money for Jim’s Christmas gift → Della decided to sell her precious long hair → Della sold her hair and picked out a perfect silver chain for Jim’s gold watch → Della bought a silver chain for Jim’s gold watch → Della waited nervously for Jim’s return 4. 细节问答 Why did Della feel sad at first?：Because Christmas was approaching, but she only had one dollar and eighty-seven cents, which was far from enough to buy a decent Christmas gift for her husband Jim. What were the two most precious possessions for the couple?：One was Jim’s family gold watch passed down from his father and grandfather, and the other was Della’s beautiful long brown hair. What did Della do to buy Jim a Christmas gift?：She made up her mind and sold her precious long hair to Madame Sofronie for twenty dollars to afford a gift for Jim. What gift did Della prepare for Jim?：She bought a delicate silver chain, which was perfectly matched with Jim’s treasured gold watch. What does the story tell us?：True love lies in selfless devotion and sacrifice. Lovers are willing to give up their most precious things for each other. Material gifts are trivial, but sincere love is the most precious treasure in life. 5．情节线 圣诞将至，德拉辛苦攒钱却仅有1.87美元，无力为丈夫吉姆准备圣诞礼物，内心难过无奈→看着自己引以为傲的长发，她萌生卖掉秀发的想法→德拉忍痛卖掉珍贵长发，换取二十美元→走遍商店，精心挑选适配吉姆祖传金表的银表链→回家精心打理短发，紧张等待丈夫归来，期盼丈夫依旧觉得自己好看→丈夫推门归家，看到德拉利落短发瞬间愣住，满脸错愕与心疼→德拉慌忙解释、献上表链，二人互相知晓彼此的牺牲，读懂双向奔赴的深爱，平凡的圣诞满是温暖与治愈 6．情感线 sad and helpless→hesitant and determined→determined and affectionate→expectant and anxious→nervous and uneasy 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：清贫的德拉为给丈夫准备圣诞礼物，忍痛卖掉自己最珍贵的长发，精心挑选适配丈夫祖传金表的银链，夫妻二人相互为对方牺牲挚爱之物，诠释了纯粹无私、双向奔赴的真挚爱情。 英文：Poor Della sold her most precious long hair to buy a delicate chain for her husband’s treasured gold watch as a Christmas gift. The couple sacrificed their beloved possessions for each other, showing the most sincere and selfless true love. 8. 经典句式摘抄 ① Tomorrow would be Christmas Day, and she had only one dollar and eighty-seven cents to buy her husband Jim a gift. ② Her eyes were shining, but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds. ③ She had a way of saying a little silent prayer about the simplest everyday things. 9. 本文主题 亲情爱情成长类：真爱无关物质贫富，最珍贵的礼物是为爱无私的牺牲与奔赴，双向的真诚与付出才是感情最动人的底色。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：Jim returned home and was stunned by Della’s short hair, standing motionless in shock. Della felt nervous and explained her sacrifice eagerly, then took out the silver chain prepared for Jim. Paragraph 2：Della was surprised to see the long-awaited combs. Learning Jim sold his precious gold watch to buy the gift, she was deeply moved. The couple hugged each other tightly, realizing true love lies in selfless devotion. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①丈夫归家，初见德拉短发错愕震惊 → ②德拉紧张解释，诉说自己的心意与牺牲 → ③拿出精心准备的银表链，送给丈夫 第二段：①德拉看见心仪已久的发梳满心意外与感动 → ②得知丈夫卖掉祖传金表为自己买礼物 → ③二人相拥释怀，读懂双向深爱，升华真爱主题 四、满分续写范文（150词左右） The door opened and Jim stepped in. His eyes fixed on Della’s short hair instantly, and he froze in surprise, a confused look flashing on his face. Seeing his reaction, Della’s heart sank. She hurried to him, explaining anxiously that she had cut and sold her hair to buy him a Christmas gift, fearing he would dislike her new look. With trembling hands, she held out the delicate silver chain, hoping it could match his treasured gold watch perfectly. Inside Jim’s package were the combs – something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window. Della’s eyes filled with tears of joy and surprise. Then Jim gently told her he had sold his precious gold watch to afford the combs for her. Stunned and moved, Della threw her arms around Jim. Though they both lost their most valuable possessions, they gained the most precious gift — selfless and sincere true love, warming their simple Christmas night. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $