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Stevie and her siblings were the first batch of chickens I ever owned. I fostered them from a nearby animal shelter in 2021. Stevie was the most vocal so I named her after one of my favourite musicians, Stevie Nicks.
I live on a huge plot of land in Malibu which I treat like an animal sanctuary – any animal that I can rescue and help, I will. I’ve been that way since I was a little kid. When my parents gave me a small allowance I would run to the pet store and bring a new animal home. Sometimes, I would find animals on the street and take them in.
Stevie, a Buff Orpington chicken, was different from the rest of her siblings. She had a confident, outgoing personality. As soon as she arrived, she ruled the yard. In particular, she took to the dogs – she wanted to be just like them. She would hang out and run around with them, and sometimes I would find her curled up in their bed inside our house. Stevie would copy their every movement: she would run up to me and let me pick her up like a dog, falling asleep on my lap.
I hadn’t expected this. I had always imagined chickens would frolic in the yard and barely pay attention to me. But Stevie was different. It made me realise how social and intelligent chickens can be.
Stevie’s most entertaining trick was laying her eggs anywhere she liked – on the bookshelf, in a dog kennel. Even though she had a coop outside, I would find her eggs hidden in random places around the house.
When Stevie first arrived, my six dogs were caught off guard. I think they were slightly put off by her. To begin with, I couldn’t leave them alone together, but as time went on, I began to trust that they wouldn’t hurt her. It took a week for Stevie to integrate and then the dogs just treated her like one of the packs.
续写段落开头
Paragraph 1: One rainy afternoon, I could not find Stevie anywhere in the yard or the house.
Paragraph 2: From then on, Stevie became even more beloved by the whole family and the six dogs.
一、文本分析
1.角色
I(作者):________________________________________________________
Stevie:________________________________________________________
Six dogs:________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
The author fostered Stevie and her siblings from an animal shelter → __________________ → Stevie was outgoing, loved staying with dogs and copied their behaviors → __________________ → Stevie successfully integrated into the dog pack and got along well with the dogs
4. 细节问答
Where did the author get Stevie?:___________________________________
What kind of personality does Stevie have?:_________________________________
What special habits does Stevie have?:________________________________________________
How did the six dogs feel about Stevie at first?:__________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:_____________________________________________
5.情节线
作者2021年从动物收容所领养小鸡Stevie及其兄弟姐妹→作者居所如同动物庇护所,自幼热爱救助、收养小动物→Stevie性格自信外向,与众不同,极度亲近家中狗狗、模仿狗狗行为、与狗狗相伴休憩→打破作者对鸡的固有认知,让作者发现鸡聪慧且群居的特性→Stevie随性随处下蛋,习性可爱又特别→初来乍到的Stevie遭狗狗抵触,一周后成功融入狗群、和睦相处→(续写)一个雨天作者遍寻不见Stevie,内心焦急四处寻找→(续写)__________________________________________________
6.情感线
fond and delighted→___________→curious and surprised→___________→warm and touched
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:________________________________________________________________________
英文:________________________________________________________________________
8. 经典句式摘抄
____________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
温情成长类:_______________________________________
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1:________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:________________________________________________________________
三、段落续写框架
第一段:①__________________→②__________________→③_______________
第二段:④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________
四、写作作答区(150词左右)
One rainy afternoon, I could not find Stevie anywhere in the yard or the house.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
From then on, Stevie became even more beloved by the whole family and the six dogs.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
I(作者):心地善良、热爱小动物,长期救助收养动物,用心善待每一个生命,温柔细腻、心怀善意。
Stevie:性格自信外向、活泼独特,聪慧通人性,不怯生、善于融入环境,主动亲近狗狗,拥有可爱独特的生活习性。
Six dogs:起初对陌生的小鸡心存抵触、有所戒备,后期温柔包容、守护陪伴,真诚接纳Stevie成为群体一员。
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
The author fostered Stevie and her siblings from an animal shelter in 2021 → The author keeps an animal sanctuary and loves rescuing animals since childhood → Stevie was outgoing, loved staying with dogs and copied their behaviors → Stevie had a special habit of laying eggs randomly indoors → The dogs resisted Stevie at first but finally accepted her as a member of the pack
4. 细节问答
Where did the author get Stevie?:The author fostered Stevie and her siblings from a nearby animal shelter in 2021.
What kind of personality does Stevie have?:She is confident, outgoing and distinctive, brave and sociable, totally different from ordinary chickens.
What special habits does Stevie have?:She likes staying and playing with dogs and copies their movements. She also lays eggs randomly everywhere in the house instead of the outdoor coop.
How did the six dogs feel about Stevie at first?:They were caught off guard and slightly put off, feeling uncomfortable and resistant to the strange little chicken.
What does the story tell us?:Every life is unique and intelligent. Cross-species friendship is warm and precious. Kindness to animals will bring us touching and beautiful surprises.
5.情节线
作者自幼热爱救助小动物,将自家住所改造成动物庇护所,2021年从收容所领养小鸡Stevie→Stevie性格活泼自信、与众不同,不愿局限鸡的习性,主动亲近家中狗狗、模仿其行为、与狗狗相伴休憩→颠覆作者对鸡的固有认知,让作者发现禽类的聪慧与温情→Stevie习性可爱随性,不拘泥鸡舍,随处随机下蛋、趣味十足→初来的Stevie遭到狗狗抵触戒备,经过一周磨合,成功融入狗群、和睦共处→雨天作者遍寻Stevie无果、满心焦急,最终发现狗狗温柔庇护躲雨的Stevie→暖心画面治愈作者,Stevie彻底成为家庭和狗群的专属一员,演绎珍贵跨物种温情
6.情感线
fond and delighted→surprised and amazed→curious and surprised→anxious and worried→warm and touched
7. 综合概括
中文:与众不同的小鸡Stevie主动亲近家中狗狗,历经磨合融入狗群,一场雨天的意外发现,让作者见证了狗狗对Stevie的温柔守护,收获了温暖治愈的跨物种情谊。
英文:The unique and outgoing chicken Stevie tried to get along with the author’s dogs and finally integrated into the pack. On a rainy day, the author found the dogs tenderly sheltering Stevie from the rain, witnessing the warm and precious cross-species friendship among animals.
8. 经典句式摘抄
① I live on a huge plot of land in Malibu which I treat like an animal sanctuary.
② She had a confident, outgoing personality. As soon as she arrived, she ruled the yard.
③ It made me realise how social and intelligent chickens can be.
9. 本文主题
温情成长类:万物皆有灵性,善意不分物种,真诚的陪伴与包容能催生温暖纯粹的情谊。
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1:The author searched every corner anxiously, worried that Stevie might get lost or catch a cold in the heavy rain. Eventually, the author noticed the six dogs gathering quietly beside their kennel and found Stevie sheltering inside, warmly guarded and accompanied by the dogs.
Paragraph 2:Stevie became a beloved member of the whole family and the dog pack. She stayed and played with dogs all day long, enjoying warm company. The author was deeply touched by the pure cross-species friendship and cherished every warm moment with these lovely lives.
三、段落续写框架
第一段:①雨天作者四处寻找失踪的Stevie,内心焦急担忧→②偶然发现狗狗聚集在狗窝旁,心生疑惑上前查看→③发现Stevie躲在狗窝避雨,被狗狗温柔守护、暖心陪伴
第二段:①自此Stevie彻底被全家和狗狗宠爱接纳→②朝夕相伴、和睦相处,跨物种温情愈发浓厚→③作者深受触动,珍惜生命间的美好羁绊与纯粹善意
四、满分范文(150词左右)
One rainy afternoon, I could not find Stevie anywhere in the yard or the house. Anxiety flooded me as I searched every corner anxiously, fearing she might have gotten lost in the rain. Just as I was about to head outside, I noticed my six dogs gathering quietly beside their kennel. Curious, I stepped closer and spotted Stevie hiding comfortably inside, sheltered from the cold rain. She nestled among the dogs, who guarded her gently and kept her warm without any impatience.
From then on, Stevie became even more beloved by the whole family and the six dogs. The brave and lovely chicken was totally regarded as a formal member of the dog pack. She followed the dogs to wander around the yard every day and often rested with them. I was deeply touched by the warm cross-species friendship. It reminded me that every living creature is intelligent and affectionate, and sincere bond exists among all rescued animals in my warm sanctuary.
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