2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---洞穴绝境中的坚守与勇气 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统覆盖读后续写核心考点，通过文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）梳理情节发展、人物情感与环境描写的内在联系，以问题导向设计细节问答、情节线梳理等任务，引导学生自主构建续写逻辑框架，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与方法指导结合，如设置“细节问答”自测文本理解，“段落续写框架”引导学生分步规划情节，培养语言能力与思维品质。写作作答区搭配满分范文对比，帮助学生自主反思提升，教师可通过学情精准指导，支持个性化复习与因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lost in the cave with Becky, Tom felt a tight knot of fear in his stomach, but he forced himself to stay calm. The once exciting adventure had turned into a terrible nightmare. The candlelight trembled weakly, casting strange shadows on the cold, wet rocks. The endless dark passages stretched in every direction, like a huge maze swallowing every sound. Becky’s face was pale with terror. She held Tom’s hand tightly, tears rolling down her cheeks. She sobbed that they would never find their way out and might die alone in the cold cave. Tom’s heart ached, but he patted her hand gently and tried to sound brave. He told her not to give up, saying that he would surely find a way to the entrance. They walked on for hours, their feet aching and their strength fading. The candle was burning down, and the light grew dimmer and dimmer. Hunger and thirst made them weaker. Whenever Becky wanted to break down, Tom encouraged her with soft words and shared his last small piece of cake with her. He hid his own fear deep in his heart, acting as a strong protector for the helpless girl. Suddenly, a sound of soft wind came from one of the dark passages. Tom’s eyes lit up at once. Wind meant an opening to the outside world! He held Becky’s hand firmly, trying to walk toward the sound with his last bit of energy. Just as they stepped forward, Becky nearly fell down, too tired to move another step. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Tom stopped immediately and knelt down to help Becky up, his mind racing with worry. ____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: With Becky leaning on him, Tom stepped slowly but firmly into the passage where the wind came from. ____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 Tom：________________________________________________________ Becky：________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Tom and Becky got lost in a dark cave and fell into fear → __________________ → They suffered from exhaustion, hunger and thirst in the cave → __________________ → They found wind blowing from a passage but Becky was too tired to move 4. 细节问答 What was the cave environment like?：___________________________________ How did Becky feel and behave after getting lost?：_________________________________ What did Tom do to comfort and protect Becky?：________________________________________________ What special discovery gave them hope?：__________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 汤姆和贝基洞穴探险被困，刺激的冒险变成噩梦，黑暗洞穴如同迷宫、令人恐惧→贝基极度害怕、哭泣绝望，认为自己无法脱困→汤姆强忍恐惧，温柔安慰鼓励贝基，承诺带她走出洞穴→两人长时间行走，身心俱疲、又饿又渴，烛光愈发微弱→汤姆始终故作坚强，安抚崩溃的贝基，分享仅有的食物、默默承担恐惧→绝境中发现有风的通道，看到逃生希望→贝基体力透支、险些摔倒，无法继续前行→（续写）__________________________________________________→（续写）__________________________________________________ 6．情感线 scared and desperate→___________→exhausted and hopeless→___________→hopeful and determined 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 经典句式摘抄 ____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①__________________→②__________________→③_______________ 第二段：④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________ 四、写作作答区（150词左右） Tom stopped immediately and knelt down to help Becky up, his mind racing with worry. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With Becky leaning on him, Tom stepped slowly but firmly into the passage where the wind came from. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Tom：勇敢坚韧、责任担当、温柔靠谱，身处绝境仍克制恐惧，始终安慰、守护同伴，不放弃希望，直面困境、迎难而上。 Becky：胆小脆弱、容易崩溃，被困洞穴后极度恐惧，身心透支后丧失前行勇气，依赖汤姆的保护与鼓励。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Tom and Becky got lost in a dark cave and fell into fear → Becky broke down with terror while Tom tried to comfort her bravely → They suffered from exhaustion, hunger and thirst in the cave → Tom kept encouraging Becky and hid his own fear → They found wind blowing from a passage but Becky was too tired to move 4. 细节问答 What was the cave environment like?：It was cold, wet and dark, with endless passages like a huge maze, quiet and terrifying. How did Becky feel and behave after getting lost?：She was extremely terrified and hopeless, crying and thinking they would never get out alive. What did Tom do to comfort and protect Becky?：He comforted her gently, encouraged her not to give up, shared his last cake with her and hid his own fear to be her protector. What special discovery gave them hope?：They heard soft wind from a dark passage, which meant a possible exit to the outside world. What does the story tell us?：Courage and responsibility can help us get through hardships. In difficulties, perseverance and mutual support are the key to breaking through desperate situations. 5．情节线 汤姆和贝基洞穴探险被困，刺激的冒险变成噩梦，黑暗洞穴如同迷宫、令人恐惧→贝基极度害怕、哭泣绝望，认为自己无法脱困→汤姆强忍恐惧，温柔安慰鼓励贝基，承诺带她走出洞穴→两人长时间行走，身心俱疲、又饿又渴，烛光愈发微弱→汤姆始终故作坚强，安抚崩溃的贝基，分享仅有的食物、默默承担恐惧→绝境中发现有风的通道，看到逃生希望→贝基体力透支、险些摔倒，无法继续前行→汤姆悉心搀扶、耐心安抚，调整状态积蓄力量→两人相互支撑、稳步前行，顺着风口找到出口，成功脱困、重获光明 6．情感线 scared and desperate→tender and responsible→exhausted and hopeless→relieved and hopeful→persistent and fearless 7. 综合概括 中文：汤姆与贝基被困黑暗洞穴，绝境之中汤姆强忍恐惧、坚守责任，一路安慰守护脆弱的贝基，凭借坚持与勇气顺着风口找到出路，成功脱困。 英文：Trapped in a dark cave, Tom and Becky fell into desperate situations. Despite fear and exhaustion, Tom took on responsibility, comforted the helpless Becky all the way, and finally found the exit with perseverance and hope. 8. 经典句式摘抄 ① Lost in the cave with Becky, Tom felt a tight knot of fear in his stomach, but he forced himself to stay calm. ② The endless dark passages stretched in every direction, like a huge maze swallowing every sound. ③ He hid his own fear deep in his heart, acting as a strong protector for the helpless girl. 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：绝境磨砺意志，勇气与责任是冲破困境的力量，坚守希望、彼此扶持，方能绝境逢生、实现成长。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：Tom helped the tired Becky sit down and rest, comforting her softly to cheer her up. He gathered his remaining strength, determined to take her out safely. After a short rest, Becky regained a little strength. Paragraph 2：They moved forward slowly against the wind. The wind grew stronger gradually, indicating the exit was near. Finally, they spotted faint sunlight and successfully walked out of the cave, feeling relieved and joyful. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①汤姆扶住疲惫虚脱的贝基，温柔安抚情绪→②短暂休整、积蓄仅剩的体力→③坚定信念，决心带贝基走出绝境 第二段：①两人相互搀扶，顺着风口稳步前行→②风力渐强、曙光显现，希望愈发清晰→③成功走出洞穴，绝境逢生、收获成长 四、满分范文（150词左右） Tom stopped immediately and knelt down to help Becky up, his mind racing with worry. Seeing Becky weak and breathless, he gently supported her to sit on a smooth stone. He wiped away her tears with his fingers and whispered comforting words, telling her the wind meant hope and they would definitely get out safely. To save energy, he let her have a short rest patiently, holding her hand tightly all the time to give her strength. Though he was also exhausted and hungry, he never thought of giving up. With Becky leaning on him, Tom stepped slowly but firmly into the passage where the wind came from. The fresh wind kept guiding them forward. As they moved ahead, faint golden sunlight gradually came into sight. Wild with joy, they quickened their steps. Finally, they walked out of the dark cave successfully. Bathed in the warm sunshine, they hugged each other tightly, grateful for the hard-won survival and the power of perseverance. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $