2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---坚守诚信 知错能改 导学案

该高中英语高考导学案系统覆盖读后续写题型核心考点，通过角色分析、情节线梳理、情感线追踪等模块构建知识网络，将文本理解、逻辑连贯、情感表达等考点按“诊断-梳理-应用”层次组织，引导学生通过细节问答、情节构造任务自主推导续写规律，形成完整写作认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养结合，开篇设置文本分析自测题（如角色性格、情节逻辑问答），学生通过错题定位薄弱环节，结合续写框架分步指导（如段落开头句衔接、情感线延续）提升语言表达能力。每个模块配有范文对比分析和反思总结表，帮助学生建立个性化写作策略，教师可依据学情数据实施精准指导，有效培养学生自主复习能力与高阶思维。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续写词数应为 150 左右。 One afternoon after school, Mary and her brother, Keith, were eating at a cafe near their home. That afternoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her handphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back. Mary saw the handphone on the table. She quickly told Keith, “Keith, the girl left behind her handphone.” Keith looked at the handphone. It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. Keith had always wanted a handphone. But his parents had told him, “You don’t need one. You can always use the house phone.” He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on every word, “I want to take the handphone.” Mary could not believe her ears. She merely stared at her brother. “You can’t! What if the owner comes to look for it?” Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Mary’s hand and led her out of the cafe quickly. Once back home, Keith locked his house door with trembling hands. Inside his room, he took out the piece of beauty. Oh, he liked it so much. Now he had his own handphone. Soon, he was polishing it happily. But Mary told him, “Keith, you cannot keep the handphone. What will you tell Father about this? He will ask you how you got the handphone.” Keith said quickly, “I will say a friend lent it to me.” Mary said, “Now you are lying too.” Oh dear! When had Keith turned so dishonest? Then Mary saw a house phone number on the plastic cover of the handphone. “This is the girl’s phone number. Why don't we just call this number? We will talk to her and ask her to come and take back her handphone.” She was trying to talk some sense into him. 续写段落开头 Paragraph 1: That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. Paragraph 2: Mary was very happy to hear that. 一、文本分析 1．角色 Keith：________________________________________________________ Mary：________________________________________________________ The young lady：________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Mary and Keith had dinner in a cafe and shared a table with a young lady → __________________ → Keith was tempted and took the lost phone home, intending to keep it → __________________ → Mary tried to persuade Keith to return the phone 4. 细节问答 What did the young lady leave behind in the cafe?：___________________________________ Why did Keith want to keep the phone?：_________________________________ What did Keith plan to do to hide the truth?：________________________________________________ What did Mary find on the phone cover?：__________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 姐弟二人在咖啡馆用餐，偶遇一位年轻女士遗落手机→新款手机让一直渴望拥有手机的Keith心生贪念→Keith不顾妹妹劝阻，私自拿走手机并打算撒谎隐瞒→妹妹严厉指正哥哥的不诚信行为，发现手机壳上的主人联系方式→妹妹耐心劝说哥哥归还手机、知错改错→（续写）哥哥深夜内心煎熬、愧疚不安，最终醒悟下定决心改正错误→（续写）__________________________________________________ 6．情感线 excited and greedy→___________→guilty and restless→___________→relieved and enlightened 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 经典句式摘抄 ____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 品德成长类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①__________________→②__________________→③_______________ 第二段：④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________ 四、写作作答区（150词左右） That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Mary was very happy to hear that. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Keith：年少懵懂、一时贪念作祟，心存侥幸、想要占有他人财物；但本性善良、能够自我反思、知错能改，最终战胜私欲、重拾诚信。 Mary：正直善良、坚守原则、明辨是非，敢于指出亲人的错误，理智通透、懂得坚守诚信底线，积极引导哥哥知错改错。 The young lady：粗心大意，不慎遗落手机，是事件的间接触发者。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Mary and Keith had dinner in a cafe and shared a table with a young lady → The lady left her latest-model phone behind → Keith was tempted and took the lost phone home, intending to keep it and lie to parents → Mary disapproved of his dishonesty and found the owner’s phone number → Mary tried to persuade Keith to return the phone 4. 细节问答（标准答案） What did the young lady leave behind in the cafe?：She left her latest-model handphone on the table. Why did Keith want to keep the phone?：He had long desired a personal phone but his parents refused to buy one for him, so he was greatly tempted by the new phone. What did Keith plan to do to hide the truth?：He planned to lie to their parents that the phone was lent by a friend. What did Mary find on the phone cover?：She found the owner’s house phone number on the plastic cover. What does the story tell us?：We should stick to honesty and self-discipline. Faced with temptation, we must resist greed, correct mistakes bravely and stick to moral bottom lines. 5．情节线（完整） 姐弟二人在咖啡馆用餐，同桌的年轻女士不慎遗落新款手机→一直渴望拥有手机的Keith心生贪念，不顾妹妹劝阻私自将手机带走→Keith沉浸在拥有新手机的喜悦中，甚至打算撒谎隐瞒真相欺骗父母→妹妹坚守诚信底线，严厉批评哥哥的不诚信行为，并发现机主联系方式→妹妹耐心劝说哥哥主动归还、弥补错误→哥哥深夜辗转难眠，内心愧疚挣扎，最终醒悟、决定归还手机→在妹妹协助下主动联系机主、诚恳道歉并归还物品，在改错中收获成长 6．情感线（完整） excited and greedy→hesitant and guilty→guilty and restless→determined and sincere→relieved and enlightened 7. 综合概括（中英标准答案） 中文：男孩Keith因一时贪念私自占有他人遗落的手机，在妹妹的劝导与自我反思下幡然醒悟，主动归还物品、承认错误，明白了诚信是做人最珍贵的底线。 英文：Tempted by the new phone, Keith chose to keep the lost device dishonestly. With his sister’s patient persuasion and inner reflection, he overcame greed, returned the phone bravely and realized the importance of honesty. 8. 经典句式摘抄 ① It took his breath away. It was one of the latest models on the market. ② Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag. ③ She was trying to talk some sense into him. 9. 本文主题 品德成长类：面对诱惑坚守本心，知错能改、坚守诚信底线，方能成就更好的自己。 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：Keith suffered from guilty conscience all night. The new phone could not bring him happiness. He kept recalling Mary’s words and realized his greedy and dishonest behavior was wrong. Finally, he made up his mind to return the phone and admitted his mistake. Paragraph 2：The next day, Keith contacted the owner actively and apologized sincerely. The young lady was moved by his honesty and courage to correct mistakes. Keith learned that true satisfaction never comes from greedy possession, but from honesty and a clear conscience. 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①哥哥彻夜难眠，内心充满愧疚与不安，毫无喜悦之感→②不断回想妹妹的劝导，深刻意识到自己的错误与贪婪→③彻底醒悟，下定决心主动归还手机、改正错误 第二段：①妹妹听闻决定十分欣慰，全力支持哥哥改错→②哥哥主动联系机主、诚恳道歉并归还手机，获得谅解与肯定→③深刻感悟诚信的真谛，完成自我品德成长 四、满分范文（150词左右） That night, Keith turned over in bed from time to time. He could hardly fall asleep, consumed by guilt and unease. The shiny new phone lay beside his pillow, yet it brought him no joy at all. Instead, he kept thinking of the worried owner who must be anxious to find her lost phone. Mary’s reminding words echoed in his mind repeatedly. Realizing how greedy and dishonest he had been, Keith felt extremely ashamed. After a night’s struggle, he finally made up his mind to return the phone and correct his mistake. Mary was very happy to hear that. The next morning, Keith dialed the phone number on the cover sincerely. He explained the whole incident and apologized for his improper behavior. Soon the young lady came and got her phone back. She praised Keith for his courage to admit and fix mistakes. This experience taught Keith a precious lesson: honesty is the most valuable virtue, and never should we be trapped by temporary greed. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $