Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件-2026-2027学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

该高中英语课件核心围绕建议信写作，通过图片分析青少年常见问题（孤独、沉迷社交媒体、学业压力）导入，引导学生思考建议信构成要素，结合范文解析结构（问题、理解、建议及理由、希望），提供写作模板与检查清单，构建从输入到输出的学习支架。 其亮点在于以真实情境任务驱动，融合语言能力（掌握建议表达及结构）、思维品质（分析问题并给出合理建议）和学习能力（通过检查清单自主修改）。例如通过Xu Ting孤独问题的写作练习，学生能迁移应用建议信结构，提升写作逻辑，教师可借助清晰流程和实用工具提高教学效率。

Unit 1 Reading for Writing Write a Letter of Advice 【版本：人教　册别：必修一】 1 Look at the pictures, what problems do these teenagers face? feeling lonely/ sense of loneliness 感觉孤单寂寞 social media/ computer addiction 沉迷社交媒体/电脑 study pressure/stress 学业压力 If they write a letter to you asking for help, what kind of letter would you write back? What should be included in the letter? Think and Talk a letter of advice建议信 advice n. 建议,劝告 suggestion n.建议，暗示，提议 advise v. 建议，劝告 suggest v.建议，推荐，暗示，表明 advice, reasons 3 Learning Objectives In this lesson, you are expected to... analyze teenagers’ problems and give advice properly; 语篇分析 grasp the format, structure and language features of a letter of advice; 建议信格式、结构、语言风格 write a good letter of advice and revise it with the help of the checklist.写一封建议信 4 Susan Luo, an adviser for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice. Read her reply and discuss the questions. What is the Worried Friend’s problem? What is Susan Luo’s advice? What expressions does Susan Luo use to give advice? What is Worried Friend’s problem? His friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. His friend is addicted to computer games. Reading 6 What is Susan Luo’s advice/What suggestions does Ms Luo give to Worried Friend? Ms Luo recommends that he talk to his friends about his behaviour, encourage his friend to try new hobbies and discuss the problem together. 7 What expressions does Susan Luo use to give advice? I recommend that... I think you should... Why not...? Reading 8 Can you think of other useful expressions to give advice? What other kinds of advice would you give? Reading 9 1. I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in...and I'd like to offer you some advice. 2. When it comes to…, I think you should / I suggest you try to.…. 3. In my opinion / From my point of view / As far as I'm concerned, it would be wise of you to ... 4. That would be great/much better/ a good idea if you could.…. 5. I hope that you can take my advice into consideration/account. Other expressions to give advice/suggestions 10 Other advice/suggestions: It will certainly help if he can spend more time with his friend doing outdoor activities. I think it wise of him to turn to teachers for help. It would be better if his friend can find a sense of achievement in other aspects. 11 Discovering the structure Besides advice, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter? I know what the problem is. B. I understand how you feel. C. This is my advice and reason(s). D. I think my advice will help. A A B C D A. Problem B.Understanding C. Advice and reasons D. Hope 12 A. Problem B.Understanding C. Advice and reasons D. Hope Discovering the structure A A B C D When writing a letter of advice, can we delete part A,B and D, and only give the advice? What’s the function of part A,B and D? Part A, B and D cannot be deleted. They show the adviser’s care and empathy (同理心) so that the readers would be more willing to follow her advice. 13 They need your help ! Can you write a letter of advice back to help them? Hope Problem Problem Advice + reasons Understanding Problem Review the structure 15 They need your help ! What are their problems? How do they feel? What is her problem? How does she feel? Problem: She always feels lonely after school because her parents work in another city. Feelings: feel lonely, miss her parents Offer advice and give reasons 1. Try listening to your parents. 2. Invite them out for something to eat. Advice Reasons 1. Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them. 2. This will give you a chance to speak with them without distractions. Advice Reasons 1. Join a volunteer club. 2. Connect with your parents online. 1. This will give you a chance to be around with people, and to make more friends. 2. You can talk to them even when they are far away from you. Offer advice and give reasons Advice Reasons Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her. Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you. Offer advice and give reasons Name Advice Reasons Eric Xu Ting Min Ho 1. Try listening to your parents. 2. Invite them out for something to eat. 1. Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them. 2. This will give you a chance to speak with them without distractions. 1. Join a volunteer club. 2. Connect with your parents online. 1. This will give you a chance to be around with people, and to make more friends. 2. You can talk to them even when they are far away from you. Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her. Your friend will be able to help you break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you. Offer advice and give reasons They need your help ! upset puzzled lonely, miss her parents nervous Draft your first paragraph: I’ve learnd from your letter that . I understand that . (problem) (his/her feelings) You wrote that/I’ve learnd from your letter that . I understand quite well that . (problem) Example: I’ve learnd from your letter that you always feel lonely because your parents work in another city. I understand that you must miss your parents so much. It’s common for teenagers to feel lonely when they’re far away from their parents. (her feelings) Draft your first paragraph 23 Example: I recommend that you try to join a volunteer club that helps other people, because it will give you a chance to be around with people and make more friends. Meanwhile, I think it would be much better if you could connect with your parents online, because you can often talk to them even when they are far away from you. Draft your advice and reasons 24 Draft your hope I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 表达期望： I’m sure that.. I’m looking forward to... I really hope you will find these suggestions useful. 25 Check your draft Hope Problem Problem Advice + reasons Understanding Problem 26 Useful linking words: First,..../ First of all,.../To begin with,... Second,.../ What’s more,.../ Meanwhile,.../ also.../..., too. Besides,.../ Last but not least,... Use the checklist to give feedback on this draft. 28 Homework 1. 阅读《创新设计》P25-P27核心要点，完成习题。 2. 阅读《创新设计》P27-P28建议信写作素材，并把“第三步连句成篇”内容写到作文本上，熟读，背诵。 See you next class! N A H T K S 30 Use the checklist to give feedback on this draft. Checklist Date √ reason √ 31 Use the checklist to give feedback on this draft. √ √ √ √ √ √ 32 Homework Page 75 Writing Workbook Besides teenagers, parents also have questions and need advice. Read their letters and try to write a letter of advice to one of them! 33 When you write a letter of advice, you should 1. follow the structure of a letter of advice; 2. use proper phrases and sentence patterns to give advice and reasons; 3. write a letter of advice and revise it with the help of the checklist. Homework possible version 1 30th September 2021 Dear Confused Mum, I've learned from your letter that your daughter now talks to her friends instead of asking you for advice.I understand that you feel confused and frustrated. Why not see this change from a different angle? It actually shows your daughter’s independence to make her own decisions.This is a good thing. What's more I recommend that you should try to talk with your daughter about her school life and her choices first. Maybe she doesn't ask for you advice because she doesn't think you're interested in it. I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Best regards, Talking Teens Page 75 Writing Workbook possible version 2 $