Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing (Ⅱ)写作培优课 课件-2026-2027学年高中英语人教版必修第一册

该高中英语课件聚焦建议信写作，围绕青少年生活主题，通过话题阐释明确建议信目的与格式，文体概述梳理首段意图、主体建议、结尾愿望的结构脉络，结合语言支架提供词汇（如“control one’s temper”）和句式（宾语从句、目的状语从句）支持，搭建从理解到表达的学习路径。 其亮点在于以学生真实困扰（如易发脾气影响生活）为情境，通过语言支架培养语言能力，典题示例引导分析问题、提出建议以发展思维品质，框架建构助力掌握写作策略提升学习能力。例如“Step 2 语言支架”拆解“消除愤怒”等表达，帮助学生逐步成篇，既提升学生建议信写作与问题解决能力，也为教师提供系统教学流程与实用素材。

UNIT 1　TEENAGE LIFE Period 5　Reading for Writing (Ⅱ) 写作培优课 建议信 【写作指导】 话题阐释 本单元的写作任务是写建议信, 建议信是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。 建议信可以写给个人, 就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点; 也可以写给某个 组织或机构, 就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。 文体概述 建议信除了要遵循书信的格式之外, 内容要简明扼要, 目的明确, 理由充足, 有说服力。 1. 首段: 表明写作意图, 陈述事由; 2. 主体: 提出建议并阐述理由; 3. 结尾: 礼貌地表达希望采纳建议。 框架建构 Dear　　　　　, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to __________　　　　　　　　 (引出对方需要建议的主题). 　 Here are a few suggestions(引出作者的建议). First, it is important to 　　　　　　　　. Then, it also helps to 　　　　　　　　. Besides, it should be a good idea to 　　　　　　　. You can also 　　　　　　　　. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议, 如下) As to 　　　　　　　　, I suggest 　　　　　　　　　　　(需要具体 到某一方面). In addition, 　　　　　　　　　(其他的建议). I’m sure 　　　　　　　　 __________________(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope 　　　　　　　　(表达愿望). Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【典题示例】  为了帮助中学生健康成长, 某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART” 专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑杰米(Jamie), 收到一封署名为Worried的求助 信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰: 近日容易发脾气, 使正常的学习和 生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封80词左右的回信。内容要点如 下: 1. 表示理解并给予安慰; 2. 提出建议并说明理由。 参考词汇: temper n. 脾气, 情绪 Step 1　谋篇立意 体裁: _______ Tips 开头: Try to understand and comfort him 主体: Give him some practical suggestions and related reasons 结尾: Hope he will be better 时态: ___________ 人称: _____________ 应用文 一般现在时 第二人称为主 Step 2　语言支架 1. 知道你现在过得很糟糕, 我很抱歉。 ①_______________ 过得很糟糕  ②_____________ 目前, 现在  ③运用宾语从句连词成句 ____________________________________________________________ have a bad time at the moment I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. 2.事实上,每个人都会有一段凡事都看起来不对劲的时期,所以你不用太担 心。 ①_______ 时期, 阶段 ②__________ 看起来, 似乎  ③用适当的从句连词成句 _______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________ period seem to do The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 3. 重要的是学会控制你的脾气, 为的是你不会做任何你会后悔的事或说任 何你会后悔的话。 ①control one’s temper _________ ②__________________ 为的是  ③regret __________ ④连词成句(使用不定式作表语和so that引导的目的状语从句) _________________________________________________________________ _____________________________ 控制脾气 so that/in order that 后悔, 遗憾 The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 4. 到户外和你的朋友一起玩团队游戏, 因为体育锻炼是消除愤怒的有效方 法。 ①___________ 到户外  ②team games _________ ③__________________________ 因为  ④_________ 消除, 去除  ⑤连词成句 _________________________________________________________________ _______________________________ go outdoors 团队游戏 since/now that/as/because/for get rid of Go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Step 3　润色成篇 ___________ _____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ ________________________ Hi Worried, I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______ _______________________________________________ _______ ______ First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie 谢 谢 $