2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---心怀热爱 逐梦前行 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写的核心考点，涵盖情节发展、情感变化、角色塑造等要素，按“文本分析—情节构造—续写框架”逻辑构建知识网络，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等任务驱动，引导学生自主分析文本内在联系，形成完整的叙事认知体系。 亮点在于以学生为主体的自主学习设计，如文本分析中的细节问答诊断题、情节线自主梳理任务，培养学生的语言能力与思维品质。续写框架提供分层写作指导，参考答案对比分析，帮助学生自主诊断不足，提升学习效率，为教师因材施教提供精准学情支持。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Anna cherished painting more than anything else in the world. She devoted all her spare time to depicting flowers, animals and her hometown. Her ultimate ambition was to evolve into a distinguished painter in the future. But when Anna was 14, her family encountered severe hardships. Her father was unemployed, and they could hardly afford paint and paper for her. Anna had to abandon her beloved painting. She sank into deep sorrow and stored her old paintbrushes in a box beneath her bed. One afternoon, Anna wandered in the park. She spotted an elderly man drawing on the ground with a piece of chalk. His works were breathtaking, attracting numerous passers‑by. Anna observed silently for a long time. The old man noticed her and smiled gently. “Do you have a passion for painting?” he asked. Anna nodded, tears welling up in her eyes. She poured out her story to him. The old man whispered softly, “Painting requires no expensive supplies. What it truly needs is your sincere heart and unyielding courage. You can paint anywhere, with any available materials.” He handed her a small piece of chalk. “Give it a try,” he encouraged her. Anna grasped the chalk and sketched a delicate flower on the ground. At first, her hands trembled slightly. But soon, she cast aside her worries and concentrated fully on the flower. When she finished, the old man grinned and said, “See? Your heart is still brimming with artistic passion.” 续写段落开头 Paragraph 1: From that day on, Anna started to paint everywhere with different things. Paragraph 2: One year later, Anna’s paintings got a chance to be shown in a small art show in her town. 一、文本分析 1．角色 Anna：________________________________________________________ The elderly man：________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Anna loved painting and dreamed of becoming a distinguished painter → __________________ → She had to give up painting due to family hardships → __________________ → An elderly painter inspired her to paint with simple materials and follow her heart 4. 细节问答 What was Anna’s lifelong dream?：___________________________________ Why did Anna abandon painting at 14?：_________________________________ What did the old man do in the park?：________________________________________________ What is the true essence of painting according to the old man?：__________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：_____________________________________________ 5．情节线 Anna极度热爱绘画，梦想成为一名优秀画家→家庭遭遇变故、父亲失业，无力负担画材，她被迫放弃热爱、陷入悲伤→在公园偶遇一位用粉笔作画的老人，画作惊艳路人→Anna倾诉自身困境，老人给予开导：绘画贵在真心与坚持，而非昂贵工具→老人赠予粉笔鼓励她随心创作，唤醒她心底的艺术热情→（续写）Anna深受启发，利用各类简易材料随处作画，坚守梦想→（续写）__________________________________________________ 6．情感线 passionate and ambitious→___________→sad and helpless→___________→confident and persistent 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 经典句式摘抄 ____________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二、情节构造 Paragraph 1：________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：________________________________________________________________ 三、段落续写框架 第一段：①__________________→②__________________→③_______________ 第二段：④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________ 四、写作作答区（150词左右） From that day on, Anna started to paint everywhere with different things. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One year later, Anna’s paintings got a chance to be shown in a small art show in her town. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Anna：热爱绘画、心怀梦想、坚韧执着，遭遇生活困境虽短暂失落，却能听取建议、坚守热爱，永不言弃、积极追梦。 The elderly man：善良睿智、热心豁达，深谙艺术真谛，善于鼓励他人，用简单的话语和行动点亮女孩的追梦之路。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Anna loved painting and dreamed of becoming a distinguished painter → Her family suffered severe hardships and lacked money for art supplies → She had to give up painting due to family hardships → She met a wise elderly painter in the park and poured out her troubles → An elderly painter inspired her to paint with simple materials and follow her heart 4. 细节问答（标准答案） What was Anna’s lifelong dream?：She hoped to become a distinguished painter in the future. Why did Anna abandon painting at 14?：Her family met severe hardships. Her father lost his job and they could not afford expensive paint and paper. What did the old man do in the park?：He drew beautiful pictures on the ground with chalk, whose works amazed many passers-by. What is the true essence of painting according to the old man?：Painting does not rely on expensive supplies. It requires sincere heart and unyielding courage. What does the story tell us?：True passion and perseverance outweigh material conditions. As long as we hold sincere love and persistent courage, we can stick to our dreams regardless of hardships. 5．情节线（完整） Anna自幼酷爱绘画，立志成为知名画家，将课余时间全部投入绘画创作→十四岁时家庭陷入困境，父亲失业、家境贫寒，无力承担绘画耗材，她被迫放弃挚爱、满心悲伤→失意的Anna在公园偶遇粉笔作画的老人，其惊艳画作吸引众人驻足欣赏→Anna向老人倾诉追梦困境，老人开导她艺术贵在真心与坚持，不拘泥于工具材料→老人赠予粉笔鼓励创作，成功唤醒Anna心中沉睡的艺术热忱→Anna深受启发，就地取材、随处创作，坚持不懈追逐梦想→一年后画作成功参展，凭借独特创意与真挚热爱收获认可，圆梦成长 6．情感线（完整） passionate and ambitious→frustrated and sorrowful→sad and helpless→inspired and relieved→confident and persistent 7. 综合概括（中英标准答案） 中文：家境贫寒的Anna被迫放弃绘画梦想，在陌生老人的点拨与鼓励下重拾热爱，不拘泥于昂贵工具，以真心与坚持随处创作，最终凭借努力收获认可，诠释了热爱可抵岁月艰难。 英文：Faced with severe family hardships, Anna had to abandon her beloved painting. Inspired by a wise elderly man, she picked up her dream again, created with simple materials everywhere, and finally gained recognition through persistent efforts. 8. 经典句式摘抄 ① She devoted all her spare time to depicting flowers, animals and her hometown. ② Painting requires no expensive supplies. What it truly needs is your sincere heart and unyielding courage. ③ Your heart is still brimming with artistic passion. 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：梦想从不受物质束缚，心怀赤诚热爱、拥有坚韧勇气，纵使身处逆境，亦能坚守初心、逐梦前行。 二、情节构造（标准衔接） Paragraph 1：Encouraged by the old man’s words, Anna regained her passion for painting. She made full use of accessible materials like chalk, leaves and charcoal to paint flowers, animals and beautiful scenery of her hometown in her spare time. Constant practice made her painting skills increasingly mature. Paragraph 2：Anna’s unique and heartfelt works stood out in the art show, winning wide praise from passers-by and judges. A distinguished painter appreciated her persistence and pure love for art. Anna realized that sincere heart and unyielding courage are the best supplies for realizing dreams. 三、段落续写框架（标准） 第一段：①Anna深受鼓舞，彻底重拾绘画热情与信心→②就地取材、随处创作，坚持利用闲暇时间练习绘画→③日复一日坚持积累，画技愈发娴熟，初心不改 第二段：①一年后画作成功参展，质朴独特的作品惊艳众人→②收获观众与专业画家的认可与称赞→③Anna领悟梦想真谛，明白热爱与坚持远比物质更重要 四、满分范文（150词左右） From that day on, Anna started to paint everywhere with different things. Inspired by the elderly man’s words, she held fast to her passion for painting. She sketched beautiful flowers and lovely animals on the ground with chalk whenever she was free. She also used simple charcoal and leaves to record the scenery of her beloved hometown. No matter how tough life was, she never abandoned her dream. Her unyielding courage and sincere heart kept her artistic passion burning all the time. One year later, Anna’s paintings got a chance to be shown in a small art show in her town. Her unique works, created with ordinary materials, amazed all passers-by. Many visitors praised her delicate strokes and sincere love for life. A distinguished painter even spoke highly of her persistence and talent. Anna finally realized that true art never relies on expensive supplies. As long as she keeps a passionate heart, her dream of being a painter will never fade away. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $