内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Recently, I have been having a really hard time with my physics study. As a senior student, physics knowledge has become much more difficult than that in junior high school. Complex formulas (公式) and difficult problem-solving methods always made me confused. No matter how hard I tried to do exercises and review textbooks, I still failed to keep up with my classmates.
Things got worse after the recent physics exam. When I received my paper with a terrible score, I felt extremely upset and disappointed. I blamed myself for my inability to keep up with others. For days, I was in a bad mood and even lost confidence in learning physics.
To my greater depression, I found my two best friends Zoe and Mia acting strangely these days. We used to stay together all the time, chatting and walking home happily after school. However, they suddenly kept distance from me, never waiting for me after class and always leaving school in a hurry.
Every time I turned around, I saw them whispering secretly and putting their heads together. They would quickly separate and pretend nothing had happened once they noticed my sight. Their strange behavior made me feel left out and lonely. I could not help guessing that they might have gossiped about (说三道四) my poor academic performance. But I couldn’t gather my courage to confirm my doubt.
One day, I accidentally dropped my physics workbook on the hallway and bent down to pick it up. Just then, I saw my two friends standing in the corner and talking secretly. I could slightly hear some words like my name, physics notes and presents.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I froze on the spot the instant I overheard their conversation.
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Paragraph 2: That night, staring at their carefully-prepared gifts, I was greatly inspired.
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一、文本分析
1.角色
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2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
升入高中后,“我”的物理学习陷入困境,复杂公式与难题让“我”屡屡受挫——物理考试失利,“我”情绪低落、丧失学习信心——好友Zoe和Mia近期行为怪异、刻意疏远、私下低语——“我”误以为好友议论自己的糟糕成绩,倍感失落孤单——走廊偶遇好友密谈,听见自己的名字、物理笔记和礼物等关键词——_________________---_________________(续写)
4. 细节问答
What troubled the writer greatly? :___________________________________
How did the writer feel after the physics exam?:_________________________________
What strange behavior did the writer’s best friends have?:________________________________________________
Why did the writer feel lonely and upset?:__________________________________________
What wrong guess did the writer have about her friends?:_____________________________________________
What did the writer accidentally hear in the hallway?:_________________________________________________
What is the real reason for the friends’ strange behavior?:________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
高中物理难度骤增,“我”刻苦努力却收效甚微,学习受挫——考试失利让“我”心态崩塌,失去学习自信——昔日亲密好友突然刻意疏远、私下密谋,行为反常——“我”心生误解,误以为好友非议自己、刻意排挤自己——偶然听见好友密谈关键词,心生疑惑——(续写)___________________---(续写)___________________
6.情感线
The writer:confused and frustrated→___________→lonely and misunderstood→___________→touched and motivated(续写)
Friends:close and intimate→___________→careful and secretive→___________→sincere and supportive(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式积累
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
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9. 本文主题
友情成长类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: I froze on the spot the instant I overheard their conversation.
衔接句1——What did the writer finally figure out? How did she feel? What did her friends do next?
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Paragraph 2: That night, staring at their carefully-prepared gifts, I was greatly inspired.
衔接句2——What gifts did the friends prepare? What did the writer realize? What change would she make?
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三.段落续写框架
第一段:听到她们的对话,我当场愣住了。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:那晚,看着她们精心准备的礼物,我备受鼓舞。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四.段落续写(150词左右)
I froze on the spot the instant I overheard their conversation.
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That night, staring at their carefully-prepared gifts, I was greatly inspired.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
作者(“我”):高中学业压力大,物理学习受挫、心态低落敏感,容易胡思乱想,懂得感恩、知错释怀、积极上进;Zoe & Mia:善良暖心、真诚真挚、细心体贴,默默关心好友,用悄悄努力的方式陪伴、帮助低谷中的朋友。
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
升入高中后,“我”的物理学习陷入困境,复杂公式与难题让“我”屡屡受挫——物理考试失利,“我”情绪低落、丧失学习信心——好友Zoe和Mia近期行为怪异、刻意疏远、私下低语——“我”误以为好友议论自己的糟糕成绩,倍感失落孤单——走廊偶遇好友密谈,听见自己的名字、物理笔记和礼物等关键词——“我”解开误会,知晓好友悄悄为自己准备补习笔记和鼓励礼物——深受感动重拾信心,读懂真挚友情、努力突破学习困境(续写)
4. 细节问答
What troubled the writer greatly? :She struggled with difficult senior physics, confused by complex formulas and tough problem-solving methods, and failed to keep up with classmates.
How did the writer feel after the physics exam?:She felt extremely upset, disappointed and lost confidence in physics learning.
What strange behavior did the writer’s best friends have?:They kept distance from her, refused to wait for her after school and often whispered secretly, pretending to be normal when noticed.
Why did the writer feel lonely and upset?:She was misunderstood by her friends’ strange behavior and felt left out.
What wrong guess did the writer have about her friends?:She thought her friends were gossiping about her poor physics grades.
What did the writer accidentally hear in the hallway?:She heard her friends mentioning her name, physics notes and presents in their secret talk.
What is the real reason for the friends’ strange behavior?:They secretly sorted out physics notes and prepared gifts to encourage and help the writer improve her physics.
What does the story tell us?:True friendship is silent and sincere, always offering support in silence, warming us up and inspiring us to move forward in difficulties.
5.情节线
高中物理难度骤增,“我”刻苦努力却收效甚微,学习受挫——考试失利让“我”心态崩塌,失去学习自信——昔日亲密好友突然刻意疏远、私下密谋,行为反常——“我”心生误解,误以为好友非议自己、刻意排挤自己——偶然听见好友密谈关键词,心生疑惑——解开误会,知晓好友默默为自己准备学习笔记与鼓励礼物——被真挚友情治愈,重拾信心、奋勇前行(续写)
6.情感线
The writer:confused and frustrated→upset and unconfident→lonely and misunderstood→shocked and relieved→touched and motivated(续写)
Friends:close and intimate→secretive and cautious→considerate and caring→sincere and warm→supportive and devoted(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:高中物理学习受挫的“我”因好友的反常行为心生误会、倍感失落,最终意外发现好友默默为自己准备学习笔记与暖心礼物,真挚的无声友情治愈了低落的“我”,让“我”重拾学习信心。
English:Struggling with tough physics study and suffering from low spirits, the writer misunderstood her best friends’ strange behavior. Finally, she found their silent kindness and warm support, which inspired her to regain confidence and move forward bravely.
8. 句式积累
状语从句:No matter how hard I tried, I could not make progress in my physics study.
非谓语动词:Feeling frustrated and lonely, I wrongly suspected my best friends of gossiping about me.
宾语从句:I finally realized that my friends’ strange behavior was nothing but silent care and warm support.
定语从句:The detailed physics notes that my friends sorted out helped me clear up my learning confusion.
并列句:I once felt abandoned and helpless, but sincere friendship gave me endless strength and courage.
9. 本文主题
友情成长类:真挚的友情从无需张扬,默默的陪伴与守护能治愈低谷、给予前行的力量,助力我们突破困境、自我成长。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: I froze on the spot the instant I overheard their conversation.
衔接句1:I suddenly figured out the whole truth, feeling ashamed for my silly misunderstanding. My friends noticed me and showed me carefully-sorted physics notes and warm gifts intended for me.
Paragraph 2: That night, staring at their carefully-prepared gifts, I was greatly inspired.
衔接句2:I was deeply touched by their silent friendship, made up my mind to study harder, and promised myself to cherish the precious friendship and face difficulties bravely.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:听到她们的对话,我当场愣住了。
→①瞬间恍然大悟,为自己的胡乱猜忌深感愧疚→②好友发现我后,坦诚道出所有真相→③向我展示精心整理的物理笔记与暖心礼物;
第二段:那晚,看着她们精心准备的礼物,我备受鼓舞。
→①真切体会到好友无声的温柔与真挚的友情→②彻底走出学习低谷,重拾物理学习信心→③下定决心刻苦奋进,珍惜友情、勇敢直面困境。
四.段落续写(150词左右,高考标准范文)
I froze on the spot the instant I overheard their conversation. It suddenly dawned on me that I had totally misunderstood my best friends. Their strange distance and secret whispers were never gossip, but silent preparation to cheer me up. Ashamed and moved, I walked towards them. Noticing my presence, Zoe and Mia smiled shyly and took out thick, neatly-sorted physics notes and a delicate gift. They explained that they sorted out key knowledge and problem-solving skills to help me get through the tough time, fearing that I would feel pressured if I knew it in advance.
That night, staring at their carefully-prepared gifts, I was greatly inspired. The detailed notes recorded every key point patiently, and the warm words on the gift card were full of encouragement. All my frustration and misunderstanding faded away instantly. I realized true friendship lies in silent dedication and heartfelt support. From then on, I regained my lost confidence. With my friends’ help and my continuous efforts, I faced physics challenges bravely and spared no effort to make progress, knowing I was never alone on my way to growth.
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