2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---风雪中的诚信坚守 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节发展、情感逻辑等要素，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题链设计，引导学生自主构建“文本理解-情节推断-情感表达”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于诊断性细节问答和任务驱动式续写框架，如设置“兄弟梦想、铲雪动机”等关键问题自测文本理解，通过“衔接句设计、段落框架搭建”任务培养思维品质和语言能力。每个模块配有情感线分析和主题概括，提升文化意识，教师可依据学生续写框架反馈精准指导，助力学生自主诊断与提升，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Every day after school, Lucas and Noah pressed their noses against Mr. Henderson’s shop window. They stared at the red bicycle that stood proudly in the center of the display. For months, they had saved every spare coin, yet the price still seemed far beyond their reach. When the first snow of winter covered their town, the brothers saw an opportunity. They grabbed their shovels (铲子), determined to turn the snowfall into savings through hard work. They started in their own neighborhood. But many residents had already cleared their walkways, and those who hadn’t only offered a few coins for short paths. After several tiring hours, they had earned just seven dollars — far less than they hoped. Refusing to give up, they headed to Maple Street, where the houses were bigger and the driveways deeper in snow. Noah knocked on the door of a beautiful Victorian house. Mrs. Williams answered, looking like she was in a hurry. When Noah asked if she needed her driveway shoveled, she agreed at once. She took a twenty-dollar bill from her purse and placed it into Noah’s hand. “I have to rush out,” she said with an encouraging smile. “I’ll leave it in your capable hands.” The boys stared at the bill, amazed. Twenty dollars-more than they had made the entire day! Laughing in disbelief, they set to work with fresh energy. The initial excitement eased them through the first hour of work. But as the afternoon darkened and the temperature dropped, the work became harder. Their hands grew numb (麻木), their muscles ached, and the long driveway seemed endless. Halfway through, Lucas threw down his shovel in frustration (沮丧). “Let’s just go. She’ll never know we didn’t finish.” 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Noah’s aching hands seemed to agree with his brother’s words. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As they cleared the final shovel of snow, Mrs. Williams’ car returned. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Two brothers longed for a red bicycle and saved money hard--- _________________ --- They earned little money by shoveling snow in their neighborhood--- _________________ --- They got a $20 snow-shoveling job from Mrs. Williams--- _________________ --- Exhausted halfway, Lucas wanted to give up and leave the work unfinished 4. 细节问答 What was the brothers’ dream? ：___________________________________ Why did the brothers decide to shovel snow?：_________________________________ How much did they earn in their own neighborhood?：________________________________________________ What job did they get from Mrs. Williams?：__________________________________________ Why did Lucas want to give up halfway?：_____________________________________________ What temptation did the brothers face?：_________________________________________________ What quality will the brothers show in the follow-up story?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 兄弟二人渴望一辆红色自行车，长期存钱却依旧不够→_________________ →初雪来临，二人决定铲雪打工攒钱→在自家街区铲雪收入微薄，十分辛苦→_________________ →接到威廉姆斯夫人的高薪铲雪工作，干劲十足→天气严寒、劳作疲惫，弟弟心生退意，想要偷懒跑路→_________________ →（续写）哥哥坚守诚信，说服弟弟坚持完成工作→（续写）主人归来，夸赞嘉奖二人，诚信收获回报 6．情感线 The brothers：longing and hopeful→___________→surprised and energetic→___________→frustrated and tired→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：__________________________________________________________________ 英文：__________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 品格成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Noah’s aching hands seemed to agree with his brother’s words. 衔接句1——What did Noah think and do? Did they give up the job? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: As they cleared the final shovel of snow, Mrs. Williams’ car returned. 衔接句2——How did Mrs. Williams react? What reward and ending did they get? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：诺亚酸痛的双手似乎也认同弟弟的想法。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：当铲完最后一铲积雪时，威廉姆斯夫人的车回来了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（150词左右） Noah’s aching hands seemed to agree with his brother’s words. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As they cleared the final shovel of snow, Mrs. Williams’ car returned. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Lucas（容易懈怠、懂得疲惫但知错能改的弟弟）；Noah（吃苦耐劳、坚守原则、诚实守信、有责任心的哥哥）；Mrs. Williams（善良慷慨、信任他人的住户） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Two brothers longed for a red bicycle and saved money hard--- They failed to afford the expensive bicycle --- They earned little money by shoveling snow in their neighborhood---They chose to try luck in richer blocks --- They got a $20 snow-shoveling job from Mrs. Williams--- They worked hard but suffered from cold and tiredness --- Exhausted halfway, Lucas wanted to give up and leave the work unfinished 4. 细节问答 What was the brothers’ dream? ：They longed to buy a red bicycle displayed in the shop. Why did the brothers decide to shovel snow?：They wanted to earn money to buy their dream bicycle after the first snow. How much did they earn in their own neighborhood?：They only earned seven dollars after tiring work. What job did they get from Mrs. Williams?：They were paid 20 dollars to shovel snow off her long driveway. Why did Lucas want to give up halfway?：The weather was cold, the work was tiring and the driveway was endless. What temptation did the brothers face?：They could leave secretly with the 20 dollars without finishing the work. What quality will the brothers show in the follow-up story?：They showed honesty, perseverance and a strong sense of responsibility. What does the story tell us?：Honesty and perseverance are the most precious wealth; hard work and integrity will always bring unexpected rewards. 5．情节线 兄弟二人渴望一辆红色自行车，长期存钱却依旧不够→冬日初雪到来，二人决定铲雪打工攒钱圆梦 →初雪来临，二人决定铲雪打工攒钱→在自家街区铲雪收入微薄，十分辛苦→转战富人街区，幸运接到高薪铲雪工作 →接到威廉姆斯夫人的高薪铲雪工作，干劲十足→天气严寒、劳作疲惫，弟弟心生退意，想要偷懒跑路→哥哥坚守诚信底线，劝说弟弟坚持完成劳作 →（续写）哥哥坚守诚信，说服弟弟坚持完成工作→（续写）主人归来，夸赞嘉奖二人，诚信收获回报 6．情感线 The brothers：longing and hopeful→disappointed and tired→surprised and energetic→exhausted and painful→frustrated and tired→firm and sincere（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：一对兄弟为购买心仪的自行车冒雪打工，获得高薪铲雪工作后因严寒疲惫想要半途而废，最终坚守诚信与毅力完成工作，收获了认可与额外回报。 英文：To buy a dream bicycle, two brothers worked hard to shovel snow. Faced with tiredness and temptation of escaping work, they chose to stick to honesty and perseverance, finishing the task perfectly and gaining generous rewards. 8. 句式积累 状语从句：For months, they had saved every spare coin, yet the price still seemed far beyond their reach. 非谓语动词：Determined to turn the snowfall into savings through hard work, they grabbed their shovels. 宾语从句：She said she would leave the work in their capable hands. 定语从句：They headed to Maple Street, where the houses were bigger and the driveways deeper in snow. 并列句：Their hands grew numb, their muscles ached, and the long driveway seemed endless. 9. 本文主题 品格成长类：坚守诚信与初心，直面疲惫与诱惑，踏实付出与正直品格，终将收获馈赠与成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Noah’s aching hands seemed to agree with his brother’s words. 衔接句1——What did Noah think and do? Did they give up the job? Though exhausted, Noah refused to be dishonest. He reminded Lucas of trust and responsibility, and the two brothers continued to finish the tough work. Paragraph 2: As they cleared the final shovel of snow, Mrs. Williams’ car returned. 衔接句2——How did Mrs. Williams react? What reward and ending did they get? Mrs. Williams was impressed by their honesty and perseverance, praised them highly and gave them extra money as a reward. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：诺亚酸痛的双手似乎也认同弟弟的想法。 →①诺亚虽身心俱疲，却坚守诚信底线不愿失信→②他耐心劝说弟弟，坚守责任与初心→③二人咬牙坚持，奋力清理剩余积雪； 第二段：当铲完最后一铲积雪时，威廉姆斯夫人的车回来了。 →①夫人看到干净整洁的车道，十分震撼与感动→②她高度赞扬兄弟二人的诚信与坚毅→③额外给予奖励，助力他们实现购车梦想。 四.段落续写范文（150词左右） Noah’s aching hands seemed to agree with his brother’s words. Breathless and frozen, he hesitated for a moment. However, he shook his head firmly. “We took her money and her trust. Quitting halfway would be dishonest,” he whispered. Moved by his brother’s words, Lucas picked up his shovel again without complaint. Battling the freezing cold and muscle soreness, they encouraged each other and kept working steadily. Step by step, the endless driveway gradually became clean and tidy. As they cleared the final shovel of snow, Mrs. Williams’ car returned. Seeing the spotless driveway, she was astonished and touched by their perseverance and honesty. Knowing they were saving money for a dream bicycle, she praised their good qualities sincerely and gave them more money as a bonus. The two brothers smiled brightly. They realized that true growth lies not only in hard work, but also in keeping honesty in heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $