摘要:
**基本信息**
以“历史主题写作”为核心,构建“词汇-句型-方法-应用”四维训练体系,系统培养语言表达与历史思维的融合能力。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|写作素材库|4类主题词汇、14个高频搭配、5类功能表达|分类整合历史主题语言要素,强化场景化词汇应用|从具体词汇到功能表达,构建历史描述的语言基础|
|黄金句型库|3类13个核心句型|提供开头引入、主体描述、结尾总结的结构化句型模板|按写作逻辑链设计句型,实现从句子到篇章的衔接|
|高分写作方法|5步成文法(审题-结构-内容-语言-检查)|提炼历史主题写作的标准化流程,强调细节与意义结合|以“主题定位-事实陈述-价值升华”为逻辑主线,培养思维连贯性|
|阶梯训练|3级句子训练(汉译英/仿写/升级)、2篇篇章训练|通过基础巩固-句型迁移-内容升级的阶梯式训练,提升语言运用能力|从单句准确表达到篇章逻辑构建,实现语言能力与思维品质的协同发展|
内容正文:
Unit 3 Past Passing By
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、写作素材库
1. 主题词汇
历史遗址与发现
remains 遗迹
ruins 废墟
site 遗址
tomb 坟墓
excavation 发掘
discovery 发现
find 发现物
artefact 手工艺品
fossil 化石
relic 遗物;文物
treasure 珍宝;珍品
考古相关词汇
archaeologist 考古学家
archaeology 考古学
excavate 发掘
uncover 发现;揭露
research 研究
historian 历史学家
ancient 古代的
prehistoric 史前的
historical 历史的
valuable 宝贵的;有价值的
历史时期与事件
dynasty 朝代
kingdom 王国
period 时期
empire 帝国
war 战争
battle 战斗
revolution 革命
celebration 庆典
展示方式相关词汇
multimedia 多媒体的
version 版本
technology 技术
creative 有创造力的
creativity 创造力
imagination 想象力
video 视频
exhibition 展览
documentary 纪录片
product 产品
background 背景
fever 狂热;兴奋
2. 高频搭配
put in a great deal of effort 付出大量努力
stand on the shoulders of giants 站在巨人的肩膀上
provide a missing piece of history 提供一块缺失的历史拼图
open a door to the past 打开一扇通往过去的大门
come alive in one’s imagination 在想象中鲜活起来
bit by bit 一点一点地
bring out the secrets 揭示秘密
be far from 远非;远没有
believe in 相信
work even harder 更加努力地工作
take pride in 以……为自豪
follow the example of 效仿……的例子
carry one’s central values 承载核心价值观
be full of 充满
3. 写作功能表达
介绍历史主题
It happened in ... 它发生在……
It is an object / place that ... 它是一个……的物品/地方。
It lies in ... 它位于……
... is the remains of ... ……是……的遗迹。
描述重要性
This person / moment / object was so important that ...
这个人物/时刻/物品如此重要,以至于……
It was such an important ... that ...
它是如此重要的……,以至于……
描述神秘与探索
One of the mysteries is that ...
其中一个谜团是……
... provide(s) a missing piece of ...
……提供了……缺失的一角。
We are far from getting the whole picture.
我们还远未了解全貌。
说明展示方式
A multimedia version was made.
制作了一个多媒体版本。
It is presented through ...
它是通过……来呈现的。
总结价值
... changed history because ...
……改变了历史,因为……
It gives us confidence in where we are going.
它给了我们对未来的信心。
三、黄金句型库
1. 开头句型
I would like to introduce a piece of history that interests me.
我想介绍一段我感兴趣的历史。
... is the remains of the ancient ... Kingdom.
……是古代……王国的遗迹。
It lies in ... and has a history of over ... years.
它位于……,有超过……年的历史。
Let me share with you a fascinating piece of history.
让我和你分享一段迷人的历史。
2. 主体句型
It is such an amazing place that it is now world-famous.
它是一个如此神奇的地方,以至于现在举世闻名。
The discoveries provide a missing piece of Chinese history.
这些发现提供了中国历史中缺失的一角。
People have put in a great deal of effort over the years.
多年来人们付出了大量的努力。
The treasures are so beautiful that they come alive in my imagination.
这些珍宝如此美丽,以至于它们在想象中鲜活起来。
We are able to open a door to the past so that people can better understand history.
我们能够打开一扇通往过去的大门,以便人们更好地了解历史。
3. 结尾句型
This piece of history changed the world because ...
这段历史改变了世界,因为……
It gives us confidence in where we are going.
它给了我们对未来的信心。
I believe it is important to learn about and pass on history.
我相信了解历史和传承历史是很重要的。
History carries a country’s central values.
历史承载着一个国家的核心价值观。
四、高分写作方法
Step 1 审题定位
明确写作任务为“为一段历史制作一页书页”。写作内容应包括历史主题的标题和类型、主要事实、历史意义和影响,以及展示或体验方式。可选择一个历史时刻、一位重要人物或一件令人印象深刻的物品。
写作对象: 同学或校刊读者
时态要求: 一般现在时(介绍历史和现状)和一般过去时(叙述历史事件)并用
Step 2 搭建结构
第一段:引出主题
介绍历史主题的标题和类型(历史时刻/重要人物/重要物品),点出该历史事件或人物的基本定位。
第二段:描述事实
陈述主要事实,包括时间、地点、人物、事件经过等。说明这段历史为什么重要,以及它带来了什么影响或变化。
第三段:价值与意义
总结这段历史的意义,说明它如何影响现在或未来,表达自己的感受或思考。
Step 3 丰富内容
不要只简单罗列历史事实,要加入具体细节、相关数字和影响描述。例如不只写“Sanxingdui is important.”,还要写“The finds prove that Chinese culture was open from a very early period. Different cultures mixed with each other to form today’s China.”
Step 4 提升语言
使用目的状语从句(so that...)、结果状语从句(such/so...that...)、一般现在时和一般过去时,以及描述历史意义的表达(provide a missing piece, bring out the secrets, carry central values等)。
Step 5 检查修改
检查内容是否完整(主题→事实→意义)、结构是否清晰(三段式)、so that和such/so...that...是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。
五、阶梯训练
(一)句子训练
Level 1 汉译英
1. 三星堆是古蜀国的遗址,位于四川省广汉市西北部。
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2. 它是一个如此神奇的地方,以至于现在举世闻名。
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3. 这些发现提供了中国历史中缺失的一角。
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4. 我们能够打开一扇通往过去的大门,以便人们更好地了解历史。
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5. 这些珍宝如此美丽,以至于它们在想象中鲜活起来。
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Level 2 句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:... is the remains of ...(介绍遗址)
例句: Sanxingdui is the remains of the ancient Shu Kingdom.
(1)马王堆是西汉时期的墓葬遗址。
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(2)兵马俑是秦始皇墓葬的一部分。
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句型 2:It lies in ...(介绍位置)
例句: It lies in the northwest of Guanghan, Sichuan Province.
(1)这座古城位于中国西北部。
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(2)这个考古遗址位于黄河附近。
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句型 3:It is such ... that ...(描述重要性)
例句: Sanxingdui is such an amazing place that it is now world-famous.
(1)这是一个如此重要的发现,以至于它改变了我们对历史的看法。
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(2)这个展览如此有趣,以至于人们从全国各地来参观。
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句型 4:The discoveries provide a missing piece of ...(描述贡献)
例句: The discoveries provide a missing piece of Chinese history.
(1)这个发现提供了我们过去的一角。
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(2)这些文物提供了古代生活的重要信息。
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句型 5:... so that people can ...(描述目的)
例句: We’re able to open a door to the past so that people can better understand the history.
(1)我们制作了一个多媒体版本,以便人们可以更好地体验这段历史。
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(2)博物馆举办了特别展览,以便游客能够了解古代文化。
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句型 6:... are so ... that ...(描述程度)
例句: The treasures are so beautiful that they come alive in my imagination.
(1)这些文物如此珍贵,以至于它们被保存在博物馆里。
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(2)这个古城如此神秘,以至于人们还在不断研究它。
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Level 3 句子升级
要求:参照下方示例,将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。
示例:
基础句:Sanxingdui is important.
升级句:Sanxingdui is such an amazing place that it is now world-famous.
1. 基础句:The finds are important.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
2. 基础句:People work hard.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
3. 基础句:The treasures are beautiful.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
4. 基础句:History matters.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
5. 基础句:The museum is popular.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
6. 基础句:They study history.
升级句:____________________________________________________________
(二)篇章训练
1.写一段话(至少5句)介绍一个你感兴趣的历史之谜(例如:金字塔是如何建造的、秦始皇兵马俑的颜色为何消失等)。说明它是什么、有什么神秘之处、以及你的看法。使用mystery, be famous for, weigh, believe, so that等表达。
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2.写一段话(至少5句)介绍一种你认为可以帮助人们了解历史的创意方式(可以是展览、App、短视频、文创产品等)。说明它是什么、如何运作、以及你对此的看法。使用a big hit,come to life,creative products,cultural background,take pride in等表达。
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参考答案
Level 1 汉译英
1. Sanxingdui is the remains of the ancient Shu Kingdom. It lies in the northwest of Guanghan, Sichuan Province.
2. It is such an amazing place that it is now world-famous.
3. The discoveries provide a missing piece of Chinese history.
4. We’re able to open a door to the past so that people can better understand history.
5. The treasures are so beautiful that they come alive in my imagination.
Level 2 句型仿写
句型 1
(1)Mawangdui is the remains of tombs from the Western Han Dynasty.
(2)The Terracotta Warriors are part of Emperor Qinshihuang’s tomb.
句型 2
(1)This ancient city lies in the northwest of China.
(2)This archaeological site lies near the Yellow River.
句型 3
(1)It is such an important discovery that it has changed our view of history.
(2)This exhibition is so interesting that people come from all over the country to visit it.
句型 4
(1)This discovery provides a missing piece of our past.
(2)These artefacts provide important information about ancient life.
句型 5
(1)We made a multimedia version so that people can experience this history better.
(2)The museum held a special exhibition so that visitors could learn about ancient culture.
句型 6
(1)These artefacts are so precious that they are kept in the museum.
(2)This ancient city is so mysterious that people are still studying it.
Level 3 句子升级
(以下为参考升级答案,其他合理升级也可接受)
1. 升级句:The finds at Sanxingdui provide a missing piece of Chinese history and prove that Chinese culture was open from a very early period.
2. 升级句:Many people before me put in a great deal of effort. As I continued their work, I felt like I was standing on the shoulders of giants.
3. 升级句:The treasures are so beautiful that they come alive in my imagination. People in the ancient Shu Kingdom were so creative that we are amazed by their works.
4. 升级句:History carries a country’s central values. When we learn about our past, we know who we are and where we are going.
5. 升级句:The museum is so wonderful that it attracts visitors from all over the world, and it has become a must-visit place for history lovers.
6. 升级句:They study history so that they can better understand the present and find new ways to help people understand the past.
篇章训练(参考范文)
1.
I am interested in the mystery of the Terracotta Warriors in Xi’an. They are famous for being life-sized clay soldiers that guard Emperor Qin Shi Huang’s tomb. It is a mystery why the weapons were missing from some statues. Some believe that the tomb was burned by enemies. Others think it was an accident. Each warrior weighs more than 100 kilograms on average, and ancient craftsmen made them carefully so that each warrior has a one-of-a-kind facial appearance that cannot be replicated. I think it is amazing that ancient people could build such a large army of statues without modern machines. This mystery makes me want to learn more about Chinese history. I hope one day scientists can solve the puzzle. Until then, we can only imagine. That’s what makes history so exciting. It’s full of secrets waiting to be discovered.
2.例文
I think short videos are a creative way to learn about history. They are a big hit among young people. In these videos, historical events and figures come to life with vivid pictures and stories. Some videos also introduce creative products like historical figurines or themed stationery. They explain the cultural background behind each story in a simple way. I think this is a great way to make history fun and easy to understand. More importantly, it helps us take pride in our own culture and history.
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