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分层作业
Unit 1 Period 2 Reading for Writing
目 录
A组 巩固过关
B组 能力进阶
C组 思维拔高
拓展 链接高考
一、 重点短语填空
be addicted to, be attracted to, focus on, be worried about, start a natural conversation
1.Spending too much time playing online games makes it hard for teenagers to __________ their school lessons.
2.Nowadays, a growing number of students ____________ short videos and cannot control their screen time.
3.It is not unusual for young people to ____________ the colorful online world.
4.If you share common hobbies with others, it will be much easier for you to _________.
5.Hearing that her son spent all night surfing the Internet, Mrs. Green ______________________ his health.
二、 建议信核心句型转换
1.You should set a timer for daily phone usage. (改为I suggest that... 虚拟语气句型)
→I suggest that you ______________________ for daily phone usage.
2.I recommend that you talk to your friend. He plays computer games too often. (改为recommend that + 宾语从句)
→I recommend that you talk to your friend about his ________________.
3.Teenagers are often attracted to the online world. This is completely normal. (改为It is adj. for sb to do...)
→It is not _____________ for teenagers to be attracted to the online world.
三、 根据汉语提示完成句子(建议信必背句)
1.我完全理解你因为无法专注于学习而感到焦虑。
I ______________________ that you feel anxious about being unable to focus on your study.
2.对于你目前面临的困境,我写信想给你提供一些建议。
I am writing to ______________________ for the difficulties you are facing.
3.我相信只要你尝试这些方法,一切很快就会好起来。
I am sure everything ______________________ soon if you try these methods.
一、高阶提分短语与表达填空
be obsessed with, limit screen time, get back on track, share common interests, share one's concerns
1.To prevent students from ruining their eyesight, parents ought to _______________ strictly.
2.Don't panic if you fall behind temporarily; proper methods will help you ____________.
3.Instead of simply scolding him, his mother decided to sit down and _____________ with him.
4.Some teenagers __________________ social media, which negatively affects their family life.
5.Making friends becomes easier when you try to _______________ with your classmates.
二、高级句式改写
1.Spending too much time online is unhealthy. It makes us tired. (使用What... is that...主语从句+强调句/形式宾语改写)
____________________________________________________________________
2.You can set a daily goal. You can also try new hobbies to reduce anxiety. (使用Why not...及递进衔接词Additionally/Besides 改写)
____________________________________________________________________
3.I understand your feeling. You have every right to feel upset about your bad grades. (合并为深度共情句,包含It is completely normal...)
____________________________________________________________________
三、单句写作
1.听到你在与父母沟通方面遇到困难,我感到很遗憾。
____________________________________________________________________
2.如果我是你,我会主动找机会和他们开启一场平等的对话。
____________________________________________________________________
3.当面对你喜欢的女孩子时,感到紧张是非常正常的,你不必过于拘束。
____________________________________________________________________
4.我强烈建议你多参加一些学校的社团活动,因为寻找共同的兴趣爱好能帮你更快融入集体并克服孤独。
____________________________________________________________________
5.你需要意识到的是,沉迷于短视频不仅会消耗你的精力,还会让你在课堂上无法集中注意力。
____________________________________________________________________
一、衔接词填空
To begin with, Additionally, As a result, In conclusion, To address this issue
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble dealing with stress recently. 1. __________, feeling overwhelmed by academic pressure and screen addiction is quite common among senior high students, so you don't need to be too hard on yourself.
As you mentioned in your letter, spending endless hours on smartphones disrupts your natural sleep cycle. 2. ___________, you will feel exhausted during class and find it hard to focus. 3. _________, I strongly recommend that you make a realistic daily schedule and limit your screen time. 4. ______________, why not engage in outdoor physical exercise like running or basketball to release tension and refresh your mind?
5. ______________, as long as you take step-by-step action and stick to your plan, you will surely get back on track and rebuild your confidence.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、应用文写作
1.假定你是李华,你的笔友Chris来信说自己写作业总依赖AI工具,致使学习成绩下降,内心十分苦恼。请你给他写一封建议信,内容包含:
1. 表示理解并鼓励他;
2. 分三点给出合理建议(自主做题、正确利用AI、及时复盘总结);
3. 送上学习祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
2. 假定你是李华,你意识到很多同学在忙碌的学习中很少有机会认真思考自己的未来,于是打算向学校学生会建议,为即将升入高三的同学们组织一次活动,帮助大家更好地为未来做准备。
请你给学生会主席Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.组织该活动的理由;
3.希望从学生会获得的支持。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右,开头和结尾已给出;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom最近来信说他因学业压力大,经常熬夜、饮食不规律,身体状态很差。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达关心;
2. 给出健康生活的具体建议(作息、饮食、运动、心态);
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
4.假定你是某国际学校学生李华。你得知你的英国笔友George不久前来到国内的一所中学,进行为期半年的交换学习。兴奋之余,他又为遭遇到的文化冲击而苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达理解;
(2)你的建议和鼓励。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为100个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve begun your six-month exchange program here in China.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best,
Li Hua
5.假定你是李华。你校食堂最近收到一些学生意见。请你用英语给食堂负责人Mr. Zhang写一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 提出食堂需要改进的地方;
2. 给出具体的建议;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m writing to share some suggestions for improving our school cafeteria.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 2026年全国II卷
假定你是学生李华,Kate计划将你们的英语作文汇编成册。请给Kate写封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 建议配图;
(2) 自荐承担画图工作。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 2025年全国I卷
假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 2025北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 2023年新I&II卷写作(随机分组练习口语)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 2023年北京卷(建议信:“绿色北京”)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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分层作业
Unit 1 Period 2 Reading for Writing
目 录
A组 巩固过关
B组 能力进阶
C组 思维拔高
拓展 链接高考
一、 重点短语填空
be addicted to, be attracted to, focus on, be worried about, start a natural conversation
1.Spending too much time playing online games makes it hard for teenagers to __________ their school lessons.
2.Nowadays, a growing number of students ____________ short videos and cannot control their screen time.
3.It is not unusual for young people to ____________ the colorful online world.
4.If you share common hobbies with others, it will be much easier for you to _________.
5.Hearing that her son spent all night surfing the Internet, Mrs. Green ______________________ his health.
【答案】
1. focus on 2.are addicted to 3.be attracted to 4.start a natural conversation
5.is worried about
二、 建议信核心句型转换
1.You should set a timer for daily phone usage. (改为I suggest that... 虚拟语气句型)
→I suggest that you ______________________ for daily phone usage.
2.I recommend that you talk to your friend. He plays computer games too often. (改为recommend that + 宾语从句)
→I recommend that you talk to your friend about his ________________.
3.Teenagers are often attracted to the online world. This is completely normal. (改为It is adj. for sb to do...)
→It is not _____________ for teenagers to be attracted to the online world.
【答案】
1. set a timer 2.bad behavior / habits 3.unusual
三、 根据汉语提示完成句子(建议信必背句)
1.我完全理解你因为无法专注于学习而感到焦虑。
I ______________________ that you feel anxious about being unable to focus on your study.
2.对于你目前面临的困境,我写信想给你提供一些建议。
I am writing to ______________________ for the difficulties you are facing.
3.我相信只要你尝试这些方法,一切很快就会好起来。
I am sure everything ______________________ soon if you try these methods.
【答案】
1. understand quite well 2.offer you some advice 3.will get better
一、高阶提分短语与表达填空
be obsessed with, limit screen time, get back on track, share common interests, share one's concerns
1.To prevent students from ruining their eyesight, parents ought to _______________ strictly.
2.Don't panic if you fall behind temporarily; proper methods will help you ____________.
3.Instead of simply scolding him, his mother decided to sit down and _____________ with him.
4.Some teenagers __________________ social media, which negatively affects their family life.
5.Making friends becomes easier when you try to _______________ with your classmates.
【答案】
1.limit screen time 2.get back on track 3.share her concerns
4.are obsessed with 5.share common interests
二、高级句式改写
1.Spending too much time online is unhealthy. It makes us tired. (使用What... is that...主语从句+强调句/形式宾语改写)
____________________________________________________________________
2.You can set a daily goal. You can also try new hobbies to reduce anxiety. (使用Why not...及递进衔接词Additionally/Besides 改写)
____________________________________________________________________
3.I understand your feeling. You have every right to feel upset about your bad grades. (合并为深度共情句,包含It is completely normal...)
____________________________________________________________________
【答案】
1.What spending too much time online causes is that it makes it very difficult for us to stay energetic.
2.Why not set a daily goal? Additionally, you can try new hobbies to reduce anxiety.
3.It is completely normal to feel upset about your bad grades, and you have every right to be so.
三、单句写作
1.听到你在与父母沟通方面遇到困难,我感到很遗憾。
____________________________________________________________________
2.如果我是你,我会主动找机会和他们开启一场平等的对话。
____________________________________________________________________
3.当面对你喜欢的女孩子时,感到紧张是非常正常的,你不必过于拘束。
____________________________________________________________________
4.我强烈建议你多参加一些学校的社团活动,因为寻找共同的兴趣爱好能帮你更快融入集体并克服孤独。
____________________________________________________________________
5.你需要意识到的是,沉迷于短视频不仅会消耗你的精力,还会让你在课堂上无法集中注意力。
____________________________________________________________________
【答案】
1.I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble communicating with your parents. / I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty in communicating with your parents.
2.If I were you, I would take the initiative to find an opportunity and start an equal conversation with them.
3.It is completely normal to feel nervous when facing a girl you like, so you don't need to be too shy/reserved.
4.I strongly recommend that you join more school clubs, because sharing common interests can help you fit in faster and overcome loneliness.
5.What you should realize is that being addicted to short videos will not only exhaust your energy but also make it impossible to concentrate in class.
一、衔接词填空
To begin with, Additionally, As a result, In conclusion, To address this issue
Dear Eric,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble dealing with stress recently. 1. __________, feeling overwhelmed by academic pressure and screen addiction is quite common among senior high students, so you don't need to be too hard on yourself.
As you mentioned in your letter, spending endless hours on smartphones disrupts your natural sleep cycle. 2. ___________, you will feel exhausted during class and find it hard to focus. 3. _________, I strongly recommend that you make a realistic daily schedule and limit your screen time. 4. ______________, why not engage in outdoor physical exercise like running or basketball to release tension and refresh your mind?
5. ______________, as long as you take step-by-step action and stick to your plan, you will surely get back on track and rebuild your confidence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
1.To begin with 2. As a result 3. To address this issue
4.Additionally 5. In conclusion
二、应用文写作
1.假定你是李华,你的笔友Chris来信说自己写作业总依赖AI工具,致使学习成绩下降,内心十分苦恼。请你给他写一封建议信,内容包含:
1. 表示理解并鼓励他;
2. 分三点给出合理建议(自主做题、正确利用AI、及时复盘总结);
3. 送上学习祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I totally understand your upset now and believe you can make progress soon with proper adjustments. Actually, many students have met the same trouble, so you are far from alone. Here are my suggestions.
First, try to finish homework independently. Solving problems on your own helps you master knowledge firmly. Second, treat AI as a helper: use it only to check answers after you finish tasks instead of copying solutions directly. Third, review your mistakes to find weak points, which will stop you from repeating similar errors later.
Wish you great improvement in your study!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给笔友Chris写建议信,针对其过度依赖AI完成作业、成绩下滑而苦恼的现状,表达理解与鼓励,给出合理建议并致以学习祝福。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
沮丧:upset → frustration
恰当的:proper → appropriate
调整:adjustment → adaptation
弱点:weak point → weakness
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Actually, many students have met the same trouble, so you are far from alone.
拓展句:In fact, plenty of students have encountered the identical trouble, which means you are by no means alone.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I totally understand your upset now and believe you can make progress soon with proper adjustments. (运用省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Third, review your mistakes to find weak points, which will stop you from repeating similar errors later. (使用which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. 假定你是李华,你意识到很多同学在忙碌的学习中很少有机会认真思考自己的未来,于是打算向学校学生会建议,为即将升入高三的同学们组织一次活动,帮助大家更好地为未来做准备。
请你给学生会主席Jim写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.组织该活动的理由;
3.希望从学生会获得的支持。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右,开头和结尾已给出;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I am writing to propose an activity titled “Future Planning Workshop” for upcoming Senior 3 students. The event will feature talks from alumni about their university experiences and interactive sessions where students can explore various career paths.
Given that heavy academic workloads leave little room for future reflection, this workshop aims to inspire students to set clear goals and reduce anxiety about adulthood. It serves as a timely reminder that preparation today ensures a smoother transition tomorrow.
I would appreciate it if the Student Union could allocate a lecture hall and invite experienced speakers. Your support would make a profound difference in helping us embrace the future with confidence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以学生身份写信向学生会提议举办未来规划活动,助力准高三学生做好生涯准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临的:upcoming→forthcoming
各种各样的:various→diverse
学术的:academic→scholastic
激发:inspire→motivate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your support would make a profound difference in helping us embrace the future with confidence.
拓展句:What your support brings is a profound difference which helps us embrace the future with confidence.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The event will feature talks from alumni about their university experiences and interactive sessions where students can explore various career paths.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It serves as a timely reminder that preparation today ensures a smoother transition tomorrow.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
3.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom最近来信说他因学业压力大,经常熬夜、饮食不规律,身体状态很差。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达关心;
2. 给出健康生活的具体建议(作息、饮食、运动、心态);
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re suffering from poor physical condition due to heavy study pressure. I’m writing to offer some suggestions to help you develop a healthy lifestyle.
First, it’s vital to get rid of the habit of staying up late. Adequate sleep can refresh your mind. Second, keep a balanced diet instead of eating junk food irregularly. Third, you’d better take regular exercise to release study stress, which is beneficial to your physical and mental health. Last but not least, learn to adjust your mood and stay positive when facing pressure.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Tom回信,针对他学业压力大、熬夜、饮食不规律、身体不佳的问题表达关心,从作息、饮食、运动、心态四方面给出健康生活建议并送上祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
面对:face→ confront
重要的:vital → crucial
充足的:adequate → sufficient
缓解:release → ease
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m writing to offer some suggestions to help you develop a healthy lifestyle.
拓展句:I’m writing to offer some suggestions which may help you develop a healthy lifestyle.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you’re suffering from poor physical condition due to heavy study pressure.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Third, you’d better take regular exercise to release study stress, which is beneficial to your physical and mental health.(运用了不定式作目的状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Last but not least, learn to adjust your mood and stay positive when facing pressure.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略句型)
4.假定你是某国际学校学生李华。你得知你的英国笔友George不久前来到国内的一所中学,进行为期半年的交换学习。兴奋之余,他又为遭遇到的文化冲击而苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达理解;
(2)你的建议和鼓励。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为100个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve begun your six-month exchange program here in China.
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All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear George,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve begun your six-month exchange program here in China. While you must be excited about your new life here, it’s only natural to feel a little overwhelmed by cultural differences. Many exchange students go through the exact same thing.
If you ever feel awkward or confused because of cultural gaps, don’t hesitate to open up about your true feelings. This will help others understand you better and ease your discomfort. You may also consider exploring the city center with friends on weekends. Taste local food or strike up conversations with locals. Most of them are warm-hearted and willing to answer your questions or listen to your stories.
I believe you will gradually get used to the new environment. If you ever need support, just write to me.
All the best,
Li Hua
【导语】英国笔友George不久前来到国内的一所中学,进行为期半年的交换学习。兴奋之余,他又为遭遇到的文化冲击而苦恼,要求考生给George写封邮件,表达理解以及你的建议和鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
探索:explore→probe
缓解:ease→relieve
不安:discomfort→restlessness
习惯:get used to→get accustomed to
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I believe you will gradually get used to the new environment.
拓展句:I hold the belief that you will gradually get used to the new environment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe you will gradually get used to the new environment.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you ever need support, just write to me.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
5.假定你是李华。你校食堂最近收到一些学生意见。请你用英语给食堂负责人Mr. Zhang写一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 提出食堂需要改进的地方;
2. 给出具体的建议;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m writing to share some suggestions for improving our school cafeteria.
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I hope these suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I'm writing to share some suggestions for improving our school cafeteria.
First, I think the cafeteria needs more food choices. Many students get tired of the same dishes every day, so adding more variety would make lunchtime more enjoyable. We hope to see some local snacks and more vegetable options.
Second, I suggest that the cafeteria extend its opening hours, especially during exam period. Many students want to come back for dinner after evening self-study, but the cafeteria now closes too early.
Finally, it would be great to set up a feedback board where students can write down their suggestions each week. This would help the cafeteria improve more quickly.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生用英语给食堂负责人Mr. Zhang写一封建议信,提出食堂需要改进的地方并给出具体的建议和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高:improve→enhance
选择:choice→alternative
建议:suggest→recommend
有用的:helpful→of help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We hope to see some local snacks and more vegetable options.
拓展句:We hope that we can try various local snacks and that there will be a wider range of vegetable options available.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Second, I suggest that the cafeteria extend its opening hours, especially during exam period. (运用了虚拟语气)
【高分句型2】Finally, it would be great to set up a feedback board where students can write down their suggestions each week.(运用了定语从句)
1. 2026年全国II卷
假定你是学生李华,Kate计划将你们的英语作文汇编成册。请给Kate写封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 建议配图;
(2) 自荐承担画图工作。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Dear Kate,
Learning that you are planning to compile our English essays into a book, I am writing to share a proposal.
It is my firm belief that adding some vivid illustrations to the book would make it much more attractive to readers. Not only would these pictures bring our stories to life, but they could also help our classmates understand the themes of our articles more deeply. Were you to find the suggestion worth considering, I would like to volunteer to take on the drawing task. Having a great passion for art and a good sense of design, I am confident that I can make our book truly special and eye-catching.
Provided that you accept my offer, I will start working on the illustrations immediately. I am looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 2025年全国I卷
假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 2025北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 提出的建议;
2. 建议的理由。
提示词:倡议 proposal
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
Learning about your participation in the UN's proposal campaign makes me so proud! I suggest "Prioritizing Teen Mental Health."
With academic pressure and social challenges, more and more teenagers worldwide face anxiety and stress. However, most lack resources or support to deal with them. Schools could organize regular mental health workshops, where teens can share their experience and get professional guidance. What's more, communities can set up youth-friendly consulting centers to offer help. We teenagers can also create support groups to help us stay positive.
This issue has great impacts on our generation directly, and your proposal could bring much-needed awareness and solutions. Can't wait to hear your version.
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 2023年新I&II卷写作(随机分组练习口语)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I'm writing to express concern over the way you plan on grouping students into pairs at random for oral practice after class.
In my opinion, pairing students randomly may not be an effective way because the two students may not be at a similar proficiency level. The student of the high level tends to dominate the conversation while the other struggles to keep up. To address this issue, I would suggest dividing students into pairs based on their level of language proficiency. In this way, you can not only improve their oral English, but also arouse their interest in English.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 2023年北京卷(建议信:“绿色北京”)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I'm delighted to receive your email asking me for advice on how to organize a club activity whose theme is “Green Beijing”. I'm more than happy to give my advice.
Obviously, the activity is designed to promote green living. So it is a great idea to hold a speech contest, which can not only improve participants’ ability to speak in public, but also call on the audience to live a green life. Frankly speaking, the activity should be launched in the community center so that it can attract more residents to participate. Besides, you can invite some residents to share what they have done to reduce their carbon footprint in their daily life, which can arouse people's environmental awareness.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your taking an active part in it.
Yours,
Li Hua
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