摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册Unit 1“Happy Holiday”写作训练,通过话题词汇(如vacation, travel)和佳句仿写(如教材原句转化)导入课堂,搭建从词句储备到篇章写作的学习支架,帮助学生逐步掌握记叙文写作脉络。
其亮点在于采用“词句储备—范文进阶—实战强化”三阶训练,通过教材原句仿写提升语言能力,列“总—分—总”提纲培养思维品质,结合中考真题改编题目强化学习能力。例如初高阶作文对比让学生明确提升方向,参考范文提供直观范例,既帮助学生系统掌握写作方法,也为教师提供结构化教学资源。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 RJ
1
2
3
Unit 1 Happy Holiday
4
A
课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
5
刷写作
6
写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.假期;度假 __________
2.旅行 _____________
3.厌倦的;烦闷的 _______
4.忘记;遗忘 ________
5.数以千计的;成千上万的 ______________
vacation
travel/trip
bored
forget
thousands of
【解析】链接狂K
thousands of 的详细讲解见狂K重点P5。
刷写作
返回目录
7
6.在阳光下 ____________
7.转身;翻转 _____________
8.寻找 __________
in the sun
turn around
look for
刷写作
返回目录
8
二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】Did you go anywhere interesting? (不定代词+形容词)
→仿写:孩子们总是期待去特别的地方。
_______________________________________________________________________
10.【教材原句】… I was ready to go on a holiday somewhere.(ready to do sth)
→仿写:我总是愿意在假期探索新的地方。
_______________________________________________________________________
The children always look forward to going somewhere special.
I am always ready to explore new places during the holidays.
刷写作
返回目录
9
11.【教材原句】We were so happy that we didn’t notice the time.(so… that…)
→仿写:夏令营活动如此有趣,以至于孩子们都不想离开了。
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
12.【教材原句】But, during dinner, I didn’t feel like eating because I felt sick.
(feel like doing sth)
→仿写:长假第一天,我想为家人做一顿大餐来庆祝假期。
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
The summer camp activities were so interesting that the kids
didn’t want to leave.
On the first day of the long holiday, I felt like cooking a big
meal for my family to celebrate the vacation.
刷写作
返回目录
10
第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026山东青岛质检·改编]假如你是李华,你校微信公众号正在开展“暑假
游记”的英语征文活动,请你根据下面的信息,用英语写一篇短文,100词左右,
介绍你和家人的暑假旅行经历。
要点提示:(1)Where did you go?
(2)What did you do there?
(3)How did you feel?
My Summer Holiday in ___
___
刷写作
返回目录
11
第1步 审题目
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:地点、所做的事情、感受
刷写作
返回目录
12
第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总—分—总”。
刷写作
返回目录
13
第3步 写作进阶#1.5
_______________________________
My Summer Holiday in
Sanya
My summer holiday was
good. I travelled to Sanya with
my parents.① ______________________________
My Summer Holiday in Sanya
My summer holiday
was. .fantasticbecause. .I. .took a special trip. .to
Sanya with my parents.(用fantastic替换good,
用took a special trip替换travelled,)①
(添加because引导的原因状语从句体现因果关
系)
刷写作
返回目录
14
We stayed in Sanya for
five days.② During the trip, I
did many interesting things. I
swam in the blue sea and built
sandcastles on the beach with
my dad. We also visited a big
aquarium and saw many kinds
of fish there.Many visitors
were there. It was like the real
ocean.③ I even took some
photos with lovely dolphins! We stayed in Sanya, a beautiful city by
the sea, for five days. The landscape there took
my breath away.(丰富拓展,补充说明旅行地
信息)② During the trip, I did many
interesting things. I swam in the blue sea and
built sandcastles on the beach with my dad. We
also visited a big aquarium and saw many
kinds of fish there.Thousands of. .visitors. .got
together. .there. I. .felt like. .I was walking
through the real ocean.(用Thousands of替换
Many,用got together替换were,用felt like和宾
语从句升级句子)③ I even took some photos
with lovely dolphins!
续表
刷写作
返回目录
15
I felt very happy and
relaxed during this trip.It was
fun and helped me learn about
the world outside.④ I hope I
can visit Sanya again next
summer! I felt very happy and relaxed during this
trip.It. .not only. .was great fun. .but also. .helped
me learn more about the world outside.
(用“not only... but also...” 结构升级句子)
④ I hope I can visit Sanya again next
summer!
续表
刷写作
返回目录
16
第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026重庆两江新区质检】暑假已经结束,相信你一定度过了一段充实而难
忘的假期时光。下面是一份暑假生活的问卷调查,请你在符合自己暑假实际情况
的方框中打“√”(可多选),并根据你的选择和提示内容,以“My Summer
Holiday”为题,写一篇英语短文,分享你的暑假生活。#1
刷写作
返回目录
17
Life in Summer Holiday
1.Where did you go/stay?
□big cities (name:____) □small villages (name: ___) □home
□others (name: ___)
2.What did you do?
□took lessons □visited ancient buildings □went to a summer camp
□visited your grandparents □climbed the mountains □other activities:___
3.How did you feel?
□_________(reasons: ___) □_________(reasons: ___)
刷写作
返回目录
18
要求:(1)80~100词;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
___
刷写作
返回目录
19
【参考范文】
My Summer Holiday
This summer holiday, I went to a small village named Green Village.
I did lots of interesting things there. I visited ancient buildings
which had a long history. The old walls and roofs told stories of the
past. I also climbed the mountains around the village. The views from
the top were amazing, with green trees and clear rivers below. Besides,
I helped the villagers pick fruit. I felt very happy because I
experienced the beauty of nature and the kindness of the villagers.
This summer holiday was a wonderful and meaningful holiday that
I’ll never forget.
刷写作
返回目录
20
Value statement:A holiday is a time to relax, enjoy life, and make
memories.
刷写作
返回目录
21
$