摘要:
该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作核心考点,以劳动实践话题为载体,覆盖新闻报道体裁规范、活动内容与反响要点呈现、一般过去时准确运用等考查要求。知识点按“审题要点—常见问题—词块句型—真题演练”逻辑架构,通过考点梳理(体裁、时态、结构分析)、方法指导(高级词块如“loosen the soil”、句型如无灵主语“Last weekend witnessed...”)、真题训练(浙江省七校联盟联考原题及范文)等环节,帮助学生构建写作框架,突破时态混乱、要点遗漏等难点,体现复习的系统性与针对性。
该资料突出核心素养导向,通过“劳动实践”主题渗透文化意识(如“珍惜粮食、尊重劳动”价值观),设计“句型仿写+范文对比”教学活动,例如引导学生用倒装句“Not only did we learn...but also...”表达活动收获,提升语言能力与思维品质。依托常见问题归类(词汇低级、格式错误等)和下水作文亮点分析(如“instilled in them the significance of...”),确保学生在有限时间内掌握高分策略,为教师精准把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供实用指导。
内容正文:
应用文话题之劳动实践 高三一轮复习应用文写作
浙江省七校联盟2026年5月高三联考英语
【原题呈现】
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的校园劳动基地实践活动。请你为校英文报写一篇题为“Sowing Dreams,Reaping Growth” 的报道,内容包括:
(1) 活动内容;
(2) 活动反响。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Sowing Dreams, Reaping Growth
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【审题】
1. 体裁
新闻报道(校报投稿),客观记叙活动,结尾升华意义,不用第一人称叙事(用 we / 学生视角)。
2. 时态
核心时态:一般过去时(活动发生在上周末);结尾评价可用一般现在时。
3. 结构(三段式,精准踩分)
· 第一段(导语):时间 + 主办方 + 活动名称 + 目的(简洁点题);
· 第二段(主体):活动具体内容(松土、播种、浇水、除草等,细节 + 动作描写);
· 第三段(结尾):活动反响 + 意义升华(收获、感悟、劳动价值)。
4. 核心要点
· 必写:活动内容(2-3 个具体劳动动作)、活动反响(学生评价、收获);
【常见问题】
· ❌ 时态混乱:过去时与现在时混用(全程以过去时为主);
· ❌ 流水账:只罗列动作(First...Then...Finally...),无细节描写;
· ❌ 要点遗漏:忘记写 “活动反响”,或升华空洞;
· ❌ 词汇低级:只用 work、do 等简单词,不用 reap、witness、rewarding 等高级词;
· ❌ 格式错误:漏写标题,或标题大小写错误。
【常用词块】
1. 活动开场
engage in /participate in/be involved in 参加
be organized by the Student Union 由学生会组织
campus labor base 校园劳动基地
last weekend witnessed... 上周末见证了……(无灵主语,高分句型)
2. 劳动动作(内容描写)
loosen the soil 松土
sow seeds 播种
water the young seedlings 浇灌幼苗
pull out weeds 除草
work in groups 分组劳作
under teachers’ guidance 在老师指导下
3. 活动反响 + 升华
be highly thought of 受到高度评价
a sense of achievement 成就感
cherish food and respect labor 珍惜粮食、尊重劳动
No pains, no gains. / You reap what you sow. 一分耕耘,一分收获
meaningful and rewarding 有意义、有收获
【常用句型】
1. 无灵主语开头(导语高分)Last weekend witnessed a meaningful labor activity in our school’s labor base.上周末,我校劳动基地开展了一场有意义的劳动实践活动。
2. 非谓语动词(动作细节)Bending down under the sun, we pulled out weeds and watered the vegetables carefully.(阳光下弯下腰,我们认真除草、浇灌蔬菜。)
3. 倒装句(主体亮点)Not only did we learn basic farming skills, but we also realized the value of hard work.我们不仅学会了基本农活,更懂得了劳动的价值。
4. 结尾升华句This activity taught us that growth, like farming, requires patience and effort.这次活动让我们明白,成长如耕耘,需要耐心与付出。
【参考范文】
Sowing Dreams, Reaping Growth
Last weekend witnessed a hands-on labor activity organized by the Student Union at our school’s campus labor base.
Guided by an experienced gardener, we first loosened the hardened soil with hoes, then sowed seeds evenly into the furrows, and finally covered them with a thin layer of soil/pressed the soil down gently with our hands. Everyone worked in high spirits, sweating but smiling, which made the otherwise tiring labor genuinely enjoyable.
The activity turned out to be a great success, offering us a precious break from intense exam preparation while deepening our respect for labor. “Having never realized how much effort a single vegetable requires,” one classmate remarked, “I now truly value the food on our table.” By connecting us with nature, this event planted seeds of responsibility and teamwork, proving that what we sowed in the soil ultimately led to personal growth.
上周末,校学生会在学校的校园劳动基地组织了一场实践劳动活动。
在一位经验丰富的园丁指导下,我们先用锄头敲碎板结的土壤,再将种子均匀撒入垄沟,最后在种子上覆上一层薄土,或是用手轻轻压实。大家干劲十足,汗流浃背却面带笑容,让原本辛苦的劳动变得格外有乐趣。
活动取得了圆满成功,不仅让我们从紧张的备考中获得了宝贵的喘息,也加深了我们对劳动的尊重。一位同学感慨道:“以前从没想过种一棵菜要付出这么多心血,现在我才真正懂得珍惜餐桌上的食物。” 这次活动让我们亲近自然,也在心中种下了责任与合作的种子,证明我们在土地上播下的每一份耕耘,最终都将化为自身的成长。
下水作文
Sowing Dreams, Reaping Growth
Last weekend saw a hands-on activity themed “Sowing Dreams, Reaping Growth” at the campus labor garden, which was organized by our school.
Working in groups under their teachers' guidance, the students were tasked with jobs, such as loosening soil, sowing seeds, and watering, among others. Not only did they engage in the whole process from soil preparation to sowing, but they also cooperated well with each other, fostering a harmonious and dynamic environment.
The activity concluded with a common reflection among the students: sowing a seed is like planting a dream. The labor class brought them an experience of both hardship and joy, and instilled in them the significance of cherishing food and respecting labor. (115 words)
上周末,校学生会组织部分同学前往校园劳动基地,开展了以“播种梦想,收获成长”为主题的实践活动。
同学们在老师的指导下,分组进行松土、播种、浇水等农事操作,亲身体验了从整地到播种的全过程,大家互相配合,气氛热烈。
活动结束后,同学们纷纷表示:“播下一粒种子,就像种下一个梦想。这堂劳动课让我们体会到辛苦与快乐,也懂得了珍惜粮食、尊重劳动。”
【下水作文亮点】
(1)Last weekend saw运用无灵主语结构
(2)were tasked with被指派负责
(3)among others=and so on等等
(4)Not only did they engage in否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构,其中engage in意为“从事,参与”
(5)fostering a harmonious and dynamic environment营造和谐、充满活力的环境
(6)concluded with以...结束
(7)instilled in them the significance of cherishing food and respecting labor将珍惜粮食、尊重劳动的重要意义植根于他们心中
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