Unit 7 Fun after school 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版英语七年级上册

**基本信息** 以“课后活动描述”为核心，构建“词汇-句型-篇章-方法”四维训练体系，通过阶梯式训练提升语言表达与逻辑组织能力，培养语言能力与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|主题词汇4类+高频搭配12个+功能表达4类|分类词汇记忆、功能表达场景化应用|从基础词汇到情境功能表达，构建语言输入基础| |黄金句型库|句型4类（含6组升级示例）|句型升级技巧（添加细节/感受）|从基础句到丰富表达，实现语言输出进阶| |高分写作方法|5步写作法（审题/结构/内容等）|五步法写作流程（定位-搭建-丰富-提升-检查）|按写作逻辑链拆解步骤，培养系统写作思维| |阶梯训练|句子训练3级+篇章训练3篇|阶梯式能力进阶（句→篇）|从句子构建到篇章创作，形成完整语言应用能力|

Unit 7 Fun after School 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 学校社团与活动 club 社团 Clubs Fair 社团招募展 Rocket Club 火箭社团 Solar Power Club 太阳能社团 Craft Club 手工艺社团 Science Club 科学社团 Baking Club 烘焙社团 Hiking Club 远足社团 Insect Club 昆虫社团 社团活动 design and build rockets 设计和建造火箭 launch a rocket 发射火箭 fly a toy plane 飞玩具飞机 make paper-cuts 做剪纸 cut paper into shapes 把纸剪成形状 do experiments 做实验 learn computer skills 学习电脑技能 put on a play 表演戏剧 make cakes 做蛋糕 go on a hike 去远足 动作与过程 take off 起飞 launch 发射 shout 大声说；叫喊 turn around 转身 disappear 消失 fly past 飞过 watch out 小心 run on solar power 靠太阳能运行 pass the remote control 传递遥控器 感受与评价 crowded 拥挤的 surprised 惊讶的 excited 兴奋的 amazing 令人惊奇的 interesting 有趣的 educational 有教育意义的 memorable 难忘的 2. 高频搭配 take part in 参加 sign up 报名参加 a moment later 片刻之后 watch out 小心 of course 当然 turn around 转身 look forward to 期待 run on solar power 靠太阳能运行 put on a play 上演戏剧 go on a hike 去远足 all kinds of 各种各样的 get ready for 为……做好准备 3. 写作功能表达 描述过去的事件 Last month / week / Saturday，I ... 上个月/上周/上周六，我…… I went to ... 我去了…… We visited ... 我们参观了…… 描述看到的和听到的 We saw ... 我们看到了…… We heard ... 我们听到了…… Someone shouted ... 有人喊道…… 描述感受 It was ... 它是…… We were very surprised / excited. 我们非常惊讶/兴奋。 I enjoyed the show because ... 我喜欢这次展示，因为…… 提出建议 We can ... to make it better. 我们可以……让它变得更好。 It would be better if ... 如果……会更好。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 Last month，I went to the Clubs Fair at my school. 上个月，我去了我们学校的社团招募展。 I would like to share my after-school activity with you. 我想和你分享我的课后活动。 Last Saturday，I took part in a very interesting after-school activity. 上周六，我参加了一次非常有趣的课后活动。 Our school has many wonderful clubs and I joined one of them. 我们学校有很多精彩的社团，我加入了其中一个。 2. 主体句型 We went to the Clubs Fair and it was a lot of fun. 我们去了社团招募展，那非常有趣。 First，we learnt about the Rocket Club. 首先，我们了解了火箭社团。 A boy took a rocket and launched it into the sky. 一个男孩拿起火箭，把它发射到天空中。 We were very surprised when we saw the rocket take off. 当我们看到火箭起飞时，我们非常惊讶。 A girl showed us a toy plane that runs on solar power. 一个女孩向我们展示了一架靠太阳能运行的玩具飞机。 The Craft Club taught us how to cut paper into different shapes. 手工艺社团教我们如何把纸剪成不同形状。 3. 结尾句型 I really enjoyed the show and learned a lot from it. 我真的很喜欢这次展示，并从中学会了很多。 It was a fantastic day and I will never forget it. 那是美好的一天，我永远不会忘记。 I want to join all the clubs！ 我想加入所有社团！ This after-school activity was both fun and educational. 这次课后活动既有趣又有教育意义。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I went to the Clubs Fair. 我去了社团招募展。 Last month，I went to the Clubs Fair at my new school and it was a lot of fun. 上个月，我去了新学校的社团招募展，那非常有趣。 The Rocket Club was interesting. 火箭社团很有趣。 First，we visited the Rocket Club. A boy took a rocket and launched it into the sky. It was amazing！ 首先，我们参观了火箭社团。一个男孩拿起火箭发射到天空。太神奇了！ We saw a toy plane. 我们看到一架玩具飞机。 A girl showed us a cool toy plane that runs on solar power. 一个女孩向我们展示了一架靠太阳能运行的酷炫玩具飞机。 The Craft Club made paper-cuts. 手工艺社团做剪纸。 The Craft Club showed us beautiful paper-cuts and taught us how to cut paper into different shapes. 手工艺社团向我们展示了漂亮的剪纸，并教我们如何把纸剪成不同形状。 I was excited. 我很兴奋。 I was so excited that I wanted to join all the clubs！ 我太兴奋了，我想加入所有社团！ 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作主题为“描述一次课后活动”，写作内容应包括活动的时间、地点、人物、活动过程、所见所闻以及自己的感受和收获。 时态要求： 以一般过去时为主（描述过去发生的事件） Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：引出活动 介绍活动的时间、地点和参加的人物，点出这次活动的总体印象。 第二段：描述活动过程 按时间顺序或参观顺序描述活动内容：先去了哪里，看到了什么，听到了什么，做了什么事。可以着重描写1-2个印象最深刻的环节。 第三段：总结感受 表达对这次活动的感受，说说从中学到了什么，或者你对这次活动的评价。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只简单罗列活动项目，要加入人物对话、现场声音、动作细节和你的感受。例如不只写“We went to the Rocket Club.”，还要写“A boy took a rocket and launched it into the sky. The rocket took off and disappeared. We were very surprised！” Step 4 提升语言 使用一般过去时（went，visited，saw，heard，were，joined）、时间标记词（last month，then，later，after that，first，finally）、连接词（and，because，so，when）和丰富的感受词汇。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整、结构是否清晰、时态是否一致（一般过去时）、动词过去式是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 上个月，我去了我们学校的社团招募展。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 我们首先了解了火箭社团。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 一个男孩拿起火箭，把它发射到天空中。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 当我们看到火箭起飞时，我们非常惊讶。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 那次活动既有趣又有教育意义。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：Last...，I went to...（描述过去的时间与地点） 例句： Last month，I went to the Clubs Fair at my new school. （1）上周六，我和我的朋友去了图书馆。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）上个星期五，我们去了城市博物馆。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：We visited... and we saw...（描述参观与所见） 例句： We visited the Rocket Club and we saw a rocket launch. （1）我们参观了手工艺社团，我们看到了许多漂亮的剪纸。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我们参观了科学社团，我们看到了许多有趣的实验。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：First / Then / After that...（描述时间顺序） 例句： First，we visited the Rocket Club. Then we went to the Solar Power Club. （1）首先，我们去了图书馆。然后我们去吃了午餐。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）首先，我们听了介绍。之后，我们做了一些实验。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：Someone shouted / said...（描述对话） 例句： A girl suddenly shouted，“Watch out！” （1）一个男孩喊道：“看那个火箭！” ____________________________________________________________ （2）一个女孩说：“你想试一试吗？” ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：We were very surprised / excited because...（描述感受及原因） 例句： We were very surprised because the rocket took off into the sky. （1）我们非常兴奋，因为我们看到了许多有趣的东西。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我非常惊讶，因为这架飞机靠太阳能运行。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：It was a... day and I will...（总结感受） 例句： It was a fantastic day and I will never forget it. （1）那是美好的一天，我永远不会忘记。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）那是一次很棒的活动，我想再次参加。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I went to the Clubs Fair. 升级句：Last month，I went to the Clubs Fair at my new school and it was a lot of fun. 1. 基础句：The Rocket Club was interesting. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：We saw a toy plane. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：We saw paper-cuts. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：We were excited. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I liked the activity. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：I learned a lot. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想了解你的校园生活，请你给他写一封信，介绍你的校园生活，包括你的日常作息、最喜欢的科目、课余活动等。 要求：内容完整，语句通顺，语法正确；词数：60~80词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How are you? I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假如你是李明，请向你的朋友Peter介绍你的周末的活动，并分享你的感受。 Time Activities Saturday do homework, go hiking... Sunday do housework, go to the basketball club... ... ... 注意： 1.根据以上表格提示，适当发挥； 2.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m writing to tell you about my weekend routines. On Saturday morning,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How about your weekend? Looking forward to your reply. Your friend, Li Ming 3．假如你是Fu Xing，请阅读英国笔友Paul给你发的邮件，并根据邮件内容给他回一封信。 To: Fuxing@mail.com Subject: You and Your School Clubs Hi! Fu Xing, Next Sunday I’ll be with you in Shijiazhuang. I really want to know something about you and your school clubs. What clubs does your school have? What club do you join? What do you like about your club? Please tell me as much as you can. I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Paul 注意：（1） 回信须包含Paul邮件中的要点问题，可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （2） 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息； （3） 词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Paul, Glad to know you will come. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon! Yours, Fu Xing 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Last month，I went to the Clubs Fair at my school. 2. First，we learnt about the Rocket Club. 3. A boy took a rocket and launched it into the sky. 4. We were very surprised when we saw the rocket take off. 5. The activity was both fun and educational. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Last Saturday，I went to the library with my friend. （2）Last Friday，we went to the city museum. 句型 2 （1）We visited the Craft Club and we saw many beautiful paper-cuts. （2）We visited the Science Club and we saw many interesting experiments. 句型 3 （1）First，we went to the library. Then we had lunch. （2）First，we listened to the introduction. After that，we did some experiments. 句型 4 （1）A boy shouted，“Look at that rocket！” （2）A girl said，“Would you like to have a try？” 句型 5 （1）We were very excited because we saw many interesting things. （2）I was very surprised because the plane runs on solar power. 句型 6 （1）It was a wonderful day and I will never forget it. （2）It was a great activity and I want to join again. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：First，we visited the Rocket Club. A boy took a rocket and launched it into the sky. It was amazing！ 2. 升级句：A girl showed us a cool toy plane that runs on solar power. She let me fly it myself. 3. 升级句：The Craft Club showed us beautiful paper-cuts and taught us how to cut paper into different shapes. 4. 升级句：We were so excited that we wanted to join all the clubs. 5. 升级句：I really enjoyed the activity because I learned a lot about different clubs and made some new friends. 6. 升级句：I learned a lot from this activity，not only about the clubs but also about working with others. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．参考范文 Dear Tom, How are you? I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. I usually get up at 7:00 and go to school at 7:30. Classes start at 8:00. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and our English teacher is nice to me. After class, I often play basketball with my friends for half an hour. It’s great fun. I also join the reading club. I think my school life is colorful and happy. I love my school. Yours, Li Hua 2． 例文 Dear Peter, I’m writing to tell you about my weekend routines. On Saturday morning, I usually do my homework first. In the afternoon, I often go hiking with my parents. We enjoy fresh air and beautiful views. On Sunday, I help with housework like cleaning my room. Later, I go to the basketball club to practice with friends. It’s exciting and makes me energetic. I feel happy because my weekend is both useful and fun. How about your weekend? Looking forward to your reply. Your friend, Li Ming 3． 例文 Dear Paul, Glad to know you will come. My school has many interesting clubs, such as the English Club, the Basketball Club and the Music Club. I join the English Club because I love English. We often watch English movies and sing English songs, and our teacher will explain the difficult words in the movies for us. These activities make learning English fun and help me improve my speaking skills. I also make many friends there. I am sure you will like our clubs. I can’t wait to show you around. Hope to see you soon! Yours, Fu Xing 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $