Unit 8 Collecting as a hobby 单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年七年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教版2024）

Unit 8 Collecting as a hobby 单元话题满分范文必背 1．英语校报正在举行”Making new friends”的活动。假如你是李华，你想通过投稿介绍自己并认识新朋友。请根据以下提示，完成一篇英文自我介绍。 你的爱好 期待和新朋友一起做的事 收集邮票 看邮票展 旅游 在城市游走，拍摄四季的照片 （请补充） （请补充） 注意： 1. 要求包括所有要点； 2. 词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入词数； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. I like collecting stamps, so I look forward to going to the stamp show with my friends. I also like to travel. I want to walk around the city with my friends and take pictures of the four seasons. I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. I also hope to play basketball with my friends in my spare time. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，介绍自己的兴趣爱好； 第三步，谈谈自己的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①look forward to doing sth期待做某事 ②want to do sth想要做某事 ③hope to do sth希望做某事 [高分句型] If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.（条件状语从句） 2．新学期，你认识了一位新朋友Jim，请根据中文提示，写一篇不少于80个单词、意思连贯、符合逻辑的文章介绍他。文章里不能出现你真实的姓名和校名。 姓名： Jim 国籍：德国 家庭成员：父母、姐姐、弟弟 Jim的家离学校很远，他每天搭公交车去上学。他的爱好是唱歌和打羽毛球。他很擅长唱德语歌曲。在业余时间里，他经常去看戏。他很友好，非常愿意和同学们交朋友。他想收到来自朋友们写的信。他的梦想是成为一名科学家，因为他希望帮助世界上的每一个人。 Hello, everyone. I have a friend. His name is Jim. I would like to introduce him to you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Hello, everyone. I have a friend. His name is Jim. I would like to introduce him to you. He comes from Germany. And he has a big family. He has a brother, a sister and his parents. Jim’s home is far from school. So he goes to school by bus every day. His hobbies are singing and playing badminton. He is good at singing German songs. In his spare time, he often goes to the theatre. He is very friendly and willing to make friends with his classmates. He wants to receive letters from his friends. His dream is to be a scientist because he wants to help everyone in the world. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍Jim的国籍和家庭情况； 第二步，介绍Jim的爱好、Jim如何上学； 第三步，介绍Jim的愿望和梦想。 [亮点词汇] ① as well as以及 ② provide sb with sth给某人提供某物 ③ look forward to doing sth盼望做某事 [高分句型] ① His dream is to be a scientist because he wants to help everyone in the world.（because引导的原因状语从句） 3． 假设你是李军，热爱运动。你新交的英国笔友Eric与你志趣相投，为此你们有很多共同语言。请你根据以下提示给Eric写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你在运动方面的爱好及相关情况。 内容提示： 1. 介绍你最喜欢的运动； 2. 目前的水平：擅长该运动，是校队成员； 3. 日常的训练：每天一个小时； 4. 感受、愿望…… 要求： 1. 短文内容必须包含提示中的所有要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于60，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实人名和校名等信息。 参考词汇：be good at,  a member of ...,  school team,  tired,  hope Dear Eric, Thanks for your email. You’re really good at different sports. I’m glad to tell you about my favorite sport. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jun 【答案】例文： Dear Eric, Thanks for your email. You’re really good at different sports. I’m glad to tell you about my favorite sport. My favorite sport is table tennis and I’m good at it. I’m a member of our school table tennis team. I play table tennis with other members for one hour after school every day. Sometimes we feel really tired, but all of us have fun. Fen Zhendong is my favorite table tennis player. He is my hero, too. I learn a lot from him. I hope I can be a great player like him one day. Yours. Li Jun 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：本文为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏 “内容提示” 中的任何信息，注意行文逻辑通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出 “最喜欢的运动” 这个话题。 第二步，具体从最喜欢的运动是什么，现在的水平，日常训练情况来介绍。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受与心愿。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at 擅长 ②a member of……的成员 ③play...with... 和……玩…… ④have fun 玩得开心 [高分句型] ①Sometimes we feel really tired, but all of us have fun.（but连接的并列句） ②I hope I can be a great player like him one day.（宾语从句） 4．学校的英语广播电台正在进行以“My hobby”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据下面的思维导图给电台编辑写一篇90词左右的文章进行投稿。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含图中提示的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 只需介绍一项爱好； 4. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Word bank: editor 编辑 Dear Editor, I am David from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I’d like to share my hobby here. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, David 【答案】例文： Dear Editor, I am David from Class 3, Grade 7. Now I’d like to share my hobby here. I enjoy reading books. I like to read all kinds of books. I think reading can not only help open my eyes, but also bring out the best in me. What’s more, it is also good for my study. Both my parents think reading is a great hobby. And they buy a lot of good books for me. I want to become a writer in the future. I plan to read books for one hour every day. I think that can help improve my writing skills. I’m sure my dream can come true. Best wishes, David 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使作文内容意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，介绍自己的一项爱好，包括喜欢的原因以及爸妈的看法； 第二步，介绍自己对于这项爱好的计划。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of 各种各样的 ②bring out出版 ③be good for对……有好处 ④come true实现 [高分句型] ①I think reading can not only help open my eyes, but also bring out the best in me. (not only…but also句型) ②I think that can help improve my writing skills. (宾语从句) 5．假设你是Peter，平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，以“My collection”为题写一篇英语短文。要求70词左右，可围绕提示内容适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 1. When did you start to collect tickets? 2. How many tickets do you have now? 3. How do you get them? 4. Why do you like collecting tickets? My collection I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My collection I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places. I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well. I enjoy collecting tickets. They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我喜欢收集各种票的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“假设你是Peter，平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，以‘My collection’为题写一篇英语短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“开始收集各种票的时间；获得它们的途径；喜欢它们的原因等”几个方面重点介绍我喜欢收集各种票的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“它们不仅帮助我清楚地记住不同的美丽的地方，而且让我想起我的快乐回忆”的总结。 [亮点词汇] ①begin to do sth开始做某事 ②up to now到现在为止 ③ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事 ④think of想起 [高分句型] ①It is not hard to get them. (“It is+形容词+to do sth”句型) ②I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. (so引导结果状语从句) 6．你是一名品学兼优的学生，除了成绩好之外，你还有许多爱好，比如做体育运动、唱歌等。英语老师让你在这次的联谊会上把你的爱好介绍给大家。请结合下表的内容发挥想象，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 Your hobbies music singing, playing the violin sports running, playing basketball and football Reasons that you like music/sports … ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Like other students, I have many hobbies. Because my parents are music teachers, I have been interested in music since I was little. I am good at singing and playing the violin. My dream is to become a great singer. To keep healthy, I often take part in all kinds of sports. I go running at six every morning. And I often play basketball or football with my friends after school. Music can make me happy and sports can help me keep healthy. I like them a lot. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以“我有许多爱好”总起全文； 第二步，从音乐和体育两方面具体介绍自己的爱好有哪些； 第三步，介绍自己有这些爱好的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be good at doing sth.擅长做某事 ③take part in参加 ④all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] Because my parents are music teachers, I have been interested in music since I was little.（because引导的原因状语从句；since引导的时间状语从句） 7．请根据下面的表格提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的好友Helen的喜好及原因。 Favorite Reason (原因) Teacher Mr.Wu Great fun Subject Math Useful Sport Football Relaxing Fruit Apples Healthy Day Friday Music ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Helen is my good friends. She likes Mr. Wu very much because he is great fun. Helen’s favorite subject is math. She think that it’s useful. Helen loves playing football in her free time. She thinks that it is relaxing. Apples are her favorite fruit. They are healthy. Helen has a music class on Friday. It’s her favorite day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏表格中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我的好友海伦”来引出下文中对海伦的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“老师、学科、体育、水果和星期”五方面入手，重点介绍她的喜好及原因； ③第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间 [高分句型] ①She likes Mr. Wu very much because he is great fun.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②She think that it’s useful.（宾语从句） 8．每个人都有自己的爱好， 一些人甚至希望将自己的爱好变成未来的职业。假定你是学生李辉，即将参加学校组织的演讲比赛，请根据下列提示谈谈如何把爱好变成职业。 要点如下：(1)介绍你的爱好； (2)此爱好对未来职业的帮助； (3)表达希望。 注意：(1)词数为80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear friends, Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear friends,   Everyone has a bobby and some people even want to change it into a future career. My hobby is reading novels. When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind. So I want to change it into my future job—a writer. I think reading is of great help to my future job. Because it enables me to lay solid foundation for my writing. Besides that, reading not only broadens my eyes but also make me become a well-rounded individual. I hope my dream will be achieved one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简述自己的爱好； 第二步，讲述此爱好对未来职业的帮助； 第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be of great help很有帮助 ②lay solid foundation打下扎实基础 ③not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①When I am absorbed in reading, I can feel a sense of well-being and peace in mind.(时间状语从句) 9．争创文明城市，你我都是主角。假如你是李华，被学校评为“文明风尚好少年”，请你根据以下提示，向同学们介绍你的文明行为，树立文明典范，号召大家践行文明规范，共创文明罗甸。 内容： 1. 你的爱好和特长； 2. 你的健康生活方式（如饮食，运动，出行）； 3. 你在校遵守的文明规则。 要求： 1. 不少于70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 书写工整、规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 参考词汇：introduce v.介绍 Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honor to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, boys and girls. My name’s Li Hua. It’s my honor to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself. I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. There are many rules in our school. For example, we should wear our school uniforms at school and we should go to school on time. On weekends, I like to go to the zoo and I like pandas because they are cute and smart. But they are in danger. These days, I am reading a book about pandas. I want to help and save them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的爱好和特长； 第二步，具体阐述自己的健康生活方式(如饮食，运动，出行)； 第三步，最后介绍在校遵守的文明规则。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth喜欢做某事 ②want to do sth想要做某事 [高分句型] ①At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy.（原因状语从句） ②For example, we should wear our school uniforms at school and we should go to school on time.（and并列句） 10．假设你是Sarah，Peter是你的美国网友，他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。 提示： (1)你的爱好和特长； (2)你的日常生活习惯(至少两点)； (3)你上学的交通方式以及原因。 注意:   (1)短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3)词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Peter, Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about myself. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Sarah 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about myself. I like to play the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning, I get up at 6:00. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school because my school is far from my home. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I go home at 5:00 p. m. I like pandas because they are cute and smart, but they are in danger. These days, I am reading a book about pandas. I want to help and save them. Can I know more about you? I wish to get your e-mail soon. Yours, Sarah 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍自己的爱好，特长和日常生活习惯，交通方式以及原因； 第三步，介绍自己喜欢的动物。 [亮点词汇] ①play the guitar弹吉他 ②get up起床 ③be in danger处于危险中 [高分句型] ①At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school because my school is far from my home.（because引导原因状语从句） ②I want to help and save them.（动词不定式作宾语） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$