Unit 8 Collecting as a hobby 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版英语七年级上册

**基本信息** 以“收藏爱好”为主题，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级写作体系，通过阶梯训练培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|主题词汇30+、搭配12、功能表达4类|分类整合收藏相关词汇与功能句型|从基础词汇到情境表达，构建主题语言网络| |黄金句型库|基础句型12、升级句6组|基础句→升级句（添加原因/细节）|通过逻辑拓展提升语言丰富度，培养表达准确性| |高分写作方法|5步法（审题-结构-内容-语言-检查）|三段式结构搭建与情感细节融入|从审题定位到篇章优化，形成完整写作思维链| |阶梯训练|句子训练3级（20+题）、篇章训练3篇|汉译英→仿写→升级→篇章应用|由句到篇递进，落实语言能力与学习策略培养|

Unit 8 Collecting as a Hobby 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 收藏相关名词 collection 收藏品；收集 collector 收藏家 stamp 邮票 coin 硬币 shell 贝壳 rock 石头 paper clip 回形针 sticker 贴纸 bookmark 书签 model robot 机器人模型 toy 玩具 car model 汽车模型 key ring 钥匙扣 wrapper 包装纸 收藏相关动词 collect 收集；采集 own 拥有；有 add 增加；添加 share 分享 handle 触；拿 protect 保护 explain 解释 build up 逐步建立 评价与描述 valuable 贵重的 wonderful 极好的 absolutely 极其 impossible 不可能的 similar 相像的；类似的 soft 软的 real 真的 fantastic 极好的 special 特别的 cherished 珍爱的 描述特征的词汇 beautiful 漂亮的 colourful 多彩的 unusual 不寻常的 interesting 有趣的 amazing 令人惊奇的 meaningful 有意义的 2. 高频搭配 collect stamps 集邮 add ... to ... 把……添加到…… handle ... with great care 小心翼翼地处理…… thousands of 数以千计的 a bit of 一点；少量 all over the world 全世界 a waste of time 浪费时间 pocket money 零花钱 take good care of 好好照顾；好好保管 in one's free time 在某人的空闲时间 be curious about 对……感到好奇 thanks to 多亏了；由于 3. 写作功能表达 描述收藏爱好 My hobby is collecting ... 我的爱好是收集…… I love ... because ... 我喜欢……因为…… I developed this hobby thanks to ... 我发展这个爱好多亏了…… 描述收藏品 I have ... in my collection. 我的收藏中有…… Some of them are ... 它们中有些是…… My favourite ... is ... 我最喜欢的……是…… 描述收藏经历 ... gave it to me. ……把它给了我。 I found it in ... 我在……找到它的。 I bought it from ... 我从……买的。 It looks like ... 它看起来像…… 表达观点与感受 Collecting ... is meaningful and interesting. 收集……是有意义且有趣的。 It can teach me about ... 它能教会我关于…… I am learning more and more about ... 我学到越来越多关于…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 Today，I'm going to talk about my hobby. 今天，我要谈谈我的爱好。 My hobby is collecting stamps. 我的爱好是集邮。 Let me show you my collection. 让我给你看看我的收藏。 I would like to share my collection with you. 我想和你分享我的收藏。 2. 主体句型 I love stamps because they are very beautiful. 我喜欢邮票，因为它们非常漂亮。 I developed this hobby thanks to my grandpa. 我发展这个爱好多亏了我的爷爷。 He owns thousands of stamps and handles them with great care. 他拥有成千上万张邮票，并且小心翼翼地处理它们。 Every Sunday，my grandpa adds new ones to his collection. 每个星期天，我的爷爷都会给他的收藏增加新的邮票。 It is my favourite because it was my first one. 它是我最喜欢的，因为它是我的第一张。 Thanks to this stamp，I became interested in traditional Chinese buildings. 多亏了这张邮票，我对中国传统建筑产生了兴趣。 3. 结尾句型 Collecting stamps is both meaningful and interesting. 集邮既是有意义的也是有趣的。 I am learning more and more about Chinese history and culture. 我正在学习越来越多的中国历史和文化。 I think collecting ... is a wonderful hobby. 我认为收藏……是一个很棒的爱好。 My collection brings me a lot of happiness. 我的收藏给我带来了很多快乐。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 My hobby is collecting stamps. 我的爱好是集邮。 My hobby is collecting stamps because they are beautiful and can teach me about history. 我的爱好是集邮，因为它们很漂亮而且能教会我关于历史的知识。 I like my stamps. 我喜欢我的邮票。 I love my stamps because each one has a story to tell. 我喜欢我的邮票，因为每一张都有一个故事要讲述。 My grandpa has many stamps. 我爷爷有很多邮票。 My grandpa owns thousands of stamps and he always handles them with great care. 我爷爷拥有成千上万张邮票，他总是小心翼翼地处理它们。 This stamp is my favourite. 这张邮票是我最喜欢的。 This stamp is my favourite because it was my first one and my grandpa bought it for me. 这张邮票是我最喜欢的，因为它是我的第一张，而且是我爷爷买给我的。 I learned about Chinese buildings. 我了解中国建筑。 Thanks to this stamp，I became interested in traditional Chinese buildings and started to collect similar stamps. 多亏了这张邮票，我对中国传统建筑产生了兴趣，并开始收集类似的邮票。 Collecting stamps is interesting. 集邮很有趣。 Collecting stamps is both meaningful and interesting because I can learn about history and culture. 集邮既是有意义的也是有趣的，因为我可以学到历史和文化知识。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作主题为“介绍一种收藏”，写作内容应包括收藏的是什么、为什么喜欢收藏、收藏品是如何获得的、最珍爱的一件收藏品是什么以及收藏带来的收获和感受。 写作形式： 文章（Article） 写作对象： 同学、老师或校刊读者 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：引出主题 简要介绍自己的爱好是什么，为什么喜欢这个收藏。 第二段：具体描述 描述如何发展这个爱好的（谁是影响者）、收藏品的数量、如何获得收藏品、收藏中最特别或最喜欢的一件及其背后的故事。 第三段：总结感受 总结收藏带来的收获（知识、快乐、友谊等），表达对收藏的热爱。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只罗列收藏品，要加入故事、细节和情感。例如不只写“I collect stamps.”，还要写“I love stamps because they are very beautiful. They can also teach me about the history and culture of different countries.” Step 4 提升语言 使用人称代词（I，me，my，mine）、物主代词、连接词（because，so，thanks to，not only...but also...）和丰富的形容词，使文章生动有趣。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整、结构是否清晰（三段式）、人称代词和物主代词使用是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我的爱好是收集邮票。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 我爷爷拥有成千上万张邮票，并且小心翼翼地处理它们。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 这张邮票是我最喜欢的，因为它是我拥有的第一张邮票。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 多亏了这张邮票，我对中国传统文化产生了兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 集邮既是有意义的也是有趣的。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：My hobby is collecting...（描述爱好） 例句： My hobby is collecting stamps. （1）我的爱好是收集硬币。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她的爱好是收集贝壳。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：I love... because...（描述喜欢的原因） 例句： I love stamps because they are very beautiful. （1）我喜欢我的收藏品，因为它们每一个都诉说着一个故事。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我喜欢收集邮票，因为它们可以教会我关于不同国家的历史。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：I developed this hobby thanks to...（描述启蒙者） 例句： I developed this hobby thanks to my grandpa. （1）我发展这个爱好多亏了我的爸爸。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她发展这个爱好多亏了她的老师。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：... owns... and handles... with great care.（描述如何对待藏品） 例句： My grandpa owns thousands of stamps and handles them with great care. （1）我叔叔拥有数百枚硬币，并且小心翼翼地保存它们。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我的朋友拥有许多模型，并且小心翼翼地展示它们。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：This is my favourite... because...（描述最喜欢的藏品及原因） 例句： This stamp is my favourite because it was my first one. （1）这枚硬币是我最喜欢的，因为它是我爷爷给我的。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这个贝壳是我最喜欢的，因为它看起来很特别。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：Thanks to...，I became interested in...（描述兴趣的产生） 例句： Thanks to this stamp，I became interested in traditional Chinese buildings. （1）多亏了我的爷爷，我对收藏产生了兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）多亏了这本书，我对中国历史产生了兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：My hobby is collecting stamps. 升级句：My hobby is collecting stamps because they are beautiful and can teach me about history. 1. 基础句：I like my stamps. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：My grandpa has many stamps. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：This stamp is my favourite. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I learned about Chinese buildings. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：Collecting stamps is interesting. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：I want to collect more stamps. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．题目：My collection 要求： 1. 介绍你的收藏品（贴合单元主题，如邮票、贴纸、笔、钥匙扣等）； 2. 说明你开始收藏的时间、收藏的数量和特点； 3. 说明你喜欢这个收藏的原因； 4. 词数 70-90 词，语句通顺，语法正确，贴合教材范文结构。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．学校正在举办“线上博物馆”活动，邀请同学们向校刊投稿，分享自己珍爱的收藏。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示，写一封信将自己的收藏品介绍给大家。 注意： 1. 请包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 2. 词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词：明信片postcard，硬币coin, 飞机模型model plane Dear School Magazine, I’m Li Hua, and I’m writing to share one of my favourite items from my collection for our school’s “Online Museum” activity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for reading my letter. Yours, Li Hua 3．假如你是李华，请你以My Favourite Hobby—Collecting为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的收集爱好。 内容要点： 1. 介绍自己的收集爱好(收集什么、时长)； 2. 你如何收集、整理藏品； 3. 该爱好带给你的收获与感受。 写作要求： 1. 词数70-90词； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Favourite Hobby—Collecting ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. My hobby is collecting stamps. 2. My grandpa owns thousands of stamps and handles them with great care. 3. This stamp is my favourite because it was my first one. 4. Thanks to this stamp，I became interested in traditional Chinese culture. 5. Collecting stamps is both meaningful and interesting. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）My hobby is collecting coins. （2）Her hobby is collecting shells. 句型 2 （1）I love my collection because each one has a story to tell. （2）I love collecting stamps because they can teach me about the history of different countries. 句型 3 （1）I developed this hobby thanks to my father. （2）She developed this hobby thanks to her teacher. 句型 4 （1）My uncle owns hundreds of coins and keeps them with great care. （2）My friend owns many models and shows them with great care. 句型 5 （1）This coin is my favourite because my grandpa gave it to me. （2）This shell is my favourite because it looks very special. 句型 6 （1）Thanks to my grandpa，I became interested in collecting. （2）Thanks to this book，I became interested in Chinese history. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：I love my stamps because each one has a story to tell about history and culture. 2. 升级句：My grandpa owns thousands of stamps and he always handles them with great care. He even wears white gloves to protect them. 3. 升级句：This stamp is my favourite because it was my first one and my grandpa bought it for me. 4. 升级句：Thanks to this stamp，I became interested in traditional Chinese buildings and started to collect similar stamps. 5. 升级句：Collecting stamps is both meaningful and interesting because I can learn about history and culture from them. 6. 升级句：I want to collect more stamps so that I can learn more about different countries and their cultures. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．范文 My collection My hobby is collecting stickers. I started this hobby when I was 7. I have a collection of over 80 different stickers from all over the world. My collection includes stickers in different shapes, sizes and colours. I really like those with cute cartoon patterns. There are two reasons why I collect stickers. Firstly, they are very beautiful and cheap. I use my pocket money to buy them. Secondly, they make me think of happy moments with my friends. I love my collection of stickers. 2．例文 Dear School Magazine, I’m Li Hua, and I’m writing to share one of my favourite items from my collection for our school’s “Online Museum” activity. I collect postcards. I started it two years ago when my uncle sent me a postcard from Beijing as a birthday gift. I have over 50 postcards now. Each postcard has beautiful pictures of different cities, like the Great Wall or West Lake, with warm words on the back. I love collecting them because they let me learn about new places and cultures without leaving home. They are like little windows to the world, and every card holds a special, warm memory. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours, Li Hua 3．例文 My Favourite Hobby—Collecting My favourite hobby is collecting stamps. I have kept this hobby for two years. It brings me lots of joy and helps me learn new things. I get new stamps from my friends and letters. I keep all my stamps in a special album and organize them carefully in my free time. Every stamp has beautiful pictures and special stories. This hobby makes me patient and careful. It also teaches me much knowledge about different places and cultures. I really love this meaningful hobby and will keep it forever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $