Unit 3 The seasons 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版英语七年级上册

**基本信息** 以“季节”主题为载体，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级训练体系，通过五步法写作策略实现语言能力与思维品质的协同提升。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|4类主题词汇、9组高频搭配、4项功能表达|分类整合季节相关语言要素，夯实写作基础|从核心概念（季节名称）到关联要素（天气、景物、活动），构建主题词汇网络| |黄金句型库|3类基础句型、6组句型升级示例|通过“基础句-升级句”对比，教授细节拓展与逻辑衔接技巧|遵循“简单描述-特征叠加-情感融入”的表达进阶逻辑| |高分写作方法|5步成文策略（审题-结构-内容-语言-检查）|提供可迁移的写作框架，强调内容完整性与语言生动性|按“主题引入-具体描述-总结感受”的三段式结构组织写作逻辑| |阶梯训练|句子训练16题（汉译英/仿写/升级）、篇章训练3篇|从单句翻译到篇章创作，实现能力逐级提升|遵循“句子准确性-表达丰富性-篇章连贯性”的能力发展路径|

Unit 3 The Seasons 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 季节名称 spring 春天 summer 夏天 autumn 秋天 winter 冬天 天气与气候 warm 温暖的 hot 炎热的 cool 凉爽的 cold 寒冷的 sunny 晴朗的 rainy 多雨的 windy 多风的 snowy 多雪的 cloudy 多云的 dry 干燥的 wet 潮湿的 bright 明亮的 clear 清澈的 peaceful 安静的；平静的 freezing 极冷的 自然景物 flower 花朵 leaf/leaves 叶子 tree 树 grass 草 bird 鸟 squirrel 松鼠 bear 熊 snake 蛇 cicada 蝉 rain 雨 snow 雪 thunder 雷 lightning 闪电 field 田野 forest 森林 mountain 山 river 河流 beach 海滩 季节活动 go on a trip 去旅行 take a trip 去旅行 go to the beach 去海滩 go swimming 去游泳 go skiing 去滑雪 go on a family outing 去家庭出游 eat ice cream 吃冰淇淋 eat fresh fruit 吃新鲜水果 have picnics 野餐 play in the snow 在雪地里玩 gather food 收集食物 work the land 耕种土地 fly kites 放风筝 2. 高频搭配 melt snow 雪融化 wake up from the long winter 从漫长的冬天中苏醒 come back from the south 从南方飞回来 shine brightly 明亮地照耀 fall from the trees 从树上落下 gather food for the winter 为冬天收集食物 be busy with the harvest 忙于收获 look forward to 期待 a time of new life and new hope 新生活和新希望的时刻 3. 写作功能表达 描述季节特征 In spring / summer / autumn / winter，... 在春/夏/秋/冬，…… The weather is ... 天气是…… It is + 形容词 + in ... ……季节是……的 描述自然变化 ... begin / start to ... ……开始…… Plants start to grow. 植物开始生长。 Leaves turn brown，red or yellow. 叶子变成棕色、红色或黄色。 描述活动 People like to ... 人们喜欢…… It is nice / great / exciting to ... 做……是好的/很棒的/令人兴奋的。 I enjoy doing ... 我喜欢做…… 表达喜好 My favourite season is ... 我最喜欢的季节是…… I like ... best because ... 我最喜欢……因为…… ... is the best time to ... ……是做……的最佳时间。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 There are four seasons in a year. 一年有四个季节。 My favourite season is ... 我最喜欢的季节是…… I live in ... and my favourite season is ... 我住在……，我最喜欢的季节是…… 2. 主体句型 Life begins again in spring. 春天生命重新开始。 The weather is hot and the sun shines brightly. 天气炎热，阳光明亮地照耀着。 Leaves turn brown，red or yellow and start falling from the trees. 叶子变成棕色、红色或黄色，开始从树上飘落。 It is cold and snowy in many places. 许多地方又冷又多雪。 It is exciting to take a trip in the countryside in springtime. 在春天去乡村旅行是令人兴奋的。 It is nice to eat ice cream or fresh fruit in summer. 在夏天吃冰淇淋或新鲜水果是很好的。 3. 结尾句型 Each season has its special features. 每个季节都有它独特的特点。 Autumn is beautiful and full of colour. 秋天是美丽的，色彩斑斓。 Winter is peaceful and fun. 冬天是宁静而有趣的。 I love ... because it makes me feel ... 我爱……因为它让我感到…… 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Spring is warm. 春天很温暖。 Spring is warm and rainy. Plants start to grow and birds come back from the south. 春天温暖多雨。植物开始生长，鸟儿从南方飞回来。 Summer is hot. 夏天很炎热。 Summer is bright and noisy. The sun shines brightly and cicadas sing loudly. 夏天明亮而喧闹。阳光明亮地照耀，蝉大声地鸣叫。 I like autumn. 我喜欢秋天。 I like autumn because the weather is cool and the leaves are colourful. 我喜欢秋天，因为天气凉爽，树叶色彩斑斓。 Winter is cold. 冬天很冷。 Winter is peaceful and fun. It is cold and snowy in many places. 冬天宁静而有趣。许多地方又冷又多雪。 I like to eat ice cream. 我喜欢吃冰淇淋。 I enjoy eating ice cream or fresh fruit on a hot summer day. 我喜欢在炎热的夏天吃冰淇淋或新鲜水果。 I like to go on trips. 我喜欢去旅行。 It is great to go on a family outing in autumn when the weather is cool and dry. 在秋天天气凉爽干燥的时候去家庭出游是很棒的。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作主题为“介绍自己最喜欢的季节”，写作内容应包括该季节的天气特征、自然景物变化、人们的活动以及自己喜欢该季节的原因。 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：引出主题 点出一年有四季，直接说明自己最喜欢的季节是什么。 第二段：具体描述 描述该季节的天气特点（气温、天气状况）、自然变化（植物、动物）、人们的活动（户外活动、饮食等）。 第三段：总结感受 总结对该季节的感受，说明为什么最喜欢这个季节。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只写简单的天气描述，要加入自然景物、动物活动、人们的行为和自己的感受。例如不只写“It is hot in summer.”，还要写“The sun shines brightly in the clear，blue sky. Cicadas sing loudly.” Step 4 提升语言 使用形容词（warm，sunny，bright，colourful，peaceful）、It is + 形容词 + to... 句型、连接词（and，because，when，so）和现在时态，使描写生动形象。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整、结构是否清晰（三段式）、形容词使用是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英（共5题） 1. 一年有四个季节，每个季节都有它独特的特点。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 春天温暖多雨，植物开始生长。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 夏天天气炎热，阳光明亮地照耀。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 树叶变成棕色、红色或黄色，开始从树上飘落。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 冬天宁静而有趣，许多地方又冷又多雪。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：There are...seasons in a year.（描述季节数量） 例句： There are four seasons in a year. （1）一年中有四个不同的季节。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）在我的家乡，一年中有两个主要季节。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：The weather is...（描述天气状况） 例句： The weather is hot. （1）秋天天气凉爽干燥。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）夏天天气炎热，有时候有雷阵雨。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：Plants start to...（描述植物变化） 例句： Plants start to grow. （1）春天植物开始生长，树木开始变绿。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）秋天树叶开始从树上落下。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：It is + 形容词 + to...（表达感受与评价） 例句： It is exciting to take a trip in the countryside in springtime. （1）在夏天去海滩游泳是很棒的。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）在秋天去家庭出游是很美好的。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：...turn...（描述颜色变化） 例句： Leaves turn brown，red or yellow. （1）秋天树叶变成黄色和红色。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）春天天空变得晴朗而湛蓝。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：People like to...（描述人类活动） 例句： Many people like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. （1）许多人喜欢夏天吃冰淇淋和新鲜水果。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）孩子们喜欢冬天在雪地里玩耍。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Spring is warm. 升级句：Spring is warm and rainy. Plants start to grow and birds come back from the south. 1. 基础句：Summer is hot. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I like autumn. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：Winter is cold. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I like to eat ice cream. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I like to go on trips. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：Spring is beautiful. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．根据要求以My Favourite Season为题写一篇小作文。 1. What’s your favourite season? 2. What’s the weather like? 3. Why do you like it? 要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，字迹清楚。2.不少于50个单词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你校正在组织以“My Favourite Season”为题的征文比赛。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文参加比赛。 提示： 1. Why do you like this season? 2. What do you do in this season? 3. How do you feel about this season? 注意： 1. 短文必须包括提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3. 词数80个左右。 My Favourite Season ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．广州是一个气候宜人且舒适的城市，四季都有各种有趣的活动。请你根据下面的表格提示，谈谈广州四季的天气、活动和你最喜欢的季节及原因。 季节 气候 活动 春天 暖和潮湿，红花绿树 活动自拟 (每项1~2个) 夏天 炎热多雨，蓝天白云 秋天 凉爽干燥，落叶纷飞 冬天 寒冷多风，仍见百花 请说出你最喜欢的季节及原因(至少两点原因) 注意： 1.词数80以上(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.要点齐全，语言通顺连贯。 Seasons in Guangzhou Guangzhou is a pleasant and comfortable city. There are a lot of rich and colourful activities for us to take part in. Let me tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. There are four seasons in a year，and each season has its special features. 2. Spring is warm and rainy. Plants start to grow. 3. Summer is hot and the sun shines brightly. 4. Leaves turn brown，red or yellow and start falling from the trees. 5. Winter is peaceful and fun. It is cold and snowy in many places. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）There are four different seasons in a year. （2）In my hometown，there are two main seasons in a year. 句型 2 （1）The weather is cool and dry in autumn. （2）The weather is hot in summer，and there is often thunder and lightning. 句型 3 （1）In spring，plants start to grow and trees start to turn green. （2）In autumn，leaves start to fall from the trees. 句型 4 （1）It is great to go to the beach and swim in the sea in summer. （2）It is wonderful to go on a family outing in autumn. 句型 5 （1）In autumn，leaves turn yellow and red. （2）In spring，the sky turns clear and blue. 句型 6 （1）Many people like to eat ice cream and fresh fruit in summer. （2）Children like to play in the snow in winter. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：Summer is bright and noisy. The sun shines brightly in the clear，blue sky and cicadas sing loudly. 2. 升级句：I like autumn because the weather is cool and the leaves are colourful. It is great to go on a family outing at this time of year. 3. 升级句：Winter is peaceful and fun. It is cold and snowy in many places，and children love to play in the snow. 4. 升级句：I enjoy eating ice cream or fresh fruit on a hot summer day. 5. 升级句：It is great to go on a family outing in autumn when the weather is cool and dry. 6. 升级句：Spring is beautiful because everything is green and full of life. It is exciting to see birds come back from the south. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．例文： My Favourite Season My favourite season is spring. The weather is warm and sunny. The trees turn green and many beautiful flowers come out everywhere. I can fly kites in the park with my friends and go hiking on weekends. I love spring because everything looks new and lively. It makes me feel happy and relaxed. I enjoy the nice wind and fresh air in spring very much. 2．例文 My Favourite Season My favourite season is spring. I like it because the weather turns warm and gentle, and colourful flowers bloom everywhere. It makes me feel full of hope. In spring, I often go hiking with my friends on weekends. Sometimes we fly kites in the park. On weekends, I often go on a picnic with my family. The green trees and blue sky make me relaxed. I think spring is the best time to start new things. I really enjoy this wonderful season. 3．例文 Seasons in Guangzhou Guangzhou is a pleasant and comfortable city. There are a lot of rich and colourful activities for us to take part in. Let me tell you something about it. Spring is warm and wet, with red flowers and green trees. People like to enjoy the beautiful flowers in the park. Summer is hot and rainy with a blue sky and white clouds. People like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. Autumn is cool and dry, and leaves are falling. People often climb mountains or go hiking. Winter is cold and windy, but flowers are still seen. In winter, there are many wonderful activities, such as visiting Guangzhou Chimelong Xiangjiang Safari Park. My favourite season is summer. I can go on a picnic with my friends. We can go swimming, too. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $